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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

duh carlisle wake up and smell the coffee

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19 Making Plans for Forever

okay i take it back bella is not kick ass giving in to all of his wants...not cool i don't really like him right now

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 18

oh boy the monster in law!!  like this kick ass bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

duh for some one so madly in love you think he would know who she was!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 The End of the Beginning

how sad

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

knew it pregers bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 14 Day Three

okay for big old virgins they sure know a lot!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 13 When It Happens, It Happens

this is not going to turn out well

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 12 A Talk in the Park

not going to last at all

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 The Devil Whispers

well just in time to get her pregers huh... i bet that is what happens

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:54 AM Title: This is Best for Bella

that is what i would have done... i like renee as a good mom for a change

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:50 AM Title: The Hospital

oh boy renee is right and carlisle.... don't have anything nice to say!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:45 AM Title: The Letter

not good i am on renee's side for once..damn butt heads!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:41 AM Title: I Can't Take Anymore

wow just wow!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

told yeah bella...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

this isn't going to end well for you bella he still is going to leave

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:26 AM Title: Birthdays and Goodbyes

poor bells wtf!?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

humm what is going to happen?  is he going to get one of them pregers!  hum...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:17 AM Title: Toddles till Eleven

sweet but i am sure much heartache to come

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:14 AM Title: The Short Version in Part

sounds interesting

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

so sad but i love it

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

that was good but sad and i liked it the end was perfect and im glad that they got there happy ever after finally



Author's Response:

Thank You they did deserve it. I'm sorry the last chapter was a little rushed I just really wanted them to get there HEA and lord knows they have waited long enough!

Thanks for the review and I hope to hear from you again soon. Bad Boys Two will start in January. I don't know if you read the first one or not but if you did I believe you'll enjoy the second as well. Take Care,

-Diane

Reviewer: vampslov Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

This is so good and it's sad to her it's over I just read the story today and didn't see that you had finished it till now but do you thinkyou could finish your other one too, or add a chapter every now and then thanks

~Rose~



Author's Response:

Hi Rose...I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. Are you refering to 'Carlisle Pays While Bella Preys'? I have been sick for over two months and I am just now beginning to feel human again. That story will update most likely tomorrow and then there will be two more chapters before the sequal. But before that happens the sequal to 'Bad Boys will start. I have a good bit of it done already and I am hoping to start posting it in Jan. I hope to hear from you then. Take care and Thank You for reading and taking the time to review as well. ;)

-Diane

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

great end!!

Author's Response:

Thank Ya! ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

Great ending.  Thanks for taking the time to write.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for sticking it out with me!!! Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 Final Chapter

im happy that they got their happy ending even in death! wow that last pov of carlslie was a tear jerker 



Author's Response:

Thank You...I hated letting him go that way but only because I secretly wanted him for myself. :) It did only seem right that they should go together though. Thanks for reading and reviewing for me it means alot!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 16 The End of the Beginning

:)



Author's Response:

Thank You...:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

:)



Author's Response:

Thank You...:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

Good for Carlisle.  His parents suck.  Please update again soon.



Author's Response:

Hey there,

 I think Mother Cullen has started acting a lot more like the father now that he's gone. However, true love conquers all. Even possessive, un-sharing mothers. Take Care, Sweetie. :)

-Diane

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

why can't they ever catch a break with his family. thats terrible.



Author's Response:

I know and Carlisle is once again torn between his loyalty. Bella just doesn't understand that she has the upper hand now. :) Thanks for reviewing!

-Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

I feel so awful for Bella, thinking she had no other choice than to leave the man she loves so much...again.  At least she was strong enough to just walk away this time instead of other alternatives.  I really wished she would have talked to Carlisle about it first though.  I know in his head he knew the situation was bad but I don't think he guessed for one minute HOW bad it was.

Of course, it was partially Carlisle's fault because he felt this insane sense of loyalty to the woman who hated Bella.  If he would have listened to her for one second before he moved them into her house then this could have all been avoided. I am glad that he finally stood up to her in the end and realized that Bella meant more to him and he needed to get her back.  It just hope it's not too late.

Great chapter lady.  I love it. I hope Bella forgives him and they can find someplace to be together without either of their parents getting in the way.  Much love girl - D



Author's Response:

Hi Dee,


Is that coffee I smell? For me? Thank you!

 I can just picture in my mind Bella going to visit her mother, and once she was there, feeling the pressure lift. Some boys/men have a hard time letting go of their son's, for some reason. Or is it the other way around?

