That is so fantastically heartbreakingly brilliant. It was so heartbreaking and you wrote so fantastically detailed that i felt i was there watching them. I know i sound like a butt kisser lol but seriously that was such a great piece of writing. I hope this isn't a one-shot. Maybe you could do it through all the months with Bella also talking about Jacob and then maybe at the end you could have Bella doubting that Edward loves her but then finding his diary and realising he was going through the same as her. Sorry I know i'm rambling on but I wish I could write this good anyway great job xx