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Reviewer: rezma Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2022 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Please Please Please finish this story! I have been waiting YEARS! lol 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2019 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

miss your story

 

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Please don't give up on this storyyyyyyyyyyyy! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Please don't give up on this storyyyyyyyyyyyy! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Our Lips Are Sealed

She got him to losen up lol.  I think he will rethink firing Emmett.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Will Nelson become an intrigal part of the Misfits?
Glad to hear Emmett will still be a functioning member of the disfuctional gang.
So EdRoar is the jealous type. It seems fitting for his personality.
Bella's reaction to her new found jealousy was a bit more surprising though. Edward seems to be teaching her new things about herself as well.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 Our Lips Are Sealed

Nadia may be the link to Edward's past, but Bella won't abuse that trust between EdRoar and his staff.
He is losing the battle with Bella and doesn't even know it. She is working in confines of his own rules and still seems to get him to break. If ever so slightly.
He's right, she just might be the Wolf.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 MisFITS

Edward has no idea the power this woman already holds over him. He can call it what he wants, but he is already doing stupid things because he cares for her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 16 Silence Is Golden

They have a unique passion for life. Just on opposite end of the spectrum but if you see the world as round, their is a side to each of them that is very nearly touching.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17 MisFITS

What happened to Edward at 6 years old that caused so much damage?  It has to be his dad did something to his mom I am so sad for him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 Silence Is Golden

I am so sorry for your lose it is hard to lose the ones we love.  I am so happy that thewont leave you alone I cant wait to see what they do next and how she tames the lion.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

She is freaking everyone out poor Angela is in shock lol.  Edward will be in shock when he sees what she wants him to ride in OMG cant wait

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Joking Edroar is such a treat

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 16 Silence Is Golden

Glad you're back! Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19 She’s Always In My Hair

Thanks awesome chapters

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Silence Is Golden

Good lord, soooo worth the wait! Be well and take the time you need to grieve and heal. Thank you for sharing Bella and her Lion with us. It is sheer perfection. :)

Reviewer: my mermaid bella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

What an awesome chapter *sees last update is 4 years old* *cries*

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Sadly I read and got involved with this story to find out the last time it was updated was in July 2012. Too many very good stories do not get finished. I do hope that you and yours are well Tropical Sorbet.

Reviewer: Freja86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

oh no no more chapters and i was so very much enjoying myself with this story it is defintely one of the greatest i have ever read are you ever gonna start writing on it again? love anita

 

Reviewer: DaddyJeli Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

Hello, Im a new reader and I absoulutley love this storyy!! I think you should write a story about bella eventually falling for her best friend (jasper). I really like their relationship. These past two chapters I have found myself struggling against a "LCI attack". Whew, My stomach hurts from all my laughter. But this story is REALLLLYYY GOOOODDDD!! You should continue to update it.! Well, Im gonna continue to read but this is TOO GOOD! :)

Reviewer: dontcallmeleelee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

don't forget about the coffe shop! I hope youre doing ok and my prayers are with you and you're family

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

This is an amazing read and I seriously can't wait to find out what's on the menu.

Nati 

Reviewer: Jad Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

I'm waiting very patiently, I need the next chapter to see what happens now. Please I'm begging. 

Jad

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Love the chapter, Ninjella & Teaseward *happy sigh* great visual with her humping him =D can´t wait to see what she thinks of his neighborhood.. .

best wishes & Happy Thursday!

//Linda

Reviewer: Kalahara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

This story has taken over my life for the past few days cause I could not walk away from it. Brilliant Bella and Edward here in a orginal setting and altogether new and unique voice this writer has as she weaves this story for us. I cannot wait to see where she takes us next in this hugely addicting tale. Ah I'm dying for more !!!!

Reviewer: Blacklight1798 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

plz write more as soon as is possible. this story is really awesome! ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

ohhh, i was enjoying your story so much that I got to the end of this chapter and there is no 'next' to click on to. sooo upset, I have run out of chapters.

Love this story and I really can't wait for more to come. I just hope you don't take months in between chapters.

Regards
Fiorella

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Eager for more! Bella is insanely funny, and hot without trying! Will be very funny Edward get in touch with the world of Bella, I hope he will soon know Jasper, I want to see him jealous of his friendship.
Kisses.
I would like to self defense classes :)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Bella is so funny, and perceptiva.Ela sees Edward well.
Both are moving slowly but moving.
I imagine the meeting of Edward and Jasper.
I think that Edward will not be happy, he does not know the concept of friendship, so do not understand friendship with Jasper and Bella, and he is so possessive.
Kisses.

