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Reviewer: MandyT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

Will keep you in my thoughts and prayers.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Mandy. I appreciate it.

 

Jells

Reviewer: LeeLee13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

great chapter :-) 



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

Can't wait for more please update ASAFP. How many chapters are going to be in this story?



Author's Response:

Hey! Sorry for the late reply.

 

Thanks sooo much! Next chap will be up in a few days =)

 

There will be between 35 to 50 chapters. 

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

Woah what a chappie. Ben 's dad is such an ass and there goes the ceremony.  I wonder what will happen next.  Damn girl what a great chappie.  Oh could look at my story and give an review as well.  Love ya girl.

Jukie



Author's Response:

Jukie *waves*

 

Thanks so much! Your comment made my day and I love your story!!! Can't wait to read more!

 

Thanks again,

 

Love ya

 

*hugs*

 

Jells

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm still reading



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

 

Jells

Reviewer: Brokenlove81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love your stories! this one though has to be one of my favorite stories that I have read.



Author's Response:

Thanks sooo much! Your comment made my day =)

 

Next chap will be up in a few days.

 

Thanks again, 

 

Jells

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sure you still have more than 5 readers. It's good to see a new chapter, especially one as good as this. I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen between Ben and his father, will Angela keep the baby and, most importantly, what about the release ceremony? Please don't take too long in updating - I might fall off!



Author's Response:

LOL I guess I do =)

 

Thanks so much, your comment made my day. 

 

The next chap will be up in a few days, I'm almost finished. =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh my wow! Bella needed that bloodletting yes but the sex with the blood all around the bathroom? That was a little barbaric. Just saying. :) poor Angie tho. She's getting tossed around a lot. Lol! & poor Ben too. I'm glad Ben is letting Bella go. Can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

LOL! Yeah very barbarbic. 

 

Thanks so much. I'll have the chapter posted in a few days.

 

Jells

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

This was intense but I enjoyed seeing the darker side of Edward 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Things will get very intense for the next two chaps, but PLEASE stick with me. Things will get better for E and b =)

 

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

You'll have more than five readers don't be so hard on yourself! Not sure what to say very intense! So no ceremony what next?

Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

Thanks for sticking with this story. I try not to be so hard on myself, but it's been hell lately. Glad things are looking up. =)

 

And yup, no ceremony....but it's not exactly a bad thing.... esp for what will happen the next two chaps. 

 

I'm working hard on the next chap. Thanks again, Maria! I appreciate it.

 

Jells

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh honey, I hope it gets better for you. I know when we last spoke, it wasn't going well. You know where to find me when you need me.

 

(HUGS)

 

Allie



Author's Response:

*BIG HUGS*

 

Thanks for being there. It means alot =)

 

Jells

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 21

thanks for the update. Sorry about RL 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

This chapter was a litlle different then the others. But I like it. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hey! *waves*

 

Yeah it was. A bit disturbing, lol. There will be a climax soon, but after things will look up for the couple. =)

 

Thanks for reading, I'm working hard on that next chap. 

 

Jells

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 21

That chapter was very distrubing...and erotic. Damn Old man Cheney...he may have just pissed Edward off for the last time!



Author's Response:

Thank you! =)

 

Mr. Cheney is crazy but things will shift soon....for the better 

 

Thanks for reading. I really appreciate it!

 

Jells

Reviewer: lvpcgrl84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

love love love it

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Still reading and waiting for updates. Hope rl gets better for ya. Xx



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much!! I hope RL gets better too. But I'm working hard on that next chap. =)

 

Thanks again,

 

xxOo

 

Jells

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 21

This has to be the best edward vampire story there is!!! Thank you for updating and I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much! Your comment made my day =D

 

I'm working on the next chapter already. I'm working hard lol

 

Thanks again for reading. I appreciate it.

 

Jells

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well........your five readers left appreciate this chapter very much. I hope Angela and the baby make it. Poor Edward and Bella........They were so close to this release ceremony. Too bad Ben's father came and ruined everything.



