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Reviewer: Czar on Lyfe Conflicts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2017 4:15 AM Title: Redemption's Song

Good plot

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 3:15 PM Title: The Beginning Of Forever

i think these characters personalities are my favourite in canon ;) i loved this story even a second time reading ;D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:28 PM Title: The Beginning Of Forever

Loved this story

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:30 AM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

Sorry it's been so long but I wanted to finish your story and life happened plus I get distracted very easily lol. Edward going to have a chat with Charlie good luck Edward. Until next time. 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 5:16 PM Title: The Beginning Of Forever

Grate story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:16 AM Title: The Beginning Of Forever

OMG I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER! I CRIED WHEN I READ THIS LAST CHAPTER.



Author's Response:

I can't believe it either. I shed a few tears writing the last chapter.

Thanks for reading and sticking it out to the end!

 

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:43 PM Title: Safe In My Arms

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:44 PM Title: Redemption's Song

:)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:08 AM Title: Redemption's Song

Seems like Edward Sr finally grew up....It's so sad it had to be while he's dying.  Too close to my own expierience with my own father, sad to say.  Keep writing please.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 8:52 PM Title: I Would Like To Call It Beauty

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 8:27 PM Title: Things Fall Apart

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 8:10 PM Title: Just Like A Star Across My Sky

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Reviewer: hisbella1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Crisis Aftermath

This story is sadly under-reviewed.  I'm hoping it is not being overlooked.  I really love the struggle between choosing the man she feels an intense attraction to a man who share so many of her ideals and faith.  I was reluctant at first to read it, but I haven't been able to stop thinking about it.  Thanks for taking the time to write it and share.  I'm going to definitely be talking about this one.



Author's Response:

I whole-heartedly agree with you. It is my first fanfic, and while it's not classic literatur, I don't think it's horrible. I think my subject matter might be a bit off-putting to those who prefer more smutty stories that make up in porn what is not there in plot. I don't know the answer to the review issues, but I write primarily because I love to. If I never enjoy fanfic world fame, it will be quite all right. I would prefer to have a book on the NYT Bestseller's list someday.

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and sharing this story with your friends.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 9:24 PM Title: Lover, You Should Have Come Over

:)



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:) Thx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:45 PM Title: Ne Me Quitte Pas

:)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 11:53 PM Title: Ne Me Quitte Pas

love it so much

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 9:12 PM Title: That's How Strong My Love Is

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: Unthinkable

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:25 PM Title: Broken

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

New chapter just posted. Chapters will post more regularly now that I have finished writing the story.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 11:48 PM Title: Broken

i think that both of them will go nuts



Author's Response:

Ha! They possibly could. A new chapter just posted and new chapters will post more regularly now that I'm finished writing. Hope you enjoy.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:34 PM Title: The Lull Before The Storm

:)



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:)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: The Lull Before The Storm

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

More is up now!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:04 PM Title: Closer

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

New chapter posted today, and will post new chapters a couple of times a week until the story is done.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:42 PM Title: Closer

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Bev

xoxo

New chapter up today!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:49 PM Title: Passive Aggressive

:)



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:)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:50 AM Title: Passive Aggressive

love it



Author's Response:

Love you for loving it!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Nike90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:15 PM Title: We Will Grieve Not

I found this story 2 weeks ago, and I've just finished reading it. I like it very much so keep writing, please, because I can't wait for next chapters



Author's Response:

So glad you found me. Several chapters have posted since you read and reviewed this one, so check it out.

I'll be posting more regularly now that I've finished writing the story. A couple of chapters a week. Let me know what you think.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:39 PM Title: We Will Grieve Not

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

A few more chapters have posted since this review. Sorry it took me so long to respond.

Please let me know what you think. Chapters will post more regularly now that I'm finished writing. (A couple a week!)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 4:48 AM Title: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

Another wonderful chapter, I can't wait to read more. Since more chapter are available on FF I will be leaving all my reviews there. 

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 3:29 AM Title: Things Happen For A Reason

Very steamy...loved the chapter

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:22 AM Title: Action In The Affirmative

Another great chapter

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 11:50 PM Title: You and Me

I loved this chapter, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:04 PM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby

WTG Bella! 

