Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad she letting her back in abeit slowly. Can understand why though.
Guessing the excerpt is his mother
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Now that Edward is welcome across the street again, he's fully back in Bella's life.
As for the person speaking in the teaser, it's not Edward's mother. The person means well, the girls mentioned don't, though.
See you next chapter.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow. Great date. I wish she wouldn't punish Edward so much but I get it.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing Bella isn't punishing Edward. She just needs some time to really believe he's back for good, and she wants to protect her daughter from having Edward disappear on them again. Things will get better soon. I promise.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad they got a nice date and has time to talk
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad you liked the date. Those are hard for me to write, considering dating is so much different here in Germany.
Next up, there will be some family time. See you then.
Date: 24 Jan 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great additions...hea gotta drop the l word on her...its true and honest and ahe needs to know.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Edward will tell her when the time is right. Before that, he has to become part of the family again.
See you next chapter.
Date: 24 Jan 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad they finally talked out everything. I don't think Seth and Riley should be mad at Edward, especially not now since Bella explained that he thought they were a triad and didn't want to intrude. Laughing at him, I get. But being mad? He's an honorable guy and they should be glad of that, for Bella's sake. I LOVE that she came back to his house and couldn't stay away! Thanks for a lovely chapter, and story. I look forward to each new chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Edward will have a talk with Seth next chapter, and he'll have a great time with the whole family.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is woman that knows what she wants. The date Edward planned in the treehouse was romantic. Maybe they should build Maddie a treehouse in one of their backyards. That could be a good opener for Edward to Maddie.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I guess Bella thinks five years was a long enough wait. Before they can build a treehouse for Maddie, they're going to have to make a choice about where they'll be going to live.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2018 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
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:)
Date: 23 Jan 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
That date is somehting I have always wanted with my hubby, but he isnt romantic in gesters as in his words :) Cant wait to see what is going on with them next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked the date. I always have such a hard time coming up with dates that haven't been done a hundred times before. And the fact that dating is so much different here in Germany doesn't make it much easier.
Next chapter, we'll see a little family time again.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like a girl who takes what she wants. LOL
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I guess after a five year draught, Bella isn't willing to wait any longer.
See you next chapter.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very romantic 1st date.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the date. I always have a hard time coming up with something interesting for a date.
See you next chapter with some family time.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Best date ever lol that was so sweet. Bella has to learn to trust him all over again to let him back into her babies life again.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you liked the date. And I promise Maddie will be back next chapter.
See you then.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great job. I had no idea what the situation was either.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. The cat's out of the bag now, and they can go on finding a way to fit their lives together.
See you next chapter.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love Carlisle standing up for B. Glad things got talked out too
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reaading and letting me know what you think. Yeah, Carlisle has a very soft spot for Bella and Edward had to find out the hard way.
See you next chapter for the date.
Date: 17 Jan 2018 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Perfect!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)! I'm glad you liked it.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2018 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella hadn't had sex in five years, i'm glad she went after what she wanted!! Funny neither said i love you but they both confessed details that pretty much screamed I love you!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review. Yeah, five years is a long time, but I think many single mom's have a hard time satisfying their needs.
As for the ILYs, they'll come up, but both of them think it's too soon for that.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
*fist pumps* Yay!!! They made up and got together. Looking forward to the next chapter and more dialogue between them.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reaviewing. Now the cat's out of the bag and they can go on to figure out how to fit their lives together.
See you next chapter.
Date: 17 Jan 2018 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
So glad that Edward finally found out what was going on in Bella’s home. Really glad they talked and got it all figured out. Sure they both love each other but Edward really needs to show Bella what she means to him and take her on some really romantic dates. Love the way story is going.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. That really romantic date will be up next.
See you then.
Date: 16 Jan 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
This was it! This was what I hoped would be the real situation! You described it perfectly, and in detail. I loved this chapter. Edward loves her so much that he considered joining what he thought was her menage? That is wonderful, and I love the idea, but am glad it's not the reality. Thanks so much for this lovely story. Love comes in all shapes, sizes, colors, and combinations. I love that you are touching on such a non-conventional topic here. Thanks so much...
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a wonderful reviewl. I had planned to tell my readers this in my last A/N, but somehow I forgot when I was so happy to give you all the truth about their situation. As I said before, this story was inspired by my coworker's RL history. Only in her case, her husband told her he discovered he was transgender and needed to become a woman. Her story hasn't had a happy ending yet, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed for her that it will.
