Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
i am crying and confused
Date: 28 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it... But wait a second... Did you really kill Jake?! Think I need to go cry now. Good cliff hanger ending!
Author's Response:
I can't tell you that! all will be revealed in the sequel :) thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you've enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
well im not sure that was very nice of you leaving bella like that with out us know if the venom was going to be enough to fix her
but you did give it away telling that you are writing a second story so i guess i can forgive you
although that wasnt the only loose end you left so i guess ill have to keep reading see you in the new year
thanks for your time and effort in writing this story
Diane
Author's Response:
thanks for all your wonderful reviews :D I'm glad you enjoyed it and all those loose ends will be fixed come the sequel :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
i saw the forshoding for this but wasnt sure if you you gonna follow throgh although victoria is in for a surprise messing with your bella is death the cullen may have issues killing but the wolves wont even have to think about it
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
well jake acually took that better than i expected
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
well this is it can edward keep it together long enough to make bella understand his pov even if it is warped
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
so bella thinking about the change but how is she gonna convince jake that this is a good thing
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
are you going to create a sequel? how did Edward know that he needed to go back to Bella instead of continuing on with Victoria's goose chase?
What happened to Victoria and Laurent? Did the Cullens kill them?
there are too many open things here....
Author's Response:
that's why there's going to be a sequel :)
thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope to see you back some time in December for the sequel :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
well that's one way to get her to change, i'm glad you are doing a sequel - looking forward to reading that.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D I'm glad you liked it
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
well i guess edward isnt the only one feeling new things
now i wonder will something happen for her to need to be chaned or will she ask him for it cause im pretty sure edward doesnt have it in him to ask her
Diane
Author's Response:
thanks for all your reviews :D I can't wait to hear what you think of the rest :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
ah so sweet im surprised edward didnt slip and just ask her to be his mate he was so nervous
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
its so sad that shes so close to the end
Diane
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
im glad you explain jake reaction cause that was to be my next question i was thinking it was maybe partily to do with the fact that he wasnt a kid here but a 34 year old man and also he doesnt have the same feelings of jelousy driving him to be an idiot
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
well edward almost dodged a bullet on that one until mother nature deceide to out him
i thought bella hadnt gone to town in like 20 or 30 years had her father been bring jessica to the house that hole time although as a way to bring edward and bella closer it was a great scene it will just enfore the need for him to befriend her cause the rest of the town well are asses
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
well i guess age give bella guts
i was thinking that edward would lose most of his normal argument against turning bell in this story she has lived 60 some year so not nieve she cant have children so no problem there she realy has no one to leave behind jakes not aging anyway rene has already left and is dying so other than the blood drinking monster thing hes kinda screwed if she asks oh and in 10 more years or so she will be senile and dying
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
its funny to hear bella talk like an old lady
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
your edward kinda weird he seems more emo and angry than most and very resentful of carlise then maybe your carlise is more controling and ignorant than most maybe we will see
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
its not bad enough it seems edward cant read bella mind but now he finds out shes almost his age
i was wondering about bella and jake it seemed at some piont bella indicated that jake hasnt told her he is a shifter she just assumes because of the age thing but she knew about billys dad so why woulnt jake be open about it and then jake tells the cullens she knows so im a bit confused weather jake being a shifter is something they are open about of not
Diane
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
the End????? but vikki's still alive?
Author's Response:
lol,it's the end for now
there'll be a sequel some time in december/january time :) thanks so reading and reviewing
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
interesting twist on the mate thing
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
hnnn wonder what the history will be this time
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D I'm glad you're intrigued lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nice chapter!
And your banner looks beautiful.
Author's Response:
thanks so much :D I'm just about to post the next one lol
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
short but sweet/
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Hope Jake will come around, soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for reading and reviewing :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, the next one should be up in the coming week hopefully :)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
good & neat @ the same time
Author's Response:
thank you very much for your short but sweet review :)
the next chapter should be up soon promise :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
love the story, its such an interesting (and great) idea!! i mean they always say bella was an 'old soul' in the books, but this is just perfect for edward. they really are old souls in young bodies getting to both experience being young together.
Author's Response:
Yeah they are :D thanks for taking the time to read and review my story, I'm really glad you like it.
If you haven't already you should watch The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, it's a lovely story but quite sad, and was the inspiration for this story :)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is strange, the way Edward is looking at this, it's not just taking her humanity because he wants her to live a long happy life, to have a family etc..she's dieing, has only a few years left..you'd think Edward would jump on board with this one.
Sorry I don't understand..
Author's Response:
it doesn;t take him long. in canon he's hung up on her soul remember? thats pretty much all it is, plus he doesn't want to damn her to his existence. Like in the book.
Thanks for reading + reviewing
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
In this case, she is dying.....
Author's Response:
yup :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Found the story yesterday and have to say interesting. This whole aging backwards is a nice twist to the original Twilight plot, there Bella was described as extreme mature for her age, whereas you have a real old woman in a young body.
