Date: 22 Sep 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Mergers and acquisitions? Is that a euphemism of some sort? Am I missing something? Can't wait to read about their grand exit!
Lol, that's a real job. Helping companies expand or sell off pieces when they need cash. Buying out failing businesses.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
So is this story turning into bdsm?
These are my chapter notes from 12. Not really, but he likes to be in control.
Since there has been some concern voiced, I'll give you the heads-up that Bella will NOT suddenly turn into a submissive. There's a huge difference between that type of commitment and some role play. That also doesn't mean there won't be any kinky fuckery, so if all the warnings at the beginning weren't enough, this is your last chance to bail.
Date: 12 Sep 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for responding. You are the first author who has responded to me and I have been reading fanfiction etc. for over 6 years. I can definitely manage on 3 updates a week. Again, thank you for your wonderful imagination. Pamela
I know of a few that do, but not many. I always do! <3
Date: 11 Sep 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this!!! Made it thru irma! We even have electric. This chapter was FAN-FLIPPING-TASTIC!! She so needs a spanking!! This story gets hotter & hotter!
Irma's still raining on us, but I'm glad you made it through! Thanks for the enthusiasm!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love, love, love this storyline and cavemanward. He is strong and sexy. I love that you update regularly, but, could we have longer paragraphs?? I know it is rude of me to ask for that, but I just want more to read. I am not good at reviewing, as I know most people comment on the storyline and how they would like it to go. I don't do that. If I love a story, I just read and read and thoroughly enjoy. I rely on the author to decide what happens, afterall, it's her or his story. Again, thank you for a truly enjoyable experience every time you update. regards, Pamela Hanley
Thank you for liking it so much! It's short becasue it's a drabble. I'm not great at long chapters at all; my other stories average 1,200-1,500 word chapters. But that's why I'm updating so frequently, to try to give you more overall.
Date: 06 Sep 2017 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for being a Jake hater. Punching him in the gut might have been a little more tame than he deserved. Edward is so mysterious but then what the hell - a screw is a screw and fuck he would make my world go around and around etc..... I like that word dicktastic!, suits him just fine. Hmmm...now you got me thinkin
I usually am, lol. Remember she's a black belt, so her punch carries more strength than most girls!
Date: 04 Sep 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think she's in love with his man part!! Hahaha!! How old are they again? I can't remember if you have said yet? Also, they didn't use protection that last time. He must trust her and vise versa for her.
It's in chapter 7; she's 24 and he's 33. No, they didn't use protection. Somewhere inn the midst of all that sex, they must have had a talk about it.
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm not sure if she's actually in love yet, but she is fully cock drunk! OMG what a lovely place to be! This story is seriously affecting me, in a physical way, if you catch my drift...
She is definitely drunk on that cock! Lol
Date: 02 Sep 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
You paint a great picture with your words here, but I may have to go check out your blog anyway! Am I wrong for loving suck porn, both in words and in pictures?
Well the stuff on the blog would be the equivalent to porn! It's easy to get addicted.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's Saturday and we get an update! I was so excited i thought my eyes were deceiving me! Then i realize what should be and is in this chapter!!! Whoooo hooo!! This is mr. Bossy pants! What is bella going to wear home i wonder?
Ah, that's a good call! No, you eyes weren't deceiving you. I thought you all deserved the next chapterr.
Date: 30 Aug 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, for someone worried about safety he shouldn't have left her standing out there alone that time of night. Do like his bossy attitude.
She can take care of herself, really. He shouldn't have been late, no.