Date: 09 Mar 2018 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
I have seen this story as I’ve looked for something new to read before, and I’m glad I finally decided to read it (I usually wait until a story has a longer chapter count so I don’t have to wait for updates haha). This is really good, and I like he build-up you are doing. I also like a lot of the AU stuff you’re doing (ex: Maria is Bella’s aunt). Love it!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Oh my gosh, I loved the chemistry between Edward and Bella at their first "run in". I wish I could come do your job for you and any housework you may have, so that you can do nothing but write!! Loved this chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I love the way you have brought all of our beloved characters together in your story. Are Bella and Edward going to be in training at the same time? I wasn't sure about the time line. One of my favorite parts of the story so far is seeing Angela as a Dominatrix! She deserves to be in the spotlight for a change. Great chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Wow, I didn't see this coming! Isabella's story was not what I was expecting. You just made this story twice as interesting as it already was! I can't wait to see where you take us next. Love it!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Oh, boy! Bella just ran into her future Dominant and didn't know it, nor was Edward aware he'd just met his future submissive! Instant chemistry with so few words? Hell to the yeah!!!
Gorgeous Edward manip, Clo darlin'! *sexy beast!*
Date: 03 Mar 2018 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
Haha Bella gets a roused being called “little girl”.
Ok so has anyone heard from Charlie????
We have missed you Clo but we also have voted for you too in the Twi Fic Awards!!!! We are so happy you have made it to round 2.
KEEP WRITING βοΈ!!!!π’β€οΈπ”₯π‘
Date: 03 Mar 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future
I have tried to wait until you have more chapters written, but couldn't hold off any longer. I have enjoyed what you have written so far, and can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the good writing, and I will be back to read each chapter!! ππ€—ππ€—
Date: 02 Feb 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected
Okay, for a minute there, I thought Marcus was gonna assign a man to mentor Edward, which would have been quite awkward, I think! I'm glad Edward is comfortable with Angela, but doesn't he need to learn submission first? In any case, I'm lookin' forward to seein' him blossom into the magnificant Dom we know he has in him!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. He will be sitting in several scenes and will have classes on all the tools and equipment in a playroom. I hope you will enjoy the journey of both Edward and Bella.
Date: 02 Feb 2018 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
As surprisin' as it was to hear Bella saw submission as a kind of security blanket from her past, it was pretty understandable!
So, first Jasper and now Edward...the community might even get more Cullen men before all is said and done LOL!
Date: 02 Feb 2018 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
These self-proclaimed prophets, like Aro, are sick, fuckin' pedophiles! How anyone can buy into their bullshit is a mystery to me! But, Charlie certainly did the right thing gettin' Bella out of his evil clutches before it was too late!
Date: 20 Jan 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
Thank you for the pictures along with your words it enhances all the stories you have written. Bella's nightmare made me think she is very traumatized still. She has reinvented herself which is amazing. Anxiforbthese two to meet but I like a slow burn. -Ajfflady
Date: 19 Jan 2018 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn
I have been wondering how Bella found the community. I mean, she is naturally a submissive. Glad she has Angela. Love that Angela works for Edward. Also glad Edward has Angela to put him in the right direction. Loving the whole. Concept of this story. Can't wait for you to update again.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare
Oh my goodness i was not expecting her living on a commune! She is about to have a cuture shock & then edward is going to be so wild looking to her. Aro was so gross! Thank you for letting her escape!