Date: 06 Apr 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
A really beautiful way to end this journey!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
Don't much blame Bella for being somewhat upset by her new found power! Much better was the declaration of their love, and her acceptance in the family!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, awesome power the newborn has! I imagine it shocked hell out of Bella as well as the rest of the family! At least it got Edward to confess his love!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
Since Bella is a vampire, there's no danger of her getting hurt, even if she has never played before. The problem is Edward waiting this long to tell her of his love. What if someone else shows up and messes up their game?
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm hoping that Edward works up the courage to reveal his feelings to Bella, she seems to need that reassurance. She is accepting her new circumstances rather well, so far.
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
What an idiot, not telling her the truth! It's the very least he owes her!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Miss Bella seems to be a bit put out by all that has happened to her! She's also not real happy with Edward for biting her! Their next conversation should be real interesting!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
Despite the rash decision he made, I'm thinking Edward still did the right, and only, thing he could have done! He couldn't just let her die!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Good grief, he didn't even ask her if she wanted to be changed and saved!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I usually like Charlie a lot more than this! At least Edward and Bella are becoming more comfortable with each other!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was almost what they both wanted, but it's definitely progress. Now where is Alice when he needs her advice?
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Much better now that they are talking to each other, and Carlisle's little pep talk helped a lot!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Come on, Cullen, it's time to man up and help her find that happiness she so desperately wants! It's the least you can do for her!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Now all we have to do is get Edward to realize he wants Bella for always so he changes her to save her!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
Too bad he can't think of another reason for the pick up in her heartbeat! That might have led to a different outcome!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
How very odd of him to have a brain freeze like that and nearly have sex with Tanya! He may never hear the end of it from Emmett or Rosalie!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, what else would she think, under the circumstances?
Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Blockheads are one thing, but a vampire blockhead is amazingly irritating! It's a wonder Alice doesn't slap the back of his head, just to make him pay attention!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
He still hasn't figured out what Alice has seen and is so happy for! I think he's kidding himself about staying away from Bella, but time will tell. Wonder what Carlisle wants to talk about?
Date: 05 Apr 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think, along with Edward, that Bella is an amazing young woman! Few, regardless of age, could have taken that devestating news the way she did! No surprise he's becoming more and more intrigued with her!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is pretty much a death sentence for her, so I hope Edward will want to save her in the only way he can. There doesn't seem to be any time to waste, either!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
If this poor girl's blood smells bad to a couple of vampires, she really does have serious problems!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Brace yourself, Edward, I think you areabout to find out why Alice was so excited and hiding her thoughts from you!
Date: 05 Apr 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Guess this just shows how even immortality has drawbacks! That is one unhappy, depressed and frustrated vampire!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
well done!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope you make it good
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
you are doing fine
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
not what I expected
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
of course she wont hate him
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
bad timing
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
it really is ok ...love
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
yes you hit the nail on the head
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
awww poor Bella pass a tissue please
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
no sometimes he is as dense as a door
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
cringing too
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
yes I like it very much
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
should not be a hard choice to choose to be with Edward
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
great job so far
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
HERE IT COMES I CAN FEEL IT
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
POOR EDWARD LONELY AND GUILTY
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story, really loved it !!!!!!Well written.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
why edward you have to be so dramadic
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
love it just like always
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
wtf in the hospital?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
well love i love your amazing story
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
omg my baby is so drametic poor edward
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
like always is amazing
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
always so dramatic edward*lol*
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
hey i love it is so amazing
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
love it is so amazing
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
i like this edward not so perfect and love the plot
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love this first chapter is so amazing
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story, I hope you do a sequel.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
BEAUTIFUL and Satisfying love the culimation of so much angst into so much love. Very well done!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
This was a sweet story!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story, thanks for sharing it with us. Wish there was more e&b vamp time. Meg
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love it!!! What a perfect ending. I am sad that it is over though! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love it, love it, love it! They way everyone came together at the end was awesome!! I can't help but smile for these two. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
He finally told her he loves her. Too bad it had to happen this way, but he had to make her stop and think and to prove he didn't want her to leave and was not going to let her go alone. James and Victoria got what they deserved. I liked the twist! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's been a great story to follow... you did a wonderful job!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
finally she gets it
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story, I'll miss reading it
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
I have to agree with Emmett...man up Edward!!! I have a bad feeling about going to play baseball...I can't wait to see what happens. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
Im ready for some football and for some LOVIN to happen! lol
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
love the story cant wait to read next chapter
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
uh oh. makes me nervous for who will show up and feign interest in her
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
so excited for baseball!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
i would love to play with the cullen men anytime
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love baseball, but Edward is so angsty that if he were human he'd have an ucler the size of the artic circle, the man has to lighten up and fess up, hell for that matter Bella should just jump him. Besides if anybody is always calling you "love" and is not a blood relative or senile kinda sends a message that they want to be more than just friends.
Love this story!!! But sometimes I want to kick Edward's ass, and whatever happened to a constantly interfering Alice nudging these 2 together??
Obviously your a brilliant writer if you can get your readers this vested in the characters and riled up.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
I really love this story... I cant wait to have them confess their feelings to one another... to let each other in and to really be happy...please update soon!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
poor bella prob doesnt feel good enough for him
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think she should be told that she can die regardless of the means. This will put the ball back in her court since she thinks Edward should have let her die. If she doesn't want to die, then she needs to move on!!! Cut Edward some slack, he has always wanted to do the right thing.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad they are getting to know each other. They need that! I am worried about the funeral. How Bella will handle that. It would be weird to know your funeral is going on. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love the story, it is great
Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is going to have to deal with what has happened almost as much as Bella. He needs to be honest with her soon! Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well Edward is being Edward only even more so than usual, that man has got to cough up the truth and move on, he is so self loathing that Bella needs to kick his ass and tell him to knock it off!!!
Love the chapter, more realistic than Bella being super in control, but still she needs to organize her thought processes and let the Cullens help her work through this, its going to take time,..but hell grab onto Edward and don't let go before he takes on the I have to leave stand because I don't deserve you attitude...gah!!!!
BRILLIANT story!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lovely, I hope she cut him a little slack.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay... that was a great chapter.. I only hope that she can return the feelings that Edward feels for her...that they can grow to love one another.. that she was truly falling in love with him before...
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Intriguing, I look forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Snarky Bella is cute and funny. But I feel sorry for Edward and his insecurity, he is so alone within himself.
Love the story!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love it! I couldn't help but laugh when Bella kept reminding Edward how he bit her. I can't wait for the talk. Great job...thanks!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow...this is awesome!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks!!!