[Report This]Date: 01 May 2015 1:55 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
excellent story ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 28 Nov 2011 10:23 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Absolutely wonderful story!! Full of action-- great plot and characters
Author's Response:
yay! i'm so glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2011 11:25 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Just read fhe whole story in a day - I couldn't stop reading! I was on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen next.
Extremely well written, (I'm looking forward to reading your latest fic.) Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
wow! that's awesome! i'm so glad you liked it that much and were hooked. what an amazing complimebt! and definitely check out my new fic, Dating in the Dark. it's up on here, FF, GSF, MVF, and Twilighted, if you prefer to read on any of those other sites. it's a lighthearted, humorous fic with minimal angst. good to hear you're looking forward to it. drop me a review and let me know what you think! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;) M
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:22 PM Title: Fallout
WOW - good job bella
Author's Response:
i like to think so, too :) she really did do a great job! ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:54 PM Title: Broken
probably Riley or someone dealing with James
Author's Response:
very good guess! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2011 12:51 PM Title: Confession
i knew it was a tumor!! sorry that he has it though
Author's Response:
yep... he does. sad, but true. now we know he's fighting an evil just like bella. they kinda match :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 7:25 PM Title: Shocked
WTF Royce smh
Author's Response:
exactly!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 6:26 PM Title: Unexpected
smh @ riley - cool it already jeez
great chapter
Author's Response:
lol! riley's one crazy guy... thanks for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:28 PM Title: Agent J
HAHAHAHAHA - i thought of jake after i hit submit
Author's Response:
hahaha!! the majority of the readers thought jasper, too... but i promise, jake is a much better fit. jasper will be coming soon!! ::twss:: LOL! ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:14 PM Title: Victims
I think the bodyguard is Jasper :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:44 PM Title: Traitor
glad it's already up i hate cliffies LOL
Author's Response:
LOL! it's a good thing then... b/c i'm kinda addicted to cliffies :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:00 PM Title: Home
I love this!!
Author's Response:
yay!! that makes me super happy :) glad you're enjoying it. thanks so much for the review!! ;)
Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:14 PM Title: Darkness
great start - i like this story
Author's Response:
yay! i'm so glad you like it. let me know what you think of the rest of it, too! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 9:45 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
That was a wonderful end to a great story I had goose bumps reading the last how she learned to smile again. This story had it all sad, fear, hate, love, lust, pure love and happiness.
Author's Response:
aww, thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 12:04 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
WOW THAT WAS GREAT!! TO BAD JAKE HAD TO DIE. : ( ANYWAYS I REALLY HOPE THAT THERES A SEQUEL FOR THIS STORY AND I HOPE THAT ITS SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you!! i'm glad you enjoyed it. i'm not sure if i'll do a sequel, but i do have another fic in the works right now, so keep posted for that. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:32 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Great wrap! You got it all in without ad nauseum!
Author's Response:
thanks! i'm glad i didn't over-do it. thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 11:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
I'll miss this story, although I wish you'd gone a bit more into E and Bs relationship when they were finally able to get back on track, like dates, first time for sex, stuff like that, but it's a great fic. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
i'll miss it, too. i wanted to leave some things to the imagination. going too in depth ruins some of the excitement for me. but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:18 AM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Thanks for the great story. I enjoyed every minute!
Author's Response:
yay!! thanks! i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 10:08 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Great story, sorry to see it end but glad it ended this way...love all the multiples.
Author's Response:
thanks!! so glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:42 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
thanks it was a great story and i enjoyed it!! i am glad that they all got their HEA!!! thanks i will miss it!!
Author's Response:
thank you! glad you enjoyed it! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
i loved this story good ending i look forward to the new one
Author's Response:
glad you liked it! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:38 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
im glad that they got their happy ending
Author's Response:
yep, everybody got their HEAs. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:28 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Thanks for sharing this great story, really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
yay! glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2011 2:01 PM Title: Epilogue: Full Circle
Yes it took a while to get this one out, but it was worth it. Im glad she finally grew up and started to help herself overcome everything. I love how she was working through her anxiety of speaking by thinking af the things that led her to the banquet. I wish there was more to like their honeymoon, and the babies. But in all fairness they way you worked into this final chapter, was really really good. Keep up the great work, cant wait to check out what your going to do next. How did you come up with the name for the twins?
