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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:54 PM Title: Journey

Bravo, I loved it!! Way to go! Really creative with the way that Carlisle got the island, too. And also that Esme is the one who come up with the Cullen Coat of Arms.

Congratulations on a great story!! Thank you for sharing it, it was a pleasure to read. :)  I'll definitely check out the 'Through Their Eyes' series! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  You have been a wonderful reviewer and supporter of this story and I deeply appreciate that.  Through Their Eyes is very emotional -- but all end happy -- except Esme's New Moon.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:13 AM Title: Journey

Such a lovely ending



Author's Response:

So happy it left you satisfied.  I'm a sucker for a happily ever after ending....

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:27 AM Title: Honeymoon, Part II

Lusciously erotic and thoroughly intoxicating!  Esme's realization that her new body could be a plus in the love and sex department could also have a bit to do with the fact that Carlisle is NO Charles.  As you note, he is usually refined and controlled; the idea of being able to make him com undone must be outrageously erotic!  Lovely chapter, and yet of so sexy!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:41 AM Title: Honeymoon, Part II

Wow, that was really amazing!! Great job!

I loved reading about the animalistic, needy side of Carlisle that Esme experienced in the tub. So sexy! ;) I loved reading her description of the night and then the next morning. Great writing! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:00 PM Title: Honeymoon, Part II

They are ummm - frisky...... Wow who would have thought.



Author's Response:

It took me a while to get there with C&E (friskiness), but they are 23 and 26 yrs old!!  And I think they have a fun, classic, romantic physical love -- I hope that came through!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:19 PM Title: Honeymoon, Part I

Damn!  That was nothing short of glorious!  They are a matched set.  Esme's passion and forwardness to Carlisle's new found desire and gentility.  I can't wait for a very yummy honeymoon part 2!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I just LOVE C&E.  I was thinking of posting an AU/AH one-shot I wrote about them with another author -- it's cute and playful -- Esme's a real minx too!  Part II is ready!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:54 AM Title: Honeymoon, Part I

They are so adorable! So SWEEET....

This first half of the honeymoon was great! Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:59 PM Title: Honeymoon, Part I

What a honeymoon.  :)



Author's Response:

I do hope you approve!  Part II is fun too!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Lovely!  And the vows are perfection!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  Honeymoon is up and ready for  you!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:42 PM Title: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Heh, heh!! THank goodness they're not like RoseXEmmet - or poor Eddie would probably have had an aenyurysm from their though!! :-P



Author's Response:

Well that is an idea for a juicy one shot!  Oh, the chasteness we have left behind...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:04 PM Title: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Wow, that was amazing!! Bravo! Great wedding! I loved the vows, they were so perfect!

Esme and Edward sharing that moment together at the piano was cute, too. :)

What's Edward going to do while they're on their honeymoon? Can't wait to find out where they're going, too!



Author's Response:

Thank you for being such a kind and consistent reviewer.  I just loved this chapter.  Edward has been so fun to write without all his angst!!  Hope you enjoy the honeymoon -- it's got a bit of lemon zest.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 7:10 AM Title: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Nice



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:48 PM Title: Flowers and Forever

HAH!! Can you say BUSTED!? Good work - more please?!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:58 AM Title: A Leap of Faith

Gotta love that Carlisle!  His heart may not be beating, but it's strong and limitless!



Author's Response:

Lord knows, I do love Carlisle.  I have a series of o/s I have been writing exclusively from C&E POV and plan to post those here at the end of this story as a series of future outtakes (is there such a thing as future outtakes?) and think you might enjoy them  -- you will get some different sides of C&E in those.

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:17 PM Title: The Dance

beautiful and just as SM would have them be. I think you did a great job of bringing ou details to the gentle, sensual, strong characters that Esme and Carlisle are.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Sorry no chapter posted on Friday -- RL got the best of me -- but the story is really moving along quickly and I promise a chapter this Friday.

Reviewer: RayOfHope Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:24 AM Title: A Leap of Faith

Carlisle is so sweet!And I love the inscription for Benjamin!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  It was one of my fave chapters, but one of the saddest at the same time.  Hope you enjoy the rest --

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:58 AM Title: A Leap of Faith

What a beautiful chapter. So touching he did that for Benjamin. For Esme.