 Eventually, it always comes down to the wife having to make her stand, intentional or not. Carlisle is so sensitive that I really believe he thought things would die down. Although it had, however, taken a toll on him as well.

 When a woman starts shutting down a man needs to open his eyes and realize he is losing her. That's a very big red flag! One or two chapters left in this story girl. Then it closes. Thanks for the kind review.

-Diane

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

About damn time he puts his mother in her place.    Cant blame Bella at all.



Author's Response:

Nope, But Mother knew what she was doing. How sad is that? I mean, it happens everyday in households, Right? I know I went through it once and until the man takes off his blinders the mother not only rules your husband, she also rules you.

Take Care and Thank You For taking the time to review for me. :)

-Diane

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

well leave it to carlisle to make bella live with his horrible mother! keep the chapters comming ! 



Author's Response:

Carlisle is such a loyal and trusting soul...I blame the old bitch, mostly. However, Carlisle has to take his fair share of the blame here. It's not like he's a teen anymore under their rule.

There will only be one or two more chapters to this, and I think it will be finished. :(

Take Care and I hope to hear from you again soon.

 

-Diane

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 Mother

his mother is a bitch



Author's Response:

A very selfish bitch! :)

-Diane

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 19 Making Plans for Forever

hmmm will he stand up to mama bear this time in regards to bella??



Author's Response:

I think he may end up having to if he wants a future with his wife. :)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19 Making Plans for Forever

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank You. It had been so long since I had posted that I was surprised I had so many people that even remembered it. ;) Loved getting the review from ya.

-Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 Making Plans for Forever

Awww honey, you know I love you too.

I so loved this chapter.  I'm glad that Bella and Carlisle are thinking things through before they get married.  Most people don't think about the most basic things when it comes to merging their lives together. 

I kind of feel sorry for Bella though.  She loves Carlisle so much that she would do anything for him.  He feels such an obligation to his mother that it blinds him a little to the extreme discomfort Bella feels at living with her.  He says he's seen a change in her but that's only because Bella wasn't around and Carlisle has been alone all these years.  He's so smart but, in relationships, he's just as unobservant as any man.

I love this girl. These two need to be together and happy but I'm ready for some bumps in the road when it comes to Carlisle's mother.  Can't wait for the next update.  D



Author's Response:

Hi D.

 I love hearing what you really think in your reviews. It's awesome to know you still pay such close attention to the details. I am sure you are right in assuming that Carlisle's mom will be a bump on their road to happiness.

Thanks for filling up my coffee cups.

-Diane

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 Making Plans for Forever

well im happy they are working on eveything and getting married they diserve it a lot ! 



Author's Response:

Hi there,

 Yes, they are getting there and they are close to their HEA. They just have to deal with mother first...Poor Bella.

-Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think it is so cute how they both seem to revert back into two insecure teenagers again.  It's almost like they are picking up exactly where they left off.  I'm so happy that they are still so in love with each other that they immediately know that they want to get married.  I'm also glad they are just going to go out and do it without telling anyone.  Even through they are in their late twenties, I wonder if Renee or Carlisle's mother will still have something to say about it.  They just need to stay the hell out of it.

It's going to be interesting to see them merge their lives together.  It's hard to bring two people together that have their own way of doing things.  I'm ready for the first fight over whether you squeeze the middle or the end of the tube of toothpaste, or the classic argument for the toilet seat being up or down.  Come on you know that can be a whole chapter by itself.

They also have jobs that they have to think of and, of course, the living arrangements are going to be interesting.  I don't blame Bella one bit for not wanting to live with his mother.  Hopefully they can find somewhere close because he still wants to be the good son and not leave his mother alone.

Loved this as always.  Hopefully in the next chapter we'll get to see a wedding.  YAY!!! I can't wait.  Oh and thanks for the rec for my stuff. Love ya tons...D



Author's Response:

You write good stuff so of course I am going to mention it.

It's going to be a job to get everything worked out for Bella and Carlisle in the next few days. There are a lot of things to consider. They both hold very important jobs and it will be hard on them. They are adults now and Rene would most likely have something negative to say. This way it doesn't matter what anyone thinks. There's no way of stopping them, it's their destiny.

