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Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love it. I hope they throw all the rules out the window.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Keep on writing

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 17

yeah, love it! he is finally seeing life is worth living

keep it coming

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

good

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!! Can't wait til update!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

It's going to be one billion of a chapter for sure.  I am happy that Edward is opening up.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

It was a good chapter. I generally read NC 17 stories in spite of the lemons, not because of them.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Dirty talking from edward next chapter is so worth the wait!! 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

well slowly he is softening. Too bad Tanya still rules his life.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bring ! It!!! On!!!!! Next update can't come fast enough.

READ YOU SOON๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

How the tide is turning! They like each other! Yes! What a lovely idea for a birthday party. Kudos to Alice!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad that Edward came to the party and the realization that he wants to be loved.  I hate how Esme is such an unknowing bitch.  He needs to tell her and Bella ALL the truth.  I'm sure Esme would shut her pie hole when she hears the truth.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love that Edward is opening up slowly and that he and Bella seem to moving forward. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 17

So excited for the lemons.

Reviewer: BellaSC23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

Omg! Dr. Mason's shell is slowly cracking!!!!! This is great!!!! I can hardly wait until it does completely!! Great chapter, and I look forward to more.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Billy and Sam are douches. Poor Jake. Something tells me he'll be back again. Hopefully, CPS will get moving faster the 3rd time around. I can hardly wait for Edward and Bella to hookup again and spend more time with each other.

Sherry

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

I now caught up on your new story and you got me hooked again ;)

Poor Edward is really suffering from his past... but I'm fairly sure that Bella will help him work through this. She is very patient and already understands that there is more behind. Also I think that Edward will try to hold up the facade of just being fuck buddies, but this will not last long. Especially not if another man may come into the mix and his jealousy comes up :D
They are already treating each other like a couple, only that it's not official... So I keep my fingers crossed that Edward sticks to his thought of living this one life that he has!

As for little Jake, the poor guy really needs a good family so that he will not become like his "family". Hopefully the authorities will make it right...and soon! But I can also see Bella not leaving him and maybe even take him in at some point (much later in the story?)...who knows!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really love the push & pull between these two.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope Jake doesn't die. His family should be put in jail for their mistreatment of him! Ugh. I like that, now, Edward and Bella are working together. That can only be good for the patients. Thanks!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor jake 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm worried about Jake. But his Uncle did sign the papers so maybe Billy will take it out on Dam. Bella is getting attached to Jake. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Jake 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Jake!  I hope he makes it back to Bella somehow.  Someone needs to do something before he ends up dead. And it sounds like they need to lock up his family and throw away the key.  Loved it. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

Someone needs to protect Jake

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

He is falling hard for her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no.....I'm worried about Jake.

i love that Edward is allowing Bella in.

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor jake.  Can't wait for the bday!! 

Reviewer: BellaSC23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love the interaction between Bella and Edward, and her dedication to Jake. Wtf is with his family? They need to be punished. Jake deserves so much better! I hope he makes another appearance.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

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READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

I hate that the whole family is shit bags.  Dam!  That poor little boy must be being tortured now.

On a positive note, glad that whore Heidi is gone.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am really loving it.

Reviewer: jsl2187 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

All really .๐Ÿ˜ฒplease tell me jake comes back and is ok . ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ข

Anyway love the story cant wait til next update really i cant  wait.๐Ÿ˜ฏ

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

How did the father get him out well now poor Jake will have more problems but will we see him again 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love and hate. Poor Jake! but love everything else. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward is coming out of his shell and having fun.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love Love it! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

Another fantastic chapter. I love how Edward is opening up to her slowly and that they are starting to trust each other as well as depend on each other. Looking forward to some birthday goodness. I'm hoping someone caught/seen him kissing her.

Sherry

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

oh edward, keep falling, it will be good for you

love it, more please

 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it!  I have a feeling someone saw him kiss her and weren't as blissfully unaware as he thought.  LOL.   I hope he can see that Bella isn't like Tanya and opens up!  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

This is my favorite chapter so far! They seem to be warming up to each other. He even told her his deep dark secret about being so hurt by Tanya. They're so good for each other. I hope they continue on this same path they've started! Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Dude! Awesome chapter! Excellent movement of the story. Totally loving this fic. I had a crappy day and seeing the new chapter pop up made my day. More please!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love that he changed his code.  That first one is so depressing!!

