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Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 37

Yes....I think it is Edward.  



Author's Response:

 It sounds like something he'd say. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 36

Bella don't let your pride ruin your chance at happiness. Edward has always been honest with you. He is damaged and it took a lot to come back and face you.



Author's Response:

I agree with you. That's how I see him. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 36

I didn't expect her to immediately cave, but I hope he fights for her is he is really wanting to try. 



Author's Response:

He'll fight, for sure. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

I hope he doesn't give up on her 



Author's Response:

Never!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 36

I see where Bella is coming from it hurts being rejected. I hope it works out.



Author's Response:

 Yeah, he was pretty mean to her. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 36

So sad for both of them.  He needs to say more



Author's Response:

 He does, and he will. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 36

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

Way to go Bella



Author's Response:

Thank you! Woohoo!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bella is a bad ass love her.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Me too!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 35

Go Bella. But Im thinking her rage is more with Edward then Jake. 



Author's Response:

 It's a good mix of the two. Jake deserves it so much!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

I can't believe Edward wasn't back there but I guess he is smart enought to know Emmett is bigger.  Poor Bella, so glad she kick the shit out of him!



Author's Response:

 Well, yeah. Someone had to stay with Rose, since Emmett is the cop and needed to see to her assailant. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 34

I hope she kills him. I'm sure edward can pay off the cops for her!!



Author's Response:

I love the bloodthirst!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 34

Poor Rose 



Author's Response:

Yes! I feel bad for her. 

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 34

Haha, black belt, that‘s just what he deserves!



Author's Response:

 He truly does!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh he is going down



Author's Response:

Down and out!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

Jake is going to be nothing but a spot on the wall when she gets done and then Emmett gets a hold of him.  Where did Edward go is he going to step in and kick Jakes ass????



Author's Response:

 She's going to make sure there's nothing left!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh poor rose...and no its not smart at all.



Author's Response:

 It really isn't. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

Oh wow



Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

Nice quiting the job and the man of her dreams is back



Author's Response:

 Sounds good, right? 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 33

love it



Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 33

So he can't stand to stay away, can he? Does he know about their new place? I'd love to know what's going on in his head! Thanks!!



Author's Response:

He's just hoping to grovel at this point. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 33

Awesome chappie! Thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 33

All i hear you saying is sorry, not sorry for ending the chapter right there! 



Author's Response:

That's right! Sorry not sorry. Lol

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 33

He grew a set!



Author's Response:

Lol, he sure did!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 32

It's never too late for E&B!!



Author's Response:

Of course not! Lol

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 31

Rose knows her so well.  I hope edward sees her last performance!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

I hope she can. Stupid man is about to lose Bella if he doesn't get it together!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 32

Alice is the best and the smartest of the two lol



Author's Response:

 That's definitely true!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love Alice!!!!



Author's Response:

She’s the best!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ



Author's Response:

 Thank you, I love those!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it can’t wait for more ๐Ÿ’™



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

It's great to get Edward's POV! Thanks. So he's acting like his dad did? That's why he's pushing her away? I'm glad he spoke to Alice about her and this situation, even if he didn't tell Alice everything. Great stuff! See ya next time!



Author's Response:

 He's really been afraid of turning into his dad, and then that's exactly what he does. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 



Author's Response:

 Thanks!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 32

Suck it up Edward



Author's Response:

Lol, no sympathy. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love Alice....he can never be too late



Author's Response:

I agree!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 32

Horray for Alice.   He must have had very bad parents to feel so bad about himself.



Author's Response:

His dad was just awful. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh Bella



Author's Response:

She's workin it. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 31

So Rose has her Emmett...now Bella needs her Edward. I know. Slow burn. I'm gaining patience in my old age...seriously, you post so often that there is almost no pain to the waiting...



Author's Response:

That is the best part! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

Edward needs to get his head out of his ass NOW



Author's Response:

Lol, he sure does. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

Keep working Bella Edwars will com crawling to you...



Author's Response:

I don't think he can help himself. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 31

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 



Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 30

Edward is a sad sad man



Author's Response:

 He is, indeed!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thanks !

