Date: 11 Nov 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1-BPOV
it sucks you never finished the original as you promised at least you could have wrapped up up in an epilogue instead we get these silly snippets
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
Honestly. I read this and cried with laughter..... what a ZOO!
you need to write more. keep laughter going. It makes it all more real.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6-The Talk (EPOV)
ewwwww
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Talk (EPOV)
LMAO! I can not believe Charlie liked that pie!
I loved when he mentioned Emmett's mew business. Very funny!
I am glad that Charlie is accepting of Edward in Bella's life. That must have been hard for him.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Talk (EPOV)
Nice one ladyrip!! I WANT ESME'S MINCEMEAT PIE RECEPIE?!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5-Peachylingus (EPOV)
I really, really like Tanya in this story. She is so sweet the way she was there to encourage Edward when he was all frustrated.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
OMG! That has to be one of the funniest chapters I have ever read. I laughed out loud at least a dozen times.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 3-Talk Dirty to Me (EPOV)
Holy hell! He didn't hold anything back! I love dirty talking Edward!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2-BPOV II
The last part here was beautiful. I am glad that Bella is being faithful to Edward.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1-BPOV
I love the diary excerpts.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
OMG!! I have never laughed so hard!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad it had you giggling. If you think this story was funny enough to be Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards, you can now vote.
The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
lol that was hilarious
Author's Response:
Was it hilarious enough to win Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards? LOL. If so, please, please go and vote now.
The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
OMG Emmett is a riot!!!! LOL funny.
Author's Response:
Sammy: Was it funny enough to win Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards, you think? If you want, you can now vote.
The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.
ps--Chapter 44 was just posted
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
That was very, very funny. You are a great writer
Author's Response:
Sleepy; Thank you so much? Would you be interested in voting this story for Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards?
The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.
ps--Chapter 44 was just posted.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 4-What Carlisle Saw (CPOV)
What a unique holiday.
I would go wash my brain with bleach if I learned of my parents sex life.
Hillarious
Author's Response:
Lisa; Was it hilarious enough to win Best Comedy at the Vampire Awards? If you want to vote for it, voting is now open.
The link is: http(colon)//twificpics(dot)com(slash)vampawards(slash)?page_id=198.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. PS-Chapter 44 was just posted.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3-Talk Dirty to Me (EPOV)
I wish I can find someone as passionate as Edwards, I dream that kind of interact
Love you, keep writing, you bring my dreams alive
Date: 03 Jul 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 3-Talk Dirty to Me (EPOV)
Great Outtake!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 3-Talk Dirty to Me (EPOV)
lol on his original words to carlisle.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 2-BPOV II
Mmm, beautiful. :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1-BPOV
Loved her thoughts
Author's Response:
I hope you were able to guess some of her thoughts through Edward's descriptions. But then again, we're getting E's POV in the main story and his vision is skewed by his self loathing and old fashion values.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1-BPOV
lol its good to see her side ^.^
Author's Response:
Thanks Sweet.