Date: 26 Sep 2020 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! It was nice to see Alice be the bad guy for once!
Date: 30 May 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good story
Hate to say but would have loved to watch alice be humiliated somehow in
front of the family w/her traitorous ass... 😊
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm switching to FFN to finish the story. A story which I am enjoying greatly. ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great and hot update. Interesting "meet cute". ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was a heart ripper.
Date: 17 Jul 2018 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Alice might be the insude snitch
Date: 30 Jun 2018 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for posting it. The only thing I would change is the translations at the end of the chapter. They would be better in brackets in the body of the story, but that is just my opinion.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Amazing! So glad I read this gem.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Her dad definitely trained her well at covering her tracks.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
For some reason, I have a feeling her dad was murdered by Edward's dad, and that's why the Cullen name is familiar to her.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love a tough Bella.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
I couldn't be lucky enough to have a casual partner like him. Not necessarily in the Mafia, but sexy as hell.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Quite steamy! Some might say too fast, but I say Just Right!
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
TwiFanfictionRecs led me here. I love any mafia story I can find. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
The prologue leads me to large amounts of curiosity; I can't wait to read more.
Date: 28 May 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story line
Date: 26 May 2018 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait to be a judge for the next contest!
Date: 24 May 2018 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
So sad to see this one end!
Author's Response:
I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!
Author's Response:
I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!
Date: 23 May 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
good
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Thank you!
Date: 23 May 2018 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Really good
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 May 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
So Alice was a hoe bag to the end. hmmmm............
Author's Response:
lol Yes she was Thank you for sticking with the story and reviewing!
Date: 23 May 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I WAS SO EXCITED AT THE BEGINNING BUT IT FIZZED TOWARD THE END. I FELT LIKE THERE WERE CHUNKS OF STORYLINE MISSING HERE AND THERE. I GUESS I WANTED MORE. OVER ALL I LIKE THE STORY I'M JUST A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED.... BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT NEW STORY.
Author's Response:
I am sorry it was a little disappointing! I am glad to hear that you at least enjoyed it over all. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 May 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I ca me in on this story on chapter seven and I was only going to read up to seven and wait to read the rest as I catch up with my mail. Bella then it became chapter ten, fifteen and finally I stopped losing to myself and read the whole thing. I couldn't put it down. It was great.
Date: 15 May 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
She is so strong and very strong.
Date: 15 May 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
OOh A!I've are you on the wrong side.
Date: 11 May 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love it I am that Edward and Bella reconnected
Date: 11 May 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 11 May 2018 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Is it bad that I loved Bella's freak out and shooting of Alice? I guess I still haven't forgiven her phone using ass! LOL
Date: 11 May 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
ONE MORE HUH? THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE THAT COULD HAVE BEEN COVERED BUT YOU DO THE MAGIC. : (
READ YOU SOON
Date: 11 May 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
This chapter was really good. Sad that it's almost the end. She needed to get back to the bar to feel in control of her life again. It helps.
Thank you for posting today.
Date: 11 May 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
AWWW!!! HER HEART IS FINALLY!!! WARMING UP FOR HIM.
READ YOU SOON
Date: 04 May 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can’t wait for more
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Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 May 2018 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
READ YOU SOON
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Date: 04 May 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully the little bit of talking that Bella did with Edward will start her healing. It doesn't sound like Alice is going to get forgivien really, at least by Edward.
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Date: 04 May 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for posting this chapter; even though it was very sad. I'll be sad when this story ends. It has been a very good read. Every chapter just grabs me.
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Date: 04 May 2018 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it
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Date: 03 May 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hell is where she was. No wonder she is not in a good place
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Date: 03 May 2018 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Good chapter.
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Date: 03 May 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
She needs some counseling. I hope she gets it.
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Date: 03 May 2018 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am enjoying this story very much.
Date: 21 Apr 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
It hurts that Bella is so depressed and insecure I hope she finds her way back soon.
READ YOU SOON : (
Date: 20 Apr 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
She and Carlisle are practically friends now.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
It seems like no one is reallu understanding what Bella is going through or feeling. The other women are just useless. ugh..... She needs to have a heart to heart with Edward about her feelings, frustrations, and everything in her head.