Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is a true gem that is absolutely worth the read. I just read the last 6 chapters and I was totally enthralled. Please!!! update ASAP.
READ YOU SOON 🌺 : )
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Awe thank you so much!!!! I update every thursday :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sweet going to love seeing how they work with each other..
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Date: 28 Jul 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesomeness! Can't wait to read more :)
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Whoohoo! Bella has a new job! Wouldn't it be wonderful if Edward's company had on site daycare? Wink wink Have a wonderful week!
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hot dang this will be fun
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Go Bella! Lol
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great. Happy writing.
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so happy she got the job! Paul is slime who deserves worse.
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow Paul is a piece of shot but damn Bella got a job a nice one but damn hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheeh that was awesome
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He is a a douchenozzle for sure lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good job
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Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter!!!!!!!
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Date: 25 Jul 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad they all know that the boys are Bella's now.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love that Edward, Jasper, and Emmett are the boys coaches. I am thinking that Jake has left a note or legal papers at her door.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jake is such an asshole.
Date: 24 Jul 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love reading Edward's POV.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
sometimes real life is tough because of unwise choices made in the heat of the moment, but never think that there is not a special plan for everyone...it just takes time to figure it out.
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Yes! Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awww! Considering Edwards's back story he was bound to have a meltdown/disappointment at Bella's disclosure! Am hoping it doesn't take him too long to see past it, lovely story with the cutest kids. Looking forward to the update!
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Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg... I love your story even though it kept me awake and I have an early flight in..... 3hrs it was worth it. Impatiently waiting on your next update!!!
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Oh my!!! I hope you at least slept on your flight. I am so happy that you enjoyed it so much! Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
He wanted to be the one to put a baby in her first lol poor cave man.
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Date: 21 Jul 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
The shock from Edward is great its going to be great to read how he deals with it. Dating a woman who comes with kids , being a young mom who's had to grow up fast
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Yes its going to be a fun watchig him Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Will the pit Edward off from getting to know her. I loved it more please
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Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ohh so observant Jaz and Ed has to find a way to get the gear and make it look like everyone else got it from him too!
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Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
can't wait to see where this goes
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Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if Edward will step back now? I really enjoyed his point of view. His back story with Kate seems to have his defenses up. Looking forward to more😁 Lucian is adorable and so loving what a sweet son. Thank you for this chapter.
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if Edward will step back now? I really enjoyed his point of view. His back story with Kate seems to have his defenses up. Looking forward to more😁 Lucian is adorable and so loving what a sweet son. Thank you for this chapter.
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it might draw him in more ;) Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Like that the company helps with equipment too. Can't wait for more
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Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Learning experiences happen at any age.
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Date: 15 Jul 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing the note is from horrible jake. I wonder if edward sees himself in lucien?
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Maybe, I think Edward does just a little bit. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love that you made the Cullen's coaches great way to engage the boys. Jakes not going away is he..sigh. Thank you for updating.
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I know I thought they really needed Edward, Emmett, and Jasper. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wonder who the notes from
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I guess you will see if you keep reading lol. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very good story so far . Keep up the great work
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Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it. THANK YOU!
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Date: 14 Jul 2017 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
With her outburst, she's not the only one with temper issues. Guessing the note is from the sperm donor.
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I think she might lol
Date: 14 Jul 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think Jake left her a nasty note or papers to sign. I think Edward is going to do everything he can to help Bella and the boys.
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Date: 13 Jul 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh man...big tipper does not know how to deal with Bella as mom at all...
Author's Response:
No, is in a bit of shock of it all lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story and our Edward is so great. Love the way he and Emmett were with the boys!
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I know I love the guys. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
The kids seem to be a hoot
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They are! Thank You!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
The boys are adorable, and they need something just for them.
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They are just the cutest. Thank you for reading!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh boy I hope all is ok and if the note is from Jake I hope she screws him over cause that's what he did to her
u loved it thank you
Author's Response:
Yes he will get his. Thank you!!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
I want Bella & her boys to come live with me.
Author's Response:
I know. I just want to give them hugs.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm sure she could find a lawyer through Family Services. I'd fight his ass for money and wouldn't go easy on him.
Author's Response:
Dont worry he will gets whats coming to him ;)
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a class a jerk. His " girl" yuck he just kept saying that . Please I hope you do continue this story I want to see waitressella and the boys get their HEA.
