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Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:21 PM Title: Paper Cut Part III

Superb!  Not only did you give us the event itself from within Jasper's mind, but the emotional upheaval that they have gone through in the past.  In a weird way, Alice's reactions through the years and Jasper's feelings about them remind me of my own childhood.  My mother didn't believe in hitting me.  But when I saw just how disappointed she was in me at various times for various things, it was like being stabbed, shot and hung....all at once.  Her disappointment was worse than any physical injury that anyone could have inflicted!  That's Jasper with Alice.  I'm looking forward to Part 4.  I just hope someone remembers to tell Jasper that Bella always understood and never blamed him.  Insome ways, I think that very reaction may have helped him more than anything anyone's said or done before.  Great stuff!  This story is "Mind candy"!

Reviewer: dr3 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Jasper...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

The depth of view in this piece is marvelous!  It makes me feel like I'm in my own head listening to my thought sand views on all kinds of things.  Bravo!  Not easily done...at least not doe WELL.  Kudos!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Paper Cut - Part I

I've always wanted to experiience Bella's birthday through Jasper's eyes!  Knowing Jasper, he won't treat himself well!  I can't wait for your update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, that was so sweet of you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - I am hard at work on part III!

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