Author's Response:

lol Thanks for reading =) I'm glad you still like =)

 

Things will get better for E&B and A&B very soon.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

OH MY GOSH!  NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I really loved this!  I thought Bella and Edward wanted younglings as he put it, oh well.  Claiming sounds like it will be an amazing experience for them ;)  I really hope Angela and Ben's baby is alright, please?!  I also cannot wait for Bella and Edward to have a bonding ceremony ;D



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thanks so much for reading. =) I appreciate it. I'm working on the next chap. Claiming will be euphoric ;) And good things will happen for Edward and Bella and Angela and Ben very soon =)

 

Thanks again, RAH! 

 

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

great chapter thanks 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading =)

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

MORE PLEASE ASAP I LOVE THIS STORY THANKS 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on the next update.

 

Thanks you =)

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm sorry RL wasn't treating you well. Hope it gets better for you. Thank you for the update I loved it.

 

Molly



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope it gets better,too.

 

Thanks again for your support.

 

Jells

Reviewer: i am ms emmett cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

hey love the story!!!!

dying to know when the next update is... please make it soon

May

p.s this is the best story EVER written



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much! Your comment made my day when I read it. =)

 

Im sorry for the late reply. I had a few RL emergencies over the past few months.

 

Thanks again for reading. It means a lot to me =)

 

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: Stefba Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

I haven't been this hooked in a story in a long time. Thank you.

I love the concept of your story.

I hope you'll update soon :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

 

And Im sorry for the late reply. i had some serious RL emergencies over the past few months.

 

Thanks again for reading, it means a lot to me. =)

 

Jells

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

sooooo ..... whens the next update :DDD im trying to be patient but i just cant help myself :DDD

 

really cant wait for your knew fics either !!!!

Author's Response:

Hey!!! *waves*

 

Aww thank you!!! I pomise I'm working on it. It shouldn't be much longer, maybe a few more days (4) or so. I got a bit distracted last night when a reader told me about my other story that I write with Thaigher Lillie called Living Amongst Hell being plagiarized. Soooo it took an emotional toll on me a bit, but I'm fighting through it. I will have the next update up asap though.

 

Thanks so much! =)

 

xox

 

Jells 

Reviewer: missy889 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Favorite chapter by far! Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightlovergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

This story is so amazing. I love it.

I've never read a story that captured my attention as much as this one has.

Please update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Hi! 

 

Sorry for the late reply! 

 

Thank you so much! I totally appreciate it. Your comment made my day. I'm working on the next chapter, should have it finished very soon...hopefully by next week. 

 

 

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

Well written and wonderful! Please post more soon thanks!

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

poor Angel & Ben losing their baby like that



Author's Response:

Hey! *waves*

 

Don't worry, I'm sure Carlisle will help. Keep in mind the baby is important.

 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

 

Jells

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 20

:(...  je suis tellement malheureuse, j'ai lu la première moitié avec Google Translate, la journée que vous l'avez publié, c'était tellement bon... mais c'était comme couper un fantasme en deux, lol, il me manque l'autre moitié.  Je n'arrive pas à traduire le reste.

 

Je vous remercie de m'avoir envoyé les chapitres en copier/coller mais cette fois-ci, ça ne fonctionne pas.  :(...  mais c'est si long.

lol, j'ai dû lire les review pour avoir un aperçu de la deuxième moitié du chapitre, j'essaie depuis que vous l'avez envoyé.

 

Y a-t-il une possibilité que lorsque vous publiez le prochain chapitre, pour ne pas décevoir les lecteurs... de m'envoyer la deuxième partie du chapitre, même si vous effacez après.  svp, svp, un cadeau, ne pas envoyer de chapitre de plus de vingt mille mots. svp, envoyer deux chapitres en même temps.  Ayez pitié de moi, lolv

 

Votre histoire est si fascinante... mais j'ai le goût de taper des pieds comme un enfant... lol, je suis grand-mère! lol,  si mes enfants me voyaient, ils seraient mort de rire!

 

Je vous envoie l'endroit jusqu'à où google translate a traduit.  vous êtes meilleur en informatique que moi, peut-être connaissez-vous une façon de traduire en français le reste du chapitre.

dernière phrase...vendredi matin...lorsque Edward explique à Bella que Edward baigne et Bella baigne, que c'est normal, c'est ce que les camarades font. IL n'y a rien de mal à ça chaton... Edward dit cela avec un sourire narquois.

