Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Women like Maggie make me want to, first, puke all over them, then punch them in the nose. I don't do that, but want to...j/s. Edward and Bella are becoming friends already! I wondered at the end part about the wallpaper and what is written underneath, then I remembered he used to live in that house! Well, well, well! Pornstar endowed, is he. I'm sure she will keep that thought tucked away in her mind until the time is right. Thanks for a lovely chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love how comfortable they are getting together. It will be interesting for the next sleep over lol
Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story. Have we heard from Maggie before? Why was she at the party?
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm not fond of E calling Bella BeeBee. I don't like it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
That Maggie person is just gross!!! Ewww.... I almost feel like crying about the girls being sad to be separated.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
You guys are my spirit wolves...
Luv u always
E/k
Date: 28 Aug 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this story!!!!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Was thinking both sides were wrong in the beginning but they both made up for it when they apologized. The girls are just too cute. Carlisle found out some very interesting information. Glad Bella stood up to Alice too and didn't let her railroad her with the clothes.
Date: 24 Aug 2017 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
They are perfect together love the family
Date: 23 Aug 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
They are settling in to one big happy family and they dont have a clue they are doing it. Love it.
Date: 22 Aug 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad E realizes what an arse he was. LOVING Tanya's character. Nice dinner though
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
They're meshing together just like a family!!! I know there will be some bumps in the road, but I love it!!! I'm always left wanting more! Thanks for the wonderful story!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
good. looking forward to the party
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that Eddie and Bee Bee are getting along so much better now. Oh I know it's for the sake of the girls, but who knows where that will lead? I'm sure you two do, but I can guess also. I can hope it does! This is a lovely G-Rated story and I can enjoy one of those once in a while. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm amazed at how well they're all getting along.
Date: 21 Aug 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
The girls were whispering and Bella thinks they are up to something. Are they planning I. Trying to get their parents together? I just wonder what the girls are thinking a out them looking like each other. Will we get their POVs?
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I half expected Edward and Bella to come up with a friends with benefits arrangement when they were discussing each other's sex lives. I keep waiting for Cordie and Kassie to have a falling out.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad that our little foursome is getting along so well. And the girls are learning a lot with each other. But I am so relieved that Kassie and Bella are standing up to Alice. She is just ridiculous.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2017 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think things are going just fine at the moment. Their competitive streak could get interesting. I think it's wonderful they are getting to know each other, as well as letting the girls bond. I can hardly wait to get into the mess with DCFS.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the competitive between the two.
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
So she lives where Edward and Jasper use to live. That was a carefree dinner.
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
not what they where expecting
Date: 14 Aug 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Things are going MUCH better now and I love that! I'm hoping, in the end, that Edward and Bella come together and make a whole family with their girls. Wouldn't that be lovely. Of course, I'm hoping for a bit, or more, of some citrusy goodness in the story. It may be too family friendly for that, but I hope not. You gals write lovely stories. Thanks!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can see the competition between these two will definitely be interesting. Love it!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awwwww...they're sugar sweet.
i see Teddy & Berry are becoming comfortable with each other!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward needs to loosen up on the possibility of a relationship with Bella. Whatever will be will be. I think their competitiveness is a form of flirting. I like it.
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Somehow my alerts weren't showing up and I missed this.
Just read straight through. Love the concept and what you are doing with this story. Edward is a bit of an entitled arrogant ass in the first few chapters, but I'm sure Bella will bring him around.
I absolutely LOVE the twins. Kassie is a hoot! Calling Edward Teddy, I just roared with laughter! That was great.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful talents with us!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Amazing. I think they are trying and hopefully everything works out
Date: 08 Aug 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved the clothes switch and that it didn't work!! That was awesome! I haven I doubt that the teachers at school or someone who doesn't know them well wouldn't be able to tell. It's great that Bella and Edward are reaching out to each other for thoughts and opinions. I think it would be a great idea to let them talk to a therapist just to be on the same safe to check in on their own thoughts and feelings about all that has happened and is happening. Can't wait for the nedt chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, I can see them working together and becoming a family, all the while the girls leading the way.
Sherry
Date: 07 Aug 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad they are talking like civilized human beings at least. Being cordial to each other, especially in front of the girls, is extremely important
Date: 07 Aug 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think Edward and Bella are doing pretty good. I am wondering did Kassie have some of the same medicinal problems that Cordie had? Was Lizzie sick as a baby too?
Date: 07 Aug 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm sure there will be speed bumps initially but I think Cordie & Kassie will be the glue that binds them....
wouldn't be surprised if a bit o "parent trap" shenanigans weren't attempted
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well..... the adults are sure bing cautous.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like this story. No bars or stripper clothes.. that gets so old. These girls are sweet.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh what a sweet chapter! They had a lovely visit to Edward's home and made some significant plans for the future. I know the DNA tests will only confirm what we know, that Kassie and Cordie are twins. I'm eager to see what develops, if anything, between Bella and Edward! Thanks for this story. I like it a lot.
Date: 02 Aug 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the girls. Edward really stuck his foot in his mouth. What a wanker he's being.
Date: 01 Aug 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is quickly becoming my fav update! Love that the girls are getting along!
Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well Cordie seems to be doing better with her sister around. Maybe now that he knows maybe Edward will stop being so superior and a know it all. Loving this story so far!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love love it so muchch. I want more!!!!!! LOL I guess I wait till next week ugh
Date: 31 Jul 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is a cute story and a very untenable situation. I will read it eagerly and can't wait to see how this resolves! Thanks.
Date: 31 Jul 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love that Cordie comes out of her shell around Kassie. I guess Edward can call Jenks and cancel the investigation. Can't wait to see how Edward handles the dinner. I think once he sees the girls interact he will see this as a good thing.