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 8:08 PM Title: Conquering The Demons

Edward to the rescue!!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:11 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow

WTG Edward!!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:10 PM Title: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid

I loved the way Edward/James both intend to fight for Bella. It would be nice to keep James the way he is. If James turns out to be a douchebag (as in most stories) there is no choice but for Bella to pick Edward. However if she has two wonderful guys to choose from, whomever she picks (Edward of course!!) then the choice feels more like the RIGHT choice vs the obvious choice. 

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:06 PM Title: A Time For Everything

Loved this chapter

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:05 PM Title: In The Face of The Unexpected

I  like this Bella. She's so strong and independent. You go girl.

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:04 PM Title: The Music Never Ends

Can't wait to ready more!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:03 PM Title: My Cup Overflows

Hello sexual tention! I really liked this chapter. Keep em coming!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:01 PM Title: In Keeping With Repentance

Copward to the rescue. I like this version of James. Everyone writes him as a bad character, I like this James!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:00 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day

I love your characters. I like the diversity this story offers.

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:59 PM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise

Great chemisty with your E/B. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I try to make their interactions as true to life as possible.

I just posted another chapter. New chapters will post more regularly now because I have finished writing ;)

Thanks for reading and reveiwing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:57 PM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me

I've had this story listed in my favorites for a long time. I'm glad I started reading it. 

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:56 PM Title: Prologue

Hmmmm, sounds interesting

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:48 AM Title: We Will Grieve Not

love it so much



Author's Response:

Thanks, ellaryne!

Be

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:31 AM Title: We Will Grieve Not

:)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Collision Course

love it



Author's Response:

<3

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 5:39 AM Title: Collision Course

Loved it amazing Edward can be such a sweetheart can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

New chapters are up.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:20 PM Title: Collision Course

:)



Author's Response:

:)

Bev

Reviewer: Honey Cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:54 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

Oh: he told her!!!! *squeeee*

I love the fact he was brave enough to speak clearly to Charlie. I love the way he fell for her, sacrificing everything that was his old life. He loves her also because he can't be with her like with all the other girls he's been with, because he had to act differently.

Keep going on, take care :)

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:50 PM Title: From The Inside Out

Lady, this was a great chapter!  Hurry up and update!!!!  :)  Hey, would your betas mind another grateful writer to help out?  I had a lovely beta, but I'm looking for a little bit of a change. 

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:11 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

:)  Very nice chapter!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:45 PM Title: From The Inside Out

i'm guessing bella was hurt in some way or james did something. cant wait for more

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:34 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

love it how edward stood up to charlie

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:23 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

i would be so angry with my father for acting like that

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:58 PM Title: From The Inside Out

Great job, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read, review and enjoy.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:58 AM Title: From The Inside Out

OME freaking epic can't wait for the nxt chapter loved it amazing

Author's Response:

So very glad you loved it.  The next chapter is coming end of the week and my new Vamp AU is updating as well :)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:41 AM Title: From The Inside Out

:)



Author's Response:

:)

Thanks!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:51 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:12 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 7:09 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

Great job, thank you for writing. I hope the story has changed peoples views of couples of different races. I have always trouble with discrimination when i date outside my race.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I certainly hope it gives some people pause for thought.  I think people should be allowed to love who they want.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:00 AM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

Amazing chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, bb!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:36 AM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

That was just epically amazing they are just so sweet together...it's was such a heart felt & sweet chapter especially towards the end with the dance can't wait to see what the nxt chapter brings

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  These two are a joy to write.  Another update in a week :)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:17 PM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 10:05 PM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:40 PM Title: Someone Stop The Word

;)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Honey Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:39 PM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me

I love Kstew as herself (alot), and as playing the role of Bella, but here finally I can identify myself with a mulatto girl as I am. Reading all the time in fanfics that Edward, a handsome white guy loved the pearly white skin of Bella made me feel like, idk, kinda undesirable ! I know it's stupid but that's the way I felt... Thank you for this fanfic :)



Author's Response:

Dear Honey:

When I wrote this story using a non-traditional Bella, I knew I would get flak from some, and boy did I.  However, I can truly say that when I get reviews from women of color who are appreciative that they finally have a Bella that they can identify with, it makes it worth it to have taken all the flak.  JMeyer didn't have a lot of diversity in her main characters, so people of color didn't have anyone to identify with in the original stories, but in fanfic I felt I had the perfect opportunity to rememdy this, and I'm so glad I did.

