Date: 14 Jul 2017 3:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Well, I won't be reading anymore of your stories if that's how u treat these beloved characters! I thought for a brief moment that u were going to redeem yourself and let Bella and Edward have their HEA with their daughter since that meddlesome Tristan was out of the way, but Noooo! You had to go and ruin it by having Edward kill his own daughter! It's ur story and u can do what u want with it, but I feel mislead and would never have started this had I known it wasn't about Edward and Bella getting their HEA! I certainly won't be recommending this to anyone!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 3:43 PM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
Yeah, hating u is pretty much what I'm feeling right now! I realize this is your story, but I don't see how u can list this as an Edward/Bella story when she is with someone else! U should have just listed it as Bella, but then u probably wouldn't get as many readers!
Date: 08 Jul 2017 1:13 AM Title: Revelations
I don't see how you can call this an Edward/Bella story if Edward and Bella aren't together!
Date: 28 Jun 2017 11:18 PM Title: Prodigy Child
I'm not enjoying this emo Edward at all!
Date: 18 Jun 2017 12:56 PM Title: Goodbyes
Well, that was promising!
Date: 09 Jun 2017 5:34 PM Title: Life's Little Mind Games
Since I can't say anything nice about Bella being with Tristan, I'm not going to say anything at all! Just wanted to let u know that I'm still reading though.
Date: 02 Jun 2017 4:41 PM Title: Devastating Adversity
I'm pretty sure I'm not going to like the way this ends.
Date: 27 May 2017 1:59 AM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
Why would she let Tristan think the baby is his?
Date: 23 May 2017 2:48 AM Title: It Just Can't Be!
Well, that was u expected!
Date: 14 May 2017 10:05 PM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
Well, that started out promising, but didn't end as I expected. This is listed as an Edward/Bella fiction. Sure hope they end up together as they are supposed to be!
Date: 08 May 2017 1:45 PM Title: Home sweet Home
Your story and all, but I'm going to be very disappointed if she and Edward don't get back together.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:28 AM Title: Mnemonic
Sure wish I'd know this wasn't going to be a HEA before I started reading it. Since this is the first story of yours that I've read, I had no way of knowing.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:22 AM Title: Descending into the Darkness
So I guess we know why she was turned.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:13 AM Title: The Cracken
I thought maybe he was becoming human again!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:50 AM Title: You cocky bitch!
Way to go Rosie!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Guess I'm going to have to re-read part of this as I don't remember Bella forgetting Edward!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 7:53 PM Title: Man of Two Minds
Interesting POV!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 7:33 PM Title: Perseaus
Well, that was certainly interesting! Can't wait to see how the Cullen's handle Tanya!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:42 AM Title: Blissfully Unaware
I'm glad he is back with his family!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
Guess it's too much to hope that they will finally be together since there are so many chapters remaining!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 4:32 AM Title: Losing a Piece of me
I hate that she was with someone else!
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:33 AM Title: New Year, new beginnings, new discoveries.
Come onnnnnn, when does Edward get back?
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:49 PM Title: Goodbye
Well, that was unexpected!
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hope Edward hears the pain inthese songs and comes back!
Date: 28 Feb 2017 4:05 PM Title: Family that will always be there
I love the direction this story is going!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad u finished this story, but it is a little too far fetched.
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well, this certainly wasn't thechapter ive been waiting for. I want the one with Edward in it!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Sure hope this is an Edward/Bella HEA!
Date: 15 Feb 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Seems obvious to me that the kids with Alice reminds her of Edward
Date: 15 Feb 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sure wasn't expecting that!
Date: 03 Feb 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm wondering when Edward is going to show back up!
Date: 03 Feb 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Is there life after true love?
So, what mythological creature is Tristan?
Date: 28 Jan 2017 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella only she would break her leg the first month of college.
