Great story. I'm wondering if Edward ever gets his finger back. And while most of me doesn't mind the ending with his what about me statement. A part of me is wondering if he's still a Cullen. He's he going to try and get revenge or what's going to happen to him. He's alone or it seems as if he was disowned by everyone idk if that's the case but it seems that way. Is he going to learn and grow. Get a job and eventually find his hea. Or do we just hate him lol. The ending left me conflicted

So, what? Is everyone supposed to be able to read her fuckin' mind? It would be different if nobody asked her what she was thinking about, but Jasper outright asks her, and the selfish shit doesn't say anything.

Proving she has all the control again. 

Everyone jumping through hoops for the Queen B.

I've read this before. Been quite a while.

And I guess it's just me and my poor attitude, but I can't help thinking Bella is just throwing a tantrum.

"My boyfriend dumped me and I'm going to hold my breath until I turn purple."

Because, of course, Bella is the ONLY one EVER who has been dumped by somebody. Bella is the ONLY one who EVER lost someone, and NO ONE feels the pain of loss like Bella. NO ONE has had a broken heart before. ONLY BELLA.

Everyone around her is begging her to react, talk, eat, etc and she refuses. She's got the power, she's got everyone by the balls and she's yanking on them.

Little Queen B (for bitch) getting all the attention, while other folks grovel at her feet.

I guess it kinda pisses me off. Guess I can't sympathize. I didn't get it when I read New Moon, and I guess I still don't get it. Then, I suppose I figured it was Edward was meant to be her one and only, he left, and she fell apart. But I still couldn't really sympathize.

Everybody has to deal with shit, but you still have to get up and do the laundry, feed the kids (if you have them), put the dog out.

Maybe that was Bella's problem—she didn't have anything else in her life at all so she knew she could collapse and it wouldn't make much difference. I mean, Charlie could actually feed himself and do his own laundry.

Knowing this, Bella went into her zombie tantrum. However, she did continue to go to school. Nobody could take care of that for her, so she did that.

I just want to slap her and say, "Get the fuck over yourself, you selfish little asshole. You ARE NOT the center of the universe."

It's what happens in life—you get left. Dogs die, parents die, friends get killed in car crashes.

And this is why I think Bella was so immature. She may have been responsible, until Edward dumped her, but she was still a sheltered kid and didn't have a clue about the crap that happens.

I'm glad Jasper is gettin' tired of her shit.

Well I have read some of your other works. Chocolate Jasper is my all time favorite. Thanks to Heavyinfinity pimpin Saving Bella hard in one of of her story where you were her beta. I just had to see what she was going nuts over.(I'm so glad I did) this is anothor fav off mine. I am also glad I'm late this party, because I to read that finished story all at one time. So, this my review for the entire story. I love it! Thank so much for sharing it. It was fun, sad and many more things that you already know. With that said, all I can say is "Well written,well done" I am a fan.....

sassafrass junction is one of my favorite ones also.i was starting to re-read it when i saw about this story so i went to check it out now i am stuck on it unless it starts to slow down again then i might got back to SJ for a while.

Emmett needs to reel it back some.he may think he is her big bro but he isn't.he needs to realize that Jasper is trying to work out his emotions concerning Bella and she is not helping when she won't talk to him.then she pulls thatbonehead stunt with the knife.

Story is kind of slow,but it is nicethat she isstarting to get better.

For one thing i don'tunderstand why FF pulled this story? i know there are screwed up people in the world that would probably just report the story because they didn't like the pairings people write about.but what kind of admins would pull them just to make them happy?..OK,thatwas my rant,now for my review....I love the Jasper/Bella pairings,i would love to see agood amateur video made of thisor one of the ohter good stories that are out there with these two.don'tknow if you have written this in the story but iwould love to see Jasper,probably with some help from Em take Anal Eddie apart so he couldsuffer like she did after what the child didi to her.

What a truely awsome story!! I've been hooked and have virtually read straight threw only stopping for school runs, and a few hours sleep early ths morning!! Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story, I m so glad I found it over here at twcs, can not understand why it was pulled fom fanfiction site, I sometimes wonder if they truly know what they are doing over there!!

Thanks again for an incredible story and a very sexy jasper!!

I believe you are the only that ihave read that did anything with Rose's Singer. i am wondering if Vicky will be showing up in this story? also how must crap is Jakey going to start?

This story is like pushing water up hill.

:-)

I can't wait for Fuckward to get his self rightious ass beat. i guess next time she sees the family as self rightious as they are they will expect her to just run back into their arms and act like nothing happened.and oh yeah Rose will be a bitch towards Bella.

Totally enjoyed the story.  Didn't take time to review each chapter as I had to know what was going to happen next.  Kind of sad to see it come to an end.  

Absolutely amazing story.

this is amazing. definitely going to read it again. <3 

It's over, It took me two years to read and for two years it's sat open on my computer never closed and it's finally over :( not sure how I feel about that. I don't think I'll ever read/find  another fanfic this engrossing again amazing story.

yeah it had my attention for awhile.

I'm not upset at the way Bella treated Esme.

Bwhahahaa Edward is bubble boy for the day.. awesome!

Oh I'm sure its Jake. maybe sam. 

Bye bye Edward!

probably passed out because of the blood loss. 

I'm sad to see Peter and Charlotte leave!

Too funny! loved the fashion show

What!?

she needs to have responsibility for her actions. 

Hmmm.. What does Victoria want?!

Poor Charlie, he really has no clue.

Carlisle and Esme just need to go. and not come back.. Them being there is going to bring back Edward and that is going to be bad!!

Oh shit!

As always 1 forward 2 back.

Loved Emmett going with her and handling the therapist.  She seems to be getting better but I think its temporary. 2 forward 3 back.

wow. I'm glad she got that out there but then she closed right back up.

Piss off Sam.. he needs to shut it.

For a while it will always be 2 forward 3 back.

Jasper needs to have a bit more patience. I know he's eager but it only pushes him away.

Oy! Such a mess.

What.. The HELL?!!?!

Yeah Edward is a major douche..

yeah I don't think she likes Newton, I think she just doesn't feel worthy of being protected.

That was awesome. I'm so glad they got to scare Mike! Jerk.

One step forward two steps back. 

Meh, I can do with out more wolves.. I'm so happy that he is pulling Bella out of her shell.

I wonder what hes going to do. I don't have any idea. I just can't wait until she is better. I hate that she hurts.

I hope it works. I have a feeling that when Edward comes back it might throw a wrench in to the works. great chapter!!

Amazing story, Shame I only first read this now. But Thankfully I found it and I enjoyed every minute of the journey with the characters. Great job, hun.

I just wanted to let you that I really enjoyed your story.  I think that the personality changes that occurred in Bella were realistic.  I also enjoyed the interaction and friendship between her Rose's character.  

While I really enjoyed the Twilight Saga I always felt that Bella's character was done a disservice by never getting to fully expericne the anger and betrayal from the abandoment of the Cullen family and especially the parental figures Carlise and Esme.  

Thanks again for a great story.

PS - Given the choice I know I would've dumped Edward in a minute (no make that a second!) for Jasper

I must say I fucking love you! This story was fanfuckingtabulous and I honestly teared up because its over. Hope you write more amazing stories!

that was funny