Looking forward to hearing from you again as the story progresses.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:50 PM Title: Things Happen For A Reason

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:11 PM Title: Action In The Affirmative

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:10 PM Title: You and Me

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 8:19 AM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

Lobed it can't wait to read the convo between Edward @ Charlie can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks!  It will definitely be a clash between titans.  Should update by the end of the week.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:01 AM Title: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

I really liked this chapter and I can definitely relate to it.  I was raised to believe if you marry outside of your faith you are unevenly yoked, as well.  My mother was a Jehovah's Witness and my father wasn't.  There were problems.  I loved them both, but they didn't have the type of marriage that I would want.  So, I can understand her father's viewpoint about building a solid foundation and the relationship being statistically unlikely to work.

On the other hand, being that Bella's parents are in an interracial relationship should make them both sensitive to people telling her that her relationship is bound to fail.  If he doesn't support her, that's going to make her more determined to stay in the relationship out of stubbornness.  She's a grown woman.  She doesn't need his blessing and he's going to lose his daughter over it.

As far was what Edward says...I just hope the anger management is working out for him...lol  It wouldn't help his case to get into an argument with her father.  The only thing he could really say is that even if Rev. Swan doesn't trust him, he should trust his daughter's judgement, at least.

Great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I know how it is to struggle against decisions that war against your beliefs, which is why I put this scenario in the story.  Charlie, unfortunately, had to be the character to bring to the story that dramatic tension.  He will come around eventually, believe me.

Thanks for reading and so thoughtfully reviewing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise

Nice Chapter! starting to get into this story.. I have a big smile on my face about him trying to get into the apartment but not getting into the apartment.. poor boy is so torn LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jasper's warning was ringing in his head, but deep down he really wanted to take a chance.  He'll make that move, eventually, right?

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:37 PM Title: Prologue

I have been meaning to read this for so long... and a bought of insomnia made me go... hmm.. I want a good story to read.. so here I am

Very powerful prologue.. can't wait to read more.

xxx



Author's Response:

So glad you decided to give it a chance.  I find that reading fanfic, while not a cure for insomnia, makes it bearable for me until I'm able to sleep again.

Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 6:14 PM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:34 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day

*continues on reading*!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :)

B.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:46 PM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise

*continues reading * lol good chapt!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for five coffee cups!

I don't get that often, so I really appreciate it.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:57 PM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me

*on to the next chapter* lol



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:54 PM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:15 PM Title: Prologue

oh my what a intresting begining lol *continues reading*



Author's Response:

Welcome!  Hope you continue to read and let me know what you think!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:37 PM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

I agree Felix is hot and he looked good in Eclipse I'm just saying the new hair cut did him good! Also these were my favorite parts this chapter: lol: Oh. My. God. Edward is offering to go to church with me. This is epic.

omg aw you go Edward: Having endured about twenty minutes of singing, which was by far his favorite part of the service, a few announcements, and then a thirty-minute sermon, he was anxious to see the woman who gave him the courage to end his self-imposed exile from church. Her solo was tantamount to perfection. Edward smiled as he remembered watching Bella sing. Her eyes had returned to his again and again. He'd been so proud that he felt like leaning forward to the people in the pew in front of him and telling them, "That's my girlfriend."

I must say Bella did Edward dirty not introducing him as her boyfriend that hurt my feelings reading that part to be honest. I was disappointed in her for real: He hated himself for shutting down on her like that, but he was oddly pissed off that she hadn't made it clear to her parents that he was more than just some guy she'd decided to invite to church. For her, he wanted to be more than just a co-worker, more than just the cop who protected her, more than just a friend. Was there something she was afraid to say to her parents, her father in particular? The entire thing weirded him out because he'd never even cared to meet any woman's parents before, let alone hope that one would introduce him as someone important to them. He'd never wanted to be that for anyone before, and the first time that he did, it didn't happen.

omg Edward's so whipped: His heart melted completely then, and he could not help himself. He cupped her cheeks in his hands, leaned down, and kissed her in a way that he hoped conveyed everything he wanted to say but was unable to articulate at that moment. Suddenly he was kissing her with a fervor that threatened to sap his strength. It must have done the same to her because he felt her knees give way just a bit, and she relaxed against him completely, a low moan escaping her gorgeous, dusky rose lips. Frantic and seeking, he plundered deeper and deeper into her mouth, as he tightened his arms around her. He could feel her giving way to his mastery completely, and for a few fleeting seconds, he was glad they were in Alice and Jasper's driveway. Had they been back at his apartment, this kiss might have been their undoing, stripping them bare and leaving them vulnerable—almost too vulnerable.

omg lol: "Ooh, little Bellarina had a big 'O,'" Alice teased. "I thought you looked different today—not so uptight."