Date: 28 Jan 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
So glad she found those items before they left!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
These chapters seem really redundant!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Jasper showed up so quickly!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken
So glad Alice decided to show herself.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad u clarified that this wouldn't be an Alice /Bella story. I was a little confused because I thought vampires mated for life and if Alice is mated to Jasper, how could she have feelings other than sister-like for Bella?
Date: 13 Jan 2017 1:02 AM Title: Prologue
I'm so excited to start another of ur stories! Can't wait to read more. This was recommended at the TFMU meeting in Nashville.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:19 PM Title: Epilogue
So he really killed Destiny??????
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:06 PM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
no No NO bad form making Edward die!!!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:15 PM Title: Revelations
NO she can NOT leave Edward!!!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:12 PM Title: Devastating Adversity
It so HAS to be Edwards!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:47 PM Title: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.
for real?
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:35 PM Title: It Just Can't Be!
so is the baby Tristans or a very fast birth?
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:25 PM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
why do they always jump to the worst conclusions? If she would just call one of the Cullens she would find out that he left because of what was going on. She better high tail it over there and help save him!!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:06 PM Title: Home sweet Home
Way to go Edward!
I kinda thought that it was him!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:41 PM Title: Mnemonic
Her and Edward belong together so she needs to come to terms with it!
I will be so upset if they don't get back together, please
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella was really there or was it in his minds eye that he saw her?
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well she did need to live her life but poor Edward I could cry for him!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Is Edward coming back at any time?
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
how could they do that to Jazz????
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
my first thought was that he was a vamp but then the green eyes threw me off.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Is there life after true love?
so was Tristan like a werewolf or something?
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK well I must have missed the hints unless you meant next chapter?
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Broken
Is it really her that came back, in love with Bella?
What do you mean by this statement?
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am not completely sure that I like that Alice feels that she is in love with Bella ... but anyways Bella can love no other than her mate!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:44 PM Title: Prologue
Sounds like it might be a good story and my bet is the narrator was Alice
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was a surprise. I honestly thought Jazz was in love with Bella too. Can't wait to find out where the baby picture in your banner comes into it.
Fab story thank you
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
i was just wondering why it took 2 years for her to go to college alice edward and bella where seniors in nm well maybe she just took an extra year with charlie
Diane
Author's Response:
Hia sweets, yeah- if you read back- way back- there is small mention of the fact that she needed time off, and had spent it living at the Cullen's house in Forks- she was pretty messed up, and it was a very bad time for her. Sorry if I didn't make that clear enough. I hope you enjoyed the story.
xx
Date: 23 Feb 2011 8:11 PM Title: Epilogue
that was sad at the end and i liked it cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
Ty doll, I think :-P I am glad you enjoyed this fic, even if the ending was srsly not what anyone was expecting. I look forward to hearing from you again sometime.
xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:45 PM Title: Epilogue
I liked the story but am not a fan of the ending or Epi. It was really messed up of Tristan to do that knowing Edward was coming. I also have no sympathy for Bella, none at all. At first I felt sorry for her, then just pissed. I never really did like the Edward in the series or most twi-fics he is always running. Through all my complaints though it really is a good story. It made me react and in my world that's an awsome thing!
Author's Response:
Hia doll. To be honest, I am not a big Bella fan, an this fic, in my mind, is how I portray Bella. This is how I see her in the real books, as well. Stringing Jake along and everything. I'm sure u catch my drift. I won't rant...lol
Thanks for reading, though. I am glad u enjoyed it, even if the ending was a lot for ppl to handle.
xx
Date: 19 Feb 2011 1:30 PM Title: Epilogue
Well, I was not expecting that. Good story though.
Author's Response:
Ty doll.
