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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

That made a certain convoluted logic, hearing Rose explain why she killed Violet. I figure, if that satisfys Emmett, that's good enough for me. Emmett is so good-hearted and giving, it's hard for me to blame him near as much as I do Rosalie. I know she's not a total bitch, but she is pretty selfish. This escapade has had a profound effect on her, for the better.



Author's Response:

Well I'm glad you can sypmathize even if you don't agree with how it went down.

 

Thanks for your reviews.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Violet, if she had only known, her son could have saved her, if Rosalie had let the venom spread. Wait until Emmett finds that out!



Author's Response:

Yup, Rose didn't want to fight to be mommy on this one.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

This scheme of rosalie's is beginning to have unintended consequences, for both her and Emmett. Poor Violet, she has no idea what she's being used for, and would no doubt be horrified if she did know.



Author's Response:

It's true, the poor girl won't know what hit her.

 

Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

There's a problem they never figured on, that Emmett might like the surrogate as a person. Wonder what Rose would think of that? This second attempt went just fine, but I'll bet Em hasn't thought it may take more than once.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well, that went well! Emmett tried to tell Rose he wasn't gentle, she should have listened. Poor random girl paid a really high price for having sex with a stranger. I see it hasn't cured Rose of wanting to try again. Sure, no skin off her nose, right? 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I always knew Rosalie was self-involved, but this is a bit much, even for her! Good old Emmett, he really would do anything to make his Rosie happy.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews. This Rose has a few less redeemable traits than canon Rose, but I can still see her go this way. Remember she didn't care if Bella died, as long as the baby made it.

Reviewer: countrygirl043986 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

You should weight another story with Rose,Emette, & JC going back to the Cullens and how Nessie reacts to the new addition like her & maybe even then leah can have a strong imprint also.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I know that there would be a full story here, but I just wanted this snippet of their lives. I am afraid I don't like Rose enough to write a whole story on her. LOL

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good Story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I appreciate all the reviews

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder if the venum will fix her broken neck and change her anyway....



Author's Response:

Well you finished so you already know the answer. But thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

God this is messed up.... I wonder if Emmett will turn her and leave Rosalie.



Author's Response:

Yes, my brain works in very unusual ways. LOL

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

WOW! I bet Rosalie didn't see that coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing. And Roslalie has a plan, she always does.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Emmett. I wonder if they will be okay at the end of this...



Author's Response:

Yes, I feel bad for Emmett too. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man Rosalie is a bitch....



Author's Response:

LOL, yes she is. I think she was in the books too, I guess I just brought it out a little more in this one.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow.  

I have nothing else to say.  Other than that I wish it went further.  But I'm sure you get that a lot.  :) 

 

Great story.  



Author's Response:

Yes, this one could have went on forever, but I had no desire to live with Rose that long. LOL

 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

OH.  My.  God.  

 

Did not see that coming.  

 

Although - I didn't see Rose sharing the spotlight with the birth mother.  



Author's Response:

Yes, well how could they coexist. It just wouldn't work. It wouldn't be Rose's kid.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

uh-oh.  

 

I imagine this would be the one major problem with pimping your husband out.   

 

;)



Author's Response:

Yup, my jealousy would win over wanting a kid anyday. Thanks again for your reviews.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ok. This is soooooo wrong.  but sooooo good.  



Author's Response:

Ha ha, yes, there is a lot wrong with what they are doing but it's good reading....I hope. LOL

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Holy shit.  

 

wow.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, this one is fairly intense.

Reviewer: rubyrandom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Rose, how I can relate.   If only it were that easy...get your husband to kidnap and knock up a girl because your own body can't or won't tolerate a pregnancy.  We'd all have babies then...now wouldn't we.  :(

 

*sorry I'm just now reading - I meant to read this a LONG time ago.  RL has been crazy busy.  But you have to know I'd come back.  ;)  Your writing is too good to pass up.  No matter what the topic. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad everything worked out between Emmett and Rose. Emmett is definitely a great guy to be so forgiving. I still feel bad that Violet died, but I think it goes well with the story. Can't wait for your new stories. I'm looking forward to reading more of your amazing writing.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

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Thank you for reviewing the last chapter of All I Ever Wanted. Here is a teaser for my new fic called Attraction Vs Compatibility. 

EPOV

I felt her before I saw her; I turned to see her walking towards her picnic table, the one she and her friends always sat at. The way she moved could hypnotize a man. She was confident and sexy, always with a smile on her face.

Some days when she was wearing her cheerleading outfit, it was near impossible to stay away from her. It wasn’t something I was ever attracted to before, cheerleaders, that is, but her in that tiny skirt was heaven. She was completely different from me, where I was more shy and withdrawn, she was bold and sassy.

I knew her name was Bella as I had heard her friends shout it enough times, but that was the extent that I knew about her, besides the fact that she was beautiful.

She met my eyes as she always did and I was speechless. Her eyes were always so kind and welcoming, even to me, someone she didn’t know. I knew she felt the pull that I did, but the truth was, she was the kind of girl who could have anyone.

What would she do with me?

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am glad she and Emmitt reconciled - but she is a hurting unit.  Sadly, I could see Meyer's Rosalie tempted to do that.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I totally think that Canon Rose would do somethign like this. She was happy to let Bella die to save Renesmee. The girl is a peice of work! LOL

 

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Thank you for reviewing the last chapter of All I Ever Wanted. Here is a teaser for my new fic called Attraction Vs Compatibility.  