See you next chapter for the first date ;).
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
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:)
Date: 16 Jan 2018 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ok ,I feel that it could have ben worse and Edward should have just cofronted bella a while ago but still. I love these two and I cant wait to see what is next
Author's Response:
Hi Alyscia,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, it could have been worse. Now they just have to find a way to fit their lives together.
See you next chapter.
Date: 16 Jan 2018 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Finally the truth is out. It was what I thought. Can't wait to see what else you have planned.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, the cat's out of the bag. Now they have to reorganize their lives to fit them together.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2018 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for giving my story a try. I hope you'll enjoy reading it.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG I cant wait for the next chapter. He is going to ask his mom about time lol
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Edward's mother is Elizabeth who lives in Seattle and doesn't know Bella. I guess you're suggesting he goes to see Esme, his aunt. Well, you're close but not correct.
See you next Tuesday with answers to most of your questions.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bless Maddie's little heart... What's that saying, "Out of the mouths of babes." I'm more anxious to read the next chapter now.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I guess you can say Maddie actually did everything to stop her mommy's pain.
See you next chapter.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank God a sick little girl is smarter than all the adults who didn't realize how it would seem!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Yeah, Maddie finally pointed him in the right direction. Now we have to hope Edward makes the best of it.
See you next chapter.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
So happy that Maddie has put him in the right direction. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Maddie finally set things into motion. Let's see what Edward makes of it.
See you next chapter.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Don't know why I'm reading this chapter here. Guess I like this site better, but don't always get alerts from them.
This chapter was the one I've been waiting for! Or probably more accurate to say the one before the one I've been waiting for! Bless Maddie for talking about what both Bella and Edward haven't been able to talk about. Now they will! Yeah! Your sneak peek is interesting. If I were Bella, I would have no problem with two hunky men!! Just sayin'...thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I love this site for the freedom it gives us compared to the strict rules over at ffn. Sadly, though, actual conversations via PMs aren't possible here. That's one point FOR ffn.
However, Maddie opened Edward's eyes. And I'm with you, at least in my fantasies, I wouldn't mind two nice, good looking guys, either ;).
See you Tuesday.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Come on you have to update sooner, that’s a very cliffhanger right there!! I love the story by the way
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for leaving and leaving a review. I'm sorry for the cliffhanger, but you'll have to be patient until Tuesday to get the answers.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2018 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Finally..... Edward is opening his eyes
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'd say he had his eyes opened ;).
Let's see where that gets him next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
FINALLY Edward is putting together some clues. Wonder who he's going to ask? Bella? or the Guys? or someone else. hmmmm
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts. Well, youre guesses are interesting, but Edward's going to talk to someone no reader suggested so far. Weird.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2018 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hopefully things start moving in a good direction for them both next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Well, it won't be easy at first, but once they talk, they'll start getting somewhere.
See you next chapter.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Oh! I am so excited to finally get some answers!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Maddie poitned our Edward in the right direction, and next chapter, he'll finallly learn the truth.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful, wonderful, loving it.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2018 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew something like this was gonna happen. Damn, my heart hurts for them both.
Sherry
Date: 06 Jan 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Okay it's beyond time to find out what's up with Bella and her family. I've enjoyed it so far, but I would think she'd be able to have a grown up talk with him by now.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am thinking Edward is going to get he ass handed to him. My heart is just broken for her she has to be so confused
Date: 03 Jan 2018 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Happy lemony dance
but ACK what a cliffy. Hope they talk soon. hmm maybe the guys will "have a talk with him"......
Date: 03 Jan 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
WHAAAT??? NOOOO......
Date: 02 Jan 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was wonderful. Exquisite. Too bad Bella didn't tell him the truth. I KNOW there's something else going on here other than what Edward thinks! Can't wait to find out for sure, but, of course, I will. Thanks for the dramatic cliffies. I do love them...
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good call on not giving us that before Christmas!! I'll be surprised if seth & riley don't want to beat him up.
Date: 02 Jan 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Omg yes thank you for not doing this over christmas my heart truly broke
Date: 02 Jan 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
The end of this chapter was so sad. But their love making was wonderful.
Date: 21 Dec 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Poot Edward....I agree with Alice that somehting doesn't seem right.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Something definitelly doesn't seem right, but it will be cleared up soon.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh goodness! Just the teaser is tough to read knowing we have to wait until 2018! Yikes!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for your review. I know the teaser is rough, as is the next chapter. Can't wait to see what you have to say to that.