Glad you enjoyed the fic, and I hope the epi didn't hurt too much.
xx
Date: 19 Feb 2011 3:58 AM Title: Epilogue
Was not expecting that at all! Awesome story
Author's Response:
Ty sweets. Glad you enjoyed this. I look forward to hearing from you possibly in the futre on another fic.
xx
Date: 19 Feb 2011 3:00 AM Title: Epilogue
IT is a story of fiction. Hey if you read the gossip rags they kill Robsten daily. This is just fiction, no more no less. Good story. Edward in the end lived and got to kill his own child. How nice for him, perhaps he can find a way to run from that. GRR
You were a good author, updates were right on time! For that one thing everyone should thank you. I will read your writing again.
Thank you,
Author's Response:
Hia doll. Thanks so much for your kind words and compliments. I am so glad u were able to enjoy this, even if the ending was a big pill to swallow.
I look forward to hearing from you possibly in another fic.
xx
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:46 AM Title: Epilogue
ok that ending reminds me of alot of another story.
Author's Response:
Really? I would be interested in knowing what fic?? I wrote this- originally in 2009- as shown on FF- and I have yet- in all of my twi reading- seen anything like it...so, please, do share???
But- I hope u enjoyed the read- u said nothing about the actual epi?
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
OK, poor timimg on Tristian's part with the engagement but if Edward really did love Bella and Destiny he wouldn't leave them with an eternity of guilt. Even if he was heartbroken about Bella he still had a child to think of when he left for over a week. I am sad, but she made a good choice.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:26 PM Title: Prologue
Wow - What a completely unsympathetic Bella you've created. I'm not a fan of emo/coward Edward as often he is in stories when he leaves Bella, but at least in the last two times he left her, there were extenuating circumstances that Bella was totally unsympathtic to consider and deserved some level of forgiveness for. (Being affected/in pain by the venom, and lastly being in extreme mourning/temporary insanity following watching the love of his life die a horrible, painful death that had no hope of recovery - even Carlisle, the medical expert, made it clear she was gone. Tristan's saving her comes across as a bit Deux ex Machine.) Then to top it off, she denies him the ability to be a part of his daughter's life during her crucial growth, much akin to telling a father he can only see his child every 2-3 years for 2 days, and sets up an environment that fosters the alienation of his child's affections to him due to no fault of his own. Top that with the completely selfish manner of the proposal in front of him, and we see that Bella is the real villan here. If I were Edward, I wouldn't want to live knowing that his true mate is doing every thing she can, consciously or unconsciously, to make my life a living hell. Yes, he needed to learn to deal with his cowardice, but he was never even given the chance.
I hate sounding like a witch, but I hope Bella lives eternity in misery. I hope Tristan finds his true mate and leaves her, and much like we saw Edward living with the pain of his mistakes, I hope Bella has to wallow in the misery of the life she's created for herself without her true mate.
Author's Response:
Dude, I think I may have a girl crush on you right now. I wrote this- feeling those exact same things. You are one of the very few that picked up on that and accepted it as it was, without flaming or saying- there is no way B could be that selfish- and truly- reading this review has made me smile- like painful stretching smile. So, thank you. I apologizew for replying so late- Seems TWCS has not been sending me any reviews via email or anything else for that matter. Grrrr.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review- I am assuming u jumped back and reviewed most of the fic at the beginning- did u end up reading the epi???
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:33 PM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
oh u suck. bella is selfish taking the kid away. she has the rigjt to her happiness but not to take the kid from eddie. ah well. no hea for e iI guess. think tristan was rude for doing it knowing e could be there any sec and could "hear" farther out.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:41 PM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
oh....
*blinks and stares wide-eyed*
Well then....
Um, wow, I guess?
Bring on the Epi?...
