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Reviewer: bibity92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

noooo

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out

Wow... Uhh.. Yeah, I have to say.. I didn't mind that, at all! ;)
BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT... I hope Bella doesn't, either!
Can't wait to read more! :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

He'll have to hold back a little I guess for Bella. Guess she'll have to turn vampire in the future, huh. :)

Thanks for the review sweetie...Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out

Ok, so that was like super HOT!  I need to go take a cold shower now:)

If I could give you double the coffee I would!



Author's Response:

See this is why I love you! you don't get mad at me for man stuff. I think it's sexy as hell and I would so be peeking around the corner to watch them...hehe. Thanks for leaving reviews on all these chapters as well as the coffee. You know it means a lot to me! One more chapter of this story that will be leaving a few unexpected twists and turns before the second part begins sometime in the new year. Because Carlsile isn't paying anymore. YAY !!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 21 Bella's Escape

Annabelle you did amazing with this chapter!  I knew Bella was alive somewhere...hehehehe

And ya gotta love Emmett :)

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Annabelle did do a great job stepping in there for me. I hate to make people wait for chapters and that seemed to be happening alot. So I asked her because she totally loves the story.

Emmett was the only thing I asked her to do. I want him to be smart and sexy in this story. He deserves to be the hero sometimes too. :)

Coffee is yummy.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

Awww sweetie - wish I could do something to help with the pain.  That makes me sad.  Know you are in my thoughts!

LOVE the chapter :)  Carlisle is so DOM :)

Thanks honey!



Author's Response:

Thank You for wishing me well Tamara. I had a hard way to go there for a little over two months and I'm still taking meds. Good news is that I am feeling human again and I'm ready to get into meanness with our vamps. :)

Thank You for the review and coffee, Diane.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

OMG - Carlisle found his balls!  Love it when he is in control :)

Thank you!



Author's Response:

And he is going to keep them because they are such nice balls...yummy. I love an aggressive Carlisle!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

I'm so torn!  Should this be a "you go Alice and slap the shit out of Bella" or a "WTF Alice"?  lol

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

I think its a little of both actually. Like I said I put to many individual feelings in this story.

Thanks as always for the wine...I mean coffee.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

Well dammit - now I just kinda feel sorry for the twit and I don't want too!!!!!



Author's Response:

HAHA I did good then :) Dances a happy dance!!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

Yeah - it's getting super thrilling!  I LOVE that my Carlisle knows the truth - oh just wait until he finds out the baby isn't his...he might need me to console him :)



Author's Response:

Or Isabella may be the one needing a tissue.

Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

Boy - Bella just destroys and destroys hard doesn't she...



Author's Response:

I felt so bad for Esme and Edward in this chapter, then later I have to go and make Esme the bad guy and all she ever did was love her man...sighs.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

Ooooo Karma is rearing her ugly head to Bella!  Woo Hoo - I hope she gets what she deserves.. :)



Author's Response:

Oh Evil Isabella ends up on a ride like she never expected...hehehehe.

Thanks Again!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Love to see the Cullen girls ganging up on Bella - she so deserves it :)

Thanks sweetie!



Author's Response:

Yeah they gang up for awhile. Like I said I went off tone a couple of times in this story. I wanted the readers to feel for everyone individually but I think it may have been to much.

Thanks for the coffee and the reviews...Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out

The Smut is back!! That was some great smut, just what I needed to brighten my day! Can't wait to see what happens next (more smut or another round of Evil Carsisle laying down the law).



Author's Response:

Thanks Jilli,

 Actually the next chapter is going to lead us into the second series of this story. Everyone will find out a surprise or two which will hopefully get everyone curious enough to follow. :)

I to love the smut :)!!!

Thanks for the review and the coffee as well lady!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

Bella needs some major ass whipping by old Karma......

She make an awesome villianess!

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank You Tamara...she is turning out to be a real bitch !!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

Ok, I thought that was extremely hot and not rape at all. :)  I LOVE Jasper all tough and in command......gets the girlie parts tingling ya know ?

 

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Um hum I know all to well.

Thanks for the review and coffee.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Oh God - I want Peter on a desk like that!  hehehehehe  And to have Jasper watching....I need a drink and a cold shower. :)

Love the chapter sweets!



Author's Response:

Gotta love those hot men!!! Even though they cause alot of water bills to go up around the world...hehe.

Thanks Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Ya know, come to think of it, I can actually "see" what your saying in this story applying to the movies and books.  Especially with Jasper....  :)  I can see how they controlled him..hmmmmmm

You are absolutely brilliant with your writing and this is one of the reason't your at the top of my list of favorite fanfic writers. :)

Thanks for this chapter!



Author's Response:

And this is one of the reasons your at the top of my list of reviewers. Thank You! I hope you'll be reading Bad Boys Two: Jasper's Struggle  come January. :) I am already way ahead on those chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing and leaving coffee under my Christmas Tree!

-Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

What a sadistic evil bitch!  I hate her!!  :)



Author's Response:

Then I've done my job well. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

Ooooo Carlisle likes it a little rough does he......

After all that the bitch is doing to him he is still so caring and compassionate...thats my boy. :)

Thank you!



Author's Response:

He is a sweetie and she really does screw him over for awhile. She is such a bitch!

Thanks, as always, for the gifts you leave me.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

*runs screaming*

Bella, excuse me, Isabella, is killing me here!!!!  First my Carlisle and now my Jasper.......

I just want to slap the shit out of her!!!!! :)

Thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Of course its them because I love both those guys too.  :)  They are always the stars !!! God did you see Jasper with those red eyes in Eclipse? He so has to have those in the second part to this story.

Coffee smells great as always!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

grrrrr Bella is such a f*ucking bitch!!!!!  Bad bad Bella!!!!!

My poor Carlisle needs me! :)



Author's Response:

She really was a bitch him. I think my muse shouldn't have done those bad, bad things. Actually if Carlisle were my vampire to play with he would always be naked and smiling. :)

Thanks for the coffee and reviews you're making me look good lady!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

Well if that wasn't a panty soaking chapter!  Carlisle played an awesome mind game....hehehehehe

Thanks for the chapter sweetie!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Isabella thinks she's so smart. You can't out smart a vampire he has to be a willing subject to allow himself to be hurt. One with a heart who feels bad.

Oh how I love the smell of coffee!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

*sigh* I want Carlisle at MY mercy...hehehehehe

 



Author's Response:

I bet you would be a lot nicer to him if he played along like a good boy too!!!! <EG>

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

Dayum but Bella really is a bitch isn't she!  She's being so mean to my Carlisle!!!!!!! :)

Off to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

She was being such an Evil Bitch that she actually won two awards...who knew people wanted an Evil Isabella?

So thirsty thanks for the coffee and reviews.

:)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

Ohhhh Bitchy Bella has come out to play!  I was happy to find this story by you Diane!  I have really missed you!!!!  I have quite a few chapters to read to get caught up with story, but I love where it is headed!!!!!

Talk with you soon sweetie!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi coffee Lady,

 OMG I am so happy to hear from you. This is a totally different type of story than I have ever tried to write before. I got a little off tone in places, sorry about that. I was always going from one whim to another one. :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 Bella's Escape

Love it poor Em, I really hope he won't endup dead. Can't wait to see whats next. How evil will the plot get? hehehehh :)



Author's Response:

Hi Jilli...Emmett wont end up dead don't worry. He needs to stand up and be a man vamp as well as the others. I think he has a lot to offfer and maybe his part needs to be explored a little more. SM didn't really give us much to go on with him. So it's all open to interpataion. :)

Thanks for the review and as always the coffee smells so good. I still haven't gotten to read my present as of yet but I will get to it soon I promise. There's just been so much to be done now that I'm feeling better. Take Care and I hope to talk to you soon, Diane.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

To start off: hopefully everything will be all right with you, first and foremost :)
Now back to the story.. I LOOOOOVE that your Carlisle put the women in their place - Rosalie, especially, Emmett's too cool for that shit. :D
About Bella's absence.. Carlisle thinks that she's dead?? Poor Baby.. Being raised by all those sexy men, hmmm. ;p
I loved that Carlisle enjoys the power he's been granted - a little too much. But ESME? REALLY? Gah! I had to close my poor eyes... Then re-open them a little bit to finish, but I truly didn't want to! ..only a little white lie ;D
Good job! And God bless. :)

-Sofia :D



Author's Response:

Hi Sofia...and thank you for your well wishes. I think I may be starting to feel human again after all. I'm glad you love the new Carlisle I think he's totally sexy myself. Emmett certainly is to cool for that shirt...lol. To be honest I would allow those sexy men to raise me even at my age...hehe. Jasper with those red eyes in Eclipse almost made my panties wet. :) I asked a friend of mine to write the next chapter for me and she did. But I was so sick that I didn't get it posted. But I will soon and then I'm thinking two more chapters and we'll be ready for the second part of the story. YAY!

