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Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

So need and want more



Author's Response:

So much more is coming!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

I do love you you awesome woman you. awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. You made me blush.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

He Never said she wouldn't be tied up. 



Author's Response:

No, he sure didn't. lol

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Here we goooo!  I'm excited she gets to see his house!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

LOVE!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the opening note. Not a BDSM story, then, is it? Just kinky fuckery. Sounds good to me. I'm all in! 



Author's Response:

Maybe some B and some D, but no S&M. Lol

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love the banter is so adorable. But you are evil.....but I love it lol.



Author's Response:

It's just the way the chapters split up. LOLOLOL

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

:0



Author's Response:

Thank you! Such a cute little face. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

Tis Tis 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 11

Large and in charge. Let's hope! He reveals his true colors here. Very nice...



Author's Response:

LOL In more ways than one!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, for someone worried about safety he shouldn't have left her standing out there alone that time of night.  Do like his bossy attitude.



Author's Response:

She can take care of herself, really. He shouldn't have been late, no.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Omg....me want him for a night lol



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG! This is so good!  More please!   THANK YOU!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I love to hear that!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

Blue bean? LOL!! Never heard that before but can instantly relate! Hot hot hot!! Loving this!



Author's Response:

I had to google phrases similar to blue balls, but for women. I'd never heard it either!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

She is awesome I love the blue bean comment. I can't wait for wednesday!! 



Author's Response:

I asked Google what the female equivalent to blue balls was. LOL

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 10

That was HHHHOOOT! And now that she wants him to take control, he might have just gotten her right where he wants her. Staying away seems to have done them both in. LOOOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Absence makes the heart- and other things- grow fonder!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well that turned bad quick



Author's Response:

Lol. They both have issues.

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love her

Author's Response:

That's good to hear!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Independent woman! As much as he wants to save her, he doesn't realize he can't even tame her. For the rich kid not getting what he wants, she will become has obsession.



Author's Response:

That's a good way to sum it up!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, that was harsh!



Author's Response:

She's got serious issues of her own that she doesn't want him to see!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

that was so cold of her



Author's Response:

True, but she needed to push him away. He got too close.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

I dont hate her I love how she accepts who she is and calls bs. 



Author's Response:

She does do that, doesn't she?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

It's short and really hot.

Author's Response:

Lol, they're all short.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Most girls would love that last statement but of course it has to be a killbuzz to her!! I do love that he wants her so badly!!



Author's Response:

You know her! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Now Im hot and bothered lol perfect lemon 😁😁



Author's Response:

Lol, yay!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh no she wont



Author's Response:

Nope!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

omg she a little horny



Author's Response:

Just a little, lol.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

Now we're cookin'. So short a chapter that it's almost a tease. You like that, don't you? I love his spontaneous outburst, "Thank God"! I couldn't wait so I read this now. I'll probably read it again once the next part comes...



Author's Response:

We're all feeling that relief- almost.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

its look like the story is like pretty women , you are killing me slowly by short chapters :) , thank you for writting



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hot damn!! It's getting hot in here!!



Author's Response:

Lol, I think you're right!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wed. Is going to be sooooo freaking good!



Author's Response:

After all this build up, I sure hope so!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

hi , thank you for replaying to my comment , each chapter are short and you are building the anticipation i am thinking this bella charector is very bold she does not think of HPV, AIDS OR ANY SEXCUAL ADVANCES , i think it well take longer time to know what will hapen , have great week



Author's Response:

Thanks. She'll be sure to insist on protection.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my gosh!  You are leaving us hanging the entire weekend!! Seriously???? Since monday is an eclipse will they have a total eclipse of the heart? 



Author's Response:

Lol, I didn't think anyone wanted the lemon split up over the weekend.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

Damn fine story so far

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

Nice scenario! She is SOOOO going to let him in...Can't wait to see how far...thanks, doll! You're the best!



