Date: 08 Sep 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story seems very interesting but you grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired. I recommend looking into getting a beta reader.
THank you for suggestion last time i use BETA , SHE DID NOT GIVE EDIT VERSION OF CHAPTERS AND I CANT ASK ANYONE BECUASE PEOPLE ARE BUSY AND THEY DONT CARE ABOUT HELPING OUT. SO I DECIDE IT TO USE WHAT I CAN DO BEST , MOST CHAPTERS ARE GREAT IN SHAPE . I READ A LOT OF STORIES IN THIS SITE THAT WRITTEN WORST THEN MY WRITING .HOPEFULLY PLOT LINE GIVES PEOPLE THE BOOST TO KNOW HOW THIS STORY GOES ON
Date: 08 Sep 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Did you have this posted before? It is SUPER familiar and i remember being so sad it stopped being updated. It was named slightly differently too. Anyway glad to see it and cant wait for more.
i actually re posting it and i am going TO finish this story . THIS WEBSITE delete the stoy so im slowly trying editing most of chapters and tell story of so you can know how my plot line will go through. Thank you for reviews