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

I am so happy they are having feelings for each other. I missed the lemons though.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it Edward to the rescue and how sweet was he at the end more please 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it Edward to the rescue and how sweet was he at the end more please 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

The fact that Edward didn't need a whole lot of coaxing to talk about his ex-fiancรฉ nearly breaking him, shows a new level of healing in his heart and mind. All due to the beautiful thirty year old brunette begging him to help her celebrate.
Are we sure Emmett and Jasper didn't see Edward's intimate exchange with Bella?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

LOVE IT !   LOVE YA!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward always seems to go a step forward then 3 steps back.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'd like to kiss and something special from Edward for my milestone birthday. Bella's pretty lucky.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

This chapter seemed a little shorter than the others. ....but it left a warmth that will have to keep us til the next update.  On yes by all means....Much LOVE! LOVE!!! LOVE!!!!! All for you!!!

   READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ ๐ŸŒบ ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

Omgosh,  he kissed her with everyone around. Someone had to have noticed. They both are falling for each other. Edward is slowly opening up to her. At least he has told her that he was hurt by Tanya. I am happy that his parents showed up back when Tanya betrade him and stopped him from killing himself. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

My heart breaks for Edward but I see a light at the end of a tunnel!

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

I. Love. This. Fic!!! Holy cow. I actually get all giddy and excited when I see a new chapter in my email alert. Brilliant! More please. Soon please. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

I really want to give Edward a hug but, Bella beat me. ๐Ÿ™‚

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is falling for her. I hope he will let her on. So happy when I see an update!!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

I am so excited for this chapter. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they are becoming friends

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Heidi's behavior is inappropriate and exemplifies that of sexual harassment. She has been given two prior warnings. Three striles, she out. Is Edward a hero or an adrenaline junkie?
Amputation above or below the knee?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella needs to keep the arrangement with Edward private. The last thing they need is broken trust.
Did Heidi act unprofessional, delaying the call to CPS?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

See sent the emergency text to Edward.
Did Bella grab Jake's Teddy Bear?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hopefully Bella and Edward could be together for her birthday please

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

No Jake!!!! 

READ YOU SOON ๐ŸŒบ

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hehehe this was a good one now what is next mm

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

i know, just was curious, i've made mistakes too, even with a beta

keee your words coming :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love the little friendship that is buliding! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter. Edward was quite the hero in the field. Heidi sure got what was coming to her, but why do I think we've not seen the last of her. 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, dam!   I am ready for Heidi to be fucking gone already.  I wonder about that boy, if his dad didn't even give his real address....it must be bad.

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm loving this story very much. All your stories are wonderful. Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

I was so afraid that William Black had caused the wreck. And that Jacob was the one that was seriously hurt. Edward is starting to trust her and starting to care for her. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

good

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can't get enough of these two!!  I loved how Bella put Heidi in her place!  Looking forward to what's next. 

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh my, she gave as good as she gets

um, a few typos i noticed, do you have a beta?



Author's Response:

I do not have a beta. But, I'm human. I make mistakes. 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am so in love with this story. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loving it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

Another great chapter

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great  story  so fsr!  Hope you  are  getting  rid  of  Heidi   What a  pain!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

Definitely fired & no letter of recommendation.

i think Jacob will be coming back into the ER & this time, he will be saved. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope they can find Jake and save him from his abusive father. Heidi got what she deserved. Bella and Masen grow closer. I like this story but it's quite harsh on more than a few characters.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2017 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 13

I think she should keep the arrangement to herself. Lose lips sink ships and all that.  If she wants to earn his trust and respect, she will keep her secrets to herself.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

good

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Jake!  I hope someone rescues him!  My heart breaks for him and for Bella not getting him help in time.  Someone needs to beat on William Black and show him how it is.  Abusers are weak cowards who pray on the weak.  I'd love to take a baseball bat to him and teach him a lesson with a hefty dose of ass bearing.  Then take Jale away from him and love on him forever the way he deserves. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

So sad. Poor Jake 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

I LOVE this fic! Holy cannoli! TWO awesome chapters and I STILL want more. Brilliant work! 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

Nice that was a great make up Alice will get the story can't wait 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

My heart is breaking for little jake poor boy.  Isn't 1918 the booty call to Edward ?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

Tanya is an evil bitch but he needs to let it go. He better get down to beg Bella to forgive him and he needs to tell her why he is such a dick

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

Somehow i missed this update!  I can't believe he is already getting a little mushy with her. And he gets to call her bella!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

He liks it a little being her boyfriend!!! Fricking Alice!! Bella might have gotten some lovey time when he laid her in bed. As i got closer to the end of this chapter, i was chanting "don't end yet!"

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

I don't think Bella's seen the last of Jacob. It's sweet she's keeping his bear safe for him. Edward isn't as douchey as he started out as. Alice pretty much hit it on the nail head, he's getting sweet on Bella.

Loving this story, Josie. I need more.

Sherry

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

 Wow! Edward is finaly pulling his head out of his ass.Love it.  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

Glad Edward manned-up and went to apologize to Bella. I loved the sweet moment they shared. I really hope Bella can get little Jacob some help before it's too late.

Sherry

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