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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 40

nice update

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 40

Will Edward make Bella some kind of ring?
Will Jazz be okay eventually?
That battle scene with Cetus was awesome.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 39

nice story so far.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2018 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

Three heads against my tiny army of brave babes doesn't seem fair. What if they just let him eat the other half? I mean it would accomplish the same thing and they wouldn't have to try to kill Cetus. Also I'm glad that the issues each individual has faced and kept with them all this time is working themselves out. Although I will say that I'm with Edward, Bella not being presemt in the courtroom makes me think that their future doesn't align, and I have a few theories as to why it wouldn't... As always, I'm looking forward to reading more of this crazy tale. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 38

What a wild ride. So Bella being thrown into time and space is messing with the time space continuum... meaing that Endless Bella must've been impacted by this? Butat least the whole gang made it through, and although Bella seems to be the glue of the group, their bonds should be strong enough by now to get through all this.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 38

My head is swimming with all the shifting rifts.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 37

Hm. Cool. Thanks, looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 37

The Endless knows what does and doesn't seem to work, so why are the Catalysts still going through the same actions? What is different from the 2000+ times before?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2018 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

Awe man! I'm all caught up!!!! I'm loving every update!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2018 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

The amount of cliffhangers is enough to cause cardiac arrest. Solid chapter, and I didn't think Rose was dead, I still remember the cave with old Bella. Is that who's walking towards us?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 36

Almost all together again.
The verdict on James is still out.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm livingall the mystery!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

I would trust him!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad I waited so long to start reading.... I'm so intrigued!!!!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2018 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) Congratulations 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

The only way Alistair can redeem himself is by taking down his father.
Is Rosalie somehow stuck in Cullen's web working on the computer programming?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 34

Could things possibly be looking up the the Catalysts?

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

Doesn't matter what verison of Victoria it is (though I believe it's an equally married mixture of them both in there) as long as it's Victoria! And she still has to be alive for the cave thing to have worked, so I'm betting on myself with this one.

Another great chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2018 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 33

This story is so fun. I'm only worried for Tanya at this point. We know Victoria is alive, maybe her and the Island Spirit are just going to turn into the ultimate power couple... literally. The only thing that would be cool is if Emmett wound up befriending a dino. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 33

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33

The intrigue continues.

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 33

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 33

As a hand slowly creeps up in the back corner, I timidly ask, "'Ma'am, I'm not sure I know who The Endless is ?" I strongly think that Bella was right when The Endless can change to whoever you are. I'm not sure though, at all. Such supernatural/adventure I have never read. I read the chapters voraciously as soon as I see a chapter has been added. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

I knew it! Bella is so boss. I love it. Now we just need to set this weirdass timejump island straight.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Time travel, warped futures, and literal dead ends have shaped this bizarre storyline into a journey of deception. Will the plan inevitably fail?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Time travel, warped futures, and literal dead ends have shaped this bizarre storyline into a journey of deception. Will the plan inevitably fail?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 31

That was action packed!
I'm on pins and needles waiting on the outcome.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 31

That was action packed!
I'm on pins and needles waiting on the outcome.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

Hm. So I was right? Knowing the future only changes the when/where/how aka the outcome, not the happening of the event in general. So now I'm interested if this particular split up is what sets the sadder events in motion like Rose, and Edward's events. And since Leah took Alice out that makes her death by Cullen a question if I'm right.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

Cool chapter. I think the story is easy to follow, I just don't know how Bella will change these future glimpses because so far she hasn't even though she's changed the outcome in Victoria's case, Vicky us still going to die eventually when the heart takes over. So what's the point of knowing the future? The only thing I think about is The Endless. Part of me believes that it's Bella actually. She's most likely to be given all that we know currently. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2018 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 30

Is there a chance that Alice will turn on the arachnid soldiers? Could she possibly fulfill the earlier vision where she defies Cullen?
Or did I not remember that correctly?
Allister has longed for his father's approval from the beginning and Cullen has used that against him. In the end Carlisle Cullen is Only in it for himself and future glory.
Why would McKenzie still be after Edward? The world is over as he knows it and he is free from the guilt of his traitorous ways.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2018 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

So what chapter was it when they braved the volcano catwalks? Yeah, they were launched into the future that they heard over the comm system. Hopefully they figure that out. It would make sense that this particular future happened due to the choices they've made so far considering that you derived this story from an app called choices and that future paths are based on choices hence the idols' power to display a future outcome. 

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) Good luck with your audition 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

Another idol stuck in the lava?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2018 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 28

Does Bella have any more chances of seeing their future or week links in Cullen's past? Where is Alice?

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2018 3:57 AM Title: Nominated

Congratulations on your nomination. You totally deserve it!

Reviewer: KarenT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

love love love love this story! Read 20 chapters in 3 days! cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2018 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 28

Damn

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh hell..... I can't stand Carlisle.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

But like... you will be whole again Island Heart Spirit, you just gotta stop trying to kill the ones who will help you. Good foreshadowing stuff makes me feel confident in this assessment. Lots of good stuff in this story. This is like a super cool epic fantasy tale. Idk what that app is, but you should put more belief into your storytelling abilities. You have a real talent here.