 

Pitié à genoux pour un prochain chapitre de vingt mille mots et moins!



Author's Response:

Hi fleur!

 

I already sent you an email. I hope that small part I sent translated correctly. Let me know if it did so I can email you the remainder of the chapter =)

 

Again, sorry for the problem of not being able to translate.

 

Janine

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Writing was creative and engaging to read. Edward was yummy. I view this chapter as D/s lite (awesome b/c not a big fan of a full on D/s relationship). Love how you write E/B emotional connection. Lemon was hot. 

Angela and Ben are so cute and I'm so worried about them and the pregnancy. Love how your story takes on prejudices and political views. 

43,000 word chapter is a gift from the Gods. I have no life so I sat down and read the whole chapter is one sitting. I was so excited you updated. 

 



Author's Response:

Wow!!! Thanks so much! Your comment totally made my day =)

 

Yeah just a bit of light D/s here, don't want to get too heavy into it. I don't have the time to research anyway LOL  And the story will take a turn soon anyways. 

 

Thanks again!!! So excited that you enjoyed it!!

 

*hugs*

 

Jells

Reviewer: melliesweet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm so happy that I found your story. Your vampires are so HOT! I love the world you created thanks for sharing and i'm looking forward to more



Author's Response:

awww thanks so much!! I appreciate it!! I'll have more as soon as I finish the chappy.

 

Thanks again

 

Jells

Reviewer: Transform5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

i hope Angela doesn't lose the baby i know the hybrid will be very important



Author's Response:

She won't, the baby is very important. Sorry if I gave it away, but it won't happen. ;)

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: topazeyes11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

that was some chapter i fluved it and i know that angela wont lose the baby its to important i cant wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

 

Jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow  great chapter.  SUbmission, a sweet date,   ohhhh  poor angela



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! 

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

IT TOOK ME 3 DAYS TO FINISH THIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!! im sorry but THIS BITCH IS A MONSTER!!!! It was like work trying to finish it. but the story was great the chapter great. sorry im kinda tired. yhu left us with a cliff hanger which is leaving me with mixed emotions. Normally Im like MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE then after I get that I want MORE MORE MORE MORE. but now I kinda want that but I want MORE MORE but at a much later date... MUCH MUCH later date. LOL so tired



Author's Response:

LOL!!!

 

You sound exhausted LOL but I enjoyed your comment *giggles* Next chapter is quite small compared to this. =)

 

Thanks for reading! 

 

~Jells

Reviewer: Jtom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

I started this story three days ago and I couldn't stop reading. Now I reached the end and I NEED MORE! Please post more ASAP! Thank you

 

Jenn



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'll have more as soon as I finish the chappy! =)

 

Thanks again

 

Jells

Reviewer: CullenMeCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

holy hot damn definite panty changing chapter...............i should have known better than to read this on my lunch break now im all hot and bothered with no one to mark me with their serum  uggg reality. great job and i cant wait for more



Author's Response:

LOL! Maybe I should put a lemon warning at the beginning *giggles*

 

Thank you so much!!! 

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

I love this story, it keeps getting better and better! Thanks for the update. That was a long lemon and so erotic. I am speechless. Thank you and please don't keep us waiting too long.

 

Tosha



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'll ahve an update asap!

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

omg!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! Please don't tell me that she is going to lose the baby??? PLEASE??? She can!! And why didn't Ben gave her his healing venom???? He could help her until they reach Carlisle... I trully believe that her baby is important and maybe it will be the reason for Edward and bella to fight against Aro??? That with their desire to have children of their own and of course to change Bella... What will happen??? And with Bellabeing Ben's Sudmissale??? What does that mean in the long run???

Jasper's mother has been through so much!! I though that Aro only used human but he treated his own people like that too??? Son af a bitch!!!! When will Edward realise that he is the next king???

And then there is the trial???? Will they take Edward to the prison??? But he did kill s serial killer something that is really important!! he actually helped the coverment!! It doesn't really matter why he did it but he did the police's work... And they honestly should give Bella the right to true mate??? Aro is afraid of Edward after all... But most of all don't let anyone else to take Bella... Even if Edward does go to prison she can't take another mate... PLEASE???!!!!! 