Bella turned red as a beet. "Would you stop it, Alice?"

Until next time.

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:29 AM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

Oh my God!  I don't know why because I've read a lot of Bella and Edward fics, but this Edward is so dang sexy to me.  :)  I wonder who was following in the gold car.  Their first fight.  :)  Well, I'm sure there will be many more to come.  Keep 'em coming, lady!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Copward is rather sexy.  Glad you're enjoying it.

I'll be updating tonight!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:37 AM Title: Passion and Synchronicity

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Updating tonight.  Thanks for the review.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:19 PM Title: Someone Stop The Word

Aw so sweet and funny: "It's perfect because I have an alarm system in my apartment, and if you're not going to stay with your dad, who has police training, then I am your next best option. I mean, I love Jasper, but he's a youth pastor for goodness sake. I know you and Angela would give your lives for one another, but I prefer it not be on my watch or at all, for that matter."

I love her playfulness: "What, um, corrective action will I be subjected to for mussing up the bed?"

OMG LOL: "Good. You never know with these two. They've had a bromance going on for years." Rosalie laughed heartily as Emmett protested in the background. "What time do you want us to show up?"

OMG I love this movie & the outtakes are funny too: Emmett had chosen the movie "Role Models." Edward thought that Bella and Rosalie would find the movie choice asinine, but they all found it oddly hilarious, even the potty-mouthed little kid. Mood restored, they really got into the movie. They were deep in the final medieval reenactment scene where the characters were dressed as members of KISS and going to help Augie win the Battle Royale, when the doorbell rang again.

Aw snap Bella was about to go all gansta on hoochie lol: Bella, at this point, sprung up off the sofa and headed toward the door. From all indications, she looked calm, but in the blink of an eye, she methodically divested herself of her earrings and twisted her hair up, ready to come to blows with the woman if necessary. Emmett saw her intentions and grabbed her around the waist, but Bella strained to get to the woman who touched Edward. Rosalie moved behind Bella, picked up her earrings, and set them on the coffee table.

OMG LOL I love Rose: "Okay, Bella might be too nice to say it, but I'm not. Bitches, if you don't get your cunt-trary asses out of this damn door right now, I will personally stomp the skank out of both of you." Rosalie rushed them, and the ho-bags bolted. Apparently, they didn't like their odds against the Amazonian blonde. 

OMG I love star wars: "Okay, young Padawan learner, we'll give you a chance to get used to that technique first," Rosalie teased.

 

"Thank you, Obi-Wan Kenobi." Bella laughed. "I love 'Star Wars,' too."

OMG LOL I love Emmett & he's right!: "You broke a cardinal player's rule, bro. Never have more than one chick in the same vicinity. You should have diversified." Emmett shrugged his shoulders, then a light seemed to go off in his head. "Wait. You and Bella were planning on having a sleepover? Tonight?"

AW: "Good luck with all that. I'm a selfish son of a bitch. I don't think I can go more than three days without it. But I do understand that when you believe you've found the one, recreational sex doesn't have the appeal it once had. I don't want any other woman but Rosalie now." Emmett was in one of his serious conversational moods now.

OMG: "Then, there you go. It's time to get away from the riff-raff, dude, especially if you don't want their presence to undermine Bella's confidence in you. Also, buy a new bed when you move. The symbolism alone will get you major points with her. She'll love the idea that you've never done the horizontal mambo on it with anyone else except her. That is, if she ever takes enough pity on your sorry ass to put you out of your misery."

OMG LOL: Also, buy a new bed when you move. The symbolism alone will get you major points with her. She'll love the idea that you've never done the horizontal mambo on it with anyone else except her. 

