Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:26 AM Title: Cadence of Humanity
Wow! Bella's death was so sad but it felt right to bring her to that point, to end her and Edward's story. Now Edward and Demetri can carry on with their lives. I hope, for Edward, that knowing Bella didn't regret not becoming a vampire released him from anymore lingering guilt he had. She was happy with her choices and although he lost his first love and friend it should give him some comfort that Bella was happy and loved. Edward asking Demetri 'Is this okay?' was heartbreaking. Of course it's okay after losing someone you love you need that connection with someone to know you can still love and are loved in return, it's life affirming and life, in all its forms, goes on.
This is the first Edward and Demetri story I've read and I loved every bit of it. Thank you for sharing.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream
Awww, I love Demetri's idea about having a nap it's so funny and sweet. These two are perfect and so lucky to have each other forever and they're finally free to go anywhere and do anything they want to do. I hope after some time they go and spend time with the family.
I loved their wedding and Edward's eagerness to be with Demetri, even after nearly 30 years it's like they're still in the first flush of a romance. *sigh*
Loved it!
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Solidarity
Thank God for Chelsea that's all I can say. Kelly's power sounds as though it will be amazing......eventually and of course, Aro is going to milk her training period for all it's worth, lol.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:15 PM Title: A Difficult Affirmation
I'm so glad Edward's revelation went well with the family. Esme was so shocked though, I think that she was so certain that Edward and Bella were meant to be that she just couldn't see past that, it's like the ground dropped out from under her and she was left hanging in mid air with nowhere to go. I'm glad that Rosalie wasn't nasty and I can understand her relief at the news, rejection is always hard.
It's going to be interesting how things work out with Bella, Jacob and Aro. How will Edward and Demetri handle this?
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 1:05 PM Title: Salvation of Faith
Thank God for that, I thought I was going to be in for more angsty chapters and angsty, self flagellating Edward. I'm so happy that Demetri listened. Edward is lucky to have found someone who loves him so completely.
Now to meet the family. Lol, are Emmett and Jasper going to take the mick out of him? Is Rosalie going to try and embarrass or humiliate him? We all know how bitter she can be.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:53 AM Title: This Ruined Puzzle
Oh my God! Edward's innate sense of putting things right has yet again hurt the person he loves most and in return himself. Why must he always put others before himself? Bella still would have been there even if he'd taken 3 days to explain and tell Demetri just how he felt. I'm so frustrated with Edward I'm beyond words.......he'd better find Demetri and grovel at his feet for the way he's treated him. Right and proper Edwardian Edward is a massive dick head!
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:01 AM Title: Wolf at the Door
I knew she'd still be alive. I thought that Demetri might have tracked her when Edward told him about her but then it occurred to me that he wouldn't need to find a dead person.
Edward certainly has a knack for saying the wrong thing, speaking before he thinks, although in his defence he was annoyed that Demetri was hiding something from them all and then hurt that he seemed to be keeping him from his family. We all say things that we don't mean in the heat of the moment, why should a vampire be any different. Hopefully, Demetri will hold to the fact that he can't not love Edward and Edward will be able to prove that Demetri's the one for him. His rejection of Bella would certainly prove that as painful as it will be for Bella and Edward. Has Alice not told any of the family about Edward and Demetri?
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:22 AM Title: Justified Absolution
Finally, they're together, that was some hot sexin', I'm surprised the piano survived, lol. Awwww, they said 'I love you' to each other. *sigh*
Demetri getting the piano for Edward was amazing, he's worked so hard at keeping that a secret. I loved that he finally opened his mind up to Edward and Edward got to see how Demetri sees him.
Aro is a complete control freak and one hell of a disturbed vampire. He's so happy now that Edward has said he'll stay, such a controlling git.
Jane x
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:54 AM Title: Absence of Fear
Why is Aro so against them having a relationship? What Aro did to Demetri was disgusting. He claimed to care for him and said that he gave him everything that he needed or wanted, but clearly he didn't. He humiliates both Demetri and Edward at every given opportunity and plays mind games with them. Aro acts like a jealous child. Has his existance become of empty and boring that he feels the need to toy with members of his own guard?
However, I'm so happy that what Aro did to Demetri forced Edward's hand and he's admitted that he cares for Demetri. Now I'm just wondering, especially after what they just got up to *cough, cough* when Edward will realise that he's falling in love with Demetri, 'cos I think he's nearly there.