I totally loved this chapter!!! So many lemon and then the scenting scene... Jesus!!!! Only thinking of all that is making me horny... I really need to go change my panties right now... But it was incredible!!!!! I love dominant Edward!!!!

And last is Bella sick??? Because she was feeling faint and weak... So??? 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow!!! Thank you so much!!! I loved your comment. It made my day!!!

 

Yes, you're totally right, the baby is very important. 

 

Unfortunately, healing venom doesn't work for everything. And in this case, they weren't sure if the healing venom could actually do the baby harm.

 

You have some very great questions. They should all be answerd very soon. =) And Bella will never take another mate. She  will be Edward's, always and forever. =)

 

Bella is indeed sick, it will be revealed very soon as well. The trial coming up will be a very difficult, but very important chapter, it's a turning point in the story. 

 

Aww thanks, I'm happy that you like a dominant Edward. So do I *giggles* And he's fuckhawt. lol ;)

 

I will post a mini chap asap. Hopefully in a few days.

 

Thanks again, I appreciate the time you take to comment. It brightened my day!

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful chapter I love the detail that goes into this story Thank you!



Author's Response:

aww thanks so much!!!

 

I'll have a short chappy update soon.

 

Thanks again

 

Jells

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

 Holy crap, sorry I couldn't reviewed earlier but I had to read the whole story again before reading the new chapter. Seriously I don't kno how u come up w half of the stuff. I loved the scenting sa, but my favorite chapter was bella's priod chapter and the change. This story it's amazing and you can get so into the story and you don't want to stop. I guess angela lost the baby? I feel sorry for her,I really hope she didn't .  And Edward? Is he going to be really pissed off at Bella? So many questions  they were having such a good time together. They can't catch a break. SMH.  I really hope to see you soon. I love this story. 



Author's Response:

I apologize for the long wait between updates. =( But I'm totally happy that you enjoyed the chappy. The period chapter and The Change chappy are one of my faves too. They were so fun to write lol I will most likely have a few more of the period ones, just gotta get some more things out of the way first. The story will start to get a bit intense once The Trail hits. 

 

I'll have a mini update hopefully by the end of this week, if not, then the next. I'm really pushing myself to get another chappy out.

 

Thanks again, your comment made my day =)

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am so addicted to this story, please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm happy that you're still enjoying it.

 

I'll have a mini update asap.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

Reviewer: Chelle82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved the details great chapter i loved it so much but what will happen now with bella being ben's submissale??? i can't wait to find out



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! 

 

You'll see soon. I'll have a mini update asap.

 Thanks again

Jells

 

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

well, that bunch of scenes with Bella and Edward has to be the juiciest I've read in Twiworld. Erotic as hell and wonderfully detailed and described.  The other scenes with the boys doing the submission thing and Angela's pregnancy all add great depth to your vampire world.  Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

WOW!! Thank you so much! Your comment made my day! I'm totally flattered. =D 

 

I'll have a mini update asap. 

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Your story is one that I drop EVERYTHING to read!  I can't wait to see the repercussions of Bella submissing to Ben & what is happening to Angela.  Does she lose the baby already?  Aaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!  You are, seriously, killing me with all the cliffies, buti think I must be a masochist because I love this story just the way it is, cliffies and all!!!  Lol! :)



Author's Response:

WOW! Thanks so much! Your comment made my day. I'm totally flattered. *grins really big*

 

I'll have a mini update asap. Aaaand it probably won't have a cliffy either LOL

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

 

Reviewer: kaykay85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

that was a long but great chapter i can't wait for more

 

kayla



Author's Response:

Thak you! I'll have more soon =) 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

HAHA.

 



Author's Response:

=D 

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved the barb cleaning 101!!!!!  great chappie Jells.  I am so glad I got my barb fix for the week



Author's Response:

Lambbbbbbbbbbbbyyyy!!! lmfao! Barbedpeenward thought you might like it. 

 

Thanks for reading! =) 

 

*hugs*

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

Reviewer: BGinny7606 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

What an update! I hope Angela and the baby will be okay. I can't wait for more!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey bb!!

 

Thanks. It took me a couple months to write this, although I wanted to cry when I had to rewrite about half of it when my laptop crashed. Let me tell ya, it was hell. But I pushed through it.