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I will definitely continuing the story.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can you make sure he really does give up he's rights to the kids because I really hate it if he comes back out of no where to say my kids and I am taking them plz plz plz
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Dont worry he isnt getting them. And he wont ever want them
Date: 07 Jul 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can u really sign away your rights to not pay child support.
Author's Response:
Only if the other parent agrees to it.
Date: 07 Jul 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
She should find his girl and tell him, it would be good tofuck up his life and ruin it. But I don't want them taken away from her which is what I would think would happen. Thanks for the update :)
Date: 06 Jul 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jake is such a jerk
Date: 06 Jul 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
He is such an ass and she needs to go after him for money and to fuck with his life.
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow poor Bella and Jake is a low life but she should screw him over and find a way to tell his girl too and as for Paul he is up to something bad
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Paul is horrible, and I hope one day Edward catches him acting like that. I absolutely want to choke the life out of Jake.
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Definitely take him to court and get back child support
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Kill Jake? No. Apply for welfare and throw his arse under the bus HELL YEAH. Glad Tanya and Irina have their backs.
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I know, I love them two.
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope she sees edward at the diner today.
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:) Maybe Maybe. thank you for reading
Date: 03 Jul 2017 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
she needs it times 10.
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Yes she did.
Date: 03 Jul 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella but sshe acted perfectly.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella warmed his heart just by killing him with kindness!
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She sure did lol.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness i love this!!
Date: 01 Jul 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such an amazing story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait for more of grumpy Edward and overstressed Bella.
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Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awww Edward you have no idea how much you have done to help Bella
Author's Response:
Yes he helped a lot. Thank you
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love your story! Can't wait to read more
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Date: 30 Jun 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for more. This is really good
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Thank you!!
Date: 30 Jun 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope for more soon. Thanks for the update.
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Thank you
Date: 29 Jun 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh can't wait for more
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Date: 29 Jun 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope you keep Edward a little grumpy’
Author's Response:
He will always have his grumpy side lol.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
He cant get her out of his mind
Author's Response:
Nope lol. Thank you for reading.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I see I have a new story to fall in love with! Looking forward to seeing how things play out for these two 😊
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Than you!!
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
So the jerk is a nice guy when he wants to be heheheheheh
Author's Response:
Yeah, when he feels like it lol
Date: 29 Jun 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it! Really liked seeing Edwards POV. Love this story so far!
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Thank You
Date: 29 Jun 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Because he loooves her!
Author's Response:
lol :)
Date: 29 Jun 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Women like Kate give us all a bad name. People always want something for nothing.
Author's Response:
I couldnt agree more.
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
great job!!! cant wait to read more....
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Thank you
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward for more! Love it! Just one question, Bella and Jake are not married right?
Author's Response:
No never married thank you
Date: 23 Jun 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful start. I love the pay it fwd tip.
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Thank you
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story really digging it keep on the good work and hope to read more on Thursday
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You will thank you
Date: 23 Jun 2017 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to the next update.
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Thank you
Date: 22 Jun 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent ! Keep up the great work !
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Thank you!!
Date: 22 Jun 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omgosh, this sounds like it is going to be so good. Can't wait to see what you are going to do.
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I think its going to be lol. Thank you
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is great so far!!! Can't wait for an update!!
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Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
A baby at 14 that is rough but he is a sweetie. Great names for the boys. Also leaving a tip that large assures that Bella will be remembered. Great start thank you.
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Thank you.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh, this is gooood
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Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this, and can't wait to see how she pulls herself up.
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Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can already tell this is going to be a great story. Can't wait to read the next chapter😉😉😉
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Thank you
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think I'm going to love this adventure.
Author's Response:
I hope so
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG best first chapter. He was such an ass but he knows a good thing when he sees it.
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Thank you
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow she has had a hard life but she seems to put her best foot forward now what will come next
Author's Response:
Yes. She has to always move forward
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awww was that Edward who wrote the note or one of the others I love how protective of he's mom Damon
Author's Response:
Mmm next chapter should answer that question.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start. Can't wait for more.
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Thank you!!
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
let's get this party started!! :)
Author's Response:
Thats right!!!