Reviewer: luvthemtwilightbois Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Oh please update soon! I'm starving for more:)

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: JenGail01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

Another great chapter.  I love this story, it is just the right blend of hilarity and heart wrenching emotions.  You blend the two so beautifully.  I am always a happy girl when I get a new chapter from you.  Now I am sad, because I have finished the chapter and I want MORE, MORE DAMNIT!  Thanks so much for all of the fun...

Reviewer: vanquish13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

Love this. I followed this on ff.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

love this story, hope you can update more and sooner

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

rofl too funny.  Ticklish ears???   lol.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

I love this story ! Plz update more!!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

today is july 4th. thanks for the fireworks. I truely miss edroar when he's away for so long.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

love the story, cant wait to read more....

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

I'd been missing dear ol' Edroar...thanks for the chapter. 

this is one of my all time favorites!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

So happy that you are back and so is Edroar!!! I'm dying for the dinner out chapter, so please don't wait to long ;) 

Loved their "training", they need to stop dry humping and get the goods out to really play soon...

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Edroar I miss you. please hurry back.

Reviewer: jennb87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Love your story. I hope you will update soon.

Reviewer: Meret Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Oh my gosh your story is amazing! I almost tore my hair out when i saw there was not a next sign at the bottom of the page. THANKFULLY i did discover that you last updated this at the beginning of the month so there is still the possibility that this story is still going. Right? RIGHT? PLEEEEEEEEASE????? Cause i am REALLY looking forward to there training session together =)

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

I am really enjoying your story and was so happy to find a new chapter up when I looked!

Reviewer: DaisyAllday Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Still love, love, love this story!  Thanks for the update...can't wait for more of these two.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

things are starting to heat up  I love it !!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

hmmm  she's growing on him.....a little like mold maybe?   J/K.   Cool chapter.   Edroar is a little green there at the end.

Reviewer: Jabsjb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Love this story! Thank you

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

I love this story and it is just getting better and better!! i actually squealed when i saw the chapter in my inbox ^_^ hehe can't wait for those lessons to start ;) hehe

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Made my day!! Love this story cannot wait till next chapter!!

Reviewer: Brumbear Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

Edward has his walls high up with a large defense line in front of it, that will strike out at the littlest sign of danger. I wonder whether it's from trauma or if he's just been brought up that way. Dr. Cullen seems equally cold-hearted and harsh.

Bella seems to have found a weak spot in his defense and reached the walls, which sometimes seems to have a gate with bars. You can never enter but you do get a glimpse every now an then of the "inner sanctum".

I love their banter and flirtations and can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

That was an awesome chapter.  I LOVED IT.  I loved all the feed me talk when we know he was talking about something else and I love that he will be her only teacher.  I cant wait to read the fun in that.  Maybe he needed to see that Peter was interested in her too. lol.  I liked how she told the employees off for being so mean to him. Yes he is mean to them but like she said he is a human too and has other things on his mind. 

You did great!!!!!!!

I am glad your back.

Reviewer: cullen-madness101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

awseome chapter update soon! :D

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

What? them in bed, after 13 chapters? No, I don't believe it! Not our Edroar!!! Love your story!!

Reviewer: verogogo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

good

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

I loved this chapter!
Does the lion is turning into a kitten?
Please fast, I'm dying here.
Thank you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

execllent chapter.  Aww the lion got sick.   lol for arrogant fat cat dry humping

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

I was happy to see the update, I am glad Bella continues to hold her own.   I am also glad that Edroar is making some progress.  I hope your next update is soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

She is taming the beast :)  He respects her and loves her because she doesnt take his shit.  I want to know what has made him into such an ass.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

Hottest kiss ever! Great chapter :)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

Plz update more often ! I love this story!!! :)!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the kiss.  I knew she would be bruised.  Now about him not feeling worthy, well something bad must have happened to him for him to think that bad of himself.  Poor Lion.  As for the message, well I see the naughty picture on the blog that I am guessing was supposed to be Edward's imagination during the message but you didn't give us an EPOV so we dont really know how that fits in.  Now the poor Lion is sick and I so love that Bella stayed with him to take care of him.  I love how she bosses him around and I am glad that they are flirting with each other now.  Now we just have to get them mad more often so they can kiss more often. LOL 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I want to be devoured by a lion ...
Chapter amazing!
Sera that he will raise its walls.
I imagine the meeting of Jasper and Edward, will combine épico.Vamos, the lion is possessive.
Thanks.Por please do not let me suffer, but take your time.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

"I just want you to know that I never intentionally drugs or maim you," I proclaimed with all sincerity.
Hilariante.Bella funny is the best.
Edward is falling for her.
Please continue, I'll make cookies, with or without marihuana, you choose.
Thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Wow! Edward finally had biscuits Bella.Pelo saw was too much. The interaction of these two is so funny.
I love chapter. Marihuana had in cookies?
Thanks, the chapter amazing.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

