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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2023 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2023 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it 

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Date: 14 Apr 2023 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it 

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2023 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2023 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2020 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this! It was nice to see Alice be the bad guy for once!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

Good story

Hate to say but would have loved to watch alice be humiliated somehow in

front of the family w/her traitorous ass... 😊

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm switching to FFN to finish the story.  A story which I am enjoying greatly.  ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great and hot update.  Interesting "meet cute".  ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a heart ripper.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

Ohno

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2019 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love this story.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

Very very good 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2018 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

I think Alice might be the insude snitch

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2018 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

hot

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

Enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for posting it. The only thing I would change is the translations at the end of the chapter. They would be better in brackets in the body of the story, but that is just my opinion.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Amazing! So glad I read this gem.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Her dad definitely trained her well at covering her tracks.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

For some reason, I have a feeling her dad was murdered by Edward's dad, and that's why the Cullen name is familiar to her.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love EPOV. 

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love a tough Bella.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

I couldn't be lucky enough to have a casual partner like him. Not necessarily in the Mafia, but sexy as hell.

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Quite steamy! Some might say too fast, but I say Just Right!

Reviewer: ReasonToBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

TwiFanfictionRecs led me here. I love any mafia story I can find. I look forward to seeing where you take this. 

The prologue leads me to large amounts of curiosity; I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting story line

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2018 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

Can't wait to be a judge for the next contest! 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

So sad to see this one end!



Author's Response:

I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!



Author's Response:

I know! It was a fun ride! Thank you for staying with me till the end and reveiwing!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

good



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

Really good

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

So Alice was a hoe bag to the end.   hmmmm............    



Author's Response:

lol Yes she was Thank you for sticking with the story and reviewing!

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

I WAS SO EXCITED AT THE BEGINNING BUT IT FIZZED TOWARD THE END. I FELT LIKE THERE WERE CHUNKS OF STORYLINE MISSING HERE AND THERE. I GUESS I WANTED MORE. OVER ALL I LIKE THE STORY I'M JUST A LITTLE DISAPPOINTED.... BUT I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT NEW STORY. 



Author's Response:

I am sorry it was a little disappointing! I am glad to hear that you at least enjoyed it over all. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: yogis-girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 23

I ca me in on this story on chapter seven and I was only going to read up to seven and wait to read the rest as I catch up with my mail. Bella then it became chapter ten, fifteen and finally I stopped losing to myself and read the whole thing. I couldn't put it down. It was great.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

She is so strong and very strong.

Reviewer: yogis-girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

OOh A!I've are you on the wrong side.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love it I am that Edward and Bella reconnected

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

Is it bad that I loved Bella's freak out and shooting of Alice?   I guess I still haven't forgiven her phone using ass!   LOL

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

ONE MORE HUH?  THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE THAT COULD HAVE BEEN COVERED  BUT YOU DO THE MAGIC.    : (

    READ  YOU  SOON

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good chapter.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

This chapter was really good.  Sad that it's almost the end.  She needed to get back to the bar to feel in control of her life again.  It helps.  

 

Thank you for posting today.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 22

AWWW!!! HER HEART IS FINALLY!!! WARMING UP FOR HIM. 

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2018 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

Poor thing

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can’t wait for more 



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

liking this b

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

good start

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

READ YOU SOON

 



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully the little bit of talking that Bella did with Edward will start her healing.    It doesn't sound like Alice is going to get forgivien really, at least by Edward.



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for posting this chapter; even though it was very sad.  I'll be sad when this story ends.  It has been a very good read.  Every chapter just grabs me.  



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2018 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love it

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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hell is where she was. No wonder she is not in a good place



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Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

She needs some counseling. I hope she gets it.



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2018 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

I am enjoying this story very much. 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Awesome

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

It hurts that Bella is so depressed and insecure I hope she finds her way back soon. 

READ YOU SOON : (

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 21

She and Carlisle are practically friends now. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

It seems like no one is reallu understanding what Bella is going through or feeling.   The other women are just useless.  ugh.....   She needs to have a heart to heart with Edward about her feelings, frustrations, and everything in her head.

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