See you then.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad the "date" went well. He really needs to just come out and talk to her. ah well. Alice and Jasper seem sweet
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for your review. Well, they didn't talk yet, and it will take a bit more time until they will, but I promise, it's going to happen.
See you next chapter.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Alice is right it will all work out I cant wait for the new year. Have a wonderful holiday.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, it will all come out - in due time.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2017 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
They had a perfect evening. That teaser has me wanting more. Alice needs to befriend Bella and get the scoop on what her family dynamic is.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm afraid Alice is too far away to be of much help, but there's going to be a female that will get Edward to dig deeper.
See you next chapter.
Date: 20 Dec 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
I've said it before and will say it again.... Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, poor Edward, but poor Bella just the same. You'll see.
Date: 19 Dec 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
It's sad to see him struggling with his feenings for Bella! Why won't anyone tell him what the real story is? I think he's being so gentlemanly, not acting on how he feels, because he's an honorable man. Somebody needs to tell him. I take it the next 2 chapters will address that, but what you posted as a "spoiler". Good. I'm sure it's worth waiting for. Have a wonderful Holiday and we'll see you next year! Love the story, I really do.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. People wanted to gossip to Edward, but he doesn't want to hear what they have to say. He's afraid he can't take it. It will become clearer soon.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
:) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you too
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think I have figured the coupling out but I am going to keep it to myself and see if I am right
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. The truth is going to come out soon, but before that lies a short stretch of angst.
See you next chapter.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
It was great to "meet" the rest of the family. In trying to figure out the family dynamic, I'm leaning towards Seth & Riley are a couple. Bella & Seth had Maddie & have stayed married for appearances sake. Which then would free up Bella for Edward. I am waiting for someone to let Edward in on the secret. hint, hint.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Someone will definitely let him in in due time, but I'm not sure it will be who you might think.
See you for the date next.
Date: 14 Dec 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
There has to be more to their relationship than meets the eye!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. There definitely is more, or at least something else than meets the eyes.
Next up is the date. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
The bbq went well, even Charlie. I can hardly wait for some answers about their family dynamic to be revealed. I'm looking forward to the 'date' and hoping Bella sheds some light on Riley's words from the teaser.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Looks like everyone around Bella seems to think Edward knows what's going on with Bella and the guys. I promise, we're getting closer to Edward realizing the truth, but you need to be patient for a little while longer. Next up, we'll accompany Edward and Bella on their date.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Goodness after thatcomment from riley & all the comments & looks at the party, i really hope edward asks what the heck is going on. I don't think bella is with them.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Well, if you not know what's going on, the comments definitely seemed weird. Now, the date is next, and then Edward will finally come closer to the thruth.
See you then.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is even more confused poor man
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Everyone else seems to know a lot more than Edward does. He'll learn more in due time.
See you next chapter for their date.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Edward. With Seth and Riley's remarks he is so confused.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Edward will learn more soon, but not next chapter ;).
See you for the date.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the chapter. I see I've now met more of the "Village" indicated in your story title! I'm still leaning toward thinking that although Seth is Maddie's father, that he and Riley are the real couple, with Bella as a friendly only third being Maddie's mother. I don't think she is sexually involved with either Seth or Riley. I also think everyone but Edward already knows this and some may be having a bit of fun with the fact that he is clueless. I love this story. It is unusual and those kinds of stories are my favorite kind. Thanks! Happy Holidays to you and yours. See ya next time!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Everyone else sure seems to be in the know, but I can assure you, no one is trying to make fun of Edward. In fact, they all are trying to help, but that comes across as weird because we're in Edward's head.
See you next chapter for the date.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 12 Dec 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
You are loving keeping us guessing. E really needs to come out and ask her the whole story.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I sure love to keep you in the dark, but it will only be a short while longer.
See you next chapter for the date.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Edward should just ask Bella what the situation is.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Maybe he should ask, but he's not the type to pry. Besides, he thinks he already knows what he needs to know.
See you next chapter for their date.
Date: 12 Dec 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
MMmmmm I still have no new guesses. Poly type relationship but idk lol ill just wait for a few more chapters i suppose lol amazing chapter
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I promise, more about their situation will come to light soon. But before that, we'll joing Edward and Bella on their date.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm loving this story. The slow burn is killing me though, lol. I really want Bella to get more in-depth about her relationship and explain it to Edward sooner rather than later. I'm hoping someone mention more about it at the bbq.