*turns away thoroughly confused*
Author's Response:
Confused...oh no.....were u still in this state when u finished??? If not, lemme help- ask away- I will uncoffuzzle ya. I hope :-S
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:58 PM Title: Endings Lead to New Beginnings
Well he runs again. Rename it into Running Edward. Okay now where is our EPI?? LOL
Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Revelations
:( That was so sad. What took him so long. 8 days? Bella got to see through Destiny exactly what happened and how Tristan stayed and helps her. I love Edward but he is a selfish coward. Now the Volturi are coming? There are only a few chapters left? Keep them coming!!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:22 PM Title: Revelations
Okay well you heard me, or at least Bella did. I am sorry for Edward. Love is grand but his is pointless. He runs. She would not be alive if it were not for Tristan. His love is unselfish,never tiring, boundless. That is worth fighting for. Edward is way to interested in how HE feels.
Bella had to chose Tristan if she wants to be sane. Edward will only hurt her.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:48 PM Title: Revelations
while iI can see her point, its not fair to tristan.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:12 PM Title: Revelations
*covers eyes*
oh, wait, I cant type with my eyes covered, I need my hands!
Oh, I need to see too.... *smacks forehead* Ow! I have Carlisle's ring on, that didnt feel to good...
Ok, We cant have E/B I guess... thank for that *turns up sarcasm*
And I suppose we can't have a Triad...
*imagines Bells in the middle of a Tristan Edward sandwich*
oh so hawt...
So I guess teen Eddie can have every other weekend visitation supervised by Jazz of course ;) Uncle Jazz is a scary sight *giggles*
And Bells and Tristan live HEA after beating the invisible shit out of the Volturi. Along with the Wolves cocking their legs and pissing on those black cloaks... Good doggies!
I effin' love you, no matter what, bb!!!!! *crushes you in Emmett hug*
See you next chapter! *plots chance to slap the shit out if Bella Swan*
Author's Response:
I am so mad that TWCS did not sends me any of these reviews- and mad at myself for just checking now. I really just assumed I hadn't gotten any :-S
You made me smile, laugh and smirk a lil with this one. Thank you.
I do hope the rest, epi and all- satiated you...at least a bit- prolly not- love you anyways... still love my angsty emo ass???
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:55 AM Title: Prodigy Child
okay well I honestly wish the baby was Tristan's. Short story there! Well Edward is once again missing. I do not think he deserves Bella or the baby. I am hoping that Bella will be SMART and see that even though he shares parentage it is Tristan that LOVES her with ALL his heart. He deserves Bella and the baby even if it by default.
Tristan needs to win this one!
Edward needs to loose Bella forever. This time Forever really means that!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:11 AM Title: Prodigy Child
Freaking Edward always runningggg!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Prodigy Child
I am rooting for Edward, but he ran off again and has not contacted anyone. I know he was upset but he should have come back by now. Keep the fast updates coming! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:44 AM Title: Prodigy Child
ok, where in the hell is Edward???????
Gawd, I want to grab him up, put him over my knee and the knock him into next week!
I will keep reminding myself that you said it wasnt going to be a HEA for everyone.
Damnit, I was hoping for and E/B HEA for this one....well shit...
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:31 AM Title: Prodigy Child
So...I was and am still rooting for Tristian. Reading your reviews I guess I am in the minority. But really you wrote him so beautifully and he is so loyal; who wouldn't pick him over the guy that keeps running away, just saying!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:05 AM Title: Prodigy Child
awwww Cute name.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:59 AM Title: Goodbyes
I have really loved this story, I can't believe it is almost to the end! Great job on the story! Can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Goodbyes
So sad :( You can't let her die! Update soon!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:57 PM Title: Goodbyes
awwwe cant blame Em. poor b
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:55 PM Title: Goodbyes
well are you gonna let her die?? HMM HMM Are you??
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:34 PM Title: Goodbyes
aww :( so heartbreaking ...Can't wait to see the next one!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:05 PM Title: Goodbyes
*sobs uncontrollably*
OMFG
I dont know if I can handle much else...
to lose Bells? Shit, I just...
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:47 AM Title: Life's Little Mind Games
great chapter! Can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 1:53 PM Title: Life's Little Mind Games
wow...just, wow...
poor Bells!
