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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm all for them christening her bed!! & really all over both of their apartments. ;)

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it and can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it!

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 37

The emotional healing takes longer than the physical.

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet chapter!  I'm happy for Jacob! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 37

I am so happy for them. Marriage will come when they are both healthy and ready.

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 28

Sweet chapter! They were made for each other! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

Hopefully Bella will be alright! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Uh-oh!  Poor Edward! Will he be alright? 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

Terrific! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 37

I really don't see the point of Bella having her own place, they'll be staying with each other the majority of the time.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 36

Gotta love Rose and her way of thinking.

Sherry

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

Terrific chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!  Poor Jake! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

I don't like Heidi! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter!  Poor Jake! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

I really hate Tanya!  She's a cold hearted bitch! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Terrific chapter!  Demetri is a prick!  Poor Edward! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter! Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Terrific chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward!  What did Tanya do that hurt him so bad ant turned him into a prick? 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Edward is a jerk! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 37

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 37

nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 37

I dont want it to end.  They both needed that OMG

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 37

Greatt love making. Loved their conversation.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

Hopefully their individual therapy will put them both at ease.  Their sexy times were really sweet and romantic.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 36

nice update

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 36

Is it possible Dr Kai has a crush on Edward??? 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 36

oh boy!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 36

Life is good and getting better ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 36

Yeah!. Preparing for sexy time.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 36

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 36

The healing of the body is well under way. Hopefully the mind is mending as well.
Weddings all around!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 36

The healing of the body is well under way. Hopefully the mind is mending as well.
Weddings all around!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 35

Everything is progressing nicely. Bella must be antsy waiting for her chance at practicing medicine once again.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 36

Things are moving right along.  Loved that you added a little of Jake in there. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 35

This was a big step for Edward. He did great. I hope his therapy is going well. He needs to embrace his new life. He needs to get ready for Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great Chapter thanks

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 35

: )

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 35

So glad things went good for Edward on his 1st day in the new hospital.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 35

He is not on the market Mira. LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

So Edward seems to be getting along.  I'm glad he is letting women know right away that he is taken.   Hopefully Bella will get better soon, start working and they will move in together.  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 35

First day on the job seemed to go smoothly.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 35

good

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 35

Awesome love the chapter

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 34

Bella needs more popsicles for sure!! 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 34

nice update.

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 34

How sweet....

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

I really despise Renee, but I love how Charlie handled her. Have mercy, you have me in tears by the end of this chapter. Jake is a very blessed little boy.

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 34

Renee needs to stay gone. They have all formed a new family.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

Renee is not worth thinking about other than she is a bitch.  I love Jake and his best Christmas ever love it love it love it.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

Charlie needs to ensure that Renee doesn't bother Bella ever again.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 34

sweet christmas for them

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 34

Renee is just horrible.  ugh.....   Jake shows how resilient children can be at times.   I really do hope thbat Bella's leg gets better.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 34

Great update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sweet sweet chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 34

Good for Jake! He deserves to be a part f a loving family.Please don't let Bella get hooked on pain Medes.

READ YOU SOON 🌺🌺🌺

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved the chapter. They had the best Christmas. Renee has lost a very important person in her life. Now that bridge is burned and collected and the ashes are buried. Too bad I doubt that can be healed.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 34

I am so very happy that Esme and Carlisle will be adopting Jake!!!  He is such a precious little boy and he was worried about not seeing Bella and Edward.  Now he has a family that will give him the love and stability that he needs.  Well Charlie and Bella let Renee have it!  It is sad but in the end Renee will hopefully realize what she has lost and change for the better and maybe she won't.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 34

Good riddance to Jake's dad. I'm glad he died. Your Renee is almost is bad. I wonder if she wil cause trouble again...I know you are struggling, but thanks so much for this lovely chapter. See ya next time, whenever you can manage.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 33

ummm.... great update

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 33

I hope they don't wait too long to be totally together. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 33

Ok i'm crossing my finger for an edward popsicle next chapter!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 32

I'm hoping some lemonade makes it to there date!!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed star [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

Funny how "Marriage" is a not yet but..... sex is coming up possibly next chapter. (lol)  

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 31

Love how he told aro off!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

I love Bella's determination to do it on her own. She's perfect for Edward. Jake was adorable grilling Edward about his intentions with Bella.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 33

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 33

Awe Jake was too adorable hehehehehehe and what a lovely evening 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 33

giggles jake was so cute when i was a nanny the son did that with moms boyfriend.  He quikly won the kiddo over with his silly klutzy shephard mix and I got a dog a cat and a macaw added to my nanny duties.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 33

That with Jake was so cute.  Nice first date

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 33

Very nice. I love that they're getting such a good start to their new life. Jake's protective attitude is the cutest thing, ever!

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