Author's Response:

 Yes, she sure is! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fine. We'll trust you. ;)



Author's Response:

I hope so! :)

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oohhhhh shes going to fall hard



Author's Response:

Absolutely!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Nooooo. Don't leave us hanging. ;)



Author's Response:

I have to! It's better that way. Lol

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

Omg you are a tease!! Too short!! Love it!!



Author's Response:

I'm afraid that's the way it's going to go, too short.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

More more more. I love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

interesting plot line and bella fast and wierd liking her job



Author's Response:

She is different.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Nope not at all. I can't wait to see what happens in the parkimg lot! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's going to be interesting!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh wow! She SO wants to fuck him! I wonder if she will. I also wonder why he's really there. All will be revealed, in time. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Lol, she really does!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Mmm almost lol 



Author's Response:

Aaaaalllmost

Reviewer: rosenua2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love this story so far! I wish the chapters were longer or came more frequently. 



Author's Response:

It's my first drabble. I can just manage 3 times a week, plus I'm posting another story simultaneously. I appreciate how much you like the story, thank you.

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Omg!! Update please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

This is his way of getting to talk to her. I think he is about to get a taste of sassy bella!!



Author's Response:

 That's exactly right!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love it! Can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

ugh, Jake IS sleazy. Why does Edward want her so much? Does he want to save her? Is his motivation more personal or more altruistic? See you Wednesday!



Author's Response:

His motivation is both, charity in saving her, but of course he really wants her for sex too.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

That's a conundrum.



Author's Response:

 Lol, I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

Its ok Bella l....fuck him. Lol amazing chapter



Author's Response:

 Right? Just give it up and jump him already. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

I am loving this!

Author's Response:

 Thank you, I'm glad you are!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Gahhhhh!  The two of them are just soooo sexy!  Now the question is how long will it take for him to change her mind or him give up & except that she wants to dance. 



Author's Response:

There's going to be a lot of sex in between! LOL

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

LOVE IT!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Deb!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

Eek! Is he trying to "save" her? Why her? I have so many questions. Ugh. Now I have to wait until Monday. If I wasn't such an impatient person, I would wait and read this until it's done. That would bug me even worse. I'll wait. Thanks, I love being teased...



Author's Response:

He won't tell us why for a very long time. Thank you for reading, even if it frustrates you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

And the plot thickens 



Author's Response:

It does. Thicker and thicker.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bold Bella!



Author's Response:

She really is!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

What next will he do to get her attention? 



Author's Response:

Whatever it takes!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm super excited for this!!



Author's Response:

 Oh, thank you!



Author's Response:

 Oh, thank you!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE IT! MORE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, I'm liking this story



Author's Response:

 Thank you so much for that. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love love !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you as always for reviewing!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

It seems like a long time since Monday for so little content. The content is good, don't get me wrong, it's just why I don't much like drabbles. There's never much at one time. They tease. Like this chapter. Makes me want more. Now I wait for Friday...Is the man she danced for, Edward? I hope so...



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm reading a drabble right now with about 150 words per chapter and irregular updates. It's driving me crazy. It's definitely Edward. 

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks :)

Author's Response:

Thank you as well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

HOT DAMN!!!! Woman... I need MORE!!! LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hurray!! I read all your stories, So bring it!!! :D Drabble.... I'm manage, although i get so anxious for your updates as is, i might explode!! 



Author's Response:

Lol, the chapters aren't quite as short as most drabbles. Thanks!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Cant wait to hear from Edward 



Author's Response:

He'll have more to say in the next chapter!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a nice beginning make me want more ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh I am liking this already!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh a new story! I thought Seismic Shift was your new story. I will take whatever you give. Drabbles can be frustrating, but I'll try...



Author's Response:

I know, I have too many ideas in my head at one time. This one has been nipping at me since February. There are a lot of cliff hanger style endings, so I don't blame you if you want to wait and binge read. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lord, I want more already!



Author's Response:

That's good to hear, thank you!

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