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 30

I hope Alice can get through to him 



Author's Response:

 It's really needed. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 30

ooh I'm dying to know his story. Broken man. What broke him? This drabble stuff is hard to read, but I'm trying.



Author's Response:

I appreciate you sticking with it! He's got more to tell, that's for sure. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh oh. Love the surprise. Oh Edward



Author's Response:

Thank You! He's so broken. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 29

I think it's him he can't stay away



Author's Response:

You may be right!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yes for sure he was there!  He is so obssessed & realizes he made a mistake. Or at least i hope he does.



Author's Response:

We'll have to see!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

Cherry bomb is cute. But will peolpe know what the place is? Granted this is a story wo my vote is for cherry bomb.



Author's Response:

I think they'd have to put Dance Studio on the sign somewhere.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 29

I think he was there but didn't want her to see him. I'm glad they got their place! 



Author's Response:

I think you might be right!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 29

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

I think he was.



Author's Response:

We'll find out on Wednesday!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 29

I think he was there to pick up a new flavor of the month.  Now that would be an interesting twist to the story.  Short lived of course but still juicy 



Author's Response:

That would be a twist!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 29

I think if he was there he'd of stayed so she could see him.



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 28

Rose is going to hunt him down and kick his ass lol



Author's Response:

Lol, she should!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 28

omg omg omg i can't wait for these updates... im going CRAZY here WOMAN!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's awesome.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

name...of the two listed in your chapter end notes, I like #2 Night Moves better. Cherry Bomb makes me think of that Runaways song from many years ago.

So she's devastated. I bet, but still I think there's something else going on with Edward. Good for her for moving on with her life. I bet he caves and contacts her once he finds out she quit, when she does quit...



Author's Response:

I see him caving first, absolutely.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh Bella. 



Author's Response:

She's got to keep going!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

She's a strong girl, but it's still hard on her.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, I can;t believe he hasn't tried to contact her at all.  



Author's Response:

Not yet, no.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

Cherry Bomb. ;) Loving this fic. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll add your vote.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

OMG WHAT WRONG WITH HIM?



Author's Response:

 The mention of his mom was a trigger, and he panicked. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

What the heck was that? Didn't see that coming at all๐Ÿ˜ง



Author's Response:

Um, yeah.  He panicked. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

oh my. unexpected! heartbreaking...I'm stunned. I'll keep the faith and reserve judgment. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! He might even tell you what he was thinking. ;)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow that went 100 times worse than i was expecting!!



Author's Response:

I love to make things difficult, lol. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 26

So now they are going to get into the meat of their relationship....i hope!



Author's Response:

Maybe not!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG he is freaked out



Author's Response:

 He has, yeah. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

I want to punch him..just a bit....maybe a bit more 



Author's Response:

 Hey, I don't blame you. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

:( Thank you!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow, he is screwed up.



Author's Response:

 He really is. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love Love your story can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate that, thanks so much, sweetie!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Deb!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

What a refreshing twist this is. She doesn't need his money! I love that. His connections, I presume, are what she needs. I'm not sure how he feels about this, but I'm sure you'll tell us...thanks! Congrats on the placement in the twifiction recs!



Author's Response:

She's totally got it covered! She just needs him. Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

She takes good care of him to. I hope he can figure out what she needs him for



Author's Response:

If he's smart he will!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yes of course it can work! But they have to want to be fixed!!



Author's Response:

Yes, the key is both of them wanting it.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

It's about to get crazy smexy up in here!!!



Author's Response:

Lol, yes it is!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

Fixing the broken man rarely works. I hope this is the exception, but won't hold my breath. This could get really angsty...I like your opening comment about no talk and all sex. Pretty spot on, it is. You surprise me at every turn. Can't wait to see what comes next! Thanks!



Author's Response:

 There will be some drama; I don't think it goes as far as angst. I'm really glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: cms02k Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

This is an awesome story!  Is Edward married and 

is Bella the mistress?  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! No, he sucks at relationships. 

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