You're fantastic!
Bella, Edward course, want a cookie, go girl;)
I can not wait, I'm commenting to go racing next chapter.
Okay, you take a little updating, but worth waiting.
Thanks sweet.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

So funny, I love how you can make serious moments funny.I totally see how a movie in my mind, I am very graphic, only dizendo.Eu so sad because I'm running out and you see that it takes a while to update.
I love it.
Thanks.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

I started reading your story now, I'm completely envolvida.Bella is a strength, I indentifiquei with it in various ways: I am fit of laughter at the worst times, many people have become angry, but I can not control.
I'm a bit impetuous, thanks shyness can not provide the craziness that my mind arquiteta.Eu loved the friendship of Bella and Jasper, it's beautiful, I give much value to true friendships.
Thanks.
Sorry my English, I am Brazilian.

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I Just wanted to say I am really enjoying your story and looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I really love this story & I'm always looking forward to your updates.  I can't wait to see where they are headed next!!! :) Eeeewwwwww, not Rudolph! :P

Reviewer: saritat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Just read the story so far and I'm addicted! I hope you'll continue very soon and we can find out more about the kiss. *melt*

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Woo Hoo! Finally! Now that is the type of roar I like!

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Merry Kissmas and a happy new year! Great story, hope to read more, soon :D

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Great and intriguing beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Oh.My.Goodness.

loved it and i cant wait for more!

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

He has meet his match I am glad he is smart enough to figure that out I am so excited that they kiss I mean he already bit her boob lol.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Bella258 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

LOVE this story! I can't wait to see where you take it and I REALLY hope you update soon!

Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Merry day after Kissmas & thank you !

Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

This story is so great . One moment I'm laughing out loud ,getting curious looks from the fam. The next moment ..well uh you know ..big tease. Let's get to dinner ..& hope fully ..

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I am so glad she told him off. Cannot wait to see how the next chapter will go after this kiss!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

oh edward.  one of these days you wont be able to catch up with her if you arent careful.  Silly man.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Such a wonderful cockblocking Christmas... :(

 

But it was still good nonetheless. You have promised there is some nice angry/wet making out in the near future, would there be any possiblity of some nice angry dry (or wet, since they are soaked) humping? As a special post Christmas present!?

Can't wait for the new chapter!! Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I loved it!! Merry Christmas !! Keep going with the story it's awesome!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Awww swoon! Lovely Christmas present, thank you!

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I Love this!! <3 Please post the next chapter soon! This is amazing! <3 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

heheheh:) awesome chappy me thinks a certain angry lion over heard her call and is a wee bit jealous? Happy Holidays and look forward to the next chappy :P

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

What an amazing chapter. I wanted to see if my phone will allow me to review. Thank you so much for the update on xmas eve. Poor Edward is so jealous he doesn't know how to handle it. I am so happy that you had Bella grab him and kiss him. Oh and I am so happy he was a gentlemen and went after her. I can't wait til the continuation of this kiss. YUMMY! Merry Xmas BB.

Reviewer: Mayfall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

Top notch! I loved this chapter, funny as hell and Edroar is sexier by the minute... I keep imagining him in his short pounding at the boxing bag.. now that's a steamy image. Looking forward to your next update, I hope it comes soon!

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I just love the banter between these two.  Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Good grief...what a jerk, and he has barely spoken hahaha :)  Glad I found this one when I was looking for a new story to read :)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I'm so happy ur back!! I really love this story :) thank you for these characters!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I cant wait for the dinner should be interesting are we ever going to here from him????

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

Oooh!!! I'm ridiculously excited about this upcoming chapter!! I reread this one about four times, just to get over the squee factor and read up on the actual details. I love the extremely observant Bella being completely obtuse, as she was quite often in this (and the previous) chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I love it when your story updates...I also love the way Bella and Edroar flirt with each other using catty insults - how can you not love both of them!  Can't wait to see what happens at dinner, I doubt it will be as calm and quiet as Edroar thinks it will be...

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

oh wow, great update !!!!  Poor Bella, what will she do next to him....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

omg I couldnt stop laughing.  great job.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

so so so excited to see this new chapter!! Love this story cant wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

I have so missed Edroar it is nice to hve him back.

Reviewer: Mayfall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Ohh this is bad. Really bad. Edroar is going to be roaring in the morning. With pain probably. At least he had a soft cushion to land on. Ok, loved the chapter but it's time for sleep now, work early tomorrow darn it. Can't wait for your next update. Amazing job!

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Hope you are going to write a new chapter soon..... :)

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