Date: 27 Apr 2018 3:52 AM Title: Epilogue
Well hell.... So glad Edward searched for Bella and changed his ways. I really don't like Jasper in this. He thinks he can change, but no one else can? ASS!
Date: 27 Apr 2018 3:22 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
Jasper sure was annoying. LOL. I wish I could have had as great a first time ad Bella did. :)
Date: 27 Apr 2018 2:54 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
Well I am happy that Edward is changing, because he was a slime.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 1:01 PM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
Bad boy Edward..innocent Bella...nice..
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:57 PM Title: Epilogue
wow!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I see you've been reading lots of my stories! I hope you can easily translate my replies!
Love BBxx
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:56 PM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
wow!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:55 PM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
wow
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:58 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
this was one of the many stories i read on FF..and my favorite..i cant remember how many times ive read it..but i still enjoy it to this day! gosh..are you planning on making a sequel or maybe an epi.after the 1st epi?.i cant get enough of these 2..like whatever happened to them from maybe a year after (HEA..i hope)..keep on writing..
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! I only re-read this one myself a couple of weeks ago, it feels like ages since I wrote it... It was only ever supposed to be a oneshot... Lol it was also a writing exercise to practice lemon writing for my multi chpater fic... Thank you for taking the time to review! Luv BBxx
Date: 01 May 2012 11:53 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved it. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'mso glad, and thanks for taking the time to tell me :)
Luv BBxx
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:57 PM Title: Epilogue
That was delightful...
Date: 15 Jan 2012 9:38 PM Title: Epilogue
Awe, that was sweet! I can't believe it's over. I think Jasper and especially Alice should have understood what it's like to find love. I think Alice should have been more supportive of Bella and he choice about Edward.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 7:16 PM Title: Epilogue
i ♥ it. no wonder it was a winner.
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Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:30 PM Title: Epilogue
I would have loved for this to continue! Great stuff!
Date: 31 May 2011 8:52 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! Fantastic lemnos too! Can't wait to see what else you have written. C x
Date: 31 May 2011 7:18 PM Title: Epilogue
I found this little story today, read it and loved it! I plan to read it again and again. Of course, this story is on my favorites list!
Date: 31 May 2011 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue
AWWW!! no really soo freaking AWW!! that was adorable! I was soo sad for them when communication totally failed between them. lol thanks soo much!
Date: 31 May 2011 5:07 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm so glad you added these two chapters to the original one-shot. I had enjoyed the one-shot, but now the story just feels complete. I always love reading both POVs. Sometimes stories with just one POV feel like half a story. It would be too hard for me to pick a favorite.
Great job! I always enjoy your work - thanks for writing!
Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:16 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
I'm sorry I didn't review after I read the first chapter but I was absolutely awed by this story and just couldn't stop reading. I love Maya Banks and Lori Leigh and think they are great writers of erotic stories with an actual storyline but they have nothing on you! I loved both points of view and I think the mark of a really good writer when you can write in two different perspectives enhancing an understanding of the storyline and bringing an increased depth to the emotions involved in the story. Honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long time.
Author's Response:
Hello Annatwo,
Wow, thank you. I've never been compared to published authors before, so your praise makes me smile, like a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed reading Exclusively as much as I enjoyed writing it! Maybe you will like some of my other one-shots, or my WIP Episode (they are here as well as Twilighted and Fanfiction.net.) Thank you for taking the time to review, it really means a lot. Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:43 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
I liked Edward's point of view best, but I could identify with Bella's more. I really like this story, please update soon!
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:05 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
Hmmmm... I've gone back & forth between the 2 chapters and I can't decide, both POVs are equally good. Edward is deliciously animalistic and surprisingly perceptive, and I love Bella's erotic fascination with his hands. She's insecure but not so much as to be totally retarded -- at least she had the guts to go for what she wanted. Legs and hands, they're both good!
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:20 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
great chapter.
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:58 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
i personally enjoyed the edward point of veiw the most. i feel like you write in his mind better
Author's Response:
Thanks, I kind of think so too...but decided to go with both POVs for the epilogue. It's been ages, but I've now posted it...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:15 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
Are you continuing this story?? Cause I would definitely read it!! Good job. Can't decided which POV i like better though!!
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
Edward's bc he's so possessive its hot as hell. lol that's it? I would like an epilogue but then again I would love more chapters too so whichever way, I'm there. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:15 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
I like both povs, but possessive sounds better in Edwards.
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:38 AM Title: Exclusively Bella's POV
I have to say i loved both povs but edwards was my fav i can't wait to read more i think his was stronger this so needs to be a full story
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:14 PM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
your story sounds good so far.. can't wait for jasper's reaction when he finds out...
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:17 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
wow absolutely wonderful chapter :)
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:22 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
Very hot!
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:22 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
This chapter was really good.
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx
Date: 18 Jul 2010 12:38 AM Title: Exclusively Edward's POV
loved it i vote for it can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617
Luv BBxx