Author's Response:
i came up with the twins names like this: Emma because of Emmett, Carley because of Em's/Bella's dad-Charlie, Lily because i like it, and Marie because of Em's/Bella's mom. i'm glad you liked it! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:40 PM Title: Release
My goodness your little guy came out ready to start football big boy ;) Congradulation!!!!!!!!! This story has been more than worth the ride as I said Bella is my hero! I cant wait to see what is going to happen with them all.
Author's Response:
haha! yeah, he was definitely big. i don't know how much longer i could have kept him inside. my hips were killing me. and i'm so glad you enjoyed my story. i hope to post the epi soon, so stayed tuned! thanks again for reading and for all of your wonderful reviews!! ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:00 PM Title: Safe
Bella is magic :) I feel bad about Jake he was a good guy. Bella needs to get over the fact that she killed James she did what she had to do she is a good girl. I wish the baby would be easy on you but as you know it only gets better once they are out lol.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 6:07 PM Title: Fallout
Holly shit Bella is my hero I must get to the next chapter
Author's Response:
lol! love it! ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:59 PM Title: Complications
I hope Jake will be ok and the others to.
Author's Response:
so sorry for not responding to more of your reviews. i've been out of town for my sister's wedding and haven't had access to a computer. but thank you so much for each and every one of them. you've hit some of the "heavier" chapters. lots of information coming out of the woodworks, but still so many questions left unanswered. now, the story is getting a little scary as everything is coming to a head. hope you enjoy the last couple of chapters. thanks so much for reading and for all of your wonderful reviews!! ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:55 AM Title: Broken
So confused was it Riley??? The I love you YES and perfect timing and I am glad he got his out first.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:15 AM Title: Emotions
That was great I am glad Emmett blew a gasket he needs to every once in a bit but it was at the wrong people. At least they know that they did not send them away and that they where loved by them.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:52 AM Title: Regret
That is so cool the surgons are Tanya and Irina??? Bella is taking it all very well and Edward is very up also that is good.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:52 AM Title: Confession
How sad so is it going to be able to get rid of.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:31 AM Title: Incidents
Does Edward have a brain tumer???
Date: 18 Jun 2011 11:43 PM Title: Information
She is a brave sole and that has to be a relife for her to get that out. What is up with Edward and how does he know her first foster family????
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Release
I am glad everything seems to be going well for you and that you're back. I can''t wait for the HEA Epi, cause I really want Bella and Emmett to find some happiness and closure.
Author's Response:
thanks! and definitely stay tuned for the epi... all kinds of HEA coming up. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:49 AM Title: Release
im glad that they are all alright and in the end they have a family
Author's Response:
yep, everything worked out... finally. they have their family and friends now. stay tuned for the epi... lots of HEA in store for these kids. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:25 AM Title: Release
thanks for the update your lovely new one shares my daughter's b-day.
thanks again can't wait for the epi
Author's Response:
yay! well, please tell your daughter happy late birthday for me. it's a great day to be born. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 20 May 2011 9:19 PM Title: Safe
i loved it!!!! i'm glad that fucker James died. when you write more please email me at edward_heart204@yahoo.com. CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you liked it!! for update info, either favorite the story, or the author (me). that way, you'll get an email as soon as i update. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 06 May 2011 2:23 PM Title: Waiting
Poor Rose so much to go through but at least she didnt do it alone.
Author's Response:
rose did have a rough go, but she survived, and now emmett has his girl!! i love these kids! thanks again for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 01 May 2011 7:36 AM Title: Shocked
Royce was pissed that Rose was interseted in Emmett??? Please let Rose be ok Emmett needs her. I think these two have seen enough blood it is a wonder that they are not put away in a hospital for a break down.
