Date: 15 Mar 2018 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
AWWWW!!! : ( IT WAS A SHORT BUT! .... INFORMATIVE CHAPTER. I WAS HOPING FOR A LITTLE MORE DETAILS ESPECIALLY ON ALICE BUT... I GUESS I HAVE TO BE PATIENT AND WAIT SOOOOO! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE!!! WITH A CHERRY ON TOP TRY TO UPDATE SOON....BUT SOONER WOULD BE BETTER. (he he he) : )
READ YOU SOON : )
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's good that Bella is facing her past memories of her dad and his belongings. I guess it's good that Carlisle faced the fact that he is an asshole douche. ugh..... I wonder who the leak is.
He is a douche, and more clues to come :)
Date: 05 Feb 2018 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
oops, thought it was ch 9 instead of 1 i reviewed earlier.
but same thing as before. things needn't change so drastically
at least for now. im sure it has to do with the emotional
turmoil at not being able to see each other but if they permanently
break, they would not see each other at all...not sure i agree with
this decision...actually, i dont agree. they should continue as is for a
bit longer...1 year is not long enough.
Date: 05 Feb 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's only been 1 year. why would they need the reason to "break" ?
they are young and in love...they can still continue what they have been
doing at least for now... not that anyone would want to have a secret
romance but in their situation, they can continue to meet... certainly,
they are sad about the situation but at least for now, nothing needs to
change, so why?
Date: 02 Feb 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have been like a dog in heat waiting for the next update and I wasn't disappointed but I can't help feeling cautious about Carlisle. I can see I'll be in heat til the end . Looking forward to the next update. : )
Date: 01 Feb 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Shit!!!! If I was a rich girl....I would totally pay you to do nothing but write this story. Did Carlilse have Charlie killed? Will Bella find out? What does that mean for Bella and Edward? My heart is racing. I have so many questions
Lol, lets see I can answer a few without giving too much away for you lol. Carlisle did not have Charlie killed. Bella and Edward get a HEA its just a bumpy crapy road there Thank you !
Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm disappointed. I would think your readers would know what the Prologue said. Instead of you repeating it, you could have written a real chapter!!!!
Are you planning to repeat chapters in the future? I would sincerely appreciate if you would tell me and your other readers. I'm not rating this one as I already have.
Date: 27 Jan 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
It was interesting to read Edward's day before he gave her the Claddagh ring he purchased for her!
Bella really is smarter than the average young woman of her age and she still adherers to everything he Daid taught her!!!!
I really don't like Carlisle!!!
Date: 27 Jan 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I forgot to say how much I love the Gaelic you've added to the story and I'm grateful for the definitions.
Well, Carlisle was a lousy example of a father!!!! I truly hope he didn't take out a hit on Edward's Mom.
I happy he loved his Ma Esme and his half brothers.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ugh! I wasn’t going to become invested in another angsty fic but I can’t resist! Love this! Can’t wait for the next chapter... and I’m finally adding you to my alerts. Damn you for getting me hooked. ;}
Hehehe, i want to say sorry but I really wouldn't mean it lol. Thank You!