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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

awesome sequel ;) i'm glad ed sr came around and everything ended happily ;D



Author's Response:

thanks so much, glad you enjed this one too

i actually re-read this the other month and couldn't stop until i was thru the sequel

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: beckey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

i love it



Author's Response:

thanks! glad you did :D

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

loved the story it is just too sad to leave them there without a sequel.



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed

this is the sequel to The Good and The Bad

hope you got to read that before this one

thanks for reading

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

:)



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Mayfall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

Perfect.. though I am a bit sad that it ended. I loved this story, you gals are amazing and I can't wait to read your next story. I'm sure it will be amazing!



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

sequel to bad ass bella and godie goodie edward...pretty good...

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

I loved it so good!

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

I just got to know what kind of piercing did Edward get as in what kind of penile piercing is it?



Author's Response:

He got what is called a frenum piercing. It is probably one of the easiest ones. If you google it, you can see some images. Be forewarned though, there are tons of images out there. Hope that helps.

Reviewer: eamc1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

great ending to a great story...sad to  see it end, but looking forward to your next fic!!

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

Very sweet. I'll be sad to see these two go.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Good Boy Edward: Epilogue

aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww I'm so sad to see it endd *pouts*

but you guys are right it has to end soewhere, and that was perfec :)

Thanks for sharing and I'm so putting you on alert!

Much love!

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

Adorable and sweet.

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww!! that is just so... them!! they're a little exentric but it fits them so well...

Much love!!

Reviewer: SparkleQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

I wish u had pics! My little sis just got married and had a very 60's inspired wedding. It was perfect complete w porkpie hats and 3/4 length sleeves on her very Jackie O looking dress.

Author's Response:

I do have pics of the dress. It's very cool. Let me know if you want to see it. If I had to do mine over again, I would have wanted this dress. =0 J

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

WHAT?????  I want to see Edward's tattoo!!!!!! Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Bad Girl Bella: My heart is ever at your service

Should have had a Tissue Alert at the start of this chapter!

Beautiful! And Edward quoting Shakespeare was... I am without words.

Thank you!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

"Where's my ring, you ass?" Best line ever.

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

Haha love it especially the end :D

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

finally she said yes!!! that's gonna be interesting with grandad E being there and all :P

I love the name though, it's so them :)

Makes me want to have one of my own lol bt not yet :P

Much love!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Girl Bella: Fast and Slow

:)

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

Only these two could manage a baby and an engagement this way. Loved it.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

Love this story..Really I do!! But that last line....By far my favorite line in the whole shabang. :-)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Girl Bella: Fast and Slow

The baby's coming the baby's coming! Let the real fun begin!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

Poor baby! Death by the big O! What a way to go. I wonder what charlie wants? And why no mention of eddie's parents responce to the baby?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Girl Bella: Fast and Slow

Hmmm, with all the piercings, tatts, and the earthy-crunchy henna I'm really surprised B went for an epi.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

Awww... A baby! Yay work is good, friends are good, love is good, life is good. Looks like it is time to begin a new adventure! Eddie is gonna flip shit and be so happy! Maybe this will be the kick in the ass eddie's mom needs to dislodge the pole she has shoved up there! Heehee

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Girl Bella: Fast and Slow

ooowwww poor baby, he must feel used lol

I hope she sees reason soon :P

Much love!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Good Boy Edward: Breakout Deal

Bella's big break has finally come! Yay! And can I just say... These two are total horn dogs! I love it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:53 PM Title: The Bad Girl Bella: Words

Oh sweety if only you knew they are already yours

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

:)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

uh-oh, that doesn't sound very well...

I hope he asks when are they finally getting married LOL

Much love!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

Looks like daddy eddie is more accepting than mommy

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Bad Girl Bella: Viva Las Vegas

Starting to get some grown up forever kind of thoughts floating around in the brain...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

Poor Edward, he,he,he,he...

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Good Boy Edward: Who’s Your Daddy?

Too much sex and Edward in the same sentence does not compute!

Love how he is keeping a Mission Log. Wondering if he thinks Charlie is going to "suggest" a wedding.

Great chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: The Good Boy Edward: Is It Really So Wrong?

Well it looks like grumpy no sex eddie is right as rain after all of the lovin' bella is ginin' him! Rose and em are off to elope in vegas, I wonder what kind of fuckery these 6 will gwt up to? Both as a group and in pairs.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Bad Girl Bella: That's What Friends Are For

Well now see how we go from pouty eddie to horney eddie in 2.1 seconds! Hot damn it is gonna be a good night!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Good Boy Edward: Why Is It Always Me?

