Date: 28 Dec 2012 8:00 PM Title: preface
I luv it, plz write more!!!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:56 PM Title: ??? hold on!
this is a wierd story update soon please
Author's Response:
thank u
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:22 AM Title: ??? hold on!
more more totally unfair LONGER CHAPPIES!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:18 AM Title: new beginning
more more
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:13 AM Title: it's finished
oh my lmao i really love this, you betta update soon you!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:48 AM Title: ??? hold on!
wow. great update. i love this story, plz update soon
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:51 AM Title: ??? hold on!
So they just take turns feeding off each other until they go out to feed???
Author's Response:
well its more of the taste than it is hunger, and she thought she could kill him by taking all his blood away. how wrong she was
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: ??? hold on!
want more please
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: new beginning
want more plesae
Date: 26 Oct 2010 8:12 AM Title: new beginning
Love it, wish the chapters were longer as I really enjoy the story.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:53 AM Title: new beginning
The babys are cute . Is one of the babys gone ????
Author's Response:
no remember she only had two. the reason why edward was going crazy was because he couldnt find the first but then saw that he had teleported to his mother.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:05 AM Title: new beginning
awe theyre so cute, liked the chap, and im glad you updated!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:32 PM Title: it's finished
really amazing story but try to slow it down a little bit. no harm ment.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:52 PM Title: it's finished
Even creepier! Good chapter!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:18 PM Title: preface
Really suspenseful! Good start!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:50 PM Title: it's finished
aghhhhh i would have NEVER imagined this story would turn out to be so FREACKING awsome, can´t wait to read more, im loving it ;)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 6:05 AM Title: it's finished
So they are blood drinkers with other powers??? I like it very interesting
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:14 AM Title: it's finished
nice, wondering if there is any feeling between the couples.
Waiting for next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:15 AM Title: beginning
I LOVED IT. AND I WANT MORE LMAO
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:02 AM Title: preface
i'm really into this. i hope you continue.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:29 PM Title: beginning
what the hell!! this is really good! what the hell are they????
Author's Response:
really weird creatures lol a mix between vampire and avatar the last air bender and werewolf lol, glad you liked it. but the were wolf part they dont turn in to wolves so they are shapeshifters... what do they shift to, you will find out next chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:14 AM Title: beginning
So he impregnated her and changed her into what ever he is at the same time??? Very interesting cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:22 AM Title: beginning
I really like it so far. What language are they speaking????
Author's Response:
yeah i sort of made it up, i know geek right, but hey i didn't know which language to put on there so i started mixing them and came up with that. lol i am happy youlike it so far
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:23 AM Title: beginning
omg. u totally have to add on to this story. it was so amazing. i can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: beginning
i think that i need to read the next chap, im not ordering you to do it, or something like that, im just trying to let you know that im hooked, i LOVE your Darkward
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:23 PM Title: preface
ooohh please do continue, seams very interesting. Nice to see for once James used as a good guy. Hope you decide to continue
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:13 AM Title: preface
who are timothy and Lidia???, and yes i think you should continue, but maybe in the next chapter explain a little bit more about who is who, or maybe make this chap the prologue, and then the first chap could be a little introduction about how bella's life was before the prologue, and then you could give a little introduction about each one of bella's siblings, but i think you should definetly go on writting the story, Oh! and before i forget, it would be a good idea to put on the introductory chap, date and place, and maybe on an AN wether if the story is gonna be based on the history, or completely fictional, sorry if i bored you with all my babling, goog luck with the writting i can see the potencial in this story.
Author's Response:
lol you don't bore me. and that chap was just alittle fix on what the whole story was based on. i was waiting for some one to give me the go ahead. because i just had this idea and wanted to know if it would be a good story. and yes that is what the next chap would have it would tell the entire story before they ran. and lidia and timothy are the older brother and sister... remember i was testing this chapter out.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:26 PM Title: preface
i like it...i think you should go on...
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:59 PM Title: preface
I think you should continue it is so sad to have your whole world taken away.