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Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:01 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet.  Aswesome  So well written.  I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way.  This one hit my funny bone.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 3:30 AM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

Oops baby.

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Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:42 AM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I

 I LOVE EMMETT

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:23 AM Title: OT Bella's Interview

In the beginning she said she was a silent partner.  Even with stealing they ususally stay in the background.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:11 AM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

hahahaha Charlie a porn and a nudist. EPIC

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2018 1:04 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

Whew...

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 11:05 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Humm, he has feelings for her and maybe she has feelings for him.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

So this has been in my list awhile.  I don't read over here much, but I told myself i needed to work on my TBR list.  Soooo.  I love the fact she "made" him get his dick pierced.  Good boy.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:23 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Yeah Bella girl is all a mess poor thing. She didn't even give aftercare post punishment and we know that's a no no. Too bad her confidant is big mouth Rose. Hehe

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:59 PM Title: The Epilogue

wonderful

Reviewer: Soccermom101113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

Out takes PLEASE!!!!!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: The Epilogue

This was a great story loved it the way through

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:11 PM Title: The Epilogue

Awesome story I read this when it was on ff.n I reviewed then also ;) BTW where are the o/t ? Thanks so much for posting it here ;D

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:20 AM Title: The Epilogue

this type of story isnt my thing as a rule but i really enjoyed this some of the others ive read on another site are borderline abuse and offensive but yours is gentler and different and i want to thank u for it 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 1:08 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

I think I may have read this elsewhere, I think her father lives in a nudist colong and might have been a porn star, I guess I will wiat and see

Reviewer: B em W Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 7:54 PM Title: The Epilogue

What do you mean when Bella says that she can't wait until may?



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Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 10:01 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth

This is so much fun!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:41 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine

Oh I just bet that Bella will soon be thinking the same thing about Edward, if she isn't already. :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 9:13 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

I feel the tables are about to turn here, sooner than later.  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 8:51 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

I really like your story, it's a lot of fun to read!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:40 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

This is so much fun, but I keep waiting for Edward's smart ass mouth to get him into more trouble with Mistress Bella.  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:22 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

I get the feeling that Edward is going to be getting his ass spanked, a lot. ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:49 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

I like it so far. ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:04 PM Title: The Epilogue

Perfect ending :)

Loved this story - thank you !!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 12:46 AM Title: The Epilogue

oh who better to have to ask to fix the sink then emmie! and then to tell him what really happened! too fucking funny!!!

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)



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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 12:39 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

aww this eddie is so fucking sweet! no wonder he is always fighting to get his man card back from em! she finally said yes! it just took a cute little ally in eddie's corner.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 11:49 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

they had sex in the grotto! would have been way better if she wasn't 30 weeks but hey gotta get it in where you can! first time i had sex in a car was the night before my son was born! backseat of a sunbird is seriously not very big!! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 11:31 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero

i do love your em! he is dreamy and childlike and sexy and yummy!

things are moving forward but she still hasn't said yes! i wonder how the meeting of the families will go? i sure hope eddie's mom and dad never watched a little of charlie's work over the years....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 11:05 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey

i love that eddie is constantly badgering her about getting married! one day she is gonna shock the shit outta him by saying yes...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

well everything was going so well untill the end... what is up with bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 10:28 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

ok who saw that coming? everyone but bella and eddie? yup that's what i thought. eddie better man the fuck up and start saying how happy he is so bella doesn't feel bad about this! i mean come on... it's a baby! YAY!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 7:21 PM Title: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night

Em's idea for the costumes was awesome! Wonder what's wrong with bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 4:39 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II

Wonder how long till she is awake and he pops the question? Heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 3:14 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I

Definately the wierdest meet the parents! And emmie is neked!!! Yummy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 12:32 PM Title: OT Bella's Interview

nice to see a little more into bella's head

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 12:22 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

well the big words are out there. bella knows hef and her daddy is a porn star!!! now it is off to meet the parents! is it wierd that they will be neked? heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 11:44 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

that was almost 'normal' minus the skiny dipping and sex tape. who will say the three little words first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 5:46 AM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

woo hoo eddie! on the piano, in the gay pride pool and now moving into the bedroom! sounds like a fucking fantastic night.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth

well at least eddie and bella made some beautiful memories at the happiest place on earth before being banned! heehee!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 4:43 AM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine

she really does sound like the perfect woman. i'd fuck her. lol!

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Date: 30 May 2011 3:55 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

miss bella does not seem too happy to be feeling a draw to eddie

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 11:52 PM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

so bella is effected by eddie in more ways than just in the playroom....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 9:03 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

well shit! looks like eddie is gonna have to wait a little longer to get some relief.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 6:41 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

i like that bella seems a lot more easy going about the normal rules. eddie may just get himself laid or get himself and good spanking!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: The Epilogue

Loved the entire story! I can see why Em got nominated!

Can't wait for the outtakes you have planned as I really hate to say good bye to this wonderful gang!

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 7:24 PM Title: The Epilogue

so loved this story...



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Thanks so much for all the great reviews!!! I loved writing this story!!