'Yeh fucker and your surprise visit is fucking with little eddie's debut party! So shut the fuck up, asshole' lol that would. Be my responce. Not sure if eddie has it in him to stand his ground thoughm heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

Sneaky little girl! But hey if I could talk hubbie into it I would! Heehee but the recovery time?! I don't know if I could do thatm

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

Well happy birthday eddie! You sure are a lucky boy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

Well now life seems to be moving along well for these 2. The resolution for the bet was awesome and so not a punishment at all. I wonder what eddie wants for his birthday?!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 6:The Good Boy Edward: Surprise, Surprise

It is always fun to try new things!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Bad Girl Bella: Could You Be Loved

What a wonderful idea for a gift! God I miss the time before the kids when hubbie and I could do shit like that! Only 5 more years to go...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Good Boy Edward: If I Could Turn Back Time

Finally the feelings were talked about. And the stupid specs removed! Eddie darling you are in the house of people with a record label! Duh! You have people to help you with musicm

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Bad Girl Bella:Not The Same Ol Rut

Yeah! You tell him how it is bella!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Good Boy Edward: I Will Not Fail

Perfect date again eddie, way to go!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Bad Girl Bella: New Beginnings & Old Feelings

And the fun begins again!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

Oh! hell don't know which out come I want!

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

Oh no I need to know ;)

Love it ^^

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

oh my god!!! You cannot leave me hanging like that! Just Kiddin', I'll wait in pines and needdles :)

Much love!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Good Boy Edward: Breakout Deal

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:43 PM Title: The Bad Girl Bella: Words

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Bad Girl Bella: Viva Las Vegas

:)

Reviewer: DuskandDawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Bad Girl Bella: I'm responsible now

woah...dun dun dun...great chapter :)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Good Boy Edward: Breakout Deal

hehehe, finally her big break huh?

Much love!

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:13 AM Title: The Bad Girl Bella: Words

oh gosh that sounds good!!

Much love!

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:58 PM Title: The Bad Girl Bella: Words

Love the chapter :)

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

Well at least Daddy Masen is a bit more supporting.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

Great chapter. So maybe Dad is coming around, but why not Mom? thanks

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: The Good Boy Edward: Going Home

aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww aparently he's had a revelation and won't be so hard on his son now huh? lovely

Much love!!

 

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Bad Girl Bella: Viva Las Vegas

aaaawwwwww elopement!!! I don't think I could get away with that, though, my family is traditional in that way...

much love!!

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: The Good Boy Edward: Is It Really So Wrong?

oooooohhhh! that's just mean! good think I'm gettin' a bath right now :P LOL

Much love!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: The Good Boy Edward: Is It Really So Wrong?

:)

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: The Good Boy Edward: Is It Really So Wrong?

hilarious. emmett asking "in horror" was the best part.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Bad Girl Bella: That's What Friends Are For

:)



Author's Response:

=0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Good Boy Edward: Why Is It Always Me?

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

:)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Bad Girl Bella: That's What Friends Are For

hey, no fair!! I've said that a lot today! why is everybody cockblocking me!? *snifs*
it was fun though :P
Much love!!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the cockblock. Hoping posting three chapters for you to read will make it up to you. Enjoy the lemons.

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Bad Girl Bella: That's What Friends Are For

And that's where you cut it? *pouts*



Author's Response:

So sorry. Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter Eleven: The Bad Girl Bella: That's What Friends Are For

Oh boy, can't wait for the pierced peen in the next chapter. lol Great chapter. Thanks



Author's Response:

It is quite interesting lemons with the new jewelry.

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Good Boy Edward: Why Is It Always Me?

poor baby, they should take it easier with him...

and to top it all of he's frustrated!

much love!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Good Boy Edward: Why Is It Always Me?

Does this mean we should expect some trouble from Jane? Great chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: Substitute Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

Oh My God!

Tattoos, Motorcycles, and Sexy Smart Ass Bella!

Im in Love!

