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Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)



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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

This is a true gem that is absolutely  worth the read. I just read the last 6 chapters and I was totally enthralled. Please!!! update ASAP. 

       READ YOU SOON  🌺       : )



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Awe thank you so much!!!! I update every thursday :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

Sweet going to love seeing how they work with each other..



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Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Awesomeness! Can't wait to read more :)



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Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Whoohoo!  Bella has a new job!  Wouldn't it be wonderful if Edward's company had on site daycare? Wink wink Have a wonderful week!



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Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hot dang this will be fun



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Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Go Bella! Lol

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Reviewer: Stems71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

Great. Happy writing.



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Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm so happy she got the job! Paul is slime who deserves worse.



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Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh wow Paul is a piece of shot but damn Bella got a job a nice one but damn hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehheeh that was awesome 



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He is a a douchenozzle for sure lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good job



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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter!!!!!!!



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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad they all know that the boys are Bella's now.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love that Edward,  Jasper, and Emmett are the boys coaches. I am thinking that Jake has left a note or legal papers at her door. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jake is such an asshole.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love reading  Edward's POV.  

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

sometimes real life is tough because of unwise choices made in the heat of the moment, but never think that there is not a special plan for everyone...it just takes time to figure it out.      



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Yes! Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: nell67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awww! Considering Edwards's back story he was bound to have a meltdown/disappointment at Bella's disclosure! Am hoping it doesn't take him too long to see past it, lovely story with the cutest kids. Looking forward to the update!



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Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

Omg... I love your story even though it kept me awake and I have an early flight in..... 3hrs it was worth it. Impatiently waiting on your next update!!! 



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Oh my!!! I hope you at least slept on your flight. I am so happy that you enjoyed it so much! Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

He wanted to be the one to put a baby in her first lol poor cave man.



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:) Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

The shock from Edward is great its going to be great to read how he deals with it. Dating a woman who comes with kids , being a young mom who's had to grow up fast



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Yes its going to be a fun watchig him Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

Will the pit Edward off from getting to know her. I loved it more please 



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Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ohh so observant Jaz and Ed has to find a way to get the gear and make it look like everyone else got it from him too!

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Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

can't wait to see where this goes



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Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder if Edward will step back now? I really enjoyed his point of view. His back story with Kate seems to have his defenses up. Looking forward to more😁 Lucian is adorable and so loving what a sweet son. Thank you for this chapter.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder if Edward will step back now? I really enjoyed his point of view. His back story with Kate seems to have his defenses up. Looking forward to more😁 Lucian is adorable and so loving what a sweet son. Thank you for this chapter.

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it might draw him in more ;) Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Like that the company helps with equipment too.  Can't wait for more



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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Learning experiences happen at any age.



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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm guessing the note is from horrible jake.  I wonder if edward sees himself in lucien?



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Maybe, I think Edward does just a little bit. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love that you made the Cullen's coaches great way to engage the boys. Jakes not going away is he..sigh. Thank you for updating.

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I know I thought they really needed Edward, Emmett, and Jasper.  Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wonder who the notes from



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I guess you will see if you keep reading lol. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very good  story so far .   Keep  up  the  great  work  



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Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it. THANK YOU!



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Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

With her outburst, she's not the only one with temper issues.  Guessing the note is from the sperm donor.



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I think she might lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

I think Jake left her a nasty note or papers to sign.  I think Edward is going to do everything he can to help Bella and the boys.



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Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh man...big tipper does not know how to deal with Bella as mom at all...

Author's Response:

No, is in a bit of shock of it all lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love this story and our Edward is so great.  Love the way he and Emmett were with the boys!



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I know I love the guys. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

The kids seem to be a hoot 



Author's Response:

They are! Thank You!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

The boys are adorable, and they need something just for them.



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They are just the cutest. Thank you for reading!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh boy I hope all is ok and if the note is from Jake I hope she screws him over cause that's what he did to her 

u loved it thank you 



Author's Response:

Yes he will get his. Thank you!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

I want Bella & her boys to come live with me.



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I know. I just want to give them hugs. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm sure she could find a lawyer through Family Services. I'd fight his ass for money and wouldn't go easy on him.



