Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 37
Yes....I think it is Edward.
Author's Response:
It sounds like something he'd say.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella don't let your pride ruin your chance at happiness. Edward has always been honest with you. He is damaged and it took a lot to come back and face you.
Author's Response:
I agree with you. That's how I see him.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 23 Oct 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 36
I didn't expect her to immediately cave, but I hope he fights for her is he is really wanting to try.
Author's Response:
He'll fight, for sure.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
I hope he doesn't give up on her
Author's Response:
Never!
Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 36
I see where Bella is coming from it hurts being rejected. I hope it works out.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he was pretty mean to her.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
So sad for both of them. He needs to say more
Author's Response:
He does, and he will.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Oct 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 35
Way to go Bella
Author's Response:
Thank you! Woohoo!
Date: 21 Oct 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is a bad ass love her.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Me too!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
Go Bella. But Im thinking her rage is more with Edward then Jake.
Author's Response:
It's a good mix of the two. Jake deserves it so much!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
I can't believe Edward wasn't back there but I guess he is smart enought to know Emmett is bigger. Poor Bella, so glad she kick the shit out of him!
Author's Response:
Well, yeah. Someone had to stay with Rose, since Emmett is the cop and needed to see to her assailant.
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
I hope she kills him. I'm sure edward can pay off the cops for her!!
Author's Response:
I love the bloodthirst!
Date: 18 Oct 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
Poor Rose
Author's Response:
Yes! I feel bad for her.
Date: 18 Oct 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
Haha, black belt, that‘s just what he deserves!
Author's Response:
He truly does!
Date: 18 Oct 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh he is going down
Author's Response:
Down and out!
Date: 18 Oct 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 34
Jake is going to be nothing but a spot on the wall when she gets done and then Emmett gets a hold of him. Where did Edward go is he going to step in and kick Jakes ass????
Author's Response:
She's going to make sure there's nothing left!
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh poor rose...and no its not smart at all.
Author's Response:
It really isn't.
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh wow
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Nice quiting the job and the man of her dreams is back
Author's Response:
Sounds good, right?
Date: 16 Oct 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
So he can't stand to stay away, can he? Does he know about their new place? I'd love to know what's going on in his head! Thanks!!
Author's Response:
He's just hoping to grovel at this point.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome chappie! Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
All i hear you saying is sorry, not sorry for ending the chapter right there!
Author's Response:
That's right! Sorry not sorry. Lol
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
He grew a set!
Author's Response:
Lol, he sure did!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 32
It's never too late for E&B!!
Author's Response:
Of course not! Lol
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
Rose knows her so well. I hope edward sees her last performance!!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
I hope she can. Stupid man is about to lose Bella if he doesn't get it together!!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 32
Alice is the best and the smartest of the two lol
Author's Response:
That's definitely true!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love Alice!!!!
Author's Response:
She’s the best!
Date: 14 Oct 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
โบโบโบโบ
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love those!
Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can’t wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
It's great to get Edward's POV! Thanks. So he's acting like his dad did? That's why he's pushing her away? I'm glad he spoke to Alice about her and this situation, even if he didn't tell Alice everything. Great stuff! See ya next time!
Author's Response:
He's really been afraid of turning into his dad, and then that's exactly what he does.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
Suck it up Edward
Author's Response:
Lol, no sympathy.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love Alice....he can never be too late
Author's Response:
I agree!
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
Horray for Alice. He must have had very bad parents to feel so bad about himself.
Author's Response:
His dad was just awful.
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh Bella
Author's Response:
She's workin it.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
So Rose has her Emmett...now Bella needs her Edward. I know. Slow burn. I'm gaining patience in my old age...seriously, you post so often that there is almost no pain to the waiting...
Author's Response:
That is the best part!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward needs to get his head out of his ass NOW
Author's Response:
Lol, he sure does.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Keep working Bella Edwars will com crawling to you...
Author's Response:
I don't think he can help himself.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
Edward is a sad sad man
Author's Response:
He is, indeed!
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks !
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
I hope Alice can get through to him
Author's Response:
It's really needed.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
ooh I'm dying to know his story. Broken man. What broke him? This drabble stuff is hard to read, but I'm trying.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you sticking with it! He's got more to tell, that's for sure.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh oh. Love the surprise. Oh Edward
Author's Response:
Thank You! He's so broken.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think it's him he can't stay away
Author's Response:
You may be right!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yes for sure he was there! He is so obssessed & realizes he made a mistake. Or at least i hope he does.
Author's Response:
We'll have to see!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Cherry bomb is cute. But will peolpe know what the place is? Granted this is a story wo my vote is for cherry bomb.
Author's Response:
I think they'd have to put Dance Studio on the sign somewhere.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think he was there but didn't want her to see him. I'm glad they got their place!
Author's Response:
I think you might be right!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Oct 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Oct 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think he was.
Author's Response:
We'll find out on Wednesday!
Date: 09 Oct 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think he was there to pick up a new flavor of the month. Now that would be an interesting twist to the story. Short lived of course but still juicy
Author's Response:
That would be a twist!
Date: 09 Oct 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think if he was there he'd of stayed so she could see him.
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not.
Date: 07 Oct 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Oct 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
Rose is going to hunt him down and kick his ass lol
Author's Response:
Lol, she should!
Date: 07 Oct 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
omg omg omg i can't wait for these updates... im going CRAZY here WOMAN!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's awesome.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 06 Oct 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
name...of the two listed in your chapter end notes, I like #2 Night Moves better. Cherry Bomb makes me think of that Runaways song from many years ago.
So she's devastated. I bet, but still I think there's something else going on with Edward. Good for her for moving on with her life. I bet he caves and contacts her once he finds out she quit, when she does quit...
Author's Response:
I see him caving first, absolutely.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh Bella.
Author's Response:
She's got to keep going!
Date: 06 Oct 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
She's a strong girl, but it's still hard on her.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, I can;t believe he hasn't tried to contact her at all.
Author's Response:
Not yet, no.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
Cherry Bomb. ;) Loving this fic.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll add your vote.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG WHAT WRONG WITH HIM?
Author's Response:
The mention of his mom was a trigger, and he panicked.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
What the heck was that? Didn't see that coming at all๐ง
Author's Response:
Um, yeah. He panicked.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh my. unexpected! heartbreaking...I'm stunned. I'll keep the faith and reserve judgment.
Author's Response:
Thank you! He might even tell you what he was thinking. ;)
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow that went 100 times worse than i was expecting!!
Author's Response:
I love to make things difficult, lol.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
So now they are going to get into the meat of their relationship....i hope!
Author's Response:
Maybe not!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG he is freaked out
Author's Response:
He has, yeah.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
I want to punch him..just a bit....maybe a bit more
Author's Response:
Hey, I don't blame you.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
:( Thank you!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow, he is screwed up.
Author's Response:
He really is.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
Love Love your story can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate that, thanks so much, sweetie!
Date: 04 Oct 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
What a refreshing twist this is. She doesn't need his money! I love that. His connections, I presume, are what she needs. I'm not sure how he feels about this, but I'm sure you'll tell us...thanks! Congrats on the placement in the twifiction recs!
Author's Response:
She's totally got it covered! She just needs him. Thank you!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
She takes good care of him to. I hope he can figure out what she needs him for
Author's Response:
If he's smart he will!
Date: 02 Oct 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Oct 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 30 Sep 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yes of course it can work! But they have to want to be fixed!!
Author's Response:
Yes, the key is both of them wanting it.
Date: 30 Sep 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
It's about to get crazy smexy up in here!!!
Author's Response:
Lol, yes it is!
Date: 29 Sep 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 29 Sep 2017 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Fixing the broken man rarely works. I hope this is the exception, but won't hold my breath. This could get really angsty...I like your opening comment about no talk and all sex. Pretty spot on, it is. You surprise me at every turn. Can't wait to see what comes next! Thanks!
Author's Response:
There will be some drama; I don't think it goes as far as angst. I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 29 Sep 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
This is an awesome story! Is Edward married and
is Bella the mistress?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! No, he sucks at relationships.