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

oh geez por baby! that must've hurt!!! I'm against any kind of pain. I love tattos but I don't know if I'll ever ahve the ovaries to do it :P

much love!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

Oh wow! So much happened in this chapter. What a bitch, Jane turned out to be. I wonder what will happen when they go back to work. Too funny that she took him to get his peen pierced after catching the bitch with her tongue down his throat. LOL I guess he will fight harder next time someone makes a move on him. I'd hate to think what would happen next time. Love it! I'd like to read Edwards pov of this chapter to know what really happened with Jane. Great chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

how come u skipped updating last week?

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter Nine: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House Summer

She totally saw the opportunity and she took it... god cock piercings are so hot.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Bad Girl Bella: New Beginnings & Old Feelings

My husband read my review (over my shoulder) and asked what the hell am I reading?! Haha

Author's Response:

HA! That is too funny. My hubby is always asking me what am I writing. =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

Of couse he saw her little private session that day.  That was definitely a good birthday request.

Jane and Alec don't stand a chance.  Yay for Daddy C picking up on Jane's intentions and squashing them :)

LOL, yes dear Eddie, it is rather hard to watch and not touch.  At least she didn't let him suffer.   Happy Birthday, Eddie!



Author's Response:

It was an excellent birthday for him. Touching, hmm, Eddie's hands. Thanks for the review =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

Nice little resolution to the bet.  Alice and Jasper are sneaky little D/s twins.  Hmm, does Eddie have a craving for a bit more of the club?



Author's Response:

Thanks. They are very sneaky. I'm sure the club opened up a side of Eddie that he didn't know he had. =0 J

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 6:The Good Boy Edward: Surprise, Surprise

So happy there was no angst over the whole moving in thing.  Hopefully they will keep busy enough with their studies and musical pursuits to not get on each other's nerves.

A little bit of play is healthy.  Doesn't hurt to keep the relationship a bit exciting.  Wonder if dabbling in the D/s lifestyle a little will come into play in later chapters.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Bad Girl Bella: Could You Be Loved

I love Carlisle.  He's awesome!

I totally understand Bella's fear of messing everything up by them moving in together.  Unfortunately you never know until you do it.  I'm glad she got over it and went with it.  Hopefully Edward doesn't freak out too much over it.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Good Boy Edward: If I Could Turn Back Time

That chapter put me back in my happy place.  They so needed that.  I didn't realize Edward would stick with studying law when he transfered.  I totally expected him to start studying something to do with music.  It's not like he dad was paying for his school or expenses.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Bad Girl Bella:Not The Same Ol Rut

You really had me worried throughout this chapter.  Edward not reciprocrating after the blowjob totally blew me away.  That was so unlike him.  I understand both sides of the argument.  I just hope Edward can see her point of view on all of this.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Good Boy Edward: I Will Not Fail

I'm so glad Edward could think with the right head.  So proud of him.

Their second first date was great.  So happy that they are back together.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Bad Girl Bella: New Beginnings & Old Feelings

It's breaking my heart seeing Edward sad about his mom.  His dad is quite the prick.

Oh, Bells.  You keep this crap up and there will be no holding either of you back.  I like the idea of her wanting to solidify the friendship before falling back into a relationship but looking smoking hot and teasing Edward like that will not accomplish friendship.  I'm hoping Edward was a gentleman and didn't do anything with Bella in her drunken, blacked out state.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

very hot chapter, can't wait to see more



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on more. =0 J

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

That was so hawt!! Edward did good at the recording studio by keeping his distants from Jane. Loved that he made her keep the door open. LOL I'm worried about Alec. He seems to be dangerous. Maybe they could get Jane and Alec together and get them out of their hair. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

It was hot! I always need a cold shower after reading these two. Just wait, Jane will reveal her true self soon. Thanks for reading & reviewing =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

:)



Author's Response:

=0

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

The only thing that would have been yummier is if he ate cake off her ass.

Author's Response:

Very good suggestion. Will have to remember that next time. Thanks for reading and reviewing =0 J

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

oh my gosh that was so so so hot!!!!

damn, I need to go!

much love!



Author's Response:

Go, cold shower, find you man, it all works good. Thanks for reading and reviewing =0 J

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

Just starting reading this story but it's very good, can't wait to see more.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Hope you do enjoy the ride. There was an original to this story. Hope you got to read that one too. =0 J

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

dun dun dun

what will edward want? marriage perhaps? hehe



Author's Response:

Ooo, that would have been a good one too! Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

Huh, I wanna know ...!!! :D

Love it



Author's Response:

I'm sure know by now. Glad you are enjoying it! =0 J

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

:)



Author's Response:

=0 J

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