Date: 09 Oct 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
i care for you , dont you know , it is hard not to see you and i miss you , but time will heal the pains , oh it is very hard , you are struborn and i am like you , i lost my trust , you hurt me so bad , my feeling hurt this story is all about hateness i have towards you . how i can punish you how i can hurt you the best i can do , is hold it in my head, put it in myself dont say it dont speak out. no one will lessson people think is easy but is not . your pain is your pain and you affected mostly becuase it is yours only :(
Date: 08 Sep 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story seems very interesting but you grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired. I recommend looking into getting a beta reader.
THank you for suggestion last time i use BETA , SHE DID NOT GIVE EDIT VERSION OF CHAPTERS AND I CANT ASK ANYONE BECUASE PEOPLE ARE BUSY AND THEY DONT CARE ABOUT HELPING OUT. SO I DECIDE IT TO USE WHAT I CAN DO BEST , MOST CHAPTERS ARE GREAT IN SHAPE . I READ A LOT OF STORIES IN THIS SITE THAT WRITTEN WORST THEN MY WRITING .HOPEFULLY PLOT LINE GIVES PEOPLE THE BOOST TO KNOW HOW THIS STORY GOES ON
Date: 08 Sep 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Did you have this posted before? It is SUPER familiar and i remember being so sad it stopped being updated. It was named slightly differently too. Anyway glad to see it and cant wait for more.
i actually re posting it and i am going TO finish this story . THIS WEBSITE delete the stoy so im slowly trying editing most of chapters and tell story of so you can know how my plot line will go through. Thank you for reviews