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Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:01 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:00 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 5:46 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

AWESOME!!! sequel ;) i hope edward lets bella reciprocate on the anal deal in part 3 though i think it was a bit rushed when it happened 'hehe' i hope your life is treating you well and all get to read pt3 asap because it's been 5 years since this was completed ;D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:57 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

OMGosh! !!!!!!!! I love this chapter! !!!!!!! I have gone to your profile. .......where is the sequel? ???????????? 

PLEASE PLEASE post the sequel.  Hope to hear from you soon. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing 2 great stories with us. Hope you will share your next one too.

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2014 7:29 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Wow!!!! Was not expecting anal sex in this chapter.  I knew Bella wearing that outfit was not going to be a good idea

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:24 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure

So glad Phil is put away!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:24 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions

Glad things are working out for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

OMGosh! !!!!! I just knew that Angela was going to tell Edward that he had a k8d. I am glad that did not happen.  Loved the Bella knocked her out. Lol. I busted out laughing when Bella fell a sleep on Edward.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:08 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Edward messed up big time with the Angela mess. Glad they worked it out.  Excited for Emmett and Rose. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 11:28 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

So glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am off to read the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:39 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

Esme is going to kill Alice!!!!!!!! At least Edward and Bella are off the hot seat now. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day

I am so glad that everything went PERFECT! !!!!!!!

Glad that Jasper is back and it looks like Alice is welcoming him back .

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:24 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

I am glad that Renee believes Bella now and that Bella can forgive her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:16 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth

So glad that Edward got there in time. I hope it opened Renee ' s eyes. Also glad she did not pull away from Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 11:10 AM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

I hope Edward and Emmett ' s plan works.  I hope Edward can keep his promise to Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:49 AM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

I just hope Phil does not ruin their wedding. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:04 AM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

Phil is pushing his luck. I have a feeling that Edward is going to get a hit in before Phil leaves.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 12:24 AM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

Yes I see some drama coming!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:10 PM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy

Lots of drama in this chapter.  I feel sorry for Alice but I am glad that Bella stood up to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

Loved Esme calling and blessings Edward out. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift

Awesome job with your 1st Dom/sub scene. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 3:19 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy

I just knew they had some Dom/sub in them. Love it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Ch4 - Party Time

Love that Bella did not let those shanks ruin her party.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:03 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News

Edward is so sweet.  Doing all that for Bella and then having the cake taste awful. Lol. Loved that they were playing out a fantasy.  I am wondering if Edward enjoyed Bella sitting at his feet......that could be another fantasy. ..Dom/sub. Lol.  Just a thought.  He does seem to like to spank her ass. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

Glad Bella handled Jane like she did.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:25 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

So glad that you are continuing their story.  

Reviewer: anita blake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:51 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

I guess that looking at the date on the last two stories there is no third one on the way. Which may I add is such a shame because your other stories were great and I really enjoyed them so thanks for that and I hope I'm wrong and you update the story soon.

Reviewer: cml38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:23 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Hi, I spent the last week reading both your stories!! I absolutely love them!

I love the relationship you've created between Bella and Edward!

Do you still plan of writing the last sequel of the story?

I really hope so...

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:30 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

I haved love both storys. I can't wait for the next story to come out. Any time from of when that will be?

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 11:27 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

love it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 10:22 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

well trouble in paradise... well at least you made him human he was alittle too perfect!!

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

she's prego!!!

Reviewer: kim67255 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:13 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Again I loved this story.  I can't wait for the next (last?) one.  It's been a while is it almost ready???  Please I must have more.

 

Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D 

The next one will be the last one.  This was only ever supposed to be a one shot... so... it's already went on for too long. LOL!  It's not ready though, but I am working on it.  I'd like to get it finished before college starts, but that probably won't happen. Regardless, I promise that this story will happen. :)

Thanks for reading!! :D :D

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:42 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

ok so forget my last review question.  You have an amazing talent/gift.  Thank you so much for sharing with us.



Author's Response:

I knew you'd find it, so I stayed quiet. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading. I hope to have the next one out as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:12 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Really loving this story, do you have the name for the third segment yet?

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

Too funny with the Rpatz joke !!!

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 11:04 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

Thank you for not going the "misunderstanding route" with Jane that most authors go to.  Bella knew Edward had been a "bad boy" type of guy before she met him.  She was bound to run into his past and thank god he was honest with her.  I hope.  The fact that they talked it out shows their maturity about the whole ordeal.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

This was great! I especially love happy Daddy Edward!

Reviewer: bekah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

wow i wish every guy was lie that. its a wonderful dream world you have set up here and its a nice brae from reality. i love it your writting is do detailed. i love stories that have ending lie this i cany wait  for " the matron swan and the cullen offspring'

Reviewer: toyscowboys Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

If you need a beta, I can help you with it. I have lots of free time on my hands. Im a stay at home wife with nothing really to do 60% of the day.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:44 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Awww, he's got everything he ever wanted.  Very sweet.  Surprised Esme took things so well though.  Don't know where else the story has to go, but I'm trusting that you have it worked out.  I do hope that Bella continues school and doesn't give up, though.