Always glad to hear from ya lady !

-Diane

Reviewer: amandalaw Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

Once again you rock.  I love to see Carlise take control.  I can't wait until Bella is back in the picture.  I hope it is soon.  I am glad you are going to do a sequal.  YEAH!!



Author's Response:

Hi Lady,

 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. With a little help on the next chapter and then a couple of more chapters that I will write personally, we will be moving on to the next part. I am hoping to finish this one before the end of the year. Take Care and I hope to hear from you again soon! Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

Yes, love it, every part of it!! Sequal, even better!! Dominate Carlisle is great and th part with Alice etting in trouble for Bella Barbie, great, looking forward to that!! Esme's new roll seems intresting and I can't wait to see how that turns out. I was getting worried, though you dropped off the face of the writting world for a second. Isen't writers bloack a bitch. Can't wait to see what you come up with next :) 

Ps there will bw a present in your inbox by the end of the week, yay, Jillys sick mind stricks again!

laters and stuff

Jilly :)



Author's Response:

I got pretty sick for a good while Jilli...I hate leaving people hanging I like to update weekly. Hey I never did get my present and I have checked my inbox lately. Where's my PAPA!!! hehehehehehe

Thanks for the review and the coffee hun. Diane

Reviewer: amandalaw Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

I have enjoyed this story and you are wrong I have noticed you have been missing.  I am sorry to hear you hare having problems and hope you get to feeling better soon.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone.  A lot of people are retelling the same story over and over but this is very original. 



Author's Response:

Thank You I try to come up with my own stuff. :) And thank you as well for missing me. Female stuff really hurts alot, like labor...lol. I did get my next chapter back from my beta today. It's called 'family meeting' but I will probably post it on Monday. I am working on 21 as well and I hope to make things up to everyone by posting two this coming week. Love your review it put me at 101 on this site. :)

Later, Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

I was waiting a while for you where have you been??

holly  oh my god...   what is goin on??... first... you had some fun with making carlisle bad ass huh? lol... me too haha.. second i kinda feel bad for Esme but it was funny when he woke up looking for Bella hahaha... that suked for edward too though..  I know shes alive somewhere but how did she get out?? hmmm.. I'm too lazy to theorize so i'll wait till you tell us..  I like the part when all three of guys were pissing over the Bella problem causin the girls getting mad.  the girls wouldve harmed the baby?? on purpose?? or out of their control??..

i was crackin up when Edward interupted Carlisle's journal writing to comment on his thoughts and him talkin smack about Jasper "However some members of this family have control issues.."... "Shut the Fuck up Edward" hahaha

I think Alice made up the part about Carlisle may attack someone and telling jasper to calm him.. cuz she seen it...bullshit.. 

Calling Esme's bluff?...  hahahaha sad but hilarious too... awww sucks to be Esme..."cause i wont put my COCK in YOU" pfffff....  bahaha.

Keep'em coming..



Author's Response:

Yes I went MIA for almost three weeks, sorry about that. I have been having some female problems and my iron dropped so low because of it that all I wanted to do was sleep and complain about how tired I was. Going back to the doctor again on Monday though. Thanks for asking...I think you are the only one who noticed. But that's okay!

Oh I had so much fun with this chapter girl...I love all the men, what can I say. Men can be funny with their Bella Boners...lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I like to think that you can't figure out how she got out without a trace of a scent being left from other people. I wanna believe I've got this one nailed down tight...lol.

I feel a little sorry for Esme as well, but it's still fun having Carlisle screw with her and call her bluff. He is kind of blunt, isn't he? hehe.

I'm loving bad ass Carlisle, not that I don't love him the other way as well. But, damn I like him dark and demanding!

Hope to hear from you again soon. Take care of yourself, Diane.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

"Maybe if my wife wouldn't have cut off her hair and painted her up to look like a damn clown, she would have came back," Jasper accused.
"Oh and let's not forget…the women in this family planning to kill her. There's that small problem," Emmett added....

LOL, god that was funny. I cackled! And to answer your question, I AM from the south. Most people don't pick it up, though.. Hmm.
I had a feeling that Esme would be upset when she finally realized that Carlisle wasn't hers anymore. And what a bummer that must be.. Missing out on the ultra-sexyness that is Carlisle Cullen. Facinating how more.. Animalistic he is. I love it!
And the whole, "Oh, kill me Carlisle, I cannot live without you!" Thingymajigger, made me laugh. So.. Not surprising. I loved the cooperation from all the Cullen men, especially Emmett. He's the bomb. :D (But Carlisle is still the earthquake! Inside joke)
I'm assuming that Bella is still alive, and there's a reason she's gone.. I have my theories. :D
Anyways, good job! Can't wait to read what happens next!!

-Sofia :DD



Author's Response:

Hey there Lady,

 I just knew you were southern by the way you phrased things. We just have a knack for saying things in a unique kind of way.

I love having the men interact with one another, they can be funny as hell. The cool thing about men is that they can argue and later that evening, if there human at least, they'll go out and have a couple of beers together. Women, on the other hand...well...we tend to need more time I guess.

The Esme thing...I have seen that card played a few times on the unsuspecting...sad thing is, it usually works too. Guilt, guilt, guilt...eye roll here.

Yes, Bella is alive and I hope you are curious as to how she got out without even a trace of a scent left from anyone helping her. I still have a few surprises up the arm of my shirt...hehe. Let me know if any of your theories match what happens. Although I believe next chapter will be Carlisle laying down the law to his family.

Hope to hear from you again next chapter...Diane.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

Vampire-napped, so funny, you crack me up. I think I really, really like the new and improved Carlsile Cullen MD, but the Bella infatucation really bothers me. Cannot wait for Carlsile to write out and put down his new laws, hah that should be great to read!! :) (no more makeovers Alice, no sex Esme, everyone keep their hands off the baby!)



Author's Response:

There's my coffee...Oh come on Bella Boner was good too...lol. Yelp next chapter Carlisle will lay it all out and he will be respected and feared. And a little crude sexually! yummy. Thanks for reviewing for me sweetie. TTYL, Diane.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

Your writing is excellent of course.  But sorry most of the Cullens were married men....



Author's Response:

Thank You and yes other than Edward they are married men. Carlisle is not the same now though, the bond he shared with Esme was broken when he became a human.

-Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

Again I feel so much for Bella. I hate that she had to let Peter/Carlisle go but it was to save his life. I think loving him broke her down a little and now she's resigned herself to whatever the Cullen women plan to do to her. She's ready for it. Also, while I love evil Bella, she was acting like a vengeful child and the love she had for Peter and the fact that he almost died because of what she did made her grow up and accept responsibilty for her actions. She needed it.


Now for boys. I feel bad for Emmett because he seems to be stuck in the middle of his loyalty to his family and his love for the girl who he once called his little sister.


I really hate what this is doing to Edward. Sure he left her thinking he had good reason to do so and now he's blaming himself for the way Bella turned out. He feels betrayed because of what Jasper did and he knows he's completely powerless to stop them from hurting her.


And then there's Jasper. I actually think he was the most brilliant one of them all.  He was quick enough to think of his plan to make Bella think the baby was his instead of Peter's. He was smart enough to come up with a plan to go get Edward and take him back to help her.  It seems to me that he never had any intention of going back there.  He got away and back to Alice which was his goal all along.


And I love Peter/Carlisle most of all because while he's going through his change, all he's thinking of is Bella and I love that it's driving Esme crazy.


Great chapter lady.  This just got even more interesting than it already was.  Much love - D



Author's Response:

Hi Lady,
 You know I love your reviews. They are always so very detailed. I feel sorry for Edward to. There is no way in this for him to win. His time with Bella has passed yet his love is eternal and his sacrifice has always been great.