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:33 PM Title: Unclaimed Clemency
Edward truly is that 17 year old Edwardian virgin personified. I'm glad that Demetri was able to loosen him up, bwahahahaha!! I'm so happy that finally he seems to have given in to his feelings and admitted that Demetri is who he wants. Will Edward ever stop all this self flagellation? He may have killed that family but what he did was better than letting Jane deal with them. *shudders*
Jane is one sick and twisted bitch, well we knew that already but Jesus to look forward and take pleasure in torturing and killing a little boy, she's worse than the newborn they destroyed. What's that all about with Demetri, does she fancy him or something?
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:52 PM Title: Befuddlement Accepted
For someone so clever it's amazing that Edward never wondered why he was only attracted to Bella. I know she was his singer and that brought them together along with the fact that he couldn't hear her mind but you would have thought, that at some point during the time before Bella, that he would have at least found someone he fancied. Anyway at least now it's beginning to dawn on him that maybe he loved her as a friend and for her silent mind, lol, a bit of peace and quiet.
It was very brave of Edward to go and speak to Demetri and I'm so glad that Demetri was honest and that Edward didn't run away, now he gets to have that snog with Demetri, lol.
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Unveiling Antiquity
I'm glad that Edward seems to be allowing himself to enjoy life and more to the point enjoy his vampire life instead of mourning the loss of his human one.
Demetri's story was so sad but it did have many similarities to Edward's past. Edward not only has to consider that he has more in common with Demetri than he thought but also his body's reaction to Demetri's touch. It's so funny how Demetri's constantly keeping Edward out of his head, lol.
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:53 PM Title: Impelled Catharsis
Lol, that's the second time Demetri's slipped up, at least Edward wasn't embarrassed this time and actually brushed it off. I really like Demetri, he brings Edward out of himself, he's observant, funny and I would go as far as saying caring. I'm really looking forward to see how this relationship develops between them.
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:17 PM Title: Obligatory Quagmire
Already Edward's trying to avoid Demetri, being stuck in a car with him should be interesting, lol. I get the feeling that they'll be working together quite a lot. Will Demetri ever persuade Edward to partake of human blood again? Probably not, although I thought he made a decent point in the argument for killing humans, just not decent enough. At least when Edward had his slip all those years ago he only (yeah well, you know what I mean) killed criminals and low lifes.
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:18 PM Title: Coercion by Blackmail
Lol, I get the feeling Demetri's going to test Edward's patience. I love the banter between Felix and Demetri and Felix's disgust with Edward eating Bambi and Lassie, hahahaha!!
Edward was being a bit optimistic wasn't he with his I'll work for you for a bit and then you'll kill me statement. No way is Aro ever going to let Edward stop working for him. But then this is Edward and he'll believe that if he's not allowed to die then he must suffer for eternity. *sigh*
Jane x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:02 AM Title: Prologue
I'm liking the start and I'm wondering if there's a twist in there and Bella's still alive. Edward didn't seem to stick around for the end of the vision. I'm also wondering whether Edward was destined to have two mates, is that possible? I know, read on and I'll find my answers. Lol.
Jane x
Date: 14 Sep 2010 12:45 PM Title: Cadence of Humanity
I truly enjoyed your story. It was completely different from the other stories that I have read. It was good to see the other side of E. I agree it felt very complete. Good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I had such fun writing it. xoxo
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:31 PM Title: Epilogue: To Sleep, Perchance to Dream
this is one fantastic story, i am so inlove with it, the characters and story line just draws you in and captures your attention untill there is nothing more important then to read the whole thing in one sitting.
this is now one of my fav stories
fantastic work can't wait for more!!!!! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's always so awesome to hear that it was enjoyed. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
xoxo
Shoe
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:02 PM Title: Impelled Catharsis
Like the story, hoping for an update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like what you've read so far! I actually have fourteen chapters loaded at different locations. I'm adding it here one at a time to try to garner more interest for it, but if you want to read everything I have sofar you can see it on twilighted http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9329, My Vamp Fiction http://myvampfiction.com/dungeon/viewstory.php?sid=431&warning=5, or Fanfiction http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5490687/1 . Thanks so much for taking the time to read.