Date: 16 Nov 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Quick, simple, well plotted, and well timed suspense and mystery (even if one could figure it out). I enjoyed this, thank you.
I think it was only suspenseful when it was drawn out over the 5 days. But maybe not even then, lol.
Date: 31 Oct 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great story but what did Edward find that was so disgusting that he threw up?
Thanks for making a short story right before Hallowe'en. Had me on the edge of my seat a few times.
Caius’s parents, that he killed in chapter 2. He set the fire to hide their bodies.
Date: 31 Oct 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
It was Edward she hit! What a great ending, with Caius rising from 3 chest bullet wounds to come at them again! This was a perfect Halloween story, with the promised HEA, but not before a lot of suspense and gore. That's OK. I just have 1 question...who did Edward see in the ruins of the home that made him almost throw up? Whose charred bodies were they? Great job! I'm glad I read this.
It was Caius’s parents. He set the fire to hide their bodies. Thank you for reading!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Geez I hope she didn't just bash Edward! Tomorrow we shall see and after the last chapter I can re-read it and put everything together. Great tale for Halloween!
That's probably a good idea. Thank you!
Date: 29 Oct 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like that you switch from POV to POV, never giving us time to get our bearing in this story. Only 2 more chapters to go then we can start to piece the timeline together. Great job here!
Thank you so much! By chapter 4 it will be almost totally clear.
Date: 28 Oct 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
and the plot thickens! who is the nameless girl that was buried? surely she was Caius' lover, mistress, but her name isn't given yet, is it? I'm not scared...yet. I'm intrigued!
I really don't think I'm scary! Lol
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
ooooh I always read what you write but this creeps me out. I'm in, but will only read this story in the daylight because I'm a chicken. It'll be fun trying to put it all together and see who did what, or whom...
I'm a big chicken too, lol.