Emmett, poor vampire certainly doesn't want to hurt Bella either. Rose seems more overbearing than usual. All the women are. I think the power has gone to their heads. Hopefully, Carlisle will take care of this situation once he's awake.

Jasper, I have always seen him as a very smart player that doesn't get to shine much. He and Carlisle are both highly intelligent in different very different aspects of life.

Evil Isabella certainly has had to learn her lessons the hard way in life. Carrying a grudge for that long must have been so tiring for her.

Esme, for as much as she loves Carlisle, is actually losing the most. That's all I'll say about that.

Thank You for taking the time to review for me Sweetie.

 UMM...I love the coffee over here.

-Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

o.o whoah  nice twist girly... you are just killin us with the turns..



Author's Response:

I can't seem to help it...I want it to be different, and for all of their POV's to be felt. This way you love and hate them all...hehe. :)

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

...DANGIT! Bella, Bella, Bella.. What a web you've weaved.
I was so sure that Jasper was not the father; glad my suspicions were correct!
I feel kinda bad for Edward, though, such a sad little-boy. (Emphasis on the little.) Loved the taunting on Jasper's part!! ;p
And Esme? CRAZY much? Not even the GOOD crazy! Just, weird crazy.. You know the kind who steals babies - yeah, that kind..
The little makeover thing made me laugh; I never expected that! I hope that Rosalie just falls into a pit; don't care where, as long as Esme and Alice follow soon after. Hmm. :P
Crazy hens... Anywho, great job.
Cannot wait for next chapter :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Okay now I just have to ask if you are Southern? Crazy Hens sounds like something from the south...you know, kind of like calling an asshole a 'dick with ears'...lol. It's pretty smart of you to figure out my twisted plot with Jasper, he made me do it, told me what to say in that chapter and everything...I know, Iknow, who sounds crazy now? <raises hand>

I have to admit I had a good time with Jasper and Edward taunting each other. Jasper was like the older brother who picks at mom and dad's favorite. I screwed your girlfriend...nananananana...lol. And Edward is kind of pitiful, he never fails to stand up for Bella, even now.

Esme crazy much? yes ma'am! I love her, don't get me wrong, but she just kind of tries to hard to be loved and to be the good wife. Makes me go hummmm, I wonder what she's hiding. <I know there fictional characters, but still>

I think the makeover thing was a twist for Alice. She's always trying to make Bella pretty and buying her clothes. But hell has no furry like a woman scorned. Evil Isabella grew up and she's sexy as hell now. So of course the first thing a pissed off woman would want to do is take that away from her.

Thanks for the great review...I love hearing from you...take care...Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

Oh shit, the women are in charge!!! love it!! I just adore a pissed off Esme and cannot wait to see what will happen next! Back to writing Papa and Sam, sorry they are distracting me from a good review. :)Love this story and I hope Evil Bella dies a evil death and that Edward does not change her and if he does, that she becomes a zombie vampire for what she did to the Cullens! :)



Author's Response:

Hey as long as I get a smiley face or coffee I am happy. Um, sometimes Evil has to win... ;)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

he really shouldnt have mess with her she'll prob burn his dick or something LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the coffee Elmo,

 Ouch, she can't do that...those things are to useful to burn...lol.

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

OMG!!!! I LOVE EVIL BELLA =D for some reason i think carlisle is gonna like gettin freaky with bella lol



Author's Response:

Love the coffee girl...I didn't realize you were at the start of the story. Um yeah she is evil...she will find a little love and then...well I'm thinking Carlisle just might have to end up putting his foot up some asses...lol.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

Well, of course I want to see the Carlisle we ALL know and love.. Buuuuuuuut, I do want to see his character act more... Carefree, and if going around "do-ing" everyone will help, being a complete and utter perv, so be it! ;p

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi Sof,

 Yeah I think I have finally figured out the direction the 'fuck hot doctor' needs to go. I have the next chapter written and I will post it as soon as my beta gets time to do her thing. Things are in motion in this next chapter, The vampires are getting out of hand...there's a bite, a fight, and a not so nice make-over. I hope to hear from you then. :)

 Take care, Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

Great chapter lady.  I was actually kind of scared for Peter at the beginning.  He regressed so far into himself I didn't think he was going to come back.  I wondered if he would have if Isabella didn't burn him with that lighter. The pain he was feeling was so real that I felt more sorry for him than ever.  He didn't deserve that kind of pain.

The display of love between Isabella and Peter was beautiful.  Peter knew he was dying and he had to let her know he forgave her for what she did because he loves her.  It was evident in every touch and every word.  And, of course, you had me in tears when he was saying goodbye.  Telling both his wife and daughter that he loved them and would always be watching out for them was heartbreaking.  If he makes it through the change back to a vampire, it is going to kill him to know that the baby is Jasper's and not his.

I'm curious though, now that Isabella is taking him to Esme to change him back, what affect will his current state of mind have on the vampire he turns into this time.  His mind is split into three distinctly different people, Carlisle-now/Carlisle-then/Peter.  Will he be able to bring the three personalities together and go back to the way he was before Isabella changed him or will someone else emerge from the change.

Awesome job hun. I loved this chapter so much.  I can't wait to see what happens next. TTYL - D



Author's Response:

Hi D,
 Thanks for the awesome review. I think a vampire can process more than a human mind can. Peter couldn't handle it, but maybe Carlisle can. On the other hand it might be cool to change sweet Carlisle into an out-going person with dirty thoughts...hehe.

 I have so many versions of so many chapters written out that I could take it either way pretty easily.

So whats your take on things? Should I wrap it up over the next few chapters or make the doctor a dirty pervert?

Love the coffee, thank you.

Reviewer: MsKylieCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

this is extremely evil.. but i some how i find it very amusing...



Author's Response:

LOL...sometimes I do too.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

I like.. squealed when I saw that you had updated!
Awww! You just popped my little bubble of perpetual-smiles-and-lemons, for this oh so happy couple!
I was really looking forward to J & E's returning, but oh well. We shall see how the drama unfolds. :D
I really don't want to see Esme, and how "HAPPY" she'll be when her precious Carlisle returns (though who can truly blame her ;D).. Gah, I don't but I do, you know? Conflicting feelings.. Yuck lol.
Really interesting how he reverted back to his 'old ways'! I never thought that would be possible; I liked his english accent ;p
I think it's sweet that ALPHA Sam was all.. Sappy and sweet. Poor pup. :o
Anywho, wonderful, as usual. :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi there,

 I actually did have a chapter written where Jasper and Edward came for them and Peter found the files in her desk at work, they were staying there to be safe. I don't know what happens to me though I just get to writing sometimes and things shift. I couldn't let Peter die unloved, or not loving. I think when you begin to understand that you are dying, you forgive.

 Yeah poor pup, Peter got to him as well.

I had fun writing him from way back although I was flying kind of blind. I got tickled thinking about him mumbling to himself about his things being moved as well, such a man thing to do. Esme will not get her HEA in this one. Her love for him will only fuel the rage. (at least for now, my mind is so flippy about things.)

 Anyhow when he becomes Carlisle again would you like to see him turn normal again or change into a pervert wanting to do everyone?

-Diane

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

I must say I would like to see him with Esme and her with Edward....



Author's Response:

I am so happy to get a review from you. I can't really tell you what will happen in the end. But I can tell you that this is a Carlisle and Bella story. I hope to hear from you again next chapter. Take Care, Diane.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

Oh shit, that's great!! Stupid, evil Bella! I hope Esme cuts her into itty bitty peices and takes the baby for herself after turning Evil Bella into a vampire so she can be in pain for the rest of her exhistance! I love this story and your evil mind, but my mind is evilier then yours if not worse!! Haha! So I question that plagued my mind is where does Edward (not my favorite vampire) come into all this? Would he still take Bella as a mate if she still would want him? Maybe all the memories Bella created with Peter/Carisle all these few months will be erased after each is turned into a vampire (assuming Bella is turned and Peter lives long enough to get to Esme). You make my mondays girl!! Love it! Yha I know I over use exclimation points, but they are soo fun!  But not as fun as Dr Hottie Cullen, without the discusting fake blond hair! Oh wait thats my hottie with the gun, haha, nha his hair is blacker then black and curly! Well back to studying and writing Sam's latest adventure :)



Author's Response:

Hi Jilli,

 I love it when you curse at me first thing...lol. That means I did good ! I have no problem with !!!! . Keep em' coming. I can deal with Doctor 'HOTTIE' Cullen and his fake hair. Because if I pull the wig off I still get a doctor 'Coop'. : ) So sexy *sighs*. Okay so you may have a mind that is more evil than mine but, in my defense, I am still watering mine so it will grow. j/k. Edward in this story would always take Bella back, she has outgrown him. Thanks for the coffee and please feel free to offer some to Sam's Dad for me.