I do have a scene in another story out-lined for an arguement over toilet paper. Yes we all have those silly little arguements. They aren't funny until you think about it later on. It doesn't bother me half as much when the lid isn't put back on as it does whenever the tooth brush itself isn't rinsed out properly and you can see its there hanging onto the bottom. Then, omg, they use it the next day, Germs and ewwwwww. Okay, rant over...lol.

Thanks for the review along with the coffee, girl. Love Ya back, Diane

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank You! :) Diane

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

well i wouldnt want to live with her either! cant wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I wouldn't either...thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

I love how Bella was able to tease him without blurting out that she knew who he was.  I hope they can come together.  They have been apart for so long that now they have to learn so much about each other.  I really do hope Carlisle tells Bella about the letters he tried to send to her.  She has to know that he didn't just forget about her all together when they parted.

Great chapter.  Loved the reconnection between these two.  Can't wait to read the next one. Much love...D

 



Author's Response:

Thank You mizzdee. I liked how she could  tease him as well. I bet she was about to explode inside whenever she read his name tag. I thought it was funny when she said she did a drive by...lol, listen at me laughing at my own jokes. I think most people do that at least once in their lifetime. Um, the drive by...although I bet they laugh at their own jokes as well...hehehe. Okay time for me to shut up now.

I hope she can find some clothes so they can go out to get pancakes...lol. But at least I got my coffee. ;)

Much Love back to you...Diane.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

Renee the biatch,



Author's Response:

:) Yes, but even the Carlisle and Bella suspected she had done something, and they were right!

Thanks for taking the time to review sweety....Diane

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

love it and want more



Author's Response:

And you'll get it. ;)

Reviewer: spcp18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

AMAZING THIS STORY JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER WITH EVERY CHAPTER PLEASE CONTINUE......AND HER JOKING WAS SO FUNNY...



Author's Response:

Thank You so much. I liked that she was teasing him as well. I can only imagine the butterflies in her stomach, whenever she read his name tag. :)  I appreciate the review so much. Take Care and I hope to hear from you again next chapter.

-Diane

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 17 We Meet Again

im happy they found each other again! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I think they are an adorable couple! :) Thanks for reviewing for me, Diane.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

whoops



Author's Response:

:) I know I hate when that happens.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

well cant wait till th next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank You for taking the time to review this story....means alot. :)  Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

This is. perfect.  You captured the tenderness, anxiety, nervousness, awkwardness and everything else that comes with the first time for both of them.  I glad you didn't having them go at it for hours like some writers do because we all know that the first time just doesn't happen that way.  Thanks for keeping it real.

With that ending, I'm worried for them.  I can picture the look on his face when he saw the broken condom.  He wanted to be so careful so they didn't have anything to worry about.  Now, they're going to do nothing but worry.  She's leaving soon and this is going to weigh heavy on their minds during their final week together.  DAMN I still hate their parents for making them go through this.  If they could have just left them alone and figure their relationship out on their own they wouldn't be in this mess. 

Okay rant over.  Awesome job.  I'll be holding my breath to see what they both have to say about this new situation.  I hope Bella doesn't blame him because he's going to do enough of that on his own.  Love ya girl. Update soon...D



Author's Response:

God, you sure know how to make me feel good...I just wrote that today and edited and all that. So I really appreciate the encouragement from you. I was thinking the same thing about the first time. It wasn't a great time. Especially when your young and clumsy. You just have that general idea and the love you feel for each other.

I love ya to and anyone out there reading this you should go and read Mizzdee's stories, she's a wonderful writer.

Love the coffee, thanks.

 

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 The First Time isn't always the Best Time

oh snap!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You, I guess a snap is good cause I got coffee, right. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 14 Day Three

poor things.  parents are so stupid sometimes.



Author's Response:

That's very true, I have always encouraged my boy's to love. However, I did grow up a little differently, my great-grandmother raised me, and she was strict :) Later, Lady.

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 14 Day Three

Well they're getting closer.  I know they both want to be married and have children someday. I'm glad they're using their heads though.  They know that now is definitely not the the right time.  It makes me happy to know that they are being so mature and responsible about everything.

I can only imagine what their parents would do to them if Bella ended up pregnant.  I would put money on it that Rene would try to talk her into putting the baby up for adoption and never telling Carlisle anything about it because she wouldn't find out until they were no longer allowed to see each other.