Hope Edward will finally man up and accept what he and Bella both want.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm working on the next chapter xD.
You should watch The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, in case you haven't. It's what the inspiration for this story was, and it's such a lovely film :)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
idiot for not changing her, esp if she is dying anyway
Author's Response:
Patience Kid. Got to remember how reluctant he was in Twilight when she had her whole life ahead of her. Now she doesn't quite have that, but he still doesn't want to take her soul away. Give it time :). There's only about 3-4 chapters left now anyway.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Did you know there is no chapter here?
Author's Response:
shit really?!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hi again..ok, this is where I picked it up...the 'Alice Ring me bit' chapter 6
I wasn't sure what to do, and I was surprised that Alice hadn't rang me to let me know what was going to happen, but I couldn't blame this on Alice. I wasn't sure whether or not to tell her the truth, but before I had a chance to decide she was sitting herself next to me and looking at me expectantly
Author's Response:
OH! Bugger, see I thought I took this out and swapped it for 'Alice hadn't warned me' 'cause yeah the Cullens have tons of money but where's he gunna keep a phone lol
Cheers for pointing it out :D
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Now he just has to ask her, right?
Author's Response:
What's he asking her? =P
Cheers for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm loving this! Although I don't know how Alice could ring Edward in 1986, his portable phone would be much too large to carry around in his pocket..:) Alas, I did enjoy the Brad Pitt movie a lot so am enjoying this, it actually makes more sence then Twilight, considering their age difference, I am a mother of a formally 17 year old girl, so what a 100+ year old Vampire would see in her..I just dunno..;)
Author's Response:
This is what I thought when writing it, technically there's only like a 20 year age gap
AND OMG! I thought I'd taken that bit out! When did I have Alice call him? I was sure I didn't include that, purely because of the beastness of his phone if he had one xD
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! Three more chapiters today! You're spoiling us but I can't really complain, lol. The more I read, the happier I am... thanks to you.
Oh, and I saw you stoped this friendship with hot kisses between these two. Denial is not good for health, that's for sure.
Author's Response:
Of course I stopped the friendship thing, but come on they'd only known each other like a week before then. My Bella's a sensible woman you know, been around for sixty years, she's not the type to just fall in love with someone :)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
lol jake is funny
Author's Response:
Haha, cheers for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Mm.. Rosalie's thoughts are very shocking. You're right, stop gaping Eddy!! lol. And I hope they'll stop with the frienship thing very soon. They're so exasperating !!!
Good chapiter, thank you. I'm waiting for next update.
Author's Response:
I responding to all of your reviews now :)
First of all thank you so much for reading and reviewing I have 3 more chapters to post before I'm caught up with where I am on fanfiction.net, so it's great re-reading this, trying to work out what you're commenting on lol.
Have you seen The Curious Case of Benjamin Button? If not I suggest you watch it, it's an amazing film, truly, it makes me cry every time, but it's lovely. If not, I suggest you wiki it just to see what that film/story is about and then you'll have more of an idea what my stories about :)
OF COURSE Rosalie is nice! I hate it when she's all horrible, I just want her to be realistic, and it's not often in my stories that she's mean in my stories.
Jake is more mature in this story (he is 34 after all) but he's still very protective of his 'Aunt' Bella, so I think he would want her to be happy, even if that is with a bloodsucker, but he would still be wary; after all he is still a wolf.
I think it's the next chapter that you get your wish with the friendship lol, which I'm gunna post right after I've sent this review reply (and I've washed the horrible chlorine smell off of me xD)
Follow me on twitter! @missrebecca_12, I usually complain about my writing and post word counts on there, so you can see how I'm going with writing :)
Thanks again so, so much for taking the time to read and review to my little story :)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ahh! Rosalie was nice and she smiled. what a surprise! I wouldn't have think she'll be like this but hey! it's your story lol.
And I forgot to tell you, Jacob was really kind whith Edward in the previous chapiters and that's not normal. He's a leech for god's sake!!! When Jake is nice it's hard to hate him, lol (of course I'm team Edward).
I also wanted to know if you'll write a little more about the ill fated meeting with James in the next chapiters, I suppose it was him, right?
Keep writing, I love it.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah it'll be interesting, I'm sure. I can't wait to see her with everyone, especially Rosalie (I adore her!).
See you.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like it when he sparks! But there are no comment about Jessica.
Good job.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
You can say that again, haha!!!
Poor Edward, who should open his eyes. "Friends" right...
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Mmm... I don't think it's a very good idea if he eats with her.
But she's a really strange woman (I must say grandma).
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah, he want to get to know Bella much more. And I want to know more about your story, lol (Edward and I, we're the same!). I really wonder what is Bella exactly? I hope your next chapters will tell me the answer. I'm so curious I can't wait.
By the way, I guess you know that I like your story ;) ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
:) grate story. update soon please.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my story :), even if it was just with a smiley face; it still means the world :)
I have 3 more chapters which I'll probably post today, then I'll be caught up with the chapter line on fanfiction.net :)