-Diane

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

oh no poor peter/carlisle, will they make in time to turn him back?,,,,,will jasper  really protect her,or was he just saying that for the child?, is the true vampire nature about to come out of the cullens?will edward be her knight in shinning armour and save her? you have totally baffled on where you are leading this,,,it's EXCELLENT,obviously there will be a child born but it just leaves a whole lot of what if's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

until next up date .c.



Author's Response:

Um, Coffee...thank you. Yes, I have left many doors open for them to walk through. I love that you share my out look as far as the unexpected twists and turns. I want to keep it interesting so you'll keep reading and giving me reviewa like this one. Oh and the coffee...;p . Take Care chedoo, Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

Carlisle is coming back!!  Bella is so pathetic now.. already she started to slip backward.  Will it be possible for Carlisle to be turned back safely? this is getting crazy.. At first i was confused with the way he was asking her questions about Carlisle had me thinking he didnt know it was him. Punching Sam lol.   ill definitely vote for you girl.. how long will it be till the baby is born?



Author's Response:

Hey there,

 Yes, Carlisle will be coming back. He is the star in this story as well as in my dreams. :) Yes Isabella became a little pathetic but she may just have to get tough again soon. She loves her Peter...that sounded just wrong on so many levels, didn't it?

Take Care and I hope to hear from you again soon, Diane.   : )

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

As much as it pains me to say this.. I believe it necessary for the plot to develop even more. Wonderfully written; those days you took, really delving into her character to make it more.. realistic, were well worth it. :)
I do hope that Esme doesn't make another apperance, I feel it would only cause more problems for the erm.. "happy" couple. ;p
I can't wait for J & E to get back, though.. Drama city - I'll be strapped in, and ready for the after shocks. Wonderful as always,

-Sofia :)



Author's Response:

Hey Girl,

 How ya doin'? I love hearing from you. Thank you so much for the compliment. I tell ya that chapter kicked my butt in more ways than one. I can only hope Jasper doesn't kick my butt as well...lol. You do know that Peter does have on more big blow coming, right? Drama city will be coming your way again soon I hope. Take Care and thank you for the review. :)

 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

OMG, love it to pieces!!! Love this chapter so much!! Yes, score Carsile!! Glad to finally see the former vampire act like the 23 year old his character is, to act nothing like perfect protrayed in the books. I would also like to think some real life people (ahahm Peter F), no matter how nice they are have moments they would and do flip off people in private. hahaha. Now my question is will Peter/Carsile turn Bella over to Esme and Rose (who are probaly pissed and playing rock, paper sizzors with real rocks to see who gets Bella's baby. But really it should be Esme). Now what does wussie edward think of all this mess? Does he still want Bella back? When will Carsile/Peter be changed back to a vampire? Esme should do it, after all she was sired by the good doctor vimpire with his venium in her veins, so she should change him and he'll get his venum back (yah does it work that way in your vampire world?) Maybe there should be a car crash and Esme will have not choice but to change Peter back. Love how you referanced Judas, haha greatness!! Now will the personalitys of Carilse/Peter turn into one when he is changed or will Carsile be the first vampire in history to have multipule personality disorder? Haha I crack myself up!! (Sorry, long day and I cannot spell anymore). Your story is bananas!! Love it! See all the freting and rewriting and worrying was worth it, the chapter turned out great! Evil Bella got caught and is now facing the consequenses and emotional distruction of her actions. love it!! Cannot wait for the next chapter as always!

Laters and all that jazz

Jilly

Ps (Sam is going to have a few depressing pages this instalment, don't be mad at me, he's very beat up and needs time to recover, no you cannot help, evil charater stalker!) :)



Author's Response:

LOL...But I love PAPA Jill...you never allow me to play with him. And as long as I stalk fictional characters I won't go to jail...lol.

I also think that Esme should be the one to turn Carlisle and give him his own venom back. Right now I am at a cross roads with what direction to go in with Evil Isabella. Should she get depressed and suicidal or vengeful and deadly again?

I think in real life Peter has more than likely flipped a bird or two as well...hehe. But hey he thought Sam was his friend, and he has been betrayed by everyone he thought had loved him. He's slightly bitter I guess.

Laters back and love the coffee, Diane.

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

holy shit,way to go carlisle, punching a wolf in the face(get it),i know not funny anyway,i think he handled that quite calmly,so how long before they change him back? what is going to happen when he finds out jasper is  the father? will edward get another chance? or will they just kill/change her?

can't wait for next up-date,excellent ch.,bye for now.c.



Author's Response:

Thank You chedoo your support it means alot to me. LOL...yeah I get it. I figured that Sam knew he had that one coming so there was no need to go all wolfie on Peter. I don't think Peter can handle much more hurt at this point, but you know it has to come. I miss my Carlisle alot though and I am ready for him to come back. So other than that I can't tell ya much more ahead of time...<EG>

I love coffee sweetie so keep it coming. Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

:O... *waits patiently!!!!!!!!*

-Ever-Faithful reader, Sofia! :)



Author's Response:

I know, I know you want to shoo Esme away...lol. I understand and I'll try and keep that woman down. ;)

Please stay a faithful reviewer.

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

Oh. My. Goodness.
Possessive Jasper = Hottness ;o|
But poor Peter... *Chants mantra* Get pregnant, get pregnant, get pregnant.. ;D

-Sofia!



Author's Response:

Well at least you're not upset with me for making Jasper the father. You wouldn't believe how my reviews dropped on that chapter. Carlisle fans are not happy with me for it. But it was not my fault! Jasper wanted me to make him look all bad ass and Daddish. It's his fault for whispering in my ear. :) . Carlisle will have his day to sparkle in our hearts though. But not until Peter gets his heart broken.

Thanks for taking the time Sofia.

-Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Ugh.. I do want Carli- I mean, Peter.. To survive, he's so.. Carlisle-y! :P
I do think what Bella planned for Jasper was a bit intense, but I kinda figured she had it all in the bag . . . The entire time ;p
I am really getting tired of Esme's interference.. Everytime I see her name I want to shoo her away... lol, dangit.
Wonderful job, as always. :)

-Sofia!



Author's Response:

Hey there and ;p to you as well...lol. Evil Isabella does pretty much keep things bagged up and thinks ahead but every once in awhile they have to get one over on her. They have lived a long time and are very intelligent. I am really missing Carlisle as of late. But I am happy that you are liking Peter. I was lucky enough to meet him at our local mall and he is quite the little ball of energy. Or it could have been the two large cups of coffee he drank...teehee.

Thanks for the review. :0)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

Thank goodness you updated today, you brightened my long and crapy day here in rainy Southeastern Pa. I feel so sad for Esme, her heart is broken and her family betrayed. I hope Evil Bella will not do anything to hurt Rose and Emmett, they are both minor players in this play of betrayal. As for evil Bella, she should be locked in the Cullens basement, away from her child for the first ten years of her vampire life (assuming she does not die in childbirth). As for peter/Carilse sparkling again, I cannot wait to see the cercumstances his change back occures in, who changes him and how he turns out. Now in your universe, does he remember his vampire life, does he have to go back to medical school (does Dr Cullen desire to even practice medicine again?), how will Carilsle feel about Bella's trickery when he is changed back into a vampire? Will the good Doctor/Passafist forgive Bella for her evilness? Love this story sooooooooooooooooo much!!

After my long day at school, your update was a great relaxer!! Now Im off to abuse my own characters, i just have to deside who to play with, Sam has been stamping her foot this past week looking for some attention (I think she wants a lemon or two with her boy). But I did leave a adorable child in a basement, if you know what I mean and the Paster might be getting ressless...

Laters

Jilly



Author's Response:

Hey there Jilly,

 Well in my universe the sexy as f--k Doctor Cullen will remember much of this former life with Isabella. When he changes there will be so much hurt and betrayal felt by Peter, but also love. I would like to think that all of those years he was a doctor will come back to him. I just can't make up my mind as to how close to right that would sound. The other things that you have mentioned will be played out for the most part in later chapters.