We had a chihuahua named Gizmo. He developed heart failure and we had to have him euthanized about 3 years ago. Every time I see the name Gizmo in this story I think of my baby.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm so sorry to make you feel sad with my choice of name for Edward's dog. If it's too hard for you, I'll understand if you can't continue reading :(.
As for Edward finding out more, he'll take his time ;).
Hope to hear from you again next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loving it
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Chapter 7 will be up tomorrow. See you then.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe meeting her dad will shed some more light on the situation.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Edward will definitely meet Charlie next chapter, and we'll see if that will help him figure things out.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Meeting Charlie will be interesting but might not have the effect you're hping for.
See you next chapter.
Date: 06 Dec 2017 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
They are good friends and Bella has excepted that the man she married is in love with another man and they decided to stay together for maddie.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for sharing your theory. We'll have to wait for Edward to find out the truth for sure as we're in his head. Men can be really stupid, so it might take some time ;).
See you next chapter.
Date: 06 Dec 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hi there. I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I like to read here as this site tends to not censor like FFn does. I still think that what is between Seth, Riley, and Bella is not as it seems. Not a triad. But I'll wait until you reveal more. Don't tell me if I"m right yet! Love that Gizmo has taken to Maddie and Bella. Maybe at their picnic, or barbeque, or whatever it is... more will be revealed. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts. You don't have to worry, I'm not giving anything away (least of all here as review replies are public, lol). Seeing Bella in the midst of her friends and family will be interesting for Edward, and us as well.
See you tomorrow for chapter 7.
Date: 06 Dec 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love that you included Gizmo. Can't wait for Edward to be around everyone at the same time. Hoping he will figure it out.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for your review. Edward will be around friends and family of Bella's next chapter, but I'm not sure that will get him any further into finding out the truth, lol.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Just, wow, I am still left wondering. Your teaser didnt help lol Amazing chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for your review. If I'm leaving you confused, the teasers are working, lol.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 05 Dec 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
you keep solidifying in my brain that Seth/Riley are a couple and Bella was the "beard". Glad they all are getting along for Little M's sake. E is def confused, but I think that's understandable.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you understand Edward's confusion instead of being annoyed with him not asking the right questions.
See you tomorrow with chapter 7.
Date: 30 Nov 2017 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
OK so they were married and then he figured out he was gay and in love with Riley but still loves Bella as a friend and mother of his child?
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Interesting idea you have there. I guess we'll have to wait and see if you're right.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
The pic of Gizmo is adorable. How much longer before the truth of Bella's family situation comes out? The sneak peak for ch 6 has a lot of into in just those few words Bella has spoken.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
thank you very much for reading and letting me know what you think. If you really want to know, the truth will come out full force in chapter 11 and 12. Then all cards will be on the table. Until then, lots of interesting things will happen along the way.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Seth discovered he was bisexual? Or figured out he likes boys more than girls? I'm glad Edward got a dog. Now he can have bella come & help with the dog. In his house. Just the two of them alone. ;)
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Bella will definitely help with the dog, lol. And they'll get closer. They won't be alone, though - for now.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok, so Bella and Seth were married. Let me guess, after they were married he decided to be honest with himself and everyone else and admit he was gay. Love the picture of Edward's puppy on your FB page.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Gizmo really is a cutie. If only he'd stay so small, lol.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
I believe that Seth and Riley are a couple. Seth probably decided not to hide is preference in a partner from anyone anymore. I believe they all live together because of Maddie. I hope Edward finds out the situation soon.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and leaving a review. I promise Edward will find out the truth - eventually ;). See you next chapter.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
I still think that Seth married Bella before he was "out", then came Maddie, then came weirdness and Riley. Bella must have been very understanding, if this turns out to be the case. It's a very cute story and the addition of Gizmo to Edward's life will make things all the more precious. So far a PG story...are there lemons to come??
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Yeah, for now we're very PG, but I promise the story will earn its NC-17 rating eventually.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
:).
Date: 28 Nov 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm you've thrown me a bit with the married thing, but I still think Seth/Riley are together. Maybe he "figured" out his sexuality after the fact or maybe it was a marriage of convenience for health reasons. Maybe Bella is his beard. Ack. You've got my brain spinning.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and letting me know what you think. Yeah, there are definitely several options for what's going on. We'll have to wait and see what Edward finds out.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
You have me so intreged on what the hell is going on!!!! OK
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm afraid you'll have to wait a while longer and wait for Edward to find out the truth for us ;).