 

I'll have a mini update very soon, hopefully this week.

 

Thank you

 

xox

 

Jells

 

thought this was cute... you know how I just LOVE fangs *giggles*

 

fangs

Reviewer: MandyT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! More will be coming up asap. 

 

Reviewer: cgooden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm sorry to hear that RL is being difficult for you but I'm glad you got the chance to update this story.  I can't wait to read more and find out what else could happen before they all get their HEA.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks. It's been a rollercoaster ride for sure. But I'm trying to stay afloat.

 

I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story. I'll have a mini update coming up very soon. 

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

jj

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

well when you deliver you deliver big... go big or go  home,, thats my jels. such a freaking roller coaster ride.. the sex freaking amazing im so jealous... the adoration of edward is breathtaking.... I love how you built Angela and Ben, its taken me a bit to catch up but ma cherie you  made the hairs on my arms stand up again... so good... 



Author's Response:

Maaaaaaarge!!! *hugs*

 

Thanks so much!!! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Although Edward and the male vampires are quite dominant, they love their mates passionately. Thank you. I adore Ben and Angela, tho Ben will have some apologizing to do next chapter. lol  There will be more sweet Edward coming up soon. I just got to take a breather, this chap took a lot out of me. lol

 

Thanks again, 

 

*hugs* 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Would I sound greedy if I said I wanted more like now??? ha ha 



Author's Response:

Lmao!

 

Just a little greedy. J/K 

 

I'll have a mini chap posted asap

 

Thank you!!

 

 

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

MAJOR CLIFFHANGER :o:o:o:o

 

 

LOVED IT THOUGH :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! Glad you enjoyed it. 

 

Oh noes! Major cliffy?? And here I thought it was a little one. LOL

 

I won't make you wait too long. I'll have a mini chap posted asap.

 

Thanks again,

xox

 

Jells

 

faf

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

Missed this story so much, but after reading another one of your wonderfully long, delicious, hot chapters all I can say is thank you. I love the daily interactions, the difference between vampires and human the way they think, feel and of course the sex, ahhhhh - Cheri

 



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much! Your comment made my day!! =)

 

I'll have a mini update asap. 

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

fa

 

Thought this was cute lol 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

OH MY GOD. Great chapter

Don't let us wait to long for the next.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

 

I'll have a mini update asap. =)

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

Thought this was cute ...lol 

fangs

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)



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Thanks so much!! =D

 

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

OH MY GOSH!  NO!!!!!!  I really loved this so much!  Great job!  I really loved it so much!



Author's Response:

Hey!! *waves*

 

Thanks so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

 

I'll have a small update towards the end of the week, I've got a bit of studying to do first.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

Thought this was cute lol

fangs

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

What an update!  It inspired me to have a sex marathon too! Ha!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

LMAO! IKR? It was like the never ending lemon. lol 

 

Thanks so much! 

 

I'll have a mini update this week, most likely the end since I've got a bit of studying to do.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 Thought this was cute.. lol

fang

Reviewer: TwiAddictcrzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

I had a feeling it was James. I hope that Bella and Edward do move to Seattle, they fit in very well there.Can't wait to read more, Jells! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 

I'll have more posted asap!

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

WOW THERES SO MUCH  REALLY LOVED IT  PLEASE DONT MAKE US WAIT TO LONG THANKS



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

 

I won't, mini  chap comin' right up.

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

SOOOOOOOOOOO glad you are back missed you.  Lovely and very long chappie.  I'm looking forward to the next one.

 

Love Jukie



Author's Response:

Juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuukie!!! *hugggsssssss youuuuu*

 

I missed you too. Ugh I was so close to giving up with the rewrite when I got that virus, but then I just pushed myself...and yeah...couldn't stop writing and yup...here's the long chapter. lmao

 

Thanks bb! I'll manage to get a mini chap posted hopefully this week. Homework won't keep me away too long lol

 

xoxo

 

Jells

 

*giggles*

fangs

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

great chapter please post more soon



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll have a mini chap posted very soon. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow, what a chapter.



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Thanks so much! =D 

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

You know I love the hell out of you right....?

I  held off reviewing for the mere fact that I held off reading so I could get a huge dose of this beast....

