Date: 29 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
So sad she cant fix him unless he wants to fix himself I hope he does
Author's Response:
That's really so true.
Date: 29 Sep 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think she can if she has patience and he wants to of course lol.
Author's Response:
The best laid plans...
Date: 29 Sep 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Sep 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you as well!
Date: 28 Sep 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 28 Sep 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
It's interesting that he has the self insight to see he's becoming just like his father. I hope he saves himself before it's too late for them. She, by her actions here, seems to be condoning that while attempting to comfort. I hope they make it...
Author's Response:
That's a good way to phrase it. They equate sex with feelings.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Sep 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
His father was not a good example so sad but I dont think he is like his father at all
Author's Response:
That's his biggest fear.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh poor Edward, I think Bella is just the girl to prove that you arent your father.
Author's Response:
That could be true!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
I think he will tell her a little. Granted if bella uses the body you wrote her edward might just sing like a sexy canary!!
Author's Response:
Lol. He's guarding his secret.
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
What is he hiding ?
Author's Response:
Secrets.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope he does talk to her
Author's Response:
He needs to!
Date: 25 Sep 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think he knows that she will walk if he doesn't talk. If he doesn't this time, I think he eventually will. Thanks for this, it's enjoyable to me!
Author's Response:
Yes! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
What the heck was that?
Author's Response:
He does NOT want to share his deep, dark secrets.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope he does considering that he sought her out. And she is going to give up the strip joint basically for him cocky good looking asshat
Author's Response:
Lol, cocky good looking asshat.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good for you Bella
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love it can't wait for next chapter! Hurry Hurry Please! Lol
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Cant wait to see how they leave
Author's Response:
It's so good, and so bad for Jake!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward will be willing to bank roll the whole studio!!
Author's Response:
But will she let him?
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Dance studio is perfect then edward can have more of her!
Author's Response:
That’s true!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
Gifs here i come!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2017 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 22 Sep 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Mergers and acquisitions? Is that a euphemism of some sort? Am I missing something? Can't wait to read about their grand exit!
Author's Response:
Lol, that's a real job. Helping companies expand or sell off pieces when they need cash. Buying out failing businesses.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I cant wait for monday. Love the conversations between these two.
Author's Response:
I love them, they're so funny!
Date: 22 Sep 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love where this is going!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Sep 2017 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Sep 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
That is what she has been saving her money for. Poor kid he is off in a corner finishing the job lol
Author's Response:
Oh, man, that's the best comment! He probably is, lol.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ohhhh poor kid lol. Love the dance studio idea
Author's Response:
It seems to suit her.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMFG OMFG OMFG LOL
Author's Response:
I hope you liked it!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
She knows she is good and powerful
Author's Response:
She's a smart lady.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
Just the way he like her but he will still always protect her
Author's Response:
He's very protective.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward knows what he is doing OH MY
Author's Response:
Right? Yum
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jake better hope that Edward does not find out what Jake is up to
Author's Response:
That would be funny.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jake is a slimmy snake.
Author's Response:
He really is.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think she is hooked on everything about him so far
Author's Response:
She really is.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good times WOW
Author's Response:
Lol, thank you!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
They are having fun that is good
Author's Response:
Lots of it.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
He is showing his power
Author's Response:
I would say so.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
OH my he is playing her game
Author's Response:
For sure!
Date: 19 Sep 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
She told him how it is or she thinks it is.
Author's Response:
How she thinks it is, yeah.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
ops he ruined the moment. She is set on taking care of herself
Author's Response:
That's very true!
Date: 19 Sep 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 19 Sep 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
So is this story turning into bdsm?
Author's Response:
These are my chapter notes from 12. Not really, but he likes to be in control.
Since there has been some concern voiced, I'll give you the heads-up that Bella will NOT suddenly turn into a submissive. There's a huge difference between that type of commitment and some role play. That also doesn't mean there won't be any kinky fuckery, so if all the warnings at the beginning weren't enough, this is your last chance to bail.
Date: 18 Sep 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh lord! Reading this scene made my clit throb. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Ah, so funny. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow....amazung chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, sweetie!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love Love it can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 17 Sep 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh heavens you are bringing out domward!! I think this story is going to combust from all the heat!
Author's Response:
Lol, that's a good thing! That's a great thing!
Date: 15 Sep 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Sep 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
His dreams come true
Author's Response:
I think so!