Date: 28 Nov 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
im reading 2 options poly and or seth and riley are a couple nd to keep the family unit together they all live together.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, definitely two options. But which on eis right? I guess we'll have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next chapter, Bella will give a clue as to how Maddie was conceived.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
I can't figure out about the surragate? Seth is very clingy.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for your review. Well, I think at his point, it's safe to say Bella and Seth are Maddie's biological parents. How she was conceived and what they are to each other, are questions to be answered in a while.
See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm don't think Bella's situation is as cut and dry as it seems with Seth and Riley.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella's situation is difficult, and even though she seems sad to see Edward pulling away, she's not surprised. That much I can tell.
See you next chapter for more.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
you have me thinking that Bella and Seth are step-siblings and maybe Maddie is a love child of Bella or Seth and Seth and Riley are together. hmm
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you very much for sharing your uniwue theory. You're the first and only one seeing Bella and Seth as siblings of any kind. The only thing I'm willing to reveal at this point is that they've known each other most of their lives.
See you next chapter for a few more clues - and the introduction of a new character.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Since the person called him Dr. Edward it has to be Maddie.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. No, it's not Maddie but someone who likes her nickname for Edward ;).
See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
I don't think all is as it seems to Edward. I think he's misreading the situation, and frankly his disgust, or whatever that reaction was that he had, at the tought of them being a 3-some, is obnoxiously juvenile. My guess would be that although Seth is Maddie's father, it's Riley that he is really in a relationship with and Bella has a platonic relationship with that couple. Maybe I'm off, but I don't think they are in a triad. Thanks for the chapter and have a nice holiday.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks a lot for reading and leaving a review. I don't think Edward is disgusted with people living in a threeway relationship in general. It's the fact that he has to picture the woman he's weirdly attracted to that way that makes it so hard to take. And that I understand. If it were any neighbors, I think he'd maybe cheer them on as long as they're happy.
See you next chapter with a few more clues.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
She doesnt have a ring so it cant be a wife. I am thinking seth adn Riley are gay, but it was discovered after bella was pregnant. it confuses me with all the touching Seth does on BElla, I do feel bad for Edward with being confused lol. Amazing chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. She doesn't have a ring, but is that really a proof for anything? If you had two partners, would you necessarily wear a ring? Bella will tell Edward more details about her and the guys in time, but that doesn't mean her comments can't be taken either way, lol.
See you next chapter.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am confused lol. It is clear that Bella is interested in him so I dont think she is in a real relationship with Seth or Riley.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'd be lying if I wasn't pleased with your confusion, lol. I can't promise a revelation soon, but next chapter, Bella will at least give a clue as to how Maddie was conceived.
See you then.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok so my guess is seth & riley are gay and wanted a baby with best girlfriend bella so they decided to have one. Maddie just gets cuter & cuter!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, so you think Bella's the surrogate for the guys? You're in good company there.
See you tomorrow with more clues.
Date: 18 Nov 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
okay so I am guessing that Bella was a surrogate for her two besties that are gay, Riley and Seth.... Am I close???? I love this story already, so I cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and sharing your theory. At the moment, the Sethley-surrogate theory seems to be the most popular one.
See you tomorrow for more clues.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
This just got more interesting.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I hope it will continue to get more interesting with each chapter.
See you tomorrow with more clues.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving your story!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far.
See you tomorrow for more clues.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2017 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 14 Nov 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh oh...I was just about to get all upset at the goings on at the end of this chapter when I read the preview for the next chapter. Might Riley and Seth be in a relationship? Can't wait to hear all about how this came to be. Sounds interesting! Their day was going so well until the end. I bet Bella is dying to clarify a few things for Edward, at least I hope she is. See you next week!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thank you so much for reading and letting me know what you think. Right now, most readers seem to think Sethley are a thing and Bella's their surrogate. It will take some time until all the details are revealed.
See you tomorrow for more clues.
Date: 14 Nov 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. I think Bella was the surrogate for Seth and Reily
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. So, you support the Sethley-surrogate theory. Interesting.
See you tomorrow for more clues.
Date: 14 Nov 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am thinking that I was right in my last review!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. It will take some time until we'll know all the details.
See you tomorrow for more clues.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH oH!!! I can't wait!!
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Tomorrow there will be more clues. I love to read all your theories.