Alright lady...don't worry. You are better at writing these scenes than you think you are. This was pretty good.  Hopefully in the next chapter they will finally get there.  Can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thank you Mizzdee for encouraging me on this one. I am having a hard time getting back into this story. I can't seem to keep my mind off of the other two I'm writing and sadly this one suffers. I continue with it though for the simple reason that the readers who have picked it up are faithful to it. I even had one contact me and ask for the update. Please kick me if I ever try three stories at once again, please!!!...lol.

I swear you are one of my favorite reviewers, and I cannot  thank you enough!  :)

Coffee included, :) yay!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 13 When It Happens, It Happens

aww  poor kids on time crunch



Author's Response:

Yep, like anything ever comes easily for them at this time in their lives. Thanks for reviewing for me :) Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 A Talk in the Park

I'm so glad Carlisle and Bella had enough time together to talk over some of the awful things they both went through during their separation.  We already heard what Bella was going through but to hear, in detail, what Carlisle went through and to hear him say that he was losing his faith because of it was heartbreaking.  I know what it's like to lose faith for a while and the desolation and lonliness can be crushing.

It was beautiful to hear them declare their love and future intentions to be married with children.  I just have a feeling that the separation they will go through at the end of the two weeks will rip both their hearts out one more time if Renee is true to her word and doesn't let Carlisle speak to Bella.

Oh and I have to give Charlie his due as he seems to be the only sane one in this situation.  I love how he is the only one willing to support them because it will make his daughter happy.  I love him.

Definitely another great chapter. I love your stories. They are the ones I drop everything to read...yes even if I'm at work. If, at any point I don't review it means RL is kicking my butt and my own story is consuming my mind.  Now if I could get you to stop making me cry then we'll be all good.  YOU ROCK!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You for paying such close attention to details...hearing that you drop everything to read my stories has truthfully made my last 24 hours. I have been so sick over the past week, and I really pushed myself all day to get all three stories updated. Knowing you and people like you care makes the effort very worth it to me.

I will worry about their separation in two weeks as well. I'm not really sure which direction to write it in-but I guess I'll get it all figured out soon enough.

I love Charlie to, I think he's a great character, and I love the man who plays him on the big screen. I think he does an awesome job.

I promise not to make you cry for at least a week and a half, so I hope we're good there. I think you ROCK as well. Thanks for everything, Diane :)

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12 A Talk in the Park

woo hoo on them kissing



Author's Response:

Hi Ladykt....Yeah, lucky girl....He's so sexy.... I would certainly kiss him and stuff and stuff :) ....Diane

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 A Talk in the Park

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi Ellaryne, I'm glad you love it and want more. It encourages me to know and inspires me to write more, Thank You, Diane.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 11 The Devil Whispers

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank You Edward, :)   Diane

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 The Devil Whispers

This chapter made me cry I have no idea why but it did. Its sweet yet you can feel the yearning that Carlisle feels. I hope that made since......

Oh BTW good job I absolutely love this story :)



Author's Response:

:) nothing wrong with a few tears sweety, we all do it sometimes while readng.(or at least I do.) I think us woman are just emotional creatures. I'm very glad you Love the story and thanks for the coffee cups....Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 11 The Devil Whispers

Another great chapter.  I spent my time reading this one a couple of times and I'm finding myself ready to strangle Carlisle's mother.  I just have to know...WHY NOW?? She claims that she doesn't want to see him hurt but what about all the time leading up to this.  According to his sister, he has been in absolute pain since this started and his mom did nothing to help. Now she's all concerned because Bella is being taken away for good. If she was able to get this done this fast, why couldn't she have done something before?

Okay now I'm going to ask...please, please don't turn Carlisle into one of "those guys". Now that he has some small amount of time with Bella give them the chance to be together.  Don't send him off to be with as many women as possible once his time with Bella is over and he can no longer be with the girl he loves.

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

God I love you....I think it's so great that you like this story enough to be forth right and say what your thinking. Don't worry, Carlisle isn't going to become a man whore. He's just mad at God and thinks that yelling and making threats will get his attention. Carlisle's mother will stand behind her husband because she feels it's her duty as his wife. However, any mother who has ever heard a cry come from deep within' their child is going to do something, I would hope anyhow. She's not really threatened by two weeks of time. She knows Bella will be leaving after that.

If you remember in the last chapter after Carlisle's breakdown she was on her knee's in front of him wanting to give comfort. I know it was too little and too late though. She honestly thinks that they are protecting Carlisle's soul. I don't know how much you know about certain religions. But the one I grew up knowing was very black and white with not much in between. The husband calls the shot's and is accountable for his family and their souls.