Author's Response:
first, i apologize for not keeping up with responding to your awesome reviews!! i'm slacking due to my pregnancy, which is overdue at this point, and i'm not checking my emails as often. but you're getting to the good parts of the story and i'm so glad you're still on board!! aro is a total creep and we find out more about him in future chapters. as you've read, edward and bella are getting along quite nicely ::wink:: and jasper's now in the picture for alice, with rose for emmett, too. lots of drama still in store for these danger-magnet kids, and i hope you'll continue to enjoy my story and share your thoughts. i truly appreciate your support!!!
hugs, M ;)
Date: 01 May 2011 7:08 AM Title: Unbelievable
That is some freaky stuff. Wow dinner in his room and Emmett helped set it up I wonder if he knew that Bella would be getting off after lol. That was some hot make out.
Date: 01 May 2011 5:59 AM Title: Escaped
OMFG your kiding he got away and someone was driving. Jacob went after them in the water please tell me he is OK. What is going on with Aro he is creeping me out.
Date: 01 May 2011 5:11 AM Title: Unexpected
Love the b-day gifts they were so shocked. It took Edward long enough to ask and boy did they get in enough trouble for there PDA or what. What is Riley thinking he is going to do to her or is it what someone else wants to do??????
Date: 30 Apr 2011 9:10 AM Title: Hiding
Emmett is not handling Edward and Bella to well. I am glad she told him it was not his fault that she ran.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:42 AM Title: Help
I am glad she knows she needs help and is asking for it will it be Peter helping her with this.????
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:19 PM Title: Triggers
What scared her off she was ready to jump him before
Author's Response:
ahh... you shall understand after next chapter. lots of drama comin' up. thank you so much for all of your reviews!! glad you're still enjoying!! ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:52 AM Title: Agent J
Im thinking that Edward is going to make sure he keeps a close eye on Bella and make sure she doesnt spend time with Jake.
Author's Response:
yeah, edward's got his radar on high alert now that jake is in the picture. but i promise jake won't be too much trouble. he's there strictly to protect and serve. thanks again for the reviews!! ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:28 AM Title: Victims
Poor Bella and Emmett no one has cared this much for them in over 5 years so sad but it is wonderful that the Cullens are there family now.
Author's Response:
i completely agree! the cullens are a fantastic family and bella/emmett deserve them now more than ever. ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:56 AM Title: Intruder
Are we sure it is not James he could of had plastic surgury????
Author's Response:
that's a good thought, but no... not james. not yet anyway ::wink:: thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:27 AM Title: Protector
When is Alice going to tell them what is up???
Author's Response:
well, alice doesn't really know what's goin on. she just doesn't have a good feeling. she doesn't follow her character in the book exactly. she's just more of a friend in this one. thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:29 PM Title: Premonitions
Bella boobs lol Now Edward has a great visual to go with hid dreams
Author's Response:
haha!! yeah, i love that part! he definitely got an eyeful. thank you so much for reading and for all of your reviews!! i love hearing from my readers!! ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:09 PM Title: Unstable
what a terible thing to live through over and over again.
Author's Response:
unfortunately, it gets worse before it gets better. hang in there! ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:05 AM Title: Misunderstanding
She is not sure how to react I think who is at the door???????
Author's Response:
correct again!! she is totally unsure of herself and her emotions right now, but she'll get better. ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 7:32 AM Title: Traitor
Can you say freak out Bella is on overload right now Edward needs to talk her of the ledge.
Author's Response:
bella is totally in freak out mode right now. she's completely overwhelmed and edward, of course, will come to the rescue. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 7:06 AM Title: Home
They must be in shock to be being treated like real people and that they are cared about. Alice will be Alice and you will love her LOL
Author's Response:
you are completely correct! they are in total shock at this point. no one has ever treated them like the cullens, so they're very confused. and alice is great! i love her! thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:22 AM Title: Darkness
Wow that is so sad what happened to them but I hope that things will get alot better if Emmett doesnt kill Edward.