Date: 15 Sep 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Impatient for domward ;)
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
He is getting the real her and he will like it
Author's Response:
Yes indeed.
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
She is getting to hot and bothered by him
Author's Response:
Definitely.
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jake is a creep
Author's Response:
He really is.
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow she is amazing
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is under her skin
Author's Response:
That's for sure!
Date: 15 Sep 2017 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
sounds like fun
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Sep 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 14 Sep 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more ๐’
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love it. Prove to him that he deosnt need to protect her, just enjoy her.
Author's Response:
That's her line of thinking, yeah!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Take it out and make all his hurts better Bella!!
Author's Response:
LMAO kiss it and make it better!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for responding. You are the first author who has responded to me and I have been reading fanfiction etc. for over 6 years. I can definitely manage on 3 updates a week. Again, thank you for your wonderful imagination. Pamela
Author's Response:
I know of a few that do, but not many. I always do! <3
Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
HOT
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love this!!! Made it thru irma! We even have electric. This chapter was FAN-FLIPPING-TASTIC!! She so needs a spanking!! This story gets hotter & hotter!
Author's Response:
Irma's still raining on us, but I'm glad you made it through! Thanks for the enthusiasm!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love, love, love this storyline and cavemanward. He is strong and sexy. I love that you update regularly, but, could we have longer paragraphs?? I know it is rude of me to ask for that, but I just want more to read. I am not good at reviewing, as I know most people comment on the storyline and how they would like it to go. I don't do that. If I love a story, I just read and read and thoroughly enjoy. I rely on the author to decide what happens, afterall, it's her or his story. Again, thank you for a truly enjoyable experience every time you update. regards, Pamela Hanley
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking it so much! It's short becasue it's a drabble. I'm not great at long chapters at all; my other stories average 1,200-1,500 word chapters. But that's why I'm updating so frequently, to try to give you more overall.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hot
Author's Response:
I think a few people agree!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hot
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Really good story so far. Jake is just ewwwww! Thanks for the concern for those of us here in Florida . Will let you know after it goes past!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2017 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
We r going to get hit with irma so if u want to throw out an extra chapter....i'll have lots of reading time available. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol, assuming you'll have power and/or battery to read it. Stay safe.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
What's going to happen now? Will she dance anyway, if not will edward wonde where she is?
Author's Response:
It's a good thing the update is Friday!
Date: 06 Sep 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for being a Jake hater. Punching him in the gut might have been a little more tame than he deserved. Edward is so mysterious but then what the hell - a screw is a screw and fuck he would make my world go around and around etc..... I like that word dicktastic!, suits him just fine. Hmmm...now you got me thinkin
Author's Response:
I usually am, lol. Remember she's a black belt, so her punch carries more strength than most girls!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ohhhh. There are other establishments that can let her dance lol amazing chapter as always
Author's Response:
She certainly has options!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes! They both love each other! THANKS FOR UPDATING!
Author's Response:
They think they do!
Date: 05 Sep 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think she's in love with his man part!! Hahaha!! How old are they again? I can't remember if you have said yet? Also, they didn't use protection that last time. He must trust her and vise versa for her.
Author's Response:
It's in chapter 7; she's 24 and he's 33. No, they didn't use protection. Somewhere inn the midst of all that sex, they must have had a talk about it.
Date: 04 Sep 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm not sure if she's actually in love yet, but she is fully cock drunk! OMG what a lovely place to be! This story is seriously affecting me, in a physical way, if you catch my drift...
Author's Response:
She is definitely drunk on that cock! Lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Sep 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think she is in lust.....but it could turn to love.
Author's Response:
I think you're right!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Not yet anyway..maybe lust right now.
Author's Response:
I agree with you!
You are my 100th review here on STARS!
Date: 03 Sep 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
That wsa hot!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
You paint a great picture with your words here, but I may have to go check out your blog anyway! Am I wrong for loving suck porn, both in words and in pictures?
Author's Response:
Well the stuff on the blog would be the equivalent to porn! It's easy to get addicted.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's Saturday and we get an update! I was so excited i thought my eyes were deceiving me! Then i realize what should be and is in this chapter!!! Whoooo hooo!! This is mr. Bossy pants! What is bella going to wear home i wonder?
Author's Response:
Ah, that's a good call! No, you eyes weren't deceiving you. I thought you all deserved the next chapterr.