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Dont worry he will gets whats coming to him ;)

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a class a jerk. His " girl" yuck he just kept saying that . Please I hope you do continue this story I want to see waitressella and the boys get their HEA.

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I will definitely continuing the story. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Can you make sure he really does give up he's rights to the kids because I really hate it if he comes back out of no where to say my kids and I am taking them plz plz plz

Author's Response:

Dont worry he isnt getting them. And he wont ever want them

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

Can u really sign away your rights to not pay child support.  



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Only if the other parent agrees to it. 

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

She should find his girl and tell him, it would be good tofuck up his life and ruin it. But I don't want them taken away from her which is what I would think would happen. Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow fantastic!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jake is such a jerk

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

He is such an ass and she needs to go after him for money and to fuck with his life.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow poor Bella and Jake is a low life but she should screw him over and find a way to tell his girl too and as for Paul he is up to something bad

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Paul is horrible, and I hope one day Edward catches him acting like that. I absolutely want to choke the life out of Jake.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

Definitely take him to court and get back child support 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Kill Jake?  No.   Apply for welfare and throw his arse under the bus  HELL YEAH.   Glad Tanya and Irina have their backs.



Author's Response:

I know, I love them two. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope she sees edward at the diner today.



Author's Response:

:) Maybe Maybe. thank you for reading

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

she needs it times 10.



Author's Response:

Yes she did. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Bella but sshe acted  perfectly.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bella warmed his heart just by killing him with kindness!  



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She sure did lol. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness i love this!!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Such an amazing story.   I look forward to reading the next chapter.



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Thank You

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Can't wait for more of grumpy Edward and overstressed Bella.



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Thank You

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awww Edward you have no idea how much you have done to help Bella

Author's Response:

Yes he helped a lot. Thank you

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love your story! Can't wait to read more 



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Thank You

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait for more. This is really good  



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Thank you!!

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

I hope for more soon. Thanks for the update.



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Thank you

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh can't wait for more



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Thank You

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hope you keep Edward a little grumpy’



Author's Response:

He will always have his grumpy side lol. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

He cant get her out of his mind



Author's Response:

Nope lol. Thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

I see I have a new story to fall in love with!  Looking forward to seeing how things play out for these two 😊



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Than you!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

So the jerk is a nice guy when he wants to be heheheheheh



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Yeah, when he feels like it lol 

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!  Really liked seeing Edwards POV.  Love this story so far!



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Thank You

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

Because he loooves her!



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lol :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Women like Kate give us all a bad name.  People always want something for nothing.



Author's Response:

I couldnt agree more. 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

great job!!! cant wait to read more....



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward for more! Love it! Just one question, Bella and Jake are not married right?



Author's Response:

No never married thank you

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful start. I love the pay it fwd tip.



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Thank you

Reviewer: lisa89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very cute story really digging it keep on the good work and hope to read more on Thursday

Author's Response:

You will thank you

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next update.



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Thank you

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent !   Keep  up  the  great  work ! 



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Thank you!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omgosh,  this sounds like it is going to be so good. Can't wait to see what you are going to do. 



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I think its going to be lol. Thank you

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is great so far!!! Can't wait for an update!!

 



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Thank you

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

A baby at 14 that is rough but he is a sweetie. Great names for the boys. Also leaving a tip that large assures that Bella will be remembered. Great start thank you.

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Thank you. 

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh, this is gooood

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh, this is gooood



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Thank you

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this, and can't wait to see how she pulls herself up.



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Thank You

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can already tell this is going to be a great story. Can't wait to read the next chapter😉😉😉



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think I'm going to love this adventure.



Author's Response:

I hope so

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG best first chapter.  He was such an ass but he knows a good thing when he sees it.



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Thank you

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow she has had a hard life but she seems to put her best foot forward now what will come next



Author's Response:

Yes. She has to always move forward

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awww was that Edward who wrote the note or one of the others I love how protective of he's mom Damon

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Mmm next chapter should answer that question. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

let's get this party started!! :) 



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Thats right!!!

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