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your continued reading and reviewing of this story!  We see the Carlisle we love in this chapter -- but the flaws we don't often see are there too.  Again, thank you!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 8:22 PM Title: A Leap of Faith

UGH!! Poor fools!! :-( If you ask me, this is sort of like the whole EdwardXBella drama in NM!! You know - "We have to leave - NOW!!"? Good update!! :-P



Author's Response:

Oh, I know the drama has echos of B&E, I actually meant it that way so we see, hey, C&E had it tough too -- that's why they get to dole out the advice, etc.  The speak from experience!  Hey, I remembered your name from a review you gave on another story, so I checked out your profile here.  I hear you on the LU -- I got targeted by one of their minions -- ended up on some to-be-banned list for supposed plagarism -- but get this I got on the list because a woman she hates liked my story -- kind of a revenge thing!  So I guess they are not limited to just policing ratings on ffn -- I guess they are willing to pounce on anything they wish.  Thanks for reading this story!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:29 PM Title: Homecoming

I love how she rained on that nurse's parade! LOL! Scared her to death I'm sure! ROFL!

And yes, Halo fits in quite nicely, I agree. Great chapter!

And I like how Edward told Carlisle that his feelings for Esme was love, and that he'd rather stay a bachelor! LOL! He certainly didn't realize what he was saying or how long he would be single.

Funny Carlisle thought Esme could have been an uncontrollable murderer roaming free, I'd like to read what he thought of Rosalie's rampage after she turned!! LOL!!



Author's Response:

I have to laugh -- you liked the chapter for all the reasons I liked it.  I just can't listen to Halo and not think of them!  Sad, I know.  I think you will like Edward in this story.  He's adorable.

Also, you blew me away with this comment:  I'd like to read what he thought of Rosalie's rampage after she turned!!  Another Twi author and I are writing the story of Rose's rampage -- with all the murderous details. 

I really am excited about the next chapter.  I hope you enjoy it too.  Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:13 AM Title: Homecoming

Wonderful!  I especially loved picturing Esme pulling the locked drug locker door off at the hinge!  THAT was a great touch!  I also loved Edward's take and point of view when talking to Carlisle. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  I had to give Esme a dramatic re-entrance!  Edward is quite the card in this story.  Always there at the right moment and helping Carlisle and Esme along...

Reviewer: Lebo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 1:29 PM Title: Decisions

Oh, now it's interesting! Esme's leaving... this story is really full of ups and downs. But I love it :) Only now I am starting to fully comprehend what has made Carlisle Carlisle... and Esme Esme. And Edward Edward for that matter, just imagine, living for so long... seeing all the others around you pair up... only you left behind... but well. That's another story. Oh, poor Esme. But I'm sure that later on, she'll realize that Carlisle actually wants her to stay with him, that he's only too polite to say so ;)

Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Welcome and thanks for reading and reviewing.  Lots of ups and downs, but then the good part comes around!!  I promise a great big HEA!!!  I am a sucker for those -- but in between, I will fill in a lot of blanks/missing moments.  Edward's alone story would be dark!  Don't think I'd attempt that one, but if you like angsty Edward, read my story Honeymoon Suite on fanfic or twi -- TONS of Edward up and down (and missing scenes from that let down of Jacob POV during the pregnancy).

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:18 AM Title: Decisions

Silly Esme!  Her destination is the man she just left.  I'm glad Charles got what was coming to him though.  (small, aren't I?)  This was a wonderful chapter and showed the woman Esme was destined to become beginning to blossom.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing!  I love writing back stories and you will learn much about C&E.  I have to admit, I don't keep Esme away for long -- I just could delay my gratification!

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: Decisions

My only consolation is I know she wil come back!!!!!!!! But so glad the mean husband is out of the picture.....oh sweet Esme, you are writing her story so well!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  I haven't found a single person upset with me doing-in Charles!!  And I have to admit, I was so excited to get to the happy parts, I don't keep Esme away long.  So for those who love lots of angst, this IS NOT the story for them (lol).

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Decisions

Poor Esme, good thing Carlisle showed and calmed her down. I kept expecting Edward to be the one to help her. She is not a murderer and I'm glad Charles' death happened the way it did.

I hope she doesn't make it far before she realizes that she doesn't need to run in the first place...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comments and rating!  I finally made it to that 5th cup (yeah!).  Esme is not gone for long, but I just couldn't help but think how confusing that first newborn year had to be with all those instincts colliding with logic. 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:58 AM Title: Decisions

UGH!! Poor Esme.... More please?!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments!  Next chapter up this coming weekend...

