Date: 02 Sep 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
So need and want more
Author's Response:
So much more is coming!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
I do love you you awesome woman you. awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. You made me blush.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
He Never said she wouldn't be tied up.
Author's Response:
No, he sure didn't. lol
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Here we goooo! I'm excited she gets to see his house!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
LOVE!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 01 Sep 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Sep 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the opening note. Not a BDSM story, then, is it? Just kinky fuckery. Sounds good to me. I'm all in!
Author's Response:
Maybe some B and some D, but no S&M. Lol
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the banter is so adorable. But you are evil.....but I love it lol.
Author's Response:
It's just the way the chapters split up. LOLOLOL
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 31 Aug 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
:0
Author's Response:
Thank you! Such a cute little face.
Date: 30 Aug 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Tis Tis
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Large and in charge. Let's hope! He reveals his true colors here. Very nice...
Author's Response:
LOL In more ways than one!
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, for someone worried about safety he shouldn't have left her standing out there alone that time of night. Do like his bossy attitude.
Author's Response:
She can take care of herself, really. He shouldn't have been late, no.
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Omg....me want him for a night lol
Author's Response:
Me too!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG! This is so good! More please! THANK YOU!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I love to hear that!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Blue bean? LOL!! Never heard that before but can instantly relate! Hot hot hot!! Loving this!
Author's Response:
I had to google phrases similar to blue balls, but for women. I'd never heard it either!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
πππππ
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
She is awesome I love the blue bean comment. I can't wait for wednesday!!
Author's Response:
I asked Google what the female equivalent to blue balls was. LOL
Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was HHHHOOOT! And now that she wants him to take control, he might have just gotten her right where he wants her. Staying away seems to have done them both in. LOOOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Absence makes the heart- and other things- grow fonder!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Aug 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well that turned bad quick
Author's Response:
Lol. They both have issues.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love her
Author's Response:
That's good to hear!
Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Independent woman! As much as he wants to save her, he doesn't realize he can't even tame her. For the rich kid not getting what he wants, she will become has obsession.
Author's Response:
That's a good way to sum it up!
Date: 26 Aug 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was harsh!
Author's Response:
She's got serious issues of her own that she doesn't want him to see!
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
that was so cold of her
Author's Response:
True, but she needed to push him away. He got too close.
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 25 Aug 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
I dont hate her I love how she accepts who she is and calls bs.
Author's Response:
She does do that, doesn't she?
Date: 25 Aug 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 24 Aug 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's short and really hot.
Author's Response:
Lol, they're all short.
Date: 23 Aug 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Most girls would love that last statement but of course it has to be a killbuzz to her!! I do love that he wants her so badly!!
Author's Response:
You know her!
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Now Im hot and bothered lol perfect lemon ππ
Author's Response:
Lol, yay!
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh no she wont
Author's Response:
Nope!
Date: 23 Aug 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
omg she a little horny
Author's Response:
Just a little, lol.
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Now we're cookin'. So short a chapter that it's almost a tease. You like that, don't you? I love his spontaneous outburst, "Thank God"! I couldn't wait so I read this now. I'll probably read it again once the next part comes...
Author's Response:
We're all feeling that relief- almost.
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
its look like the story is like pretty women , you are killing me slowly by short chapters :) , thank you for writting
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hot damn!! It's getting hot in here!!
Author's Response:
Lol, I think you're right!
Date: 21 Aug 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wed. Is going to be sooooo freaking good!
Author's Response:
After all this build up, I sure hope so!
Date: 20 Aug 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
hi , thank you for replaying to my comment , each chapter are short and you are building the anticipation i am thinking this bella charector is very bold she does not think of HPV, AIDS OR ANY SEXCUAL ADVANCES , i think it well take longer time to know what will hapen , have great week
Author's Response:
Thanks. She'll be sure to insist on protection.
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my gosh! You are leaving us hanging the entire weekend!! Seriously???? Since monday is an eclipse will they have a total eclipse of the heart?
Author's Response:
Lol, I didn't think anyone wanted the lemon split up over the weekend.
Date: 18 Aug 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Damn fine story so far
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: 18 Aug 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice scenario! She is SOOOO going to let him in...Can't wait to see how far...thanks, doll! You're the best!