AW you go Edward: "I'm so sorry. They were looking for the guy I used to be. You are my life now, Bella. I promise I am going to make it comfortable for you to be with me without worrying about skeletons jumping out of my closets."

OMG LOL: "So, let's see if KISS-My-Anthia is going to win the Battle Royale."

OMG aw but lol: "That skank reunion is old news. I want to talk—about us."

LOL: "Baby, it's been hard for me since the first day I met you," Edward confessed readily, laughing easily at himself and the unintended double-entendre.

LOL OMG: His little virginal vamp then kicked it into high gear and gave him a pseudo-lap dance that would have put a pro to shame. Using all the gymnastics moves that she could modify to tantalize him with, she created enough friction that when he came, he was almost sure he'd burned a hole in his boxer briefs straight through to his pajama bottoms.

OMG: He decided to ask her a question he'd wondered about, but never had an opportunity to ask before. "Was that your first orgasm?"

"Yep, while I was awake, anyway," she murmured dreamily.

"Bella, if we can do this to each other and not even have sex, I don't think waiting will be as big a problem as we anticipated."

These were my favorite parts! Until next time and sorry for the delay!



Author's Response:

Ooh, I love when readers tell me what their favorite parts are in the story.  This is awesome!

Bev

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Reviewer: csh06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:36 AM Title: Prologue

who is the girl in the banner?



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The girl in the banner is Amber Stevens who plays in the TV Show, Greek.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:11 PM Title: Someone Stop The Word

Loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter

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Thanks, bb!

Bev

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Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Someone Stop The Word

that was perfect and can't wait for more



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Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 7:36 AM Title: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

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Thanks, bb!

Bev

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Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:25 PM Title: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

Great job!



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Thanks, bb!

Bev

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Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:46 PM Title: Things Happen For A Reason

Love the story so far love the chapter..can't wait for the nxt chapter

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So glad you're still loving the story.  Will be updating again tonight.

Bev

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Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:47 AM Title: Things Happen For A Reason

Okay I liked this chapter and these are my favorite parts:

He then decided he needed to do something to keep his mind off what was going on in the other room, because he did not want to embarrass himself or anger her by acting on his overwhelming desire to go in there and join her.


He had never hummed "Taps" so much in his life, but he would do it for her for as long as he had to.

"You did all the prep work, so this was a piece of cake," he said with a wry smile. "Besides, now we can sit down and eat." He carried both plates to the table where the toast, fresh fruit, and orange juice were already waiting for them. He held out a chair for Bella, and she smiled up at him.

"Hey, I could get used to this," she said, taking the proffered seat and placing the napkin in her lap.

Edward took his own seat and mimicked her actions. "I could do this as often as you'd like—that is, until you get tired of omelettes, pasta, steak and potatoes. That's the extent of my cooking repertoire."

"I love pasta. Bring it on, baby." She ate a forkful of omelette, not taking her eyes off of him. "Mmm, this is perfect."

It didn't go unnoticed that she'd called him "baby." His lips turned up into a smile. "I make a mean lasagna, but I don't do it often because I get tired of eating it for days on end. I could make it for us tonight."

"You always smell so good," she said, reaching up and touching his clean shaven cheek with her hand. "What cologne do you wear?"

"L'eau D'Issey Pour Homme. Glad you like it." He wrapped his arms around her and gave her a slight squeeze, dragging his nose along an exposed part of her neck. "I cheated, " he confessed. "I read the name of your fragrance on your shower gel this morning." He moved her hair across the back of her neck to one shoulder to have unhindered access and laid a generous kiss on her neck. Then he whispered against her silky skin, "I thank Mr. Dolce and Mr. Gabana for making you even more irresistible than you already are."

Bella giggled, and he felt the vibration of her body in his chest. "And I thank Mr. Miyake for enhancing that wonderful Edward smell you've got going on," she said.

He chuckled. "While you're at it let's thank soap and water for keeping that Edward smell pleasant. I never appreciated it more until I spent several years in the Middle East."

"And I complained when we did gymnastics drills in the summer. Sweat and humidity is not a friend to any woman's hair, especially women of my ethnicity. I personally thank my African American and European ancestors for a mixture that is tolerable."

He buried his nose in her hair. "Your hair feels like silk and smells like honeysuckle."

"I owe that to my mother, her ambiguous ethnic background, and great shampoo. Alice likes to call us beautiful mutts."