Date: 31 Jul 2017 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I Love Kassie, shes a real firecracker. Edward seems to be in a bit of a shock still, but kids can bring you out of that. Loved the smurf comment !
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
This should be an interesting dinner....hmmmm what I wouldn't do to be a fly on the wall. (he he he)
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[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
These introductions went better than I thought it would being at the school. I think Kassie is a good influence on Cordie, as Cordie could be a good one on Kassie. I can't imagine being in a situation as this. Looking forward to how Edward is going to handle dinner with the girls.
Sherry
Date: 31 Jul 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok. I am just loving these two girls! Looking forward to this story! I can always count on you two for a great way to spend the evening 😊
Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
the girls together are amusing. looking forward to more
Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
These girls are so awesome! I can see Cordie coming out of her shell more and more then I get she is around Kassie. Kassie is so sassy that I have no choice but to love her. My girls were just as sassy at that age and it reminds me of them.
Date: 31 Jul 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think I'm in love with Kassie and Cordie.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
There's gonna be some huge issues arrive.
Sherry
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Omgosh!!!! Can't wait to see how their 1st meeting each other goes.
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds really interesting. Can't wait for you to write more
Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
uhhh ooo edward is going to flip when he sees bella as the teacher
Date: 27 Jul 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh oooo
Fire works coming me thinks
Duh Duh Daaaa
:)
Date: 26 Jul 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
The first day is going to be so exciting. Bella has figure it out smart girl.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Happy 50th story!!! I love all of them! Can't wait for this one to update.
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. It's funny to me that she knows who he is but he has clue about her. Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
I kept wanting them all to bump into each other but there is the first day of school and that holds a lot of great promise for everyone
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
So Edward automatically thinks the worst of Bella, but Bella doesn't think the worst of him. hmmm.... She assumes some kind of mistake was made and is trying to find answers. But Edward is already placing full blame, even though he know nothing truthful.
Date: 25 Jul 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking what I read here, a lot! Bella knows who Edward is, but Edward is clueless. Can't wait for more. This is looking to be an entertaining story!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
thinking e might make a scene or a jackass out of himself when he sees b at school. at least b is being logical and not jumping to conclussions
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm biting my nails : O wow! now I'm totally excited and can't wait for the next update.
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[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think it might be a shit storm lol but i wish i didnt have to wait till monday to find out
Date: 24 Jul 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
So loving this ladies. Happy writing.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is gonna be a fun and exciting story to follow. I loved the long chapter. Now I can't wait to see what comes next.
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[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm surprised Edward isn't the one wanting answers as to why the girls look alike. He's gonna be surprised when he shows up to schools and Cordie is in Bella's class.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jul 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
So Edward probably thinks Bella is Cordies birth mother and is afraid she will want Cordie back. I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!
Date: 18 Jul 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was great! I can't wait for the update and see how Bella starts to unravel this. I wonder if Edward will be thinking about the Kammie or if he'll put it in the back of his mind. I wonder what Kassie and Cordie thought about the whole thing. Seriously looking forward to Monday!
Date: 18 Jul 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this story is going to be a roller coaster. I love it, waiting for the next chapter is going to be torture. hehehe
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing start! Looking forward to reading what comes next and the reactions they both will have once school starts.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I love it already and cant wait for more. Does Edward think that Bella is the bio mom that is a druggy ??? Bella is going to be his daughters teacher??
Date: 17 Jul 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this start, what a great premise. It makes me wonder who arranged the adoptions and why they split up the girls. A sinister sociological experiment perhaps ? I doubt it's going to be simple incompetence, it was a deliberate act, but why ? Hmmm...
And in the summary 'corrupting' their lives - thats an odd word to use, I cant quite fit the definition of corrupting to the behaviour or impact of children, so Im very intrigued to see how that plays out.
A week to wait for an update is going to feel like forever !
Date: 17 Jul 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi. It's good to see a new story from you two. I usually read you on STARS but didn't get the notification of a new story like I usually do. I know they are having email issues and haven't fixed them yet, so I'm glad I noticed this being posted in various groups. I have favorited it, so I hope subsequent notifications come to me ok. I really like what you're doing here. It's an intriguing concept. So the birth mother wasn't anyone we know? It is interesting how child services wouldn't try to keep identical twins together, or even tell the adopting parent of the existence of the twin. I'm glad they found each other and can't wait to see this story unfold. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome security features on the daycare. The eye thing is really odd. See it in cats/dogs, but never people.
I was going to ask if this was loosely based on "the parent trap" But I see you've put an interesting twist on it.
Sadly those parks have great people and not so great people. Interesting way for the girls to meet.
It sounds like Bella has great parents growing up. Sucks that the state dumped kids with special needs like that though. Online college is such an awesome option. I should finish mine by the end of year. Glad Kassie can get into the school. Rose and Em sounds like great friends/extended family.
Yea Steve seems like he needs to find a new job. All the deja vu is kinda creepy in a way. Well, Edward is a real dick there at the end. She did deserve a real apology
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 17 Jul 2017 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. Edward could have been a whole lot nicer at the end though. I mean seriously he scared them both and accused her of kidnapping and then half heartedly says he's sorry. I have a feeling I'm going to love this story!
Date: 17 Jul 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
wondring if e thinks b is the birth mom and that why he's running off so fast
Date: 17 Jul 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love love it cant wait for more
Date: 17 Jul 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow what a shock running into each other that way good start :)
Date: 17 Jul 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start - look forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with the plot.
Date: 17 Jul 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this already. Just like have with all your other stories😍😍😍