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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am glad you are letting narow minded people mess with you.  Bella is getting use to things



Author's Response:

I always try that these comments don't affect me. Most of the times, I succeed. It's only sometimes that my confidence takes a hit. Bt, I gather myself as quickly as possible and move on. So... yeah.

Anyway, thanks for the review.I hope you continue to like the story. :) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Don't listen to those crazy people that don't have the guts to write as well as you do don't pay them attention I love Bella the haggler

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It means a lot to know that there are people who are actually liking the story. It gives me more enthusiasm to continue the story. And I always try that these comemments don't affect me. Anyway, thanks for the review. And I'm glad that ypu're liking the story. I hope you continue to do so. :) 

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2017 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

To hell with what others think or say, you write how and what you want.  I love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Thank you so much. It means a lot to know that there are people who are actually liking the story. It gives me more enthusiasm to continue the story. And I always try that these comemments don't affect me. Most of the times, I succeed. It's only sometimes that my confidence takes a hit. Bt, I gather myself as quickly as possible and move on. So... yeah.

Anyway, thanks for the review. And I'm glad that ypu're liking the story. I hope you continue to do so. :) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awww please please tell me Bella's and Edwards married its goin to be better then her family's or he's family

Author's Response:

Sorry. Can't. They're really stubborn. Both of them. That's why the title says "Doomed Marriage." 

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 10:58 PM Title: Prologue

Llike everything so far can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you're liking the story and I hope you continue to do so. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Now they begin



Author's Response:

Yes, it's going to be really interesting. Especially, since both of them are very stubborn.

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Someone needs to beat the shit out of Jasper show him how it feels



Author's Response:

I agree. But unfortuantely, what we need and what happens are two completely different things. Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

HHer family is really full of drama.  



Author's Response:

Oh, we've barely scratched the surface. And we haven't even started on Edward's family. You'll see what I mean as the story progresses.

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella' s sister-in-laws on both sides are horrible. 



Author's Response:

The families on both sides are horrible except a few. You'll see what I mean as the story progresses.

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Jasper is mean and needs the shit kicked out of him.



Author's Response:

I agree. But unfortuantely, what we need and what happens are two completely different things. Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Rose is mean to Bella because she is unhappy with her on life a d if she can't be happy then she does not want any one else to be happy. 



Author's Response:

True. Rose has been daddy's girl. And since she's the only girl in the family. The borthers have always doted on her. Especially Edward. So, in short, she's a brat. 

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

What kind of condition is Alice in for Bella not to want to marry.  



Author's Response:

Alice's husband Jasper is abusive. You'll know more as the story progresses. But jasper and Alice's marriage is not a happy one.

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 11:26 PM Title: Prologue

Who was this? Be lla's mom maybe.



Author's Response:

I can't reveal it. Sorry. You'll know later in the story. But no, it's not Bella's mom.

Anyway, hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

I get the short chapters but not enough information to make huge opinions. Jasper is abusing Alice. Bad deal.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry if my chapyers are not enough informative. But I'm trying to reveal the chaacters slowly. Every character has its own story. And I'm hoping to present it individually. Especially Jasper.

Hope you're liking the story. And thanks for the review.

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sounds like love is not in the air they are all so screwed up.



Author's Response:

My views on families are not lovey dovey, sadly. That's why there are quite a few villians in the story. Hope you are liking the story. And thanks for the review...

:)

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you are liking the story. Hope you continue to enjoy it. And thanks for the review...

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

what a family. 



Author's Response:

I personally hate when stories show these sweet and lovey-dovey families. because families are definitely not all sugar. This is how I see families... Hope you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review...

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

That is a good start.  His family sounds messed up.



Author's Response:

His family is messed up. As yhe story goes on, it will reveal how evil they all are... Hope you continue to like the story. Thanks for the review...

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

He made a good impression



Author's Response:

He's a gentleman but as the story proceeds further, he will be a little mean and Bella and him are going to fight. A lot. He' an idot that way... Hope you continue to like my story. Thanks for the review.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 7:19 PM Title: Prologue

so sad



Author's Response:

Hope you are liking the story. Thanks for the review

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Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

love the start can't wait for Moore 



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking the story. Hope you continue to do so. And thanks for the review

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Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella loves her family and likes what she sees in Edward how he responded to kids I think Rosalie doesn't like Bella because she knows that she won't be able to mooch of Edward as much as she usually does

Author's Response:

Rosalie is petty. She can't stand that the money that used to be given to her easily is being given to someone else... Bella knows this. She will find a way to deal with it. Glad you are liking the story. Thanks for the review

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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 4:16 PM Title: Prologue

Like it so far,can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you're liking the story. I hope you continue to read it. And thanks for the review...

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Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Will it have HEA  for Edward and Bella  ??



Author's Response:

Yes, it is HEA for Edwards and Bella. So no worries there... I hope you're enjoying the story.... Thanks for the review...

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be a intrusting read looking forward to itπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you're liking the story. I hope you continue to read it... And thanks for reviewing... 

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Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 9:05 PM Title: Prologue

I have to confess that the change in viewpoints from the first paragraph to the second and then back again in the third paragraph was very confusing. I find arranged marriage stories interesting, though



Author's Response:

So sorry for that. It was an oversight. It's all fixed now... I'm glad you're liking the story. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good



Author's Response:

Thanks... I'm glad you're liking the story. I hope you continue to read it. And thanks for the review :)

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