Date: 16 Mar 2011 7:38 AM Title: An Unexpected Triple
What exactly were Edward and Bella argueing about before they got in the accident?
I have so many questions but I'm hoping they'll be revealed in future chapters. Will this have a HEA?
I'm surprised Edward was released so soon from the hospital. Why does it feel like Esme and Carlisle seem reluctant for Edward to go to the hospital? He's going to need tremendous support now.
Please, don't let this get worse before there's improvement.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:29 AM Title: An Unexpected Triple
I'm so happy to see that you are updating this again. I love this beautiful and touching story.
Edward is in so much pain between his own injuries and worry about Bellas that it is almost palpable. I think I'm going to need a new box of kleenex at hand while I read this!
I will remember to put the kleenex warning in future chapters. Thank you so much, this one tugs at the heart strings for me as well so i'm glad that you felt the emotion i was trying to put out there. I'm glad you liked it, thanks as always, for the review.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 7:49 PM Title: An Unexpected Triple
So where is Bella's family?
It all gets explained next chapter, but Renee and Phil have been on vacation and out of touch, and Charlie was there but had to go home. Edward's only been awake for 3 days remember, so it hasn't been that long. Thanks for the review and all will be explained soon, i promise!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 6:15 PM Title: An Unexpected Triple
for some reason, i started tearing up when emmett was telling edward about how he bought the bath and body works for edward.. awww....how sweet...
and where are bella's parents?
It'll get explained next chapter, but Renee and Phil are on vacation and they haven't been able to reach them yet, they've left messages but the point of this vacation was to not have their phone ringing every 5 minutes because its all that happens whenever they go anywhere. Charlie was there for the first two days, but had to get back because he's short staffed, he's saving his time for when Bella wakes up, because he refuses to think otherwise. And thats so sweet that Em made you tear up a little, thats his boy taking care of him for ya! I'm so excited that you're enjoying this one...I can't wait for what's coming.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:08 PM Title: It's What You Beget
well i hope for is sake that she wakes up! cant wiat till the next chatper keep them comming
this is a HEA, don't worry, its just a long journey. thanks for the nice review and I'm so happy you enjoyed the update!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:04 AM Title: It's What You Beget
Oh, I sure hope this has a happy ending, with Bella waking up ... nice story!
This is HEA and her waking up will not be the ending but a further part of their journey...thanks for the review and for letting me know what you think!
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:27 AM Title: It's What You Beget
So glad this one is back in rotation :) Great chapter- Edward got to pound on sleazy Mike, love the walk down memory lane. Cant wait for the next update.
Thank you so much...i'm having fun with this format, and all the will she wake questions...which for a hea, she kind of has to, but her recovery beyond that will be marked as well.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:18 AM Title: It's What You Beget
i hope bella will be okay...poor edward.. he loves her so much. i don't know what he's do if bella were to be permanently injured...
i wonder what edward is going to do now that he can no longer play... what do retired baseball players do? become a sports newsperson? coach? or just live off their earnings... isn't baseball the highest paid sport? i'm sure they won't have any problems with money but i'm worried that edward might be feeling lost without something to do, or a career to keep him grounded... but i am looking WAY too far into the future. the important thing right now is bella.
Edward's future as far as his career is tied directly to Bella's recovery, because until she is well, that is his priority. This is a HEA...eventually, but there is a long road of recovery here. thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:46 AM Title: A Fork in the Road
this story is off to a great start!!!! i'm really excited to see where you plan on going with this. bella's step father is probably phil...and i'm guessing that he was the one who taught her about baseball. if so, i'm glad that she had formed such a great bond with him. i wonder if she'll be partly responsible for edward being able to play pro baseball by giving him the connections that he needs? obviously, he has talent,b ut maybe she had a hand in helping him get there with her connection to phil????
i didn't really understand what their fight was about at hte beginning of the story... does edward want to have kids but bella is reluctant because she's afraid that he won't be able to devote the time needed to help raise them, with his baseball career? if so, then that's incredibly selfish of him, i think... he can't expect bella to raise the kids on her own, while he's traveling with the team. then again, i don't really know what their fight was about...i'm just guessing
yes Phil is her step father and their hand in Edward's future is interesting, but to answer your question, the fight isn't supposed to be completely clear but he does talk about it in this next chapter...it isn't that he wants a kid and to leave her home to care for it...they've been having problems and without saying anything she started taking birth control again and he's mad she didn't talk to him before deciding they weren't having kids. that was why he was so mad...he felt betrayed.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:21 PM Title: A Fork in the Road
I suggest that this come with a tissue alert warning as I have a feeling we are going to need it!
Love it so far and the fact that he plays baseball..ummmmmmmm. Love Edward in a uniform..ANY uniform will do. But tight baseball pants..yeah!
You'll definitely get a heads up on bad chapters...and Edward in a baseball uniform is fricken hot! I'm having fun creating their history...thanks for the love!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: A Fork in the Road
Interesting. What did or has been doing that their marriage is in jeopardy prior to the accident? So far, so good!
It's been a long time for them with a lot of bumps, but you'll be seeing it soon enough. Thanks for the love!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:18 PM Title: A Fork in the Road
Mandy---this story has me truly interested. Can't wait for you to update. This is a truly different story, which is nice! Keep up the good work!
I'm happy you like it and I'm enjoying the concept...when it came to me I was so excited about how it changed the story.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 3:36 PM Title: A Fork in the Road
This sounds like its going to be a great story. Kind of reminds me of The Notebook as well. He's telling her their story so she can come back to him and remember the love they shared. Can't wait for more. You're awesome.
Thanks for all the love. Its funny, I've never seen or read the Notebook, but my beta also mentioned it when she first read it. That's exactly what Edward's thinking, he still loves her, he's just made some really bad choices along the way. I'm glad that you enjoyed the beginning.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 2:38 PM Title: A Fork in the Road
Love you too hon! Glad to see you getting this up :) Hope they like it as much as I did. :)
Yeah I decided it was time to get it out there and I have a few partial chapters that you may be getting soon. Hope all is well with you.