I think after everything that the Sam in your story has been through that you need to let that poor girl get some from her handsome man, and please write more about her father as well. Yes I have daddy issues...lol. I never got to be a daddy's little girl... 'stomping my foot like a child'. Okay Laters to you as well and Thanks for filling my coffee cups all the way up. :)

-Diane

 

Reviewer: jaclynheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

Love, Love, Love it!! :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, now thats what I'm talkin' about! Thank You. :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

aww I feel so sad for Esme..I was getting goosebumps while reading it..



Author's Response:

Hi there,

 I will certainly take goosegumps as a good thing. : )

Thanks, as always, for reviewing this chapter for me. I know you understand how much I appreciate it. Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

woaw.. that was heavy stuff girl..  Im still digesting this chapter so not much in this review..  wow that will be a really tough thing for Edward to endure if the goes through with it.  cant wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

I wondered what had happened to you. I don't think very many people liked this chapter much. Its has to become worse before it gets better though, and believe me, it's going to get worse first. I mean this is about Carlisle paying and even when he is Peter he is still Carlisle. Even so, it does bother me to hurt him at all. The next chapter will take care of certain issues that need to be faced before they all four leave together having a laugh and then an 'oh crap', moment. The drama will pick up again for awhile, flipping back and forth, leading eventually to the end. Trust me when I say Evil Isabella will win in the end. She will have so much more than she had even hoped for. I know I write things that lead the reader one way and then head off in a different direction. I have things mapped out and then it seems that one of them will tempt me in another one. I tend to follow that gut feeling and this has lead to my having to map things out for a better build up and ending I believe. I hope you will stay with me through this ride and trust me.  :)

-Diane

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

Ah, yes Jasper with balls, great!! Go Jasper, Go, get Evil Bella!! Now here comes Edward, yha that might not be a good thing, that has the posablitly to be very ugly! What about this Dr Mason, and what part does he or she have to do with in this story? Vampire insurance, ha, I hope Esme gauges Evil Bella's eyes out for abusing her children and raping husband. On the topic of Esme, angry Esme is great, so when is she coming back to visit? I cannot wait for her to make another apperance. Maybe the girls should try to take Peter back when Bella is at work and the wolves are having hot sex with their imprints... that would be great!! Please don't name this baby Renesmee (no you cannot steal Vanessa either, she's mine to be mean too!) By the way did you see the interview on the Wendy Williams show with the real Peter last week, it was great!

Laters and all that stuff

Jilly :)



Author's Response:

HI Jilly,

 I like Jasper with balls, yeah baby. I'm actually not 100 percent sure in what direction I am taking the next chapter to yet. I think I might have upset a few people today with allowing Jasper to be the father. To be honest I hadn't even thought about a name for the baby yet. I didn't see Peter on that show. I don't think I've even heard of her. But I am sure Peter has a link posted somewhere to it. :) Thanks for the coffee.

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

I feel another epic review coming on girl.  I love the dream part of this.  Peter said before how cleaning up Bella's wounds was like basic instinct and he did a job even a doctor would be proud of.  Now he's dreaming of a life as a doctor and as Carlisle.  I don't blame him for freaking out when he woke up.

I feel bad for Jasper right now because it sounds like he's stuck in a state where he is left nearly motionless. However, I'm sure his mind has to still be able to function as normal.  He's stuck in that cell and I'll bet that he is in a state of constant guilt.  Guilt over disappointing Alice and the family, guilt over not being able to save Carlisle, and extreme guilt over Angela getting killed because of him.  The guilt has got to be killing him.

And now for Bella.  I feel so many things for that poor girl.  I hate what she's doing to Jasper.  Does she really think that he's going to help her raise any child with the way she has treated him and his family??  I love that she was able to truly fall in love with Peter.  He is such a loving and caring man and he would give everything for her.    I'm scared for her because she has three VERY pissed off vampire women after her.  Granted, she created the situation herself but still they would rip her apart without a second thought.  I'm excited that she is having the baby.  I do believe that it's Peter's baby because four months seems too long for the baby to grow at true vampire speed.  There could be lingering vampire characteristics that could cause that to happen as the doctor thought.

And the vampire women.  Esme's warning was terrifying and Bella better be watching her back at all times.  It was way too easy for Rosalie to throw out different ideas of how and when to kill her.  Their only concern now is the baby.  The best part was Peter going after Esme with the pencil.  I can picture that so clearly and it had me rolling.

Alright girl I'm going to end this here.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter.  Can't wait to see where you take us next.  Lova ya - D



Author's Response:

Oh my, I had meant for it to sound like even though she was actually four months pregnant the baby she was carrying was already at seven months. Flourishing at a vampire rate of growth. She had man-raped Carlisle and then slept with Peter after his tranformation. Also with in that time she was with Jasper. I believe Bella is smart enough to be afraid of those woman, and rightfully so. But knowing Bella she will protect herself and her own family as well. Do you think she is betting against Alice?

Thanks for the Review D and for the massive amount of coffee. :)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Great development!  I can't wait to see what happens...



Author's Response:

Thanks Dearjae, I'm trying to move it along a little faster so we can get to some interesting stuff. Thanks for reviewing for me, I really do appreciate it! Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Still love pissed off Esme. They should abduct Evil Bella until the child is born, so Esme and Caslisle can be parents and raise it (don't name it Rensemse- yuck!). Love pissed off Vampire Women. But the wolves have to go, they are just anoying. Could bringing in the Danali coven help the Cullens win? just something to think about. So Peter/Carlisle is starting to remember, to dream about his former life, how long is he going to be in denial about "loving Bella"?  Poor Jasper, he cannot win no matter what he trys to do. But it does seem like Alice still stands by him. Maybe they can salvage their relationship with a few changes of course. But something needs to be done about Evil Bella and help Esme get her relationship/husband back. Love it and Evil Jill is getting ready to strike again soon. Love this story, you made my day!



Author's Response:

Hi Jill,

 Thank You for the coffee, it makes it worth all the hours I actually spend trying to get things right. I love those pissed off vampire women as well, but all Bella really has going for her now is her brains, the wolves, and her pregnancy. All that combined would not help her against them if it came down to it. But when it comes to matters of the heart she already has Peter's. The next chapter Bella is going to have to get a few ducks in a row if she wants to survive after the baby comes. TTYL. :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 Then and Now

OMG girl you had me going this whole chapter.  I had to pause a couple times just to fully appreciate and laugh at some things lol. 

1.Jasper being weary of Alice seeing his "Major" side

2. The irony of the possiblity the baby is Jasper's

3. Peter telling them he didnt "invite" them in his house

4. Peter trying to stab Esme in the heart with a pencil lololol

5. Alice thanking Bella for the pics

Bella..Bella.. Bella.. she is just so much trouble that girl.  for like a tiny fraction of a second I felt sorry for her like she deserved to have happiness.  but it passed.  lol Esme said "bitch" lol .. it seems more offensive when she says it. espec since it was in front of Carlisle..



Author's Response:

I love that you caught all of that. I had the mental picture of Peter running with the pencil in my head. I just always see him as a funny person. I feel a little sorry for Bella at times, but like you, it passes. She has started a war with the vampire women so we'll have to see how things work out for her. She needs a plan to carry out the rest of her plan now. I am trying to move certain things along a little faster so we can get to some more exciting parts. :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

hey hey hey..  that was great...  I was kind of hoping "peter" will remember something about Esme but it was just wishful thinking lol.  It was so sad when Esme was trying to convince him he was carlisle.  If you really want to do something unexpected and throw us off.. I could believe you killed Jasper off but it wont be as fun if hes dead i think lol... different instances where i snickered and LoLd.... when Peter said his full name and said he was an actor.. and that he had a twitter account..when he showed bella his tatoo (had me thinking to myself.. oh god if he gets changed back to a vampire.. talk about tattoo regret.  maybe Esme would have to rip it off with his skin and hope it will heal back..lol)  I was thinking did his accent change too?? I dont remember if you talked about that.

You are welcome.. And congrats on the award.. I really have fun reading bout evil bella.. maybe we can call her revengella  nah that sounds too much like angella..  bitchella??  she needs a catchy name like all those names Edward gets.. am i right lol



Author's Response:

Oh hell yeah you're right. I like revengella thats cool. But I'll let you take care of that part you seem to be good with the names calling...lol. kidding. I will give you your Jasper points as well, he has been mapped out all the way baby...lol.