EPOV

I felt her before I saw her; I turned to see her walking towards her picnic table, the one she and her friends always sat at. The way she moved could hypnotize a man. She was confident and sexy, always with a smile on her face.

Some days when she was wearing her cheerleading outfit, it was near impossible to stay away from her. It wasn’t something I was ever attracted to before, cheerleaders, that is, but her in that tiny skirt was heaven. She was completely different from me, where I was more shy and withdrawn, she was bold and sassy.

I knew her name was Bella as I had heard her friends shout it enough times, but that was the extent that I knew about her, besides the fact that she was beautiful.

She met my eyes as she always did and I was speechless. Her eyes were always so kind and welcoming, even to me, someone she didn’t know. I knew she felt the pull that I did, but the truth was, she was the kind of girl who could have anyone.

What would she do with me?

Reviewer: marti1013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

oooooh!  Me likey.  More?



Author's Response:

Yes, there is one more chapter. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lluvy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok...well since I just relized she is gone does that mean that Emmet is seriously gonna stay with Rosalie? Ew. I hope he finds a girl that's actually good. But that is seriously disappointing that Violet is dead. I liked her. =(



Author's Response:

Ha ha. There is one more chapter left, I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: lluvy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! PLEASE DON'T TELL ME VIOLET IS DEAD PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm not going to tell you because you didn't want to know.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Violet. I feel bad that she died. Rose killing her didn't come as a complete surprise and in a sick and twisted way I understand why she did it. Leaving Violet alive would complicate things. What if she had wanted to keep the baby for herself? Not only that, but Rose definitely seems like the jealous type and I don't think she could handle seeing the woman her hubby had sex with. Atleast not when she already got what she wanted from that. Great writing like always. Can't wait to see what happens.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

I love watching the reactions to this. Some think Rose is just crazy while others can sympathize her motives.

I hope the next chapter clears up her thinking. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Lilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow.  I wasn't expecting that.  Hopefully Emmett will be able to forgive Rose one day.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. The next chapter is the last.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

OH did Rosalie kill her?  Rosalie is more than a little looney now....



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am, Violet is no more.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Heatherstwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is really good



Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't respond earlier, somehow this one snuck past me. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Is it weird that I feel bad for Rosalie eventhough it was her idea to have Emmett do this? It's such a strange thing for me to say because I always disliked Rose in the series. I'm so conflicted. I feel bad for Rose because her husband is now thinking of another woman when he is with her. I feel bad for Emmett because he clearly wants to please his wife, yet he is developing feelings for Violet. And Violet, I feel bad for her because she doesn't have any clue as to what is going on. At this point I don't even know what scenario to root for in the end. Clearly I am a very confused individual right now. I'm blaming my confusion on your writing being so great that you have made me care for all three characters. The fact that you could make me care for Rosalie in this twisted scenario is amazing. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I hate Rosalie too, so the fact that I could write something that made anyone feel for her makes me a little proud. LOL.

Reviewer: Lilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

This is the first Rose and Emmett story I have read.  I'm usually all about Bella and Edward.  I have actually always like Rosalie.  She tells it like it is.  It's sad the way she going about getting a baby,  but I guess that's desperation.  I can't wait to see how it goes.  I would like to see Rose get the one thing she always wanted so badly.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I am usually all about B/E too, but this story line popped into my head and I had to write it!!

Reviewer: lluvy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMG! I love this story! Now I'm not really into Rosalie/Emmet stories but I love this. I seriously can't wait until the next update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm not really into Rose/Em stories either. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it. I'm very interested to see how this is going to play out. I'm thinking Rose and Emmett have different views on how this will end for the girl if she does get pregnant. It seems like Emmett actually likes the girl and I don't think Rose will like that. Then again stranger things have happened. Can't wait to see what happens.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Thanks girl, I love that people don't know where I am going with this. I've actually tweaked the ending like three times, so I might not even know where this is going. LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Rosalie has gone off the deep end. There are so many ways that they could go about getting a baby, yet she chose the most extreme. It's so disturbing. I can't imagine any wife who would want their husband to do this. Atleast not a sane one. LoL. I'm definitely intrigued and want to know how this will play out. I'm not even going to try to guess cause you never do what I'm expecting. You are obviously way more creative than I am. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Elli :)

Author's Response:

Yes, she has. But they can't really have a human kid, it wouldn't be safe. The Volturi keep an eye on the Cullen clan.

 

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

OK - Rose has gone nuts.....

 

She could get a job in a daycare - first in an infant room and then a toddler bungalow.  Toddlers are more spirited, followed by a preschool.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Yes, Rose is a bit desperate. She see's something that is possible for her now and wants it without thinking of the consequences.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, so I've never actually read a fic about Rose and Emmett. However, since I'm a huge fan of your writing I'm giving it a try. It's a great start and it sounds very interesting. Definitely a story line that I have never encountered. Can't wait to see how this goes.

Elli :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a chance. Rose is my least favorite character so the fact that she took over my head and made me write this is crazy even to me!! I hope you continue to enjoy.

 

And I have a new B/E fic coming soon too.

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