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:13 PM Title: The Chase

CHARLES!! NO DOUBT ABOUT IT!! And waht does he want? - the answer's easy - Esme back!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:43 AM Title: The Chase

Great chapter, including the cliffie!! Had a feeling the bad abusing hubby would return! Bad thing is, Esme probably has no idea who he is given her lack of memory of her former human self. Carlisle needs to fess up his feelings and save her! (again, ;) )

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:01 AM Title: The Chase

aaaaaaah! Esme's husband as a human!



Author's Response:

Hmmm, not such a big cliffie I guess (lol), but what happens was soooo fun to write!!  Thanks for leaving a comment!!

Reviewer: frekles Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Secrets

absolutely love this story. I have not read anyone that has gone this direction before and you do such an excellent job of filling in the story and fitting it so well with the characters and what an avid reader of the series would expect them to be like. I love your attention to detail and all of the "little things" that some writers neglect that are so very important to a good story. I cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Frekles (Lost reference??? or just your nickname?).  I'm so glad you like this story.  It has my heart and soul.  From what you wrote, I think you will like the rest of the story -- a lot of blanks are filled in and the details are fun.  Stay tuned, updates will be (in most cases) weekly, I promise.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Secrets

Seeing the beginnings of the Cullen family is always a treat.  I, personally, don't believe Edward would have known how to love Bella if it hadn't been for Esme's influence.  Nice work!



Author's Response:

I so agree!  I have always felt Edward had a good heart -- that's what drew Carlilse to him in the first place (beyond Eliz), but C&E were his 'adult' rolemodels and that will come through.  I hope you enjoy the mostly charming/innocent Edward in this story.  And I also think it is good to read a not-so-perfect Esme and Carlilse as they were young too.  Thanks so much for your comment/review and I look forward to hearing from you again!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:04 PM Title: Secrets

This was a great chapter! Very well written! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 8:05 PM Title: Secrets

Much as I know how busy RL keeps one, I really would prefer this to be ALL your stuff... I don't mind waiting extra time, but to reach a compromise everyone's happy with, how about making a poll?!



Author's Response:

Oppps.  Didn't mean to throw you a curve ball on inviting a few friends to play along with me.  Just a spur of the moment idea -- it won't happen again!  I hope you are hooked though and plan to return for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:15 AM Title: Transformation

Wow!! This was very well done! Kudos!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:44 AM Title: Resurrection

Thank God for Carlisle!  Even knowing Esme may choose not to stay with him, Carlisle has to try to save her.  As the end hinted, convincing Esme to want to live will be harder.  Nice, very nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comment! So glad to see you are sticking this story.  I guess there is no fighting that soulmate connection.  I just love C&E!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Resurrection

Very sweet and endearing. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a comment!  I am actually meeting some of my Twi-friends that I have met online this weekend, but I hope to get the next chapter up anyway!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Lost and Found

Wonderful chapter,sad in so many ways, yet hopeful in so many others.  We know Esme's hurt in the past, but the promise of her future and a man who understands what it truly means to love are waiting!  You brought it home!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Ashland, Wisconsin

Told from Eme's POV, thisd chapter is even more heart-rending!  Even knowing the ending, we still cheer for the baby.  Well done!

Reviewer: RayOfHope Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:32 PM Title: Ashland, Wisconsin

omg i love this story!it something entirely diffrent from all others!



Author's Response:

I was hoping I would have some success with a canon, non-AU story here.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I hope you continue to read this fic!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Father and Son

Loving the first two chapters! You're doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  My goal is to update weekly.  Action will pick up very soon, I promise!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:05 AM Title: First Sight

The inner Esme!  I love her; she is so underused and yet so commanding in presence, drawing the family together through everything.  I'm looking forward to this ride!!  Also, love the banner!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments.  I agree with you completely -- we get small hints on her strength, so we know it is there -- I hope I let her shine a bit...

Thanks also for mentnioning the banner.  I did it myself with programs I found online.  Just kept trying until I felt it matched my feelings for this story.  Hope you keep reading and commenting!

Reviewer: mistresselektra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: First Sight

I love a good Carlisle/ Esme story. I hope you continue with this one! I did enjoy Esme's escape.



Author's Response:

Thank you Mistress E for the comments.  I so loooovvveee C&E (and I throw my love for young Edward in this one too).  I hope to have next chapter ready by next weekend (*fingers crossed*)

Reviewer: RosaBella75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 9:30 PM Title: First Sight

A glowing example of your tremendous insight into Esme!  So glad you're posting it over here.

Love it and you, bb!!!

 



Author's Response:

You always make me smile -- thanks for the warm welcome to The Cafe!  Now go post TFICF, bb!!

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