I am so glad I did...I got so much to look forward too..wooo hoo...



Author's Response:

Dreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! 

 

*hugs* 

 

Thanks so much bb!!! 

 

I worked on this sucker for over two months long. I had lost over 50% when my 'puter crashed from that virus. I was about to give up, I really couldn't find the energy to keep going, esp with classes and work and drama bullshit

 

Anyways, I'll see ya around. I'll squeeze in a few chaps on EEK this week, tho I have to reread the last chappy first.

 

Laters

 

xox

 

*Giggles*

 

fangslikeme

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hate Angela and Bena.Ben ungrateful weakling, he just creates quarrels, scandals and draki.Ne can control myself and let go pape.A with what money he's going to go to college? Or have Anzh.On think the Cullens are in all pay? by Angela a more problems than Belly.I how he could do so with the other recognized Bell as hissubmissive.



Author's Response:

Hey Aura!

 

Ben will have some apologizing to do for taking Bella as his Submissale.He knows that Edward doesn't approve. No male wants to see his true mate bow down to another. And Bella will make it up to Edward. Angela knows that there's something about her baby. She has a strong feeling that this baby will change things. But you'll see further down the road what that will be. =)

 

Thanks for reading and giving me your thoughts. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

WOW! That was a long long long chapter but i loved every minute of it. i can't wait for more, please post soon



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'll have a mini update very soon. Thanks again

 

~Jells

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

had to post this chapter as your only allowed one review per .... im early awaiting the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

Sorry for taking so long. I will be posting tonight. It took me a while to get this chpater out.

 

Thank you =)

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: topazeyes11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

Please let there be an update soon. I'm in love with your story



Author's Response:

Yes, more now! 

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

!!!!!!

Why you evil, little.... GAH! By now, I should really be expecting you leaving chapters with an effing cliffie, but I'm still falling for it every damn time... -.-

I seriously can't decide what you are more into: looking for the best way possible to end a chapter with an evil cliffie just so you can make your readers (totally talking about myself here...) growling at their laptop in frustration, OR looking for/ finding all the ways Bella Swan could die from! I mean, there she was minding her own business, coming down from that intense high that fuckhawt sex in the woods got her, and then you have to get in that car- I mean, send that bear along her way! =)

 

Oooh, that whole Bella/James thing is getting scarier and weirder with every chapter, too! What the hell is going on with that! Oh, and don't get me started with Bree! Never saw that coming- I thought Riley would be the one to join in in James little psycho games! Well, he probably did too, but Bree...gah!

Damn you, there so many different thing sgoing on at once in your story, I forgot half the things I wanted to say! I couldn't even tell you what I'd like to get solved first! The whole Aro debacle, Tanya's deal, the drama with James, the trial,... OMG, I sooo hope that they'll grant Bella true mate-rights, but knowing all the shit that you're throwing out there for her left, right and center, she /Edward will probably get denied!!! EEEEEVIIIIIIIIL!!! Seeing Purrward behind bars and Bella forced to be with someone else would make me so sad, but it's obvious it would be better and safer it it came down to it. But seriosuly, DON'T DO IT!!!! =)

Wonder what's going down in the Cullen house...Ben finding out about Angela's pregnancy--> could be a happy roar, right?! =) =) Or maybe, Ben's father found to get to them undetected?!?! Ooooh, boy! Can't wait to find out!

Awesome sauce, bb!

Mwah!

-Sue



Author's Response:

LMAO!! I am evil *snickers sadistically* I'm like the Cliffie Queen, don't you know already? lmao 

 

Yeah, the James thing will be wrapped up soon actually....ch 26 I believe. Things will go down south pretty quickly. Charlie is running an investigation on James and the Beirs-Tanner family. He knows something is up as well. But that will be revealed in like ch 25 or so. 

 

Lmao you think Edward will get denied? Hmmm... you'll see, you could be right *zips lips* lol

 

I will say this, the pregnancy with Angela is actually a good thing ;D lol See? Not that evil, right? lmao

 

Anyhoo, I gotta get going

 

Did you ever get my email? I wasn't sure bc I have been having problems with it. 

 

TTYL

 

xoxo

 

Jells

 

Oh I though this was cute...lol

fangs

 

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

GAH!!!