Author's Response:
yeah, these two have really been through a lot. and emmett won't be too difficult on edward. he's just trying to be a good brother and watch out for bella. glad you're enjoying it so far. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: Safe
cool he is okay. them too! :)
Author's Response:
yep, jake was okay... and everyone else, too! :) thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:07 AM Title: Escaped
drama drams... poor jake but i am sure he is okay well i hope
Author's Response:
you shall find out soon! hang in there!! ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:09 AM Title: Victims
it is going to be jacob... duh!!
Author's Response:
yep! you were actually one of the few who guessed correctly! most readers thought it would be jasper, but jake is a much better fit. glad you're still enjoying it! ;)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:47 PM Title: Intruder
didn't think the confront would happen so fast so i am cool
Author's Response:
ah... let me know what you think of the next chapter :) thanks again for the reviews!! ;)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 11:27 PM Title: Premonitions
boobies edward really!!!
Author's Response:
i had to make him do it... lol! he's a teenage boy. boobies rule their world. thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 4:51 AM Title: Unstable
interesting so far... have a bad feeling james will find them hope he doesn'[t hurt anyone too bad. i have been enjoying!
Author's Response:
hello! i'm so glad you're enjoying my story so far. james is definitely a nasty guy in this story. hope to hear more from you in the future!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 12:07 PM Title: Help
great chapter
loving it
thanks
Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:32 AM Title: Triggers
loved the story - how hillarious to walk in on that LOL
great chapter
Author's Response:
haha! yeah, that was a very interesting day at work. something i will never forget, but it makes my job fun at times, so i embrace the weirdness. glad you're still enjoying the story!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 10:38 AM Title: Agent J
great chapter
nice twist
Author's Response:
glad you like the addition of jake. lots of readers were thinking it would be jasper, but it fit much better to have jake be the body guard. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:25 AM Title: Victims
great chapter
maybe jake - that will stir things up
loving it
Date: 16 Mar 2011 8:39 AM Title: Intruder
great chapter
love it thanks
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:42 PM Title: Protector
james must be there
loving it
thanks
Author's Response:
glad you're still liking it! the suspense is just getting started. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:17 PM Title: Premonitions
great chapter
loved it
Date: 10 Mar 2011 10:04 PM Title: Safe
I have a lot of thoughts so please bare w/ me. (I know it's probably annoying).
I hope that Emmett is going to be okay
I am really relieved/happy that Sam was their to rescue them. Though we don't yet know if they are completely out of danger, they still need to worry about Aro.
I hope Alice will be okay from the trauma she experienced. I think Bella was coping w/ all of this better because she's been through it before, but that doesn't mean she won't have some form of PTSD to deal w/.
I can only imagine what Edward is going to think/feel when he finds out what happened.
Great chapter. I know it's long....sorry.
Author's Response:
never be afraid to write down all your thoughts! i love hearing all of them. the longer the better! emmett will be fine with time, and we'll find out more about aro and his stinky ways next chapter. everyone will be going through a little therapy after that. it's been a rough ride and they definitely need someone to talk to. we'll also find out what edward thinks about all this coming up next! i'm so glad you liked the chapter, and i always love reading what you think!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:07 PM Title: Unstable
great chapter
thanks
Author's Response:
hello, and welcome to the story!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. i hope you continue to like all the twists and turns. and thank you so much for reading and for all the wonderful reviews! ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:39 AM Title: Misunderstanding
great thanks
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:56 AM Title: Darkness
wow
sounds like a excellent story
thanks
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 6:52 PM Title: Safe
wow... suck a great story
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you're liking it!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:31 AM Title: Safe
wow what a chapter. so sorry jake did not make it. poor leah. but all in all the agents did one hell of a job protecting these kids and their job is not done yet. poor emmett have both his legs broken. he was such an active kid in sports loved it. i am hoping if he has problems he finds some way to get thru it and not let anything stand in his way. so far these guys have been through hell and back and i wouldn't want them letting this get them down. also hoping rose will be coming for emmett soon. i am sure he would want to see her. seems alice might need a little trip to the couch as well. hopefully dr whitlock will give them a family rate. love it
Author's Response:
the agents have done a great job! we'll learn more about emmett and edward next chapter and all that goes with their recovery. and rose and jasper will make their returns as well. LOL @ the family rate! hilarious! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:18 AM Title: Safe
They make me happy-sigh, too.
