[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE come back and complete this fic!!! ;) but i really hope you could make bella a domme because there aren't enough of them ;D
Author's Response:
aw, thanks for the request, unfortunately I don't have plans to expand this one, glad you enjoyed bella in this role
there are a few out there with her as a domme, not many I agree, if I think of any in particular, I'll send you the rec!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Would love to read more. Please let me know if you continue it
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, no plans to expand at this time, will definitely let you know if i do! thanks again for reading
Date: 29 Nov 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awe... I really enjoyed it. Sorta Hot. You should continue. She needs more tutoring, and he needs a lot of ink.
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, i wrote this such a long time ago, oh she does need more tutoring and he ink, thanks again for reading
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. A sub Edward almost put me off but the almost dominating sub was a better fit for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, I loved it and YES please continue this. They have so much to teach each other and he has so much virgin skin that needs ink!!!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap. This was great! You should definitely extend this and make it into a story. :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
YUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMY that is good holy crap MORE PLZZZZZZZZZ ;)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awe, HEA. I enjoyed your story, thanks for writing;~)
I discovered this story while awaiting an update to your collaboration on "Red Devil."
Date: 27 May 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
You really really need to continue with this one!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh God do I hope and pray you continue this!!It was AWESOME!!If you don't mind I would LOVE to pimp (spread the word) this story out.Just let me know if that's alright by you.And please,please.PLEASE consider continuing this story.I would love to find out who and how these two end up.Who ends up being the dom?How do they continue with their relationship?Does Edward really get tatted?Oh my the possibilites are endless,lol.OK I'm rambling.lol Keep up the GREAT work!!
Date: 17 May 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
i really think you should continue this, I love it
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
this will be a great full story i hope you make it one
Date: 08 May 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! I really hope you continue it :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
There is nothing, NOTHING hotter than Subward.
Author's Response:
I certainly think so. =0 J
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. Finally a story with a submissive Edward, there are just not enough of them. This is a great beginning, so I hope you decide to continue this story.
Author's Response:
I'm thinking about it. Thanks =0 J
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please do continue. Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great job, J. Not that I expected any less of you. It's so hard being good for the Easter holidays, thanks for letting us be bad girls. I really want you to continue this story so that we can see Bella get more into the Dom lifestyle. I think she can be rougher with Edward in the future and that would be so hot. I really liked the licking commands because um, yeah. Anyways, thanks for sharing the one-shot. You already know I love you long, hard, and deep.
Author's Response:
*claps hands* Yeah, so glad you like this one. Oh, a Domme Bella would be great. I just hope I could do it justice. Hmm, maybe I have to pratice on hubster......Oh, sorry, I started drooling on my laptop. Okay, I have to carry on this story. Will do. Per your request darling. Love you hard and strong too!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good hope you continue
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Please continue the story!
Author's Response:
Well, I guess the yeses have it. I just might have to continue. Thanks for the support.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Continue! :) Really like, keep going.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see this story continued! Will they become a real couple? Who is the domme/sub in this relationship?
Author's Response:
Hmm, all good questions. Not sure right now. I want to, but need to close out some other projects first.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! Thank you!
Author's Response:
*claps hands* YEAH! So glad you loved it BB! I just wanted to do something special for you. =0 J
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please carry on with the story, you've definitely roused my, erm, interest. LOL.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I roused you, um, interest. =0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's still hot after a reread this morning. Win, darling.
Author's Response:
Thanks Lins. Luv loved it too! =0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn that was hot
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hot damn! Luv is so lucky!
I hope you do continue this. Loved it. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Thinking hard about continuing. =0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is really good you, you should continue the story
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my god that was so good please write more this could be a great full story really good loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks. Thinking hard about it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. I think you should continue it. For this being your first attempt at BSDM. You did exceptionally well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support. Thinking hard about continuing. =0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff! Very enjoyable :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
i think you did real good at you bdsm story
i love the girls owning a tattoo shop. and edward being a virgin when it comes to tattoos how hot. bella got the time of her life.
loved it i would defentiely read it if it became a story
thanx
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it! Its different. Definitely a good different. If you you continue this story you may want to research or read other BDSM fic stories but I think you probably have. If you want to continue the BDSM theme in the story.
Yes! Please continue I want to know what Edward got for his first tattoo!
Author's Response:
Oh, I think I have read quite a bit on BSDM. I would intermix it in, but not sure how much.
What would you give Edward as his first tat?
=0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I knew Bella would be good at being a domme when she said this. “Okay, I’ll do it. But both of you are going to fucking be there that night if I need anything, got it?”
I loved the ending, it was so sweet after the hottness that came before it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, oh she's a Domme under all that ink. So glad you liked it. =0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
You did a wonderful job...and hell yes.. I want you to continue... Very nice job...
Your lemons were great...Thanks so much for the shout out.. So happy to help you reach into your inner goddess. lol..
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope to continue this story. So many ways to take it.
*blushes* thank you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I wouldn't know what to do either - I'm glad you didn't make Bella look like she had it all together. This was a really good one shot - I think you should consider continuing it.
Your Friend,
Southern Fan Fiction Review
Author's Response:
I'm honored that you read this. Wow.
Thanks so much. Yep, this Bella has some learning to do.
=0 J
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
very nice....would love to see an outtake if you feel like it!
~Tiffany
Author's Response:
Thank you!