[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
Sweet ending. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Victoria is dead but let's her off too easu
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad Abby doesn't seem to have any lasting effects from her ordeal. Aww for marriage proposal
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aww for moving in together and ILY's
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awww for moving in together.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor e.. Agonizing to have to decide who to go to first.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is such an awesome guy. Glad Charlie approves
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor kids. Hope every one will be ok eventually. Wonder how they found them
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ack you are evil. Poor b and a. Hope they find her soo .
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh F'ing shady security guy. Hopefully the call got through. Stupid that it made a sound though
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Woo hoo for date and lemon and him taking care of Abby
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Professionals like Bree are so cool. Aww for the make out session
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
The phone is a smart thing. How did v know where to email the pic. Wonder if she has an accomplice at the Dr office?
Date: 21 Jun 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my her stalker is getting more and more brazen. Scary. We.... Victoria and whom.... Hmmm
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is such an awesome guy. Although the "torn" thing had me concerned.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah now I get it. Victoria is pissed that "her James" is dead and is blaming B and Abby
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah red hair.... That means Victoria.. Glad the girls got her to go shopping. Esme was great with noticing the car
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad she had the appt to fall back on. She should be applauded for taking in a baby the way she did instead of demonized for it by the nurses.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my sounds too good to be true but I like it.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Getting out of her place seems smart. Guessing this is one or more of E's can club warning her off
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad B is taking too him. He l makes a great point about where James would have gone if Jess didn't come home.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hate women who do that. Not their place to judge others.
Date: 21 Jun 2019 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
B is such a nice person. Poor Jessica
Date: 29 Aug 2017 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Jessica!
Date: 18 Aug 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
Thanks for a well written and entertaining story.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
an excellent story. well written and good characters.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
Very cute
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
OK, this is a great great story. Im so glad I found it. Im a sucker for Edward and Bella happily ever afters!!! Even though at one point I got kinda worried that wasn't gonna happen!!! Everyone needs to read this!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank yo so much for the wonderful review. I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the story. I have been thinking about doing a post-epilogue chapter, so add it to your alerts. I don't know how soon it might be posted, school this semester is going to kick my behind! :)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
why would any one skip to the bottom?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I missed this review when I replied to all of your other ones, so thank you! :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
that was a very girly luagh creepy but girly
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
dumdumdum
ok i was wrong not alice all well.
Author's Response:
Nope, not Alice. :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
ALICE!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... You already know that it wasn't Alice.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
awww eddiekines is sooo sweet
Author's Response:
Yes he is. Thank you for the review!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
yes! very much!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it... I hope you have continued to like it. Thank you for all of the reviews!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
He was so nice. I wonder how they will meet again...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I hope you have enjoyed the story!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
I liked it. Was this the same Bree that works at "Joeys"?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Yes, it was the same Bree, not very many people picked up on that!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really like the story so far. I have one question? Whose baby does Rose have on her hip in chapter 5 when the Cullen's meet Bella. It can't be hers because you said in this chapter that she doesn't have children. You may have said who the baby was and I just missed it. I'll have to read that chapter again. Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Darn it! I thought I fixed that! Okay... lets just say that Rose was... babysitting? Yeah... sounds good to me. Sorry, someone pointed it out on FF, and I thought I fixed it before posting it on here... I guess not.
Thank you for the review!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
Aw Abby is growing up so adorably! I loved it I hope you do future one shots!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of your reviews. As of this time, I'm not planning on doing any more for this story... that may change though. (I don't know if you can do story alert on this site or not, but if you can... do it... now!) Hehe... just kidding, but really, do it. :)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aw itcwas so cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aw they said it!
Author's Response:
Yes they did... Thank you for the review!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yay they're fine and Edward is so cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... Edward is cute!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
that was good i liked it you did real good
Author's Response:
Hehe... Thank you, and thank you for the review! :)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
That was a great ending to a wonderful story Thank you.
Author's Response:
You are so very welcome. And thank you for all of the wonderul reviews and comments!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ding Dong the wicked witch is dead that was great and Bree got a little revenge
Author's Response:
Hehe... Thanks for another review... this one made me giggle... obviously.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
How sweet a ring for her and one for Abby :)
Author's Response:
I know, I got all teary eyed just writing about it! Thank you for another review... I love reading your thoughts about each chapter!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
That is love love love
Author's Response:
...Love is all you need... Sorry, that's just what popped in my head when I read your review. :) Thank you for yet another review!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward has the right to be heard LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! Who am I to ignore Edward? :)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was great Edward won over Charlie.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I always like to read about the father/boyfriend moments... Have you ever heard the song Stealing Cinderella by Chuck Wicks? Killer song... even if you aren't a country fan!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank god they are ok but how????