And re Jacob, I hate him in the book, so good riddance, he was the perfect character to sacrifice.
One more real chapter and an epilogue??? Will that be enough to provide the deets for the HEA? Sure hope so, gotta' know about college, weddings, kids, etc.
Author's Response:
aww, i kinda liked my jake. he was a good guy, but out of everyone else, he was a better choice to kick the bucket than others. and i will include as much info as i can in what's left. i promise i'll make it worth your while! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:57 AM Title: Safe
a chapter with resolving issues :)
Author's Response:
yes... finally, right?! thank goodness for that. lots more where that came from coming up next! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:23 AM Title: Safe
Great update! First word was Bella?? Perfection!
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:32 AM Title: Darkness
lol... poor bella
Author's Response:
hello!! welcome to my story. i hope you're enjoying it so far. and yes... poor bella. she has a long journey to recovery, but she'll get there. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:35 PM Title: Fallout
Wow - can't say much more. Hoping the good guys are coming to the rescue. At least James is no longer an issue but what about the others??
Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
help IS on the way, and the fate of the others will be revealed soon. hang in there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:11 PM Title: Fallout
Unbelievable....Bella can definitely think in an extremely dangerous situation. I'm so glad that she was able to get rid of James. I hope that it was the good guys who made it to the hotel room. I hope you have the chance to update again soon.
Author's Response:
bella has grown so much. she really was able to keep a straight head during this situation, and it saved them. help is on the way! hang in there... i do hope to update soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:34 AM Title: Traitor
well at least she got everything off of her chest. no secrets. but she is hurt and with good reason. they have had a tough life and thank god they have been there for each other. this is finally a resting place. oh bella please see it for what it is. don't run they want to be there for you guys. you have never been able to trust anyone so this is the first time and it is scary. yeah someone still wants you guys dead. man oh man when will it be over. love it
Author's Response:
you said it perfectly! bella is suffering and overwhelmed with the prospect of a family that actually loves them. she has to learn how to accept that and then she can move on with her healing process. glad you're still loving it!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:14 AM Title: Home
so love it. it is nice to see that these guys have a home for once. someone who wants them where they are.i hope they give them all the benefit of the doubt and try not to judge them on how other families have treated them. seems this one might be the one
Author's Response:
bella and emmett have a lot of growing and accepting to do, but they'll get there. thanks again for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:20 AM Title: Darkness
likeing it so far and looking forward to more
Author's Response:
yay! i'm glad you're enjoying it. glad you jumped aboard the WP train. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:01 PM Title: Fallout
Wow!! Thank God she killed James. Now the rest of his fam just needs taken out.
Author's Response:
i completely agree. more info on the others next chapter. more to come soon. thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 19 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Fallout
OH MY GOSH!!! You definitely have me chewing on my acrylic nails!!! Now we have to wait to see if its the Calvary or the bad guys!!! Very Good chapter!
Author's Response:
lol! i'm glad you liked the chapter. i hope your nails survived the torture. :) more to come soon, and help is on the way. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:44 AM Title: Fallout
Epic. I can't believe I have to wait to see who is on the other side of the door!
Author's Response:
hang in there!! i hope to update soon. i'm glad you're enjoying it. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:37 PM Title: Fallout
holy shit, bent his knees backwards breakign them, nasty,, at least James is done. WTG Bella kickin some ass. poor Alice , please let it be the police at the door
Author's Response:
i hated writing that about emmett. it made me cringe! but i agree that bella kicked some major ass. and help is definitely on the way!! hang in there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 1:50 PM Title: Fallout
OMG!!!! Bella is awesome!!!! Please don't keep us waiting too long!!