See you when you've got the next chapter of this saga ready for us.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:06 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Loved the story can't wait for the nxt story amazing loved the chapter so sweet

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:32 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

welcome back!!!!!!!!  That was an amazing chapter and I am beyond excited about the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!  I don't have Twitter so I will be checking in to make sure I dont' miss this one.

Again, great series of stories and I can't wait for the next installment.  You are an official franchise now!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:56 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Nice eventful chapter and great story.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:58 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Loved it very much and very excited to see the 3rd part of this update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:20 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

I have loved this story from the begining and i can't wait to read what next for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:29 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

Aww...that was the perfect ending :) I cannot wait to see what happens in the next story :)  I will try my hardest to be patient while waiting for you to finish the entire story (so you can start posting it).  I am happy Alice and Jasper finally told Esme the truth.  Wonderful job, once again!

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

great chapter. cant wait for the next part

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:30 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

yayyyyyyyyyyy! another go 'round with E & B.......a small favour to ask tho.......the Cullen Offspring, can you make him/her realistic....we all know babies dont sleep and the FF versions of E & B babies (all perfect, non crying, always sleeping) makes me want to pull my hair out! Just saying...........

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:21 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises

i loved it this was really good and i can't wait till the next part but i will read it when ever you are ready to post great job

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:45 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

i am loving the story i wish u would update soon!!!!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:16 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

I am so

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:15 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

this is so great i love this story so far and i love the first part to this srry i didnt review previously i was so into the story that i wanted to know what was going to happen next so yeah and this is freaking FUCKTASTIC FUCKAWESOME just.....yeah i love it cant wait to find out what happens next keep up the good work and harry and hermione should have been together and not with their respected weasleys even though ron is FUCKHOT okay i better stop because now im rambling so um yeah buy :)

Reviewer: shammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:59 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

i love your stories so much...your characters ar so amazing and touching...hope for a sequel and an update !! thanks so much

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 4:34 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Great publishing, this had a lot of good twists to it.  I've read alot of them and this is awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 1:54 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

Not to sound like a crazy woman or anything but where is her dad during all of this? With him being the Chief of Police shouldn't he be in on the plan  with catching Phil in the act

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 8:08 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

The last chapters are so full of suspense : I'm so happy I didn't have to wait to read them one after the other !! Beware, too much cliffy frustrated the readers !!!! But it could also give them a reason to come read next chapter... All is a question of proportioning!! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

I don't understand Renee behaviour. How could she not believed her ouwn child? And her attitude with the other mother... it's sad for her : she is loosing her daughter for a man.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:20 PM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

HOT HOT HOT : the lemons of course ! She does as he commands and it's beautiful : domineering but not controlling ! It's a nice way to say this.

CREEPY CRREPY CREEPY : Phil ! It's smells like a huge drama !! ;-)

I want MORE MORE MORE of it : love, sex & drama !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy

I think I can understand why Jasper freeks out & Alice's reaction but I don't understand her blame on Bella. It's unfair.

I don't really like Alice anymore in your story : she always interupt them, says nasty things to Bella or the other, isn't happy for her friend& brother... She acts like an ungrateful brat with everybody!

And where are Emmet & Rosalie? MIA?

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

I love the lemons : you are amazing with them!! Just enough description to please without given into porn. B&E seems to like having a D/s relationship... I think it suits them well. What the hell is Alice problem?????

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

LMAO @ “What? Oh, my God! Rob Pattinson is going to be here?!”

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:04 PM Title: Ch4 - Party Time

I love Bella's outburst..serves those heifers RIGHT! Cant wait to continue reading

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News

ok soooo I really want to know what the deal was with the cake LOL Did his ex Jane work there or something???

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:38 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

Will it not cause any problem the fact that Bella refuses to experiment the real life as a student? Jane was a very nice spicy surprise! I love this sequel !!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

everyone has a past, glad to see bella isn't gonna blow a fit over edward's

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:39 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

it is nice to see that edward is not infallable and perfect all of the time. you had me going in the begining of the chapter that it was b & e getting married. keep up the writting, thank you.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

This was good, but I would have liked for them to have practiced a bit on other occasions and built up to the event. I think Edward needs a little penetration as well, maybe during a BJ?...

Reviewer: mikkirose Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:48 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

I am a litle worried about Royce King being in this story and the fact he has now been embarrased by a woman, Bella. Oh Boy are you setting us up again:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:12 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

well bella proved she can handle herself and does so, edward can be rest assured she does not crave any attention other than his, as for how the ended the end of the evening it's a very personal choice that type of sex depending on who you are with and how much you trust them not to hurt you,  but bella did not seem to enjoy it so much as edward, i wonder if they will again? more please thanks tracy

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:52 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

loved it awesome...cant wait for the nxt 1

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:26 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

That was fuck awesome. So happy to have you back. Loved it.