 

Preview response: Alistair, my dude, y'all left your new friends and immediately almost died, I'd say Iris' tale was 100% part of a trap even if it turns out to be true. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2018 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Don't they have cellphones? You don't need reception to use the built in flashlight

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2018 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2018 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27

I hate that Alice got away.   And I still hate Carlisle with a passion.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2018 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27

Still not sure who's side Alice is on. Will she met her end as Bella's vision suggested?
Victoria is an entirely different sort of trouble. She may have to stay behind with the island.
The Yeti creature was interesting.
Edward can't go home.
Why is it Alice's job to protect this group? From what and to what end?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2018 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27

Still not sure who's side Alice is on. Will she met her end as Bella's vision suggested?
Victoria is an entirely different sort of trouble. She may have to stay behind with the island.
The Yeti creature was interesting.
Edward can't go home.
Why is it Alice's job to protect this group? From what and to what end?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26

I never did trust Alice.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella's suspicions regarding Alice have been confirmed on two occasions. She cannot be trusted. Will she find a way to inform Carlisle of the groups whereabouts? Edward and the gang need to find a way to detained/imprison her. Then make their move.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella's suspicions regarding Alice have been confirmed on two occasions. She cannot be trusted. Will she find a way to inform Carlisle of the groups whereabouts? Edward and the gang need to find a way to detained/imprison her. Then make their move.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2018 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

Poor Leah 

Reviewer: jacso Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2018 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

The people who need to get some answers concerning the passage yard they should come here. When they come here then they have to scrutinize this kind of blog they ought to got some Rotterdam Escort in London. So look for this is awesome and strong after them.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

It seems more and more like they can't trust anyone.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2018 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

Still don't trust Alice and I never will trust Carlisle or any of his machines......

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2018 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

The time travel back controlled by Bella was really cool.  I wish they found some concrete answers though.    I wonder what the heck is up with Victoria.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

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Date: 04 Jan 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

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Date: 29 Dec 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you too 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm sad about the 2 deaths.   Grrr......   Why couldn't Carlisle have died?  --pouts--   That battle was intense though.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2017 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love that Edward and Bella are all official.......   Really cute when Alistair was all loopy and dancing with Tanya.....   I'm not sure if I trust the pirate lady, BUT I trust her more than Carlisle.  He is awful.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

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Date: 15 Dec 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am so riveted by this story and so frustrated at the same time.  I want to do a table flip Real Housewives style.   ugh......    It seems like there are too many baddies to ever get away from or do the right thing even if the crew wanted to.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

I kind of figured the 'Watchers' would be kind folks and Carlisle would still be a monster.  This chapter definitely proved that.    I hope Bella can reset things again to block evil bastard Carlisle.   I also feel sorry for Iris.   It almost seemed Alice was a little robot like as well there for a minute.  This isn't the first strange thing she has done.  hmmmm.......

And I love whatever amount of Bella and Edward loviness that you can give us.  :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG ! Love your story Can't wait to read next chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

That chapter was awesome and I loved howq Bella used the whole Groundhog Day effect.  She sure wormed a lot of information out of Carlisle.  huh??   I still don't trust him though.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2017 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love Loved it can't wait to read more and more.Great story 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think I would tie Carlisle's ass up until I got some dam answers out of him.   Maybe have someone guard him or throw him in the lava.  hmp....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

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Date: 17 Nov 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

One story is better.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2017 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMG.! Can't wait to read more.Love your story.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

There is so much WTH when I read your updates, but I truly love it.  Almost every sentence uttered by any character would have me ask a question.   So.......   ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 11 Nov 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love your story can't wait to read more! Sitting on edge lol!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

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Date: 09 Nov 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Your AN exactly describes my thoughts.  Dam!   I sure am glad that Bella WAS able to savwe Edward though.



Author's Response: It won't answer your questions, but here's your teaser, I hope you like it :-D ---- “Stay close, people! Watch each other's backs!” Garrett said, but when I turned to him, I heard Kate cry out behind me. “Bella, get down—” I turned back around just in time to see something launching at me. Kate tried to tackle me out of the way, but we were both caught beneath it; a large rope net woven from tough vines. “Agh! This is what I get for trying to help you!” Kate complained loudly. “Hold still, I can get us out of here!” I said. I wiggled around, and even though my limbs were tangled with Kate's, I was able to turn the cutlass in my hand against the vines. “Oh my god, if you cut my hair, you are dead!” “Just a little ... further...” I groaned. The sharp cutlass blade easily sliced through the vines, freeing us both. Kate exhaled in relief. “Whew, good thing I was there to save your ass.” Just then, a black, round-tipped arrow grazed Kate's arm. “Ow! What the hell? I can't move my arm!” “The arrows must be tipped with some sort of non-lethal paralytic so they can capture us! Look out!" Tanya called out. An archer took aim at me. Her arrow whistled through the air, and I knew I wouldn't be able to dodge it in time. ----

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

I feel so bad for Edward, They have to clear his name when this is over.

Reviewer: imastar511 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love the story. I really like the mental image of them running away, naked, from giant blue people. 

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Date: 03 Nov 2017 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

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Date: 03 Nov 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

I wonder if there is more to that Alice and Iris situation.  hmmm.....   Alistair and Tanya and Bella discovered a magical healing plant.  hmmmm........    And now Edward and Bella have to fight of the attackers buck naked.   Dam!  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 13

WTH????  I can honestly say that I NEVER see anything coming at all.   LOL   You shock the hell out of me in every chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

This keeps getting crazier and crazier. 

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