OMG!!! Ungh...what? Seriously?! Do you really Bella that much?! You just as might hit her with a car and then hit reverse just to do it again! And again. And again!! =) Eeeeviiiil! Somebody should start a list with all teh things you had her going through...so far! ( I just know there is more coming...) And now she is stuck with Riley-who is kinda shady on his own- an his cousin...JAMES! GAH!

Let that poor girl become a hybrid already! =)

No time for a long review- need to know wtf is going to happen!!! Your own faul! =P

-Sue

Ps. Oooh, Angela might be preggers! Oo

PPS. Thanksfor the Rob Fangcandy! =)



Author's Response:

Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeee *Hugs you* Sorry for teh late reply =(

 

Lmao, I know, everything always shitty happens to Bella. Ain't that a bitch. LOL  Things will get better...soon. But shit will hit the fan very soon, possibly ch 22 already. 

 

Thanks bb!

 

TTYL

Mwah

 

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

I can't wait for more, I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! =)

 

I'm almost finished with the editing. Hopefully, I'll have it completely finished in a few days.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: vanDamn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so in love with this story. it's fantastic & I've reread it quite a few times & everytime I do, it gets better :D

you're amazing !

 

hugs from Vienna

 



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much! That means a lot to me. I promise I'll have the next chapter posted as soon as possible. Some RL issues caused a delay in posting.

 

Thanks again,

 

*big hugs*

 

Jells

Reviewer: Epic16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

Omg I got ready to push the next button and there wasn't one:,( please tell me you're updating soon because I am absolutely addicted to this story!!!



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thanks so much for reading! I appreciate it. And yes, I will be updating soon. Some RL issues caused a delay but I will post a small chapter asap.

 

Thanks so much again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

great story are you planning on adding more soon? 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yes, there will be more. I fell behind a bit trying to squeeze out as much LAH chapters since inspiration hit, but I will be back. =) I'm almost finished wrapping up this chapter update, but i need a little more time.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow great chaptr

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

loved it

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

WOW

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

i love this edward yummy

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

HOT the marking was HOT 

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

WOW! I Love it!!!

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

This story is so different than anything I've read before. Kudos!

Reviewer: ImperfectPerfect Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting start

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

just reviewing to say i cant wait for the next chapter and the two new stories your intending to write sound awesome !!!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

Thanks so much! I'm almost finished wrapping up this LAV update. I fell behind a bit b/c I've been trying to squeeze out as much as LAH chapters before I lost the inspiration. lol But I'll be back and post this story as soon as I finish editing the chapter.

And thanks. I wrote a few chapters a while ago from those two new stories. I"ll be posting those soon.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Eonini Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

waiting for update. please & thank you.



Author's Response:

It's coming. I've gotta do an edit, but I'll have it posted asap. 

Thanks so much!

 

Jells

Reviewer: ValeryVzla29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Trully love this story!!! Great so far... hope you update soon :D, really looking forward to see what happens nexr.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 

I'm in the process of wrapping the chapter up then I'll do a little self edit. I'll have it posted asap. 

Thanks for reading! =)

Jells

Reviewer: SimonsOwner Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story! I have reread many times, I just wanting to know when you're going to update this story? I have seen where you have updated many others, just wondering if this one was next.

 

SimonsOwner



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm working on chapter 20. I'm hoping to have an update before the week is over.

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think James had something to do with Bella's parents' deaths. Please hurry and post more :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews. =) I'll try to have a mini update today.

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

Another great twist I didn't see coming. I don't think Bella should trust Bree any longer. I hope Edward saves Bella in time. She's stuck in a pickle.



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh no Tanya. What a skank



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

You are a cliffhanger queen LOL Great twists by the way :-)



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

I didn't see that twist coming at all. Very unique!



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Is Bella's attitude breaking the bond between them??? What's wrong with Edward???



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

This is my favorite chapter so far! Great job!



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

Mr. Cheney is going to be a problem. I really hope Edward will get to be King of Vampires

Author's Response:

Mr. Cheney is an ASS! Itll only get worse

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

oh please post more i cant wait



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll try to post a mini chap today =)

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

oh no i dont trust bree.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

the bitch is back haha



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

It's Aro this can't be good. I wonder what Aro wants?



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