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. My magic as a writer kept them alive. :)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Red and Riley need to die
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I would tell you not to worry, but you already know what happens! ;)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
Yes... I was was crying with you....such a sweet, sweet story.... I love that there was a happy ending after such tragedy....
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and wonderful comments! :)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
This was a nice story with just the right amount of drama, But I gotta tell ya I didnt care much for this version of Bella ,I felt she cried if the wind blew .but the over all story I enjoyed
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your honesty about not liking Bella! :) I didn't like KStew's Bella in Twilight... she's gotten better though.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
what did they have?
Author's Response:
A boy! Thank you for the review... I hope you enjoyed the story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh...Pediatrician Edward...momma likey...
Author's Response:
:) Thank you for the review!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
I'm so sad to see the end of this story! I just read the last 8 chapters in a row and I can't believe all that has happened to them. They've been through so much and I'm glad they got the happy ending they deserve.
This story has been amazing. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I was sad for it to end too! They definately deserve a happy ending! I'm so happy to hear that you've enjoyed the story!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
I am glad that they have built a life together after all of the obsitcals that came up arounde them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! They definately deserve their happy life!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
What a wonderful ending! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I'm glad you enjoyed the ending!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
I loved the story... all of it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you fo ryour review. I'm so happy that you've enjoyed the story!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow... Looks like Victoria got what she deserved...
Author's Response:
Yes, I had a lot of people over at FF.net that were disappointed in Victoria getting arrested... They wanted her to get a little more than handcuffs!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love it! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review. I'm so happy you've been enjoying the updates!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
How sweet. I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love Edward's POV. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I had planned on this just being a BPOV story (With a little of Esme thrown in), but Edward wanted everyone to know his side of the story!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
How sweet!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. This was one of my favorite chapters!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG...they have to get out of this mess! Where is Charlie??? Victoria is crazy!!! Someone please get there. Great job...thanks!!1
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Charlie will get there!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
How sweet is he that he got both of them a ring?? I want an Edward can someone please tell me where I can find one? LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I would send you one if I had one! :)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww... Those two! I am happy that they are together again and that Edward and Bella are gong to move forward.
Author's Response:
Just wait... it gets better! :) Thank you for ANOTHER review!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
It is good that Edward and Charlie are use to having to deal with trama otherwise I think that they both would have lost it instead of being able to help.
Author's Response:
I completely agree. Thank you for the review!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
loved his thoughts on what happened
Author's Response:
Yeah, he wouldn't shut up so I had to write something for him! Thank you for the review!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
yeah love it
Author's Response:
Sigh... me too. :) Thank you for another review!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
so cute to see him with her
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I love the Edward/Abby scenes!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
so sad
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It was sad... There were a lot of parts of this story that were hard to write!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that is sad that Edward was so torn up about who he should help. I wonder if he knows that she is awake yet?
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! He doesn't know that Bella is awake.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
now i'm sad. it's ending
Author's Response:
I know, it's very sad to see it ending! :( Thank you for the review!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Aww!! They both made it and Edward went with Abby while Bella couldn't be there with her that is so sweet. I wonder what happened to Victoria and Riley and how they must all feel because Riley worked for them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Riley was shot and killed in the police ambush, Victoria was arrested...
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved this
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for the review. This was one of my favorite chapters!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well it is clear that Victoria just has the wrong information and that she doesn't care to know the truth. I really hope that they get out of this!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Like I said, Victoria is c-r-to the azy!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
awwwwwwwww edward..
Author's Response:
;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
love it!!!!! i'm so glad your back if only for a little while lol i really missed this story
Author's Response:
Thank you! ;) I'm sorry I kept you waiting. Thank you for being patient with me! I'm nearly finished with the epilogue, so hopefully the entire story will be posted by the end of the week!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
i'm so glad they got out of that. how can anybody suffocate a innocent baby. BASTARDS....
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It was difficult to write that chapter, but Victoria is a crazy bitch in this story...
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh that bitch done went wild
Author's Response:
Hehe... Thank you for the review!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
That is so sad that they had someone on the inside that was in and wanted to hurt both Bella and Abby.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I promise they will get what's coming to them.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aww.. that was sad that she thought that he was going to leave. I don't think that she really sees that Edward wants to be with her and Abby.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Bella is just a little bit oblivious.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad that she is talking to him and telling him what she wants becuase I am thinking that he is just waiting for her to move.
Author's Response:
Yep!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was really sweet that Edward got that for Bella! It is just scary that people would need that because there are just so many sick people in this world.
Author's Response:
It is very scary. You never know who you can trust anymore.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
And here comes the feeling of dread for her again.
Author's Response:
Sorry, there is a lot of roller coaster action in this story!