Author's Response:
bella is awesome! she's getting her revenge... finally! i'm trying hard to get the next chapter us shortly, so hang in there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:59 AM Title: Fallout
I'm kind of confused, the pounding on the bedroom door could be James' cohorts trying to get to them... yes? But, the pounding at the foyer door must mean it's someone outside the room??? Like NOT one of James' friends??! And if that's the case, then where are James' friends?? Why aren't they on this? They're right there!! And how would anyone outside the room know what's going on??? The gunshots, maybe, but you can never count on random witnesses who hear a loud noise to take action. This is very confusing. It can't go smoothly, but it's your story, and if you make it happen this way, I guess I have to go along with it. Just sayin', it's always nice for things to go down in a credible way. That said, I sure hope Bella, E and A are going to be ok. And I look forward to the next post.
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
i'm sorry it's confusing. it's meant to be that way. explanations for everything will be in next chapter, so everything should make sense. hang in there! help is on the way and all should be answered soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:05 AM Title: Fallout
i hope some one comes to help them
Author's Response:
they're on their way!! ;) hang in there. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:41 AM Title: Fallout
Yeah, we might want to but do you really want to hear what we have to say about the suspense. I know I would not!
But me being a nice person I will be as nice as I can be.
STOP with the cliff hangers aready. I really just want to know what the hell is going on or update faster!
Good chatper really enjoyed what Bella did to James I really do hope he dies on that floor. As for the rest I hope they all get shot as well.
I am scoring low because I am tired of the cliffies.
Author's Response:
i love hearing what the readers think, even when it may not be my opinion. please don't hold back. unfortunately, the story is coming to a close, and if you picked this up in acutal book form (completed), the chapters would end the same way. there's always a point in books where you just can't put it down b/c one chapter leads into another with suspense. that's what is happening here, but since i can't complete everything at once without making you all wait for months between updates, you just happen to get cliffies. also, we're coming to a close in this story, so cliffies are part of the process. i hope you can forgive the suspense for a little while longer and hang in there. i am trying very hard to get the next chapter up shortly. thanks for reading and reviewing!! and i always love reading any opinions you have. it only helps me improve! ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:08 AM Title: Complications
Grrr, why cant you just keep going, why the need to end it there.
Really, we could of at least found out what was going on with Edward first and then something happen.
Grrrr
Author's Response:
well, edward was meant not to be involved from the very beginning. he needs time to heal, anyway, from his surgery, and he would be a casualty if he was there to intervene. sorry about the suspense, but please hang in there. ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:11 AM Title: Fallout
I'm thinking you must have some hormones making you act all evil and stuff...because, clearly, a level headed decent person surely wouldn't leave us with a second cliffy. ;)
Author's Response:
haha! yes, i have been hormonal lately. i promise i'm not a mean person... really. all will be coming to a close soon, so hang in there. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Fallout
My only thought right now is, PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!!! I'm glad James is gone, but I love the rest of this crew and struggle to believe they won't pull through this somehow...
Author's Response:
i'm trying my best to get the next chapter completed. i promise. things will be wrapping up very soon, so the suspense won't last for long. thanks for hanging in there and for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 5:24 PM Title: Complications
I knew you were going to end this with a cliffie... hope the next chapter is posted soon!
Author's Response:
yep, you know me well. i do have a thing for suspense. i hope to have the next chapter off to the betas by tonight. hopefully, i'll post by the end of the week. thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 09 Feb 2011 5:20 PM Title: Complications
Oh no. Who was there? What is going to happen? Are they going to hurt Jacob and Alice, then take Bella and Emmett? I hope you have a chance to update again soon.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
you have very good questions that will be answered soon. next chapter is in the works! hang in there! thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:39 AM Title: Darkness
That's right....now I remember. Thanks
Author's Response:
no problem. any time! ;)