I am anxious to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Here's a teaser for ya, doll,
I gasped as my mind was bombarded with thoughts as the sweet, tiny angel in front of me glanced in the direction of her lifeless mother.
Thoughts of love and admiration poured into me, followed by sad thoughts of wanting to see her mommy. Where’s mommy? The little girl was thinking. I want my mommy. I staggered back in pain, my mind reeling as I spun and darted out of the room and into the forest. I ran and ran for what felt like forever, pushing myself further and further away from the pain that was now states behind me. All I knew was that I had to get away, away from Bella’s dead, broken body, away from the happy gurgles of the little girl, away from my family’s mourning thoughts, away from Tristan’s anguished cries, away from everything and everyone. I couldn’t go back, not now, maybe not ever. The pain was just too much to bear.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 7:11 AM Title: Life's Little Mind Games
wow.....the three of them are in for a rough ride.
Author's Response:
Here's a teaser for ya, doll,
I gasped as my mind was bombarded with thoughts as the sweet, tiny angel in front of me glanced in the direction of her lifeless mother.
Thoughts of love and admiration poured into me, followed by sad thoughts of wanting to see her mommy. Where’s mommy? The little girl was thinking. I want my mommy. I staggered back in pain, my mind reeling as I spun and darted out of the room and into the forest. I ran and ran for what felt like forever, pushing myself further and further away from the pain that was now states behind me. All I knew was that I had to get away, away from Bella’s dead, broken body, away from the happy gurgles of the little girl, away from my family’s mourning thoughts, away from Tristan’s anguished cries, away from everything and everyone. I couldn’t go back, not now, maybe not ever. The pain was just too much to bear.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 3:59 AM Title: Life's Little Mind Games
I still think Tristan is her better choice. He is so loving. Edward is so full of himself. He deserves Tanya..
Bella use your head.
Author's Response:
lol- ur not the only one, and I, myself, am in love with his character :-)
Here's a teaser for ya, doll,
I gasped as my mind was bombarded with thoughts as the sweet, tiny angel in front of me glanced in the direction of her lifeless mother.
Thoughts of love and admiration poured into me, followed by sad thoughts of wanting to see her mommy. Where’s mommy? The little girl was thinking. I want my mommy. I staggered back in pain, my mind reeling as I spun and darted out of the room and into the forest. I ran and ran for what felt like forever, pushing myself further and further away from the pain that was now states behind me. All I knew was that I had to get away, away from Bella’s dead, broken body, away from the happy gurgles of the little girl, away from my family’s mourning thoughts, away from Tristan’s anguished cries, away from everything and everyone. I couldn’t go back, not now, maybe not ever. The pain was just too much to bear.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:52 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
Oh, just like the coward that he is, throw Bella to the sharks then run away.
Bastard.
Now I have switched teams yet again. Go Tristan, Im rootin' for ya!
Author's Response:
Dude, u so make me giggle :-P
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 09 Feb 2011 6:16 AM Title: Devastating Adversity
Well crapolla. DNA on vampires?? I wonder. Everyone is gonna be mad, Tristan and Edward. Way to go Bella.
Author's Response:
Work with me here- they have to have something in their systems to tell one from the other....lol
Teaser:
Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:55 AM Title: If you love something, run away, right?
YEP... Edward= pain
told her last chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:53 AM Title: Home sweet Home
:=( Poor Tristan.
Edward = pain
Tristan = love.
My thoughts
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:44 AM Title: Mnemonic
grrrr. I am for keeping Tristan. Edward can be a friend. Tristan doesn't leave her, he loves her.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
Tut Tut.. Tanya is in love with him, he was in love with Bella. oh he can not remember her so no harm no foul in her mind. She betrayed Carlisle and family.
BELLA moved on. Leave it.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:03 AM Title: Man of Two Minds
She needs to stay with Tristan. Don't drop him for Edward I can't make up my mind. He can be with his family get reoriented.