I see you keep up with real life Peter like I do. I knew anyone who is into the Cullens would catch those things and giggle a little. I love it when he plays that silly game with us fans. He is so funny with the BS he says.

I am glad you caught onto the tattoo thing. I was thinking the same thing as far as Esme is concerned, Isabella will never be erased. When he was changed she told him that he was from NY, but had went to acting school and they trained him to talk without the accent. All True,btw.

Thanks for the review, hun. :) It was awesome the way you caught the little details.

-Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

yay!! You made my day great! Somethign to read while my back heals. Evil Bella is one ruthless b*tch! She lives right across the street from wolves and Peter (hahah, still laugh at that, so sorry)is convenitly best friends with Sam, hahah thats great! The B*tch! But how is she going to explain away Esme and Im sure the others will visit Peter too, especally Alice sence she wants Jasper back, unless Jasper has his own plan of escape cooking (Im sure he does). How about having Esme come back with the Denali Caln to help her or trade winny Edward for Peter (hahaha). Now Evil Bella, I think your little vampire changing process is flawed, hahahaha! Peter/Carlisle is starting to get his memory back, Bella you are a sucky person, hahah(every guy should get the car he wants, Screw the Subaru, the black Mercedes wins)! Oh yha maybe have Peter start to have flashbacks to being Carlisle or maybe dreams, that would be cool and maybe have him ask Sam or even Emily about his "life" before the house fire and have one of them slip up and tell Peter his real identity. Maybe better yet have Esme just change him or have Peter and Bella get into a car accident and both of them have to be changed and Peter remembers he's actually Carlisle after the change and evil Bella losses her memory and is somehow 18 or 19 again (mentally and physically) errr could happen and she loves Edward again, that way everyone gets a happy ending and the Voltori stay blisfully unware of what happened. I love this story! I adore the new and improved Esme with guts as the Clan/Family leader. Don't mess with her, she will slap you silly into next week!! Im all for girl power! How about Peter/Carlisle starts craving blood and his body automatically starts changing back to vampire becuase his soul knows what it should be, that would be intresting to see happen. Or he suddenly remembers who he really is and contacts the Cullens or goes to visit them...

Ps Peter: women do not have power over men, yes we love our men and fight with them but no one has power over another person's life or mind(cults maybe but that's a whole other story Im writing). Pss: who cares about pissing off your wife, she's Evil Bella, she's pissed off anyway, one big case of PMS or should I say VHS (Vampire Hating Symdrom). I personally think he needs to grow a pare of balls like Esme did and get a life of his own (hopefully) or just leave Evil Bella, resque Jasper and get on with things, after all Evil Bella is a B*tch. How about sissy Edward, does he want or get anything out of this? How does he feel about the whole thing? How about Jake, maybe he could help the Cullens somehow? You could do so much with this story, it just blows my mind and I love it!! Looking forward to the next update!

Jilly :)



Author's Response:

Oh Jilly I love the way your mind works. We need to get together and write some dark fiction girl. The idea's are just flowing out of you. I want so much to spill my guts and tell you what I have planned and then let you put your own spin on it. Thats why I say maybe at some point we can do that. I want to write a Darlisle story next.

You got to admit that moving Sam in across the street was a stroke of Smart-evil on her part. Peter being Sam's new friend and taking him to do things is a good way to keep tabs and block Alice. She has plenty of money to buy Sams time after all. The tattoo will never go away, even if he does become a vampire again, it will be right there for Esme as a reminder.

I really don't plan on bringing Edward in until the last few chapters with good reason. I have thought about Peter having dreams. Also the things like him fixing her up so well a doctor would be impressed. That was the Carlsile in him as well as the kind of car he wanted. The playful, hyper, joking Peter is like the one I met in real life. So I am trying to border them on each other. Sam kind of explained that Bella had enemies and Bella told him what Esme was and that she wanted to bite him. So he knows he's on dangerous ground right now. I do have plans on Peter finding his real idenity out, but not in the way one would expect.

I am almost scared that our minds think so much alike on things. My hubby teases me about my mind being scary like S. King. But I am really an easy going person, hell I honestly wont kill a bug, if I can catch it, I'll put it back outside. But I don't care to torture fictional people. How messed up am I? Honestly.

I'll talk to you soon...Diane

Reviewer: kent9403 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

Chapter 11 is not appearing on my server.  I'm dying to know what happened between her and Jasper, but the chapter is blank.  Was there a problem with posting?  Love your story do far, evil Bella is great!  kent9403



Author's Response:

Thanks for the e-mail about that. I don't know what happened to it. I went into my account and it was gone. I know it was there before though because the reviews are still there. I re-posted it and it seems to be working now. If you have anymore problems with it let me know and I'll help you out.  :) Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Bravo... Interesting chapter, to say the very least.. ;D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Thank You, I'm kinda happy with it myself. :) Take Care, Diane

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

went to ff to read, WOW, Evil bella has reached a new level of manipulation,can't wait to find out how jasper reacts to find out that bella still played him ,god i love me some Major, will we get to see more? plz? i'm not beyond begging for the cowboy lol! Bellas not really going to let daddy C / peter die is she will he be able to be turned back  to vamp with this new cure he has had?would be sad to see him go , but i suppose its not all vampy sparkles and rainbows.

can't wait for more updates ,cheryl



Author's Response:

I love Carlisle, and Jasper is right on his heels as far as I'm concerned. I love me some major as well :). I just don't know if I could kill either of them off and sleep at night. But I guess we'll have to wait and see how it all turns out in the end. I am writting the next chapter now and it's giving me a hard time. It's more like two chapters so I might need to split it up. I do know I need to get things moving a little faster though. I hope to hear from you again soon. Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

Evil Bella, yha!! OMG (very over used, but appropriate here). Evil Bella got what she deserved, yay Jasper, stand up for yourself for once. Now how pissed off is Alice going to be and I thought it was in bad taste for her to threaten Rose that way, evil Bella you suck. What about Charlie in all this, would he not be ashamed of his daughters behavior? Or did Victoria get him? Back to Dr C/Peter (I laugh at that every time I think about it), who is baby sitting him when she is at work or does she drug him or bring him with her? What is keeping the Cullens away from him while she's not home? So if and when Dr C/Peter is turned back into a vampire, will he survive, will he get his previous memories back? Or will he be like a new born vampire, blood lust and all (that would be cool, no more perfect Carlisle...). Bella needs a serious ass kicking in this story, please do not have her get pregnant with Carlisle/Peters baby, that would just be awful, but that could go in a whole other weird direction, haha the baby could be half vampire b/c his sperm still contained vampire dna (do vampires have dna in your stories world?). You could do so many strange things with that one...
Love your story Diane, going to pimp out the new chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
laters and all that jazz
Jilly



Author's Response:

I'm lovin' this review girl.

Okay, I haven't thought too much about Charlie as of yet. Isabella is so independent that I doubt Charlie knows how bad she really is. I would think he is off telling all of his friends what a big success his daughter is being a brain and all. Some of your questions have been answered in the next chapter that I have partially mapped out already. Some of your questions I can't give away the answers for, and others, I am really happy you have asked. I don't want any loop holes in this story, so I love getting questions. This way I also know what's on everyone's mind, and I can guide things in a certain direction. Thanks for pimpin' me out girl you have gotten me some votes and for that I am grateful.

Thanks for the review and the coffee I love that stuff...Diane

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

so I read chapter 11 on ff, excellent!  Very well written and I love the dynamics between her and Jasper, the constant power struggle, very good writing and I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank You so much. To be honest I enjoyed writing that chapter a little to much...lol. Thanks for the reading and reviewing for me. :) I hope to hear from you every chapter.

-Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

(same review I put on FF cause the missing chap here lol)  I want to keep consistant with my reviews for each chap ;)  and get ur numbers up lol.

omg..Jasper gave her a taste of her own medicine.  I laughed when J smacked her with his wang lol.  but ooo what will happen when Alice gets those pics.  Most likely she may know already when Jasper made his move. Did Bella deserve it? yes..  but at least we got to see that the "old" Bella is still under there.  dont know if it makes a difference cause she is just burning bridges all over the place.  it seems as though you are making it not possible to end up in a HEA. 

Ill def. go and vote for u girl..