Thanks for reading and I love it when you review as well. I'm always happy to get coffee as well. PLEASE stay in touch, Diane

 

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:45 PM Title: This is Best for Bella

you're a great writer and i love your stories.



Author's Response:

:) Now you're going to give me the big head.....I love it....Thank you for the encouragement and for taking your time to read and review. Hope to hear from you soon....Diane

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:31 PM Title: This is Best for Bella

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank You, I love that you always take the time to comment, means alot to me. ..... have a good day, Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:30 PM Title: This is Best for Bella

:-( this was heart breaking

Author's Response:

Yep...I felt bad for even making him cry... I love me some Carlisle.....thanks for the coffee, Diane

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:07 AM Title: This is Best for Bella

more right now



Author's Response:

Lol, I would but I'm still working on it....Thanks ellaryne

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:22 PM Title: This is Best for Bella

wow that was a deep chapter! cant wait till he next one



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it....Thanks for taking the time to read and review it.....Diane

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:00 PM Title: This is Best for Bella

np but Carlisles father needs to man up some that is for sure.



Author's Response:

He only seems to man up when it comes to his children....Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:35 PM Title: The Hospital

Cant blame Renee for being protective though.



Author's Response:

Any good mother would be...I agree....Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:03 PM Title: The Hospital

Why can't parents stay out of things.  Bella and Carlisle would be happy now if their parents didn't get involved...okay well his parents mostly.  So what if he wanted to be a doctor instead of a pastor.  I can think of worse things.  I really hope they get to spend time together before Bella is taken away.  Carlisle loves her and she needs to know that before she leaves.  Great chapter.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the coffee cups...I love those and reviews. Parents can certainly make their children suffer and say it's for their own good. When in truth, it seems to be for the parent's wants and dreams for their kids. I will update on Tuesday, hope to hear from you then.....Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 8:55 PM Title: The Hospital

awww!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks !

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:47 AM Title: The Letter

Wow

Author's Response:

Wow works for me...lol....thanks for the coffee...Diane

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:34 AM Title: The Letter

poor B.   Hope his mom and dad realize what arseholes they are.



Author's Response:

Well, I think mom might be getting a clue. Thanks for the review lady....Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:53 PM Title: The Letter

WOW...this is amazing.  I just found this story and it is great.  This story hit a little too close to home for me. I've been in that kind of depression before and this made me cry.  I have to remember not to read it at work after this. 

I really hope the two of them can get back together. I really can't wait for more.  Great story...you rock.



Author's Response:

Well thank you mizzdee....I have been there and done that as well. I hold back alot of the emotions though because I don't want to relieve to much of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing the story. I love the coffee cups....thanks for that as well....Diane

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: The Letter

So will he stand up to his parents???? :)



Author's Response:

They still have a few things to go through first....Diane

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 12:49 PM Title: The Letter

wow thats a deep chapter! 



Author's Response:

Yep lots of hurt in this story...takes a good while before things get better......Diane

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:51 AM Title: I Can't Take Anymore

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:33 PM Title: I Can't Take Anymore

wow that was a deep chapter ! cant wait t osee what happens next 



Author's Response:

Get ready for the emotional roller coaster to come for the next couple of chapters....thanks for R&R' ing...Diane

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: I Can't Take Anymore

Carlisle parents are dueche

Author's Response:

Yeah, but their trying to save their children's souls....Diane

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:53 PM Title: I Can't Take Anymore

well, that was a wierd turn of events! Bella commiting suicide....... I never saw that coming? well what happens next???



Author's Response:

Well Bella had him as a constant in her life for years. Now for months he's been like a ghost other then when she provokes him. Then he isn't even himself anymore...he's angry. Why wouldn't he be though? he's hurting as well and is losing her. She's been on an emotional roller coaster and is in a depressed stage. Sometimes people do things that they later regret later. We'll hear from Carlisle soon though. Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review for me....Diane

Reviewer: FutureMrsBCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Cant wait 4 mre love it



Author's Response:

Thank You I love reviews, Diane

Reviewer: Oaky Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

can't wait for more! i like a modern Carlisle, he sounds dreamy



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more !!! Diane

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

I want more! I definitely want to see Bella fight for Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Oh you will. Believe me...lol.   Diane

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:43 AM Title: Birthdays and Goodbyes

great chapter. plz continue soon



Author's Response:

I have this story written a good bit ahead so I will put another one out soon.... Thanks, Diane

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