Date: 01 Aug 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
her sisters are back-stabbing gossip mongers with no loyalty to Bella, She needs to get her own place and keep them away from anyone she knows
Date: 20 May 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 41
There was too much "whispering" in this.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Everyone talks in Whispers hahaha
Date: 01 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
How many times the word chuckle is in every chapter?
the only thing they talk is about Bella being a good cop
bella crying
thanks it every single chapter
the same subject
borring
Date: 26 May 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 41
BLOODY WONDERFUL !!!!!
Very accurate in your descriptions of police procedures....I watch a LOT of police real stories.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story & you really BLEW ME AWAY when James turned out to be her step-brother.
LOVED IZZY !!!!!!!!!!
Thanks muches for sharing your story with me. I am now off to the sequel.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Author's Response:
Thanks, sweets!
Date: 24 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 41
awesome start to this storyline ;) im now off to read the sequel ;D
Date: 22 May 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
Hello I really enjoyed it the way everyone evolved from one way to another way of thinking and to open their eyes thank you
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved it! very emotional chapter!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
So far I'm enjoying this story and I can'y wait what is to come, but I going to keep reading intell I have to stop when I have to take my dog out or cook dinner.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 41
Worth the read, I loved it. Can't wait to read the sequels.
E/k
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved the story. I'm about to start reading the sequel. It took me a good 5hrs to finish it. I couldn't put it down. One thing though. U deserve more than the mere 200 and change reviews u got. It was an excellent story. Thank you for sharing it w us ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweets:)
Date: 01 Oct 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
R u fucking serious. I want to kick Charlie's ass right about now. SMH un-freakin-believable.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really don't know what I would do if I was Bella. I would probably move out too.. Not realy to punish them, but just to get some perspective on the whole thing. She doesn't need to see them in the "Honeymoon stage of their relationships anyway.
Great chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok. Edward is just a HUGE Dick... I can see veins from here. I am sure he will some around, but man.. i want to punch him.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
SO fun.. I am looking forward to this. Actually how I found this was you lastest update on the LAST part of this series. That one sounded GREAT, and I though.. my god...there are two more.. What a find. Don't you love that. I hope this is the first in the series.. I think it is. If I am wrong tell me now..lol.
Thanks
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good for her! Rip 'em a new one.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved everything about the sequal!! I hope there is another on coming soon!!
Author's Response:
There will be, just going to be a bit until I can get to it:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 41
Excellent story. A must to read.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 41
yay!
this story actually made me scared! Of course, I was home alone at night reading the part about James.
You are a great writer. I can't wait to read the sequal!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Jul 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like this story so far but seriously Bella seems just like a whiny bitch (as she claims to seem like one)....
M4troth
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 41
awesome story
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
lol she should punch him again
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 41
And here they go again!! I am glad that Bella kicked Emmett's butt again.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
She sleeps with alot of her coworkers
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
ooo wet dreams me like
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Holy Crap!!! It is the kid that moved away! That makes more sense why he is going after her kinna of. Does he resent Charlie helping them move away?
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
they sure do cry alot
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well that really explains why he has been so hard on himself about leaving Bella like that.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well the girls should hve said something to the guys before now huh
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is a sick monster and I hope that they get to him before he does it again.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
It is all out in the open now! I just hope that Charlie and Renee look past this and look at keeping all of them safe.