[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
great update.... update soon.
Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
How awful to have someone served papers at a school in front of children and parents! Shows the true character of the individual behind it and the person who served it should be ashamed for acting like such a jerk with the grinning. Where I live the Constable is usually the person who serves papers and they’re in uniform. I think it’s Mr. Buckley who has served Bella. Guess we’ll find out. Emmett is so awesome in this story. I love the talk he had with Bella!
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
I have two words. Pompas Ass.
Loved Bella and Emmett's talk in the lounge. So many truths.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm wondering what Mr. Buckley has done now.
Sherry
Date: 24 Oct 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
That guy is such a jerk. He doesn't care about the children. The other parents are just as horrible.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
I want to punch the man in the face. I cant believe it
Date: 24 Oct 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
ugh, leaving us hanging. not even sre what b could b served for unless it is for kassie as her guardian
Date: 24 Oct 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG shit is hitting the fan. I dont think it is the father of the brat I think it has to do with the girls?
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
thank you for the update... Mr. Buckley is a hot mess!!! I sure hope Edward's lawyer and private detective finds some dirt on Mr. Buckley..until you post again
Date: 23 Oct 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mr. Buckley is an add. I can't believe that they served her at work. I worry that now that Bella has agreed to letting Edward pay part of the tuition that Mr. Buckley will still say that Bella is definitely now Edward's paid whore. Not sure that is a good idea to do right now. Especially since it is the schools policy that teachers can get free tuition for their kids. Bella is not getting special treatment.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
If Buckley didn't cause the papers to be served I wonder if the twins birth family did
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2017 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm pretty sure Maggie has something to do with what's going on....if not the actual instigator.
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[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hate assholes.!!! Those poor children. And those dumb parents that are going to start shit. sigh.......
Date: 23 Oct 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
What is Buckley’s beef? There’s something more...
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Johnny is only repeating what he hears at home. His dad has serious issues. Edward will take care of any trouble Mr. Buckley thries to throw their way. Emmett will not get rid of Bella. Her job is safe.
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Colton. I wonder where little Johnny gets his attitude from. His dad is a real jewel. Was Johnny just making up stuff or do the people think Alice is a drunk?
Date: 18 Oct 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
another nice story so far you two.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my!!! I love that Kassie is so ready to defend her family and friends.
Sherry
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holly shit Holly shit and Holly shit. They have assholes coming at them from all sides.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Mr B there knows something or other having to do with the girls....obviously. Poor Bella and Edward some crazy sh*t is coming.
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Date: 16 Oct 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!!!!! I am readiing scared for what yo hae instore...I love how you guys write these amazing things but i also know how evil you can be lol. Cant wait for the next update.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Who is Maggie to everyone & why is she even around or touring Edwards office? Mr. Buckley? Why does he think he has any pull on who is hired or fired from a school his child attends & is clearly a bully?
Guess I need more background filler or patience.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
wondering who buckley knows or is related to . . . they really seem to have it in for b. wonder what maggie has up her sleeve. hoping b/e stay strong together and don't let them mess with them
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2017 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
As a teacher, unfortunately this whole scene is common. Kids don't learn how to be bigots, racists, sexists or assholes on their own. They always learn it from their home environment. It's all so sad......
I'm creeped out by Maggie as well. I wonder if she has anything to do with this drama.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
ROFLMAOA
Loved what Alice did to Maggie.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is ready to tell the world that they are together. Bella just needs to go with it. cant wait to see what Edward thinks of what she bought ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Is it wrong that I loved Alice introducing Bella as Edward's girlfriend at the party, and pissing Maggie off about it?
Sherry
Date: 03 Oct 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Mike wanting to remember who the girls remind him of ....could it be 1of there parents???????
Date: 03 Oct 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
They are so cute and hot.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Jessica is a little dingy. Maggie is a bitch. Mike thinks that the twins look familiar. Is Mike going to know the girls mom or is he going to be the dad?
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like that Edward and Bella have decided to be exclusive and date. And I laughed hysterically that Maggie found out about it that way. She is a bitch.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope they tell the girls soon. I think they already know. Kids are usually more aware than we give them credit for...The toy and lingerie party sounds great. I haven't been to to one of those in years.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Amazing as always!!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Today, 10/2, I got notificaton of chapter 12 posting. When I looked at my spreadsheet, I saw the last chapter I read was 10. STARS did not sent me a notification for chapter 11, so I have just read it now. This was a hell of a chapter to miss! So much happened! I guess STARS is still having email issues, but all the other stories I read there, it seems, are also on FFn so I get notifications there. This one is not, so if STARS doesn't notify me, I don't know there's a chapter. Ugh I wish they would get their email problem fixed! I really love this story and now things are getting serious between Edward and Bella. He completely messed that up with his jealousy. Someone must have doent a number on him in the past to make him react like that. I'm glad they worked things out...on to chapter 12, now.
Date: 28 Sep 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
They both were a little wrong. Bella should have said she was taken and Edward shouldn't have been so jealous. Bella knew she was taken since Saturday night.
Date: 26 Sep 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward knows how to grovel he is a good man in love just does not know it yet. Mike must have already been out
Date: 25 Sep 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Damn, that was pretty intense.
Nice sexy times. Scary Rose, and jelous Edward times! And what the hell is with Rose sending Mike in the first place? I think she needs a good ass chewing from Bella. Slimy Mike, ewww.