Author's Response:

Thank you for the support for this story. I really appreciate the vote as well. I was shocked because I really don't have that many reviews. Thank You for helping with my numbers as well. :) With what I have planned for Evil Isabella she will get her HEA but it won't be a typical one as far as love goes. I like how you said J smacked her with his wang. That was priceless girl, you got me to laughing with that one.  I'll talk to you soon, hon, Diane

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

there's no chapter just the authors notes. 



Author's Response:

I know there must be a problem within the site itself. I checked some other stories and they are doing the same thing. You can go over to ff and read it there if you would like. :)

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

um, ok. so jasper isnt exactly buying into bella right now. i kinda hope he does though. i would also love to know what he thought of his lil show. lol cant wait for the next update



Author's Response:

I will post tomorrow and Jasper is going to do a total turn around on Bella. Pooooor Bella. :)

Thanks for the coffee, I love it and your review. Diane

Carlisle Pays While Bella Preys is up for best darkfic if you want to vote for it. Here's the link-Voting ends Monday night I think.

 

http:/gemawards.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

um, i think that i would like to hear jaspers pov for after the talk that bella had with him. id like to see how the wheels in his head are turning and what his now thinks of alice. im luving this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you....I didn't find your two reviews until today. I always answer within a couple of days. But yeah the next chapter does answer your questions. I am so glad that you love this story I am having a good time coming up with plots for Evil Isabella. But every once in awhile I have to let the vampire's get one over on her...lol.

Thanks for the review and the coffee is soooooooo good. :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

oh wow wow wow..  naughty naughty  Bella.  I cant wait to see what will happen if Esme sees Carlisle again.



Author's Response:

 I'm actually working on that for the next chapter. Thanks for the review....Diane :) 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

For who wins, well Im rooting for the Cullen women, its about time someone gives them some credit. As for the Peter situation (I still roll my eyes and laugh at that, its great- real life meets fan fiction in a way and its not a stupid real life FF, where a made up character or real person meets the actor from twilght and they fall in love, yuck, not for me), it would be great if Peter the human ment Esme and fell in love with her despite what Evil Bella did (maybe good Bella is still in there after all and it's a trick by the Volutori, new form of mind control that can get around Bella's human mind's sheild). Regardless this is one of the best FF stories and the most original plot I have read. Ps Im going to pimp out this story on Facebook's Twilight Fanfiction Recommindations Page, if you would let me...   :)



Author's Response:

Pimp Me out all you would like to Jilli. I certainly will take that as a compliment. I would actually like to have that link, so I can find some good ff myself. I have a Facebook but I don't say too much about my writing there, unless it's to my beta.

I'm over on ff under the same screen name. I really like this site though, It seems much more personal to me. Thanks for taking the time to read and now recommend me as well. :) I really don't know what else to say other than a big THANK YOU!  Take care and thanks for all that coffee.

-Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

This story is great beyond words!! Pissed off Esme, yes!! Don't mess with this angry mother hen Vampire!! Her mate is gone and she's pissed beyond words! Her character is smarter then many given her credit for and not enough time or plot was given to her in the series (or Dr C for that matter)! Anyway, Esme and Rose are out for revenge and may have to tie Edward up to keep him out of the way, which would probaly be a good idea (his emo a$$ needs a reality check). Looking forward to the next chapter! Lets rescue the 300+ year old vampire and get him back to his old blood drinking self (let me guess, his alter Peter (hahah totally missed that one last chapter, haha) is going to like being human, maybe he will like Esme better then his 'wife' Bella) and get revenge on bada$$ Bella! :)



Author's Response:

I so agree with you that Carlisle and Esme didn't get enough time in the series. The women are most certainly pissed off and who can blame them. Peter doesn't have any vampire memories. He was a clean slate for Bella to do with as she pleases. Evil Isabella still has a few tricks up her sleeve and so far she's getting her way. Their all very smart, it will be interesting to see who wins in the end. Thanks for the review and you know I love the coffee. :)

-Diane

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

What torture for poor Jasper!



Author's Response:

:) You gotta love Jazz! Thanks for the review kit.

-Diane

 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Wow! She really has this whole scheme worked out! It could really work too....I wonder what Jasper will say to the rest of the clan!



Author's Response:

Jasper's a smart one, I'm not sure what he will say to the rest of the clan. But you can bet that he will be listening and watching both sides. Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor jasper...how could she nail him? And I am so curious about Carlisle's outcome!



Author's Response:

Because she is one bitter bitch. It didn't hurt him like it would a human. :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

I love this story! Evil Bella is the best! She is doing to Carlisle what we all wish we coud do!



Author's Response:

I'd do him. <eg>

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

i cant wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I love that you're excited for more. Thank You and I hope to hear from you again next chapter. :)

-Diane

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Very good chapter!  Good lemon and it was good to get the other perspectives.  



Author's Response:

Thank You, I'm glad you liked the lemon. I could see it in my minds eye, but getting it from there onto paper, I just can't seem to do that yet. Someday though, I think it will just click for me and I'll be able to write it a little more sexy. Thanks for taking the time to review this story for me. I have so many idea's for it and I am still searching for more. Have a good one, Diane.

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Damn I'm scared of Esme.  She so wants Bella dead.  I felt really bad for her when she was thinking about Carlisle being killed by the wolves.  I'm surprised she actually went to Sam to ask him about it...like he was really going to tell her the truth.  It will be interesting to see which one gets their hands on Bella first...Rosalie or Esme.

I loved Jasper's POV.  It's nice to know that he isn't quite as trusting as he seemed.  He's paying close attention to everything Bella is doing so he can get himself out.  Now I think, after that little sex show she made him watch, he's going to be pissed off that Bella is using him that way.  He's going to try even harder to get out and take Carlisle back to Esme.  Of course I could be wrong and Jasper was turned on enough that he wants to get some too.  Hmmm...inquiring minds want to know.

Great chapter.  Girl you know I love it when you throw in those HOT ASS sex scenes.  I could take the visuals of Carlisle all day long.  Bring 'em on.  TTYL...D



Author's Response:

I get so embarrassed trying to write those damn sex scenes. Hum. So you think Jasper is above getting some on the side? Your right though, watching that might be disturbing to him on some levels. Then again, it just might turn him on to. Bella does want him to come on to her first after all.

It will be interesting to see what side Jasper takes in the end.  Maybe Jasper won't see him as the father figure now that he's Peter.

Yeah Esme is pretty pissed off at this point. She was mad enough to go over into wolf territory by herself. That takes some guts.

Thank you for your reviews and you know your coffee is always welcomed....Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

I am surprised with the change in his appearance. I didn't expect that. I love how sweet he was when he thought they lost a baby and was so ready to try again. I love a frisky Carlisle...oops I mean Peter (love how you worked that in there).

Bella's interaction with Jasper was interesting.  She really got into his head quick to make him see he was being controlled by the Cullens. I figured it would take her longer than that.  I can't wait to see if she's able to pull this off.

As far as another POV, that would depend on where the next chapters are going to go.  It would be interesting to get Jasper's POV to see if he is really buying into Bella's story or if he is trying at all to escape.  It would also be good to hear from Esme or Rosalie.  Esme because she has got to be devastated by losing Carlisle.  Rosalie because she has got to be absolutely furious and ready to kill Bella.  Anyone would be interesting to read.  Awesome job can't wait for the next chapter...D



Author's Response:

Thank You, I imagine Peter is a hoot to be married to and his wife is one lucky lady. However, I still prefer the pretend Hollywood look of Carlisle. So I thought it would be awesome to combine the two and have a little fun, Aw, the perfect man.

Bella did get into Jasper's head quickly. I do see him as a strong warrior, but on the inside, I think he can be easily manipulated if you know what buttons to push. I wouldn't trust Jasper completely yet though.

Nevertheless, Evil Isabella will get what she wants for awhile. Eventually, all hell will have to break loose.

I had found something I had written from Carlisle's POV for like chapter four or something. I was wondering why I didn't post it back then. I guess Jasper will need to be heard. I believe Esme should have a run in with Peter as well.

You know Rosalie would rip Bella's head off and enjoy it immensely. However, a pregnant Bella will keep Rose at bay.

Thanks for the coffee lady and I'll talk to you later, Diane.