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:34 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Loved it, as always, but can you help me out here..Why are Bella's thighs bruised? Did I miss some hot spanking or something? I went back a bit but found nothing.(scratches head) I'm sure it's out there in plain sight and I'm being dump..



Author's Response:

If I said thigh's I meant hips.  Not thighs.  I haven't went back and looked to see what I said... LOL! but whatever I said, I meant hips.  :D  Sorry for the confusion. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :D

Reviewer: ksm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

I liked it!  I really enjoyed Edward's POV!

 

Reviewer: warnersl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Good chapter! I was wondering why there hadn't been any updates!

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:32 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

yeah, doesnt matter which way you look at it, its still icky. i'm just saying...........

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:05 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

thanks that was great can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:18 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

I loved the chapter. Although, I kinda missed the possessive Edward at the party. LOL I'm glad Bella showed him she can take care of herself. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:52 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure

good result

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Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions

good shes gone

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:21 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

go bella defend your man

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:47 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

cool

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

nice lunch time for the newlwed cullens

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:05 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure

gotta love Halloween you get to dress up like a whore and no one can really call you out on it cause it Halloween can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift

The Ducati streetfighter is a real nice bike - that was a goog idea for Edwards bithdaypresent; but Bella has had the best present at all. And now she knows what she wants to study at the university.

Go on...

Bussy

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:20 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy

Hey, I can`t write a long review, because I want to go on with the next chapter.

Best spring-wishes

Bussy

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News

Was a little shocked about the Sue and Charlie marriage, but can't wait to see the trouble Leah will cause.

And interested to see how Edward's friends take to Bella at their party.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

oh lord so much going on i must admit i can see each side of the argument but being older and having kids i thinhk i would also be upset like esme of my kids ditched out of her own wedding, it would not have hurt them to stay, but then again i've never had that all consuming love that you describe them as having so yeah still undecided, and now alice is married in vegas no less esme is going to pitch a fit she felt cheated already, as for all that honeymoon sex all i can say is well i dont quite know what to say but they wont ever forget will they!!

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:10 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

I didn't realise how badly Edward suffered when Bella wasn't around, and how significant his alchol stint was. I hope he has completely sobered up now.

Interesting to learn more of Edward's past. These are definitely issues that need to be aired prior to the wedding.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:02 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day

wow what a wedding they love each other so much i'm almost jealous, the notes they passed so sweet, loved this chapter a lot, and yay jasper is back, honeymoon   yes please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:57 AM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

they almost gave in it wiould have been to easy too, i'm glad it all worked out with renee i'm also a fan of the hea, moving swiftly on to the big day

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

So we jump a year ahead and the chemistry seems to have changed.

Bella still seems to be quite young and immature, sticking her tongue out, and just generally showing her age. This is okay except i feel she has some pretty serious grown-up things happening.

Edward has become much more needy, dependent, and just an all round emotional sap. He used to carry this air of confidence  and strength, but i feel like some of that has disappeared, perhaps with Bella's absense throughout the year just gone?

And what is Edward's obsession with kissing Bella's scar? This small gesture really stood out to me this chapter.

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:43 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure

Fucking....lovely!!!!

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure

I really love how Edward kept Bella laughing all day after all the drama, just as she said. He is definitely wanting to get her preggers, but I'd like to hear them have a serious conversation about whether Bella wants to work right out of college, what kind of job/intership, where Edward will be with his career and what kind of situation they want to be in when they start having children. He clearly feels ready now, but they haven't talked about the fact they are both in school and living in an apartment. Edward might have to move somewhere across country for his matching after med school. Even if we don't witness the talk, I'd like to know they thought about it at least as much as having anal sex, which is another topic that requires revisiting...

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:43 AM Title: Ch13 - The Truth

so now renn ee knows, the plan worked even if bella set it in motion early, phil is out of the picture for good (i hope) loved edward reasurances and the bath scene,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:16 AM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

so much could go wrong with this plan, keeping my fingers crossed cause phil well out of order,  invasion of privacy and those photos he should never have see n

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

this wedding is not going to be disaster  free, love the sex fantastic

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:56 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

phil is well creepy, and it's sad that her mum chose wrong, i love that at the moment all is going well in the run up to the wedding that was organised in super fast time, alice is hiding her sadness well,

Reviewer: Lux210 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

For the longest time I couldn't see the point behind marriage. Everyone we knew who was married, was getting divorced. It seemed their relationships were better before that piece of paper came into play. Once it was there it was like hell took over. I didn't want that so I waited and push off getting married. My husband and I had a baby first and only got married when he joined the military. Otherwise Ivy (our daughter) and I wouldn't have been able to be stationed with him. 

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