"I'm glad you swam, because hearing you speak French is extremely sexy. I feel like Gomez Addams. 'Speak French to me, baby,' he'd say, then Morticia would say something mundane in French and he would get absolutely amorous with her arm." He kissed a trail down her arm in demonstration.

Bella giggled. "That tickles. How did Morticia ever keep a straight face?"

"She was a monster with unbelievable self-control," he answered.

"I kind of envy her that," Bella said, turning to face him. "I forget what that is when I'm around you."

"Me, too," he whispered, pressing his lips firmly against hers and losing himself in her once again.

"Does your lackluster affection for James have anything to do with a bronze-haired, green-eyed cop who escorted you around the concert last weekend?"

Much like the defendant being interrogated by her mother, Bella attempted to resist. "Why do you ask that?"

"Because any observant mother could see that you two were oddly oriented toward one another. That young man couldn't keep his eyes off you and neither could you keep yours off him."

Cornered by her mother's skillful questioning, Bella found herself spilling her guts. "Okay, yes... Edward has become extremely important to me in the month we've worked together at the Center. Was it really that obvious Saturday?"

"Do bees make honey?" Renee asked sardonically.

"Daddy Swan, you've only known Ben for three years," Angela complained.

"Knowing him and him wanting to marry my surrogate daughter are two separate things," Charlie said. "I promise not to make him squirm too much… I'm saving that for Bella's fiancé."

Bella whipped her head around, stunned by her father's sudden pronouncement. She and Angela then looked pleadingly to Renee.

"Now honey, give the girls a break," Renee encouraged. "Bring Ben, Angela. I'll rein Daddy Swan in, I promise. Bella, you should bring a date, too," Renee said, winking when she saw that Charlie was busy cutting his chicken.

Bella practically choked on her wine, and her dad commenced to patting her firmly yet gently on her back.

"You probably shouldn't breathe in while you're swallowing, Bells," Charlie teased. "We know you're not going out with James anymore. Maybe you should bring Officer Cullen—you two dance really well together."

Bella gasped and fell into another coughing jag. Renee's eyes got as big as saucers, and Angela started coughing, too, in a desperate attempt to disguise her desire to laugh out loud.

he doorbell rang once, and then the door swung open. Edward had a wild look about him, but he calmed visibly when he saw everything was under control. He looked pointedly at the doorknob still in his hand.

"Locks, Bella?" he asked.

"I knew you were coming," she explained.

Edward rolled his eyes laboriously and said to James under his breath, "Eat fast, Hall. You've got fifteen minutes."

James just sighed and leaned back into the sofa, both arms resting across the back of it, kind of gloating at Edward.

Edward scowled at him and stood up. "You need help in there, babe?" he called out.

James narrowed his eyes at Edward, picked up the mug and took another swig of coffee.

In answer, Bella came out of the kitchen carrying two plates heaping with food and set them on the dining table. "All right boys," she said. "Renee Swan's Lime Garlic Chicken is now served. Eat up."

Good Lord that took forever to do but I'm done now! Until next time.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:07 PM Title: Things Happen For A Reason

Great job!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:31 AM Title: Action In The Affirmative

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

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I'm glad.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bev

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Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:48 AM Title: Action In The Affirmative

Great job!



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Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Bev

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Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:51 AM Title: Action In The Affirmative

It started off really funny. I actually was going to copy and paste but then I kept on reading and it got very deep. So deep I didn't feel right copying the funny stuff. I love how you are tackling the issues that they have and not sugar coating it. I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Until next time.



Author's Response:

Aww, sorry that it got so deep you didn't feel like cutting and pasting. :)

Glad you're still enjoying the story.  Yeah, they needed to  talk about the deep issues.

See you next chapter.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: You and Me

I loved it. It was perfect and adding Edward's mother to the mix was great. I loved all the sexual tension but the romance as well. The night was just beautiful but cue in the big bad wolf I can feel the drama coming. Until next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your faithfulness to read and review.  I'm not sure all readers know how to award the coffee cups, but you have single-handedly given my little story some ratings.  Drama is coming.  You are so right!

Bev

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Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:22 PM Title: You and Me

love it



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Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Love you for loving it.

Bev

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Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:08 PM Title: You and Me

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bev

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