:)

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Great story!  Can't wait to see where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I am really happy that people are starting to read it. :)  Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

Oh no! I've never really been a fan of Alice's character, but then again, this changes depending on how she's written. Though for the most part, I don't like her. ;p
I love the fact that Bella has.. erm.. "rescued," my two favorite characters (Carlisle & Jasper.) :D
I'm literally itching to read more, your story had me cracking up. :)

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Jasper are my two favorite's as well so we should get along just fine from that standpoint. I'm glad you were laughing because that's what I hope for Peter to be in this story, Just carefree and funny. :) I would love to hear more from you in the future.

-Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Do a Esme point of view, it would be great to see how pissed she is about what is going on, hummm who is the coven leader now? Love this story, great evilness and OCC, which makes it even better. Maybe later in the story, twist it around, have the Cullens find Bella, resque a stunned Jasper, change Carlisle back and mess with Bella, maybe have her changed into a vampire agenst her will and kept weak like she did to her captives... just an idea. Regardless this story is the best!



Author's Response:

That's two votes for Esme. I am so glad that you love this story. You're close to being on the same wave length as I am with it. Except, I have the story out-lined differently but, some of the results are the same in the end.

There will be a lot of drama and evilness ahead for the Cullens. But Peter is going to bring in some comic relief here and there. Peter Facinelli is one funny dude in real life and a fireball of energy. I just couldn't resist writing him in, although it will suck when he has to be written out.

Thanks for the encouraging words and I hope I continue to write this story in a way that keeps you so excited. :) Thanks for the coffee....Diane

 

 

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

I think that would be interesting.. Maybe Esme? To see how she's coping with her loss without Carlisle, allowing us a look into what the family is like w/o Carlisle and Jasper? I would say Alice but... I don't like her in this story lol. Nice work, thus far! Truly an interesting concept, bravo!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Hi Sofia,

 Did I cause you not to like Alice? I am so sorry if I did. I just thought it was intesting the way Isabella twists things to her advantage.  Esme would be an interesting pov to write from. I'm sure she is feeling the lose of Carlisle and one of her sons.

Thanks for the bravo, I always need encouragement when I sit down with this one. It's a booger to write. I try not to leave loop holes in it but I'm sure I do. Thanks for the review and I hope to hear from you again next chapter...Diane  :)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

She is fucking insane.... But I LOVE it! :D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Wow, I am loving your attitude girl. :)

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

LOL! Now THIS is how the book should've gone. ;D

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

Well as long as those same good-looking men are in it....lol. :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

lol  omg.  I laughed when you renamed Carlisle, to Peter.  It was interesting how his hair color changed lol.  that explains the banner.  Vampire or not.. still hot. Wow does Bella think she could get away with keeping Carlisle in the dark that long and bear 2 of his children in the process? lol. She should try to save time and get pregnant with multiples. I was surprised with how quick Jasper came around. Maybe being suspended on a cross for a few days will do that to ya.



Author's Response:

Hi there, I am glad I checked this because either my email is not working right or....? Anyhow, I just love Peter. I got to meet him a few months ago whenever he came to do a signing for charity. That man has far too much energy...lol. He was standing in one place jumping up and down. He would even do that while he was taking pictures with fans. Plus he gots jokes...hehehehe.

Jasper is going to be a key player in this story as well. I see Jasper in two different lights. One being the strong 'God of War' type and the other being the sensitive impath that can be led by his feelings. If Maria could trick him all those years ago, Evil Isabella should be no different.

Thanks for the review. I am happy to hear that you liked Carlisle becoming Peter....   :)   Diane

 

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank You much :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh holy hell, Bella's gone crazy!! Oh man in shock here, nothing more to say. I'll be in my own happy little place bleaching that image of Jasper out of my brain.

By the way, why has Alice not seen any of this (did I miss that explination?)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that's why I wrote that little warning on there. I keep trying to come up with all kinds of crazy for this story. The wolves stop Alice from seeing most things. Bella calls them in when needed. Plus Bella has Margie, she has the same gift as Alice with the added bonus of witchlike powers. I wouldn't say that Alice never see's anything, especially whenever it comes to Jazz. However, Bella has them under-ground. No street signs and she's very careful with things knowing all their strengths and weakness's She'll have to deal with the ' and I'm sure the women will be pissed off over their men. But for right now Bella has her own agenda.

I'm glad you reviewed and thanks for the coffee. I love it! Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

 Man.. this is hard to take.   Bella is scaring the shit outta me. lol I wanna get to the part when Jasper gets taken ;) Maybe she shud take Rosalie next and she'll be happy with it.  I bet she'll be willing to go girl on girl just for Bella to hook her up lol. 

Carlisle...  aw poor baby.. he's scared.. and what the hell is Bella gonna brainwash him to think what happened to him and mold him to what she wants?



Author's Response:

Bella is on a mission with Carlisle. She hates him but loves his intelligence. She intends to get everything all rolled into one neat little package. I bet you didn't expect the whole cross thing, did ya? I think Carlisle's transformation will be something you don't expect either. It's going to be a little humorous. I'm still brainwashing Jasper but it seems that you ladies from here and another site wants Jasper taken. I'll have to work that out I guess. I'm still having a hard time writing guy on girl and now you want girl on girl and another lady wants guy on guy...lol. Oh Lord...lol. I have to think about that one! Thanks for the Review and the suggestion. I love that Evil Bella is getting some attention. :)

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

That was pretty HOT. I think I like submissive Carlisle too.  I am surprised she let him loose but hey who in their right mind would resist that request.  I kind of got the impression that he was sad when he asked what would happen to him when he's human.  Its sad that she can't save him after the three years because she may want him around after that much time. 

I am afraid for Jasper. He's so strong and it will be a hard thing to break him.  I wonder if she can really do it.  We'll see.  Great job lady.  I can't wait for more...Dee



Author's Response:

Hi Mizzdee...I always love hearing from you. Carlisle is definitely sad about the change that is going to happen. He will lose so much and has no choice. However, Isabella has some selfish plans for a human Carlisle. Jasper will be interesting to break for sure. I just hope his years of intelligence can match her's. A lot of women think differently than a man, especially when they have an agenda of their own...lol. I wonder if we should let the bad girl win for a change? Thanks for the coffee, darlin'. Later, Diane  :)

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

I love how clueless Edward is. How could he think she would just go home with him because he said he loved her?  It's been too long for him to think that she feels the same way.  I love how she just walked up and shot him.  I'm surprised that it actually took so many shots to subdue Jasper. He's definitely going to give her some trouble. I'm so curious to see if she's able to turn him to her side.



Author's Response:

Edward still lives in the past and was more than willing to marry the Bella he knew and let her die a natural death. I can see him holding on and thinking she would love him as much as he loves her. How wrong was he? I liked it when she just shot him like it was an everyday thing as well.

I know Jasper took a lot of shots, and she almost killed him. But, I think that with all the wars he was in and the bites he received from newborns that he has built up a natural resistance to most anything concerning the physical body. It's his mind and heart that will be his down fall. Thanks for the coffee and the review. Love, Diane

 

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

Wow I can't believe she ran that fire up and down his body the way she did. That had to be so extremely painful for him.   I like her description of Jasper and why she felt the relation to him.  Great job making that connection.



Author's Response:

I thought the cruelest thing that she did to Carlisle though was to punch him in his mouth. Even I thought that was evil of her.

Jasper, I believe does share a lot of the insecurities that Bella does. Thanks for the kind words. :) Diane

 

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

Okay that was cruel saying Jasper's name like that. But she got what she wanted. But I'm glad that Carlisle was able to make her panic a little with what he said to her when she was leaving.  While I'm sure it felt good for him to do at the time. I'm afraid of what she'll do to him now.  Poor Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Isabella is very cruel and vengeful. Her whole goal is to hurt the Cullens', especially poor Carlisle. He did get her good though but, still he didn't really cause her any real harm. Not like she does him.

Thanks for the review and the coffee.... Diane

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

Bella takes such pleasure in seeing Carlisle broken by the idea of losing his family and his life.  She was finally able to explain to someone how it felt when she was left behind. She needed to make him understand and know that he was going to feel that pain too. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

This Bella will always get her way. I don't know if things will ever be the same for her. They could have told her good-bye and that they loved her. But instead they listened to a man trapped in the body of a seventeen year old. Carlisle was old enough to know better and so was Esme. Thats what I think anyhow. :) But I love my Carlisle, he's the bomb!

Thanks again, Diane

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