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Date: 04 Sep 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 03 Sep 2022 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 01 Sep 2022 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Esmeatheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 35

Umm....why were there no aplogies coming from Edward and Bella? I mean they were kind of being pains in the ass too. She punched Jasper in the face and blamed him for it! And saying hey sorry for punching but you made me do it...is not an aplogy. I was down with E and B until the last 3 chapters. They acted like jerks.

Reviewer: Pleaseno Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 39

awesome sequel i cried like a baby!!! ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

short and sweet wedding ;) it was strange having the boys have their 'human' names for middle names though and edward not have anthony ;)

Reviewer: stoohey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 28

I love your story, but I'm so confused that money is brought up a lot.  The low end doctors in my po-dunk town make $250,000/year.  The girls had scholarships for school.  There are 6 doctors sharing a house.  How could they not be rolling in excess money?



Author's Response:

Because residents in New York, who aren't in special practice, don't make a lot of money, and you have to remember that Bella and Edward were out of work for a long time after they were attached, and they have medical bills. E didn't have a scholarship, so he has to repay loans. And they girls only had scholarships for undergrad, not medical school. There are also monthly expenses, as well as credit cards, too. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 36

Girl that was hard to read. Very hard.



Author's Response:

It was hard to write, as well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 39

He is such a sweet doc.    Will start the third tonight

 

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 38

great dream.    

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 37

glad they all are talking things out.

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 36

awww poor Aaron.   Hope they can all start to heal better.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

glad they started to talk things out

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

glad b got some stuff off her chest

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 33

They had that confrontation coming.

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 32

glad Carlisle talked to her and Marcus too.    That was a low blow from Alice and Rose at the end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

James and Laurant are so cool.   

hmmm no rent is nice.  Will the others be able to afford the townhouse without them?     Why dont they sell the girls' old place?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

oh wow  rough chapter.  Glad Renee was cool.    Esme was way out of line and so was J.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

oh wow.  so much going on.  Cant believe she hit J but people need to learn to leave people alone sometimes.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

ok he overreacted to the dream but can understand the rest.    People do tend to ignore the dad in these situations.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

glad james and Laurant talked to her.    Oh wow, he''s mad about a dream???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love the joke.   Sweet family decorating time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 25

Aliens????  rofl.

Aww for family brining them dinner at the hospital.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

trying too hard maybe?  It'll happen when its time to

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 23

glad she's doing a little better.   E was right though.  they should have talked about it first.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

does take time to get back to some semblance of normal.   Glad she has people in her life to take care of her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

poor kids.   It really sucks

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

poor B.  Losing the baby on top of everything else.   I know how she feels.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

poor b.  

 

You made me cry at work ya know........ good writing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

oh NO YOU DIDNT!!!!   Charlie is dead?!?!?!    Evil woman you!!!   Poor Renee and Bella.    Baby wont know his grandpa.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

yummy start.   Glad Lauren and Tyler are happy.   EEEk for cliffy!!!

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

yey for the announcement.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good luck keeping it a secret from that group

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

woo hoo for E figuring it out.    YEY for mile high club

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

sweet ending to thier trip.   Sounds like B is a bit prego already too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

sounds like a wonderful honeymoon

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

sounds like a wonderful honeymoon spot.

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

yey   all married!!!!

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

awww mean parents making them all stay apart.  LOL

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

lol for the performance.   Kelsey sounds so cute

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella is such a nice person.

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

ugh  another trial.   glad she has the gym to get frustrations out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

aww for baby talk.    Bridzilla indeed

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow   talk about parents embarrasing you??    Aww for subway baby

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmm this Dr getts sounds like a real piece of work.

Nice birthday wake up!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

aww poor little boy.

 

Yummy end though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.   Shopping with the pixie would be exhausting.

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 21

This chapter was well written and shows the emotions that all of us that have miscarried have felt.  Thanks for sharing and I'm looking forward to more.  I hope Edward and Bella are able to overcome the depression that comes with a miscarriage.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 39

looking forward to the next story!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 39

I love this chapte. It brought back a great memory. I had 2 miscarriages and was pregnant again. I was nervous and scared. Then  I had a dream where my Gramma Leona came to me and said to relax and enjoy this pregnancy. She said I was going to have a girl and her name is going to be Makayla Leona. I was only 6 weeks pregnant at the time. I woke up my husband and told him. He just hugged me and said well I am glad that is settled. That child is know almost 16 years old and is of course named Makayla Leona. She has my Gramma's crooked smile and sense of humor. Everyone in the family knows her story.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 39

I have to say a few times I didnt know if I could keep reading this, it was so depressing at times, I felt through alot of this Bella was irational . But I am glad they worked out ,I hope the final stage will not be so depressing.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 39

OMG this is the end totally didn't see that coming but can we get more of the other chatacters in the next one.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 38

OMG is she preggers! I hope so.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

Man!  I love it BB!!!!

 

Thank you for such a wonderful story!!  I cant wait to read the Final stage!

 

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

im glad they finally got what they wanted! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

excited for them! keep theupdates comming

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 38

Ok, why would she say oh, fuck????

 

Ugh, BB, you drive me crazy with these evil cliffies!  I just want to chase them off with my shiny ebil penguin army! (no, it is ebil, not evil, go with it)

 

I am anxious to see what happens next :)  I need some fluffy after this tear jerker!  :)

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