Author's Response:
Yes, she sure is! Thank you so much!
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fine. We'll trust you. ;)
Author's Response:
I hope so! :)
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oohhhhh shes going to fall hard
Author's Response:
Absolutely!
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nooooo. Don't leave us hanging. ;)
Author's Response:
I have to! It's better that way. Lol
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Omg you are a tease!! Too short!! Love it!!
Author's Response:
I'm afraid that's the way it's going to go, too short.
Date: 18 Aug 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
More more more. I love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 17 Aug 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 Aug 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
interesting plot line and bella fast and wierd liking her job
Author's Response:
She is different.
Date: 17 Aug 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Nope not at all. I can't wait to see what happens in the parkimg lot!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's going to be interesting!
Date: 17 Aug 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh wow! She SO wants to fuck him! I wonder if she will. I also wonder why he's really there. All will be revealed, in time. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Lol, she really does!
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Mmm almost lol
Author's Response:
Aaaaalllmost
Date: 16 Aug 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story so far! I wish the chapters were longer or came more frequently.
Author's Response:
It's my first drabble. I can just manage 3 times a week, plus I'm posting another story simultaneously. I appreciate how much you like the story, thank you.
Date: 16 Aug 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Omg!! Update please!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is his way of getting to talk to her. I think he is about to get a taste of sassy bella!!
Author's Response:
That's exactly right!
Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it! Can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
ugh, Jake IS sleazy. Why does Edward want her so much? Does he want to save her? Is his motivation more personal or more altruistic? See you Wednesday!
Author's Response:
His motivation is both, charity in saving her, but of course he really wants her for sex too.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
That's a conundrum.
Author's Response:
Lol, I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Its ok Bella l....fuck him. Lol amazing chapter
Author's Response:
Right? Just give it up and jump him already.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you are!
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Gahhhhh! The two of them are just soooo sexy! Now the question is how long will it take for him to change her mind or him give up & except that she wants to dance.
Author's Response:
There's going to be a lot of sex in between! LOL
Date: 12 Aug 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Eek! Is he trying to "save" her? Why her? I have so many questions. Ugh. Now I have to wait until Monday. If I wasn't such an impatient person, I would wait and read this until it's done. That would bug me even worse. I'll wait. Thanks, I love being teased...
Author's Response:
He won't tell us why for a very long time. Thank you for reading, even if it frustrates you!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
And the plot thickens
Author's Response:
It does. Thicker and thicker.
Date: 11 Aug 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bold Bella!
Author's Response:
She really is!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
What next will he do to get her attention?
Author's Response:
Whatever it takes!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm super excited for this!!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Aug 2017 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I'm liking this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that.
Date: 10 Aug 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love love !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for reviewing!
Date: 10 Aug 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
It seems like a long time since Monday for so little content. The content is good, don't get me wrong, it's just why I don't much like drabbles. There's never much at one time. They tease. Like this chapter. Makes me want more. Now I wait for Friday...Is the man she danced for, Edward? I hope so...
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm reading a drabble right now with about 150 words per chapter and irregular updates. It's driving me crazy. It's definitely Edward.
Date: 09 Aug 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you as well.
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
HOT DAMN!!!! Woman... I need MORE!!! LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hurray!! I read all your stories, So bring it!!! :D Drabble.... I'm manage, although i get so anxious for your updates as is, i might explode!!
Author's Response:
Lol, the chapters aren't quite as short as most drabbles. Thanks!
Date: 09 Aug 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cant wait to hear from Edward
Author's Response:
He'll have more to say in the next chapter!
Date: 09 Aug 2017 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's a nice beginning make me want more ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I am liking this already!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie!
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh a new story! I thought Seismic Shift was your new story. I will take whatever you give. Drabbles can be frustrating, but I'll try...
Author's Response:
I know, I have too many ideas in my head at one time. This one has been nipping at me since February. There are a lot of cliff hanger style endings, so I don't blame you if you want to wait and binge read.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweetie!
Date: 07 Aug 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 07 Aug 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lord, I want more already!
Author's Response:
That's good to hear, thank you!