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:47 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero

oh there meeting is going to be Epic... lol

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:34 PM Title: Ch 16 Sea Monkey

he is so cute.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:18 PM Title: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

HUH...

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

OH HELL YEAH....

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:45 PM Title: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II

lol poor Em

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:21 PM Title: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I

I love Em

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:59 PM Title: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

OMG a nudist Colony... Holy hell..lol

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:42 PM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

awww....

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:09 PM Title: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

awww... I love them together..

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:16 PM Title: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth

so loved it.... I feel sorry for there future kids though... They will have to travel to FLorida now to see mickey..lol

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:13 AM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

oh no...

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:50 AM Title: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

i feel sorry for edwards dick    lol

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Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:36 PM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

so hot...

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

lol... loved it

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Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:25 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

HOLY SHIT.... LOVING IT

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:22 AM Title: The Epilogue

love it!!!!!

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:21 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

mmmmmm.....Edward pierced.....drool....

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

I don't usually read Subward and Domella fics, but your's caught my eye. So far, my curiosity is piqued =)

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:19 AM Title: The Epilogue

Amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it=) You are an amazing writer also.

~My Not-So-Secret Obsession

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: The Epilogue

that was good i liked it

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: The Epilogue

I loved it!!!  I love that Ben said the same words that Bella said to him all that time ago.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:02 PM Title: The Epilogue

A wonderful ending to the story.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:26 AM Title: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

that was so hot.I bet he now wishes he kept his mouth closed lol love this story

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:03 AM Title: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

I loved it him getting his dick pierced was the best ever and mistress cock tease is the best name ever for Bella lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:14 AM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

This looks so good can't wait to read it .

Reviewer: cofey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: The Epilogue

wow .. just finished reading ur fic .. absolutely brilliant ... loved the snarky humour, the storyline and how u made each character come to life .. the nudist colony and edward's 'thoughts' were hilarious not to take away from the relationship edward and emmett share

cant wait to read another of ur fics

thanx for sharing

xoxo ety

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:51 AM Title: The Epilogue

Loved it amazing

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:29 AM Title: The Epilogue

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: The Epilogue

lol.   Ripping the sink off the wall.   Lame sick if ya ask me.

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:14 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

loved it amazing so sweet

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

I absolutely ADORED the proposal!! What a fabulous touch. Sweet, romantic and just PERFECT.

And the notion Edward should have two rings, well that created a pretty awesome image too.

Thank you for creating this superb gem. I shall miss visiting these two.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:01 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

What a wonderful ending!!

I do feel for Bella & her labor though!!! WOW - what 14 hrs or so... poor girl :(

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story & can't wait for more from you soon!!!

Thanks for the story.

Have a great Christmas & New Year with your family...

T2M x

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

The proposal was perfect.  It was so sweet...I loved it.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:00 PM Title: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine

:)

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:49 PM Title: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

:)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:53 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

So great.  loved it. 

E/k

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:48 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

Really great story!  Thanks so much for sharing it!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:08 PM Title: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

Great chapter hun.   Glad Ben is there safe and sound.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:40 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

Loved this chapter - just brilliant & very funny :)

Thanks for the update...

T2M x

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:10 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

I love the baby shower and I love the fact that Edward is so put out by his parents becoming nudist... fucking funny.

Cant wait for the next update.

Fiorella

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:23 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

That was a great story to come across.  So glad I found it here.  It made me laugh and cry and laugh somemore.. Can't wait for the update.

E/k



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thanks so much for reading!!! so happy to hear I made you laugh!! I giggle a lot writing it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:23 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

Loved it awsome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

great chapter

Reviewer: MelissaJHackett Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:06 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

OMG poor Edward   I cant imagine seeing my parents in a nudist colony  POOR BOY

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:44 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

That was too much fun though I would have loved to see Carlisle and Esme's reaction to the playboy mansion.  The name is cute too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:43 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

LOL  funny chapter  esp when Carlisle whispered about Charlie being recognizable.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:29 PM Title: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

Lol!  This was a great chapter!  Esme and Carlisle finding out about Charlie and Bella was priceless!  Great chapter!

 

FYI!  I voted for Play With Me for the Avant Garde awards; good luck!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero

great just doesn't say enough,....



Author's Response:

Thanks so so much!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

wtf is a goat?



Author's Response:

If you've never seen the movie Waiting with Ryan Reynolds DO IT, The Goat was introduced to me by that movie. Basically, The Goat is when a guy tucks his dick and balls between his legs and bedns over, showing you the goods from behind.  This can only be done if the guy is above average in the size department.  I have seen The Goat in real life, it's not pretty.  Thanks so much for reading <3

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:18 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

well that's a committment...good start

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:46 PM Title: Ch 17 Jasper is my Hero

Emmett is too damn funny!  Digging ditches and erecting skyscrapers?  That is classic!

I love that Edward keeps proposing to Bella, but I'm bummed that playroom time was averted by Bella's shoe issues.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:42 PM Title: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

he's right putting a needle in your dick is a really big deal!

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