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Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story and the original 

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

sweet

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Date: 05 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

cute

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

cute

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

cute

Reviewer: Fusselchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Frangipani Dreaming Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

I didn't realise you had written more to BlackBird. So sweet to see Edward with a little baby :)

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

i love it!!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

lol! the story is funny!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

i love it!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

i love it amazing! i love  babies they are so cute

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

i love it!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh charlotte is the first born and this is charlotte lol! sorry anyways love it! 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love it! i wonder wat the baby's name will be!! and i wonder how charlotte will act

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well I for one love this story and Blackbird Fly.

 

It was nice to get a peek into E/B's life after everything they have gone through and Charliebeth..love the name to...is a wondeful little girl.

I hope that you add to this story.

I must say Ang/Jake pairing is great to. I wish it had been that way in the series.

=-)

 

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

Absolutely amazing!! I enjoyed reading..

Fantastic writing....

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Date: 21 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

A fantastic chapter with Charli...

And you're so right in ur AN....

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

Definitely Alice!! I would love to read that one-shot...

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

I didn't find that offensive at all..Just new parents trying to come up with best plan possible and airing out all the options..

As for Rose, this great explained her attitude but still some thoughts toward Bella were harsh and undeserving..

It still that insult she threw at Bella the first time at the party...

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awww..truly cute moments there in the ending...

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Awww...damn this chapter was just amazing..

 

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

The ending was so funny!

The beginning was so beautiful such a moment of happiness...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was a cute story and I think that Will is going to need a better explaination on why he is so mean to Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was a cute story and I think that Will is going to need a better explaination on why he is so mean to Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

That was a funny story! I never went out and TP'd peoples houses but I was the lookout for alot of it. I always stayed behind at my friends house because her parents trusted me to keep all of us out of trouble! Boy were they ever wrong...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am cracking up Poor Jasper I really don't think that she is going to let up on the whole baby thng.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am glad that Rose is offering to help Bella if she has trouble. PPD is scary sometimes I am happy that Rose is willing to help. I had PPD and I had medicine but no other help and it is terrible to have to deal with that alone.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

New babies are amazing. I couldn't believe the things that my son did when he was little and now he amazes me still he is so smart. He is two and knows how to spell his name.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

They are too cute! I think that Bella is right and Alice already has an outfit picked out for that little girl.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aww.... I can't wait until my sister has her baby not that I don't love my son I just want a little girl to shop for.

Reviewer: sweetpea971 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

You're such a wonderful writer, I'm so glad you did not give up!  I hope you repost Wedding Cake Traditions Gone Wrong and its sequel!

Reviewer: wrighthangal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved that U posted a picture. I love that Edward is bonding with his daughter.



Author's Response:

And that is just one of many reasons I want a baby! To wrap it in a swaddling sleep sack and to take pictures of him/her.

I felt like the father/daughter bonding was completely missing in Breaking Dawn.

Reviewer: wrighthangal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.



Author's Response:

Thanks, babe! I had a lot of help from TwiMoms with my information on this!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Every time I see Blackbird Fly posted on one of the FF Sites, I read it. This story hit home for me, it should have been my childhood best friend growing up, marrying, recovering from her eating disorder and starting a family. Instead she died 5 years ago from Anorexia and even though we lost touch, it still hurts. Thank you so much for writing this story and reminding me how hard life can be sometimes and for your story helping me get past my own eating issues and the guilt I some times feel for not doing more to try and help my friend. Thank You so much.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. So often, eating disorders and recovered victims are shown in the spotlight, but the people who succumb to the disease are forgotten. And it kills me inside. I hope her soul is at rest.

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