Glad they worked things out.
Thank You!
Date: 25 Sep 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! They're both in a lot deeper than they realized and it's going to be interesting watching them realize this and maneuver through all of this.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward did not handle that well at all. Bella handled Edward alot calmer than I thought she would. Can't wait to hear from Rose and why she sent Mike.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella and Edward, both are in too deep. Love how the girls plot to be together and try to get B/E together.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well that definitely forced or encouraged Edward to face HIS feeling a little faster. I think Rose planned that shit. Because she knpws Bella and Kassie can not stand Mike.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why is it so wrong to be exclusive?????
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Date: 22 Sep 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the kid swap. They need to know their other parent as individuals. They are different kids and need to explore their strengths. I hope Edward wins this game, so they both can win in the long run. Bella is too competitive. She needs to learn that sometimes you win by loosing.
Date: 22 Sep 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
They are too cute. I'm glad they are getting to know each other before they commit to each other.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
They are a family they just have not called it that and the girls are wanting them all to live together as a family
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter that the girls got to spend time on their own with the opposite parental figure. I love that the girls are always plotting something.
Sherry
Date: 18 Sep 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved the girl swapping and their days. It was a brilliant idea in my opinion. I also love the teasing between Edward and Bella!! I can't get enough of this story!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow. I missed this chapter! It was after I read 10 and went to mark it on my spreadsheet that I realized I never read 9, so I read it now. What a sizzling chapter. Now I know how they first ended up getting sexy with each other. I love where this story is heading, or where I believe it is heading. Thanks!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Lovely chapter! I love the girls' day out with the other girl's parent! They seem to all be blending into becoming one family. I also love how Bella and Edward are getting more flirty and playful with each other. I'm having a great time reading this. Thank you!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved this chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was fun and kinda evil wouldn't you say???? but..... all is good if it turns out how they planned....right? Kids! (he he he) evil little beings they are.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Bella and Edward are doing great with getting to know the girls. And their own banter and teasing is quite swoony.
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
The girls want them to be together and there mom and dad and be in love.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
One of them needs to forfeit their game and just go for it. The sexual tension is gonna burn the house down.
Sherry
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Bella is going to have a girlie day with Cordie. What are Edward and Maddie going to do? Can't wait till they both jump each other. Their sexual buildup is going to be so mmm ugh that they may hurt each other the 1st time they have sex. Lol!!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think they are getting into dangerous territory. They are going to be doing more than cuddling and groping before they know it! Haha
Date: 11 Sep 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
I don't think either of them will last much longer....just call it a tie!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not the way I had hoped this chapter was headed but.....I'm still here, still reading and looking forward to more.
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[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think they are fooling themselves if they think they are only friends. They are dating without calling it that. LOL
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love that they are getting closer!! Each story with you guys just keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next chapter and maybe at least a tiny bit of lime if no lemon.. hint, hint.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
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Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
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Date: 05 Sep 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is everyone in the bar staring at them. There friends probably have big smiles on their faces.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Kassie is a bit of a brat.
Date: 05 Sep 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
About to get hot??
I would say they are heated up pretty high already! Whew!
Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
They both definitely have their flirt on.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thats an understatement! Loving this story but I get the feeling some drama is on the verge. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 04 Sep 2017 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Getting hotter and hotter! Can't wait for the continuation of this night!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG I need a fan lol I want to know who is looking for the girls.
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
oooh getting very hawt with the flirting. The receptionist freezing up is making me nervious.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
I knew it was only a matter of time before those two started flirtung.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh oh oh. Hot in here, so hot in so hot in here. LOVE THESE TWO SO MUCH!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow good chapter!!! It's good to see them getting closer to one another. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter. Please say we get to finally see them spicing it up. Oh man another week to wait.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my!!! The heat is on!!!
Sherry
Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will they make it back to his house or do it in the restroom of the bar?
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
By far your best chapter. It was funny, hot! and had me yearning for more!!! Waiting is gonna be HARD! (he he he)
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now off to hunt down the hubby cause he needs to tend to some ....never mind
Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
love this story!!
Date: 03 Sep 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! They get formal confirmation that their girls are indeed sisters and twins, which they already really knew. It was good to get official confirmation, though. I have to say my favorite part of the chapter was their pool game at the end! It was so hot and obviously foreplay! Keep it coming...
Date: 03 Sep 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Phew.....it's getting hot in here!
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like they are rally hitting it off and the girls have really bonded. LOL at Bella being nosey and wow what a monster Edward has in his pants.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh this is sooo good! Cordie and Kassie and sooo cute and funny. I am loving this story and I can't wait for Edward and Bella to get together!!!!!!!!!! This slow kinda burn is killing me LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing
Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow edwards average when he is soft...hot damn
Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love the story! Can you add a lemon soon!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the white wolf and her twin. I loved what Jake told Cordie about her drawing. I like Rose's idea that they move in together. They should move into Edward's and keep the girls together and build their friendship. I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think they are progressing well. The more boob action was great! lol. It is a good thing the girls are not older they would really be in trouble as far as the trap goes. Love this Jakey he is great.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this so much. I think Edward is having naughty dreams while he slept with Bella. I can't wait for them to see they are perfect for eachother. I love the girls they are so cute. Kassie is the best.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Let's get together yeah! yeah! yeah!!!! ( he he he )
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