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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

I forgot to ask this, but I'm curious about Bella being turned. It doesn't seem like it could be possible. Is this an HEA?

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this animalistic Edward. Their mating was hot!



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Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

nice twist on the hunting lust

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

that was HOTHOTHOT  haha

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

whats wrong with edward????



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Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

I hope Victoria gets what's coming to her! I'm wonder why the Vampire Gov't is ordering humans to take those pills. Great chapter!

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

The period part was really awsome. im glad you had the courage to write about it not to many writers do

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

I really enjoyed the marking in the cafeteria and Edward carving Bella's name in his chest. The males seem so devoted to their mates.

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm happy that Angela and Ben are officially true mates. I thought it was James who was killing the Bella look a likes cool twist :-)

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

This can't be good. i don't think Aro will approve of E and B being mates

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward was so sweet when they made love for the first time

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hope you post more soon. It would be a fantastic Christmas present *hint hint LOL



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LOL. Sorry RL has been keeping me away, but I'll try to have a mini update.

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter. there was alot going on

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

i hate victoria

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

LOVED THIS CHAPTER OMG

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

i loved the markng!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm looking forward to the blood donation part. I wonder how Edward will react to Bella giving her blood for other vampires to drink.

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

I dont trust Bree. Will Edward get to Bella in time?

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

edward is going to be so mad

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying this story!

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

I thought my first day of school was bad when I was a kid but Bella's seem like a nightmare. Sounds like James.

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

This story is so unique I love it

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow girl, you and your cliffies LOL

Reviewer: Kbeck Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was rec'd this story and am hooked already. Great start!

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

i love your Edward

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

i think its james

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

poor bella. I would  be scared to. I hope she finds edward soon good chapter

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

very different I like it :-)



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Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

awesome like this here chapter I do can't wait 2 find out what happens next



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Thanks so much! I'll try to post a mini chapter today. Have a safe and happy new year!

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: Jenndur Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

I have to say, I've been reading this story nonstop for a couple days now, and I'm totally addicted to it.  I can't wait to read more.  Please update soon!  Thanks! :)



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks so much! I'll try to post today. RL has been crazy. Thanks again and have a safe and happy new year!

Reviewer: Carly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

soz 4 da l8 reply I have been so busy wif homework and school :( finally on holidays now... Anyway thanks so much 4 da reply it means a lot! :) soz to hear about ur computer and stuff... But good luck with doing the nxt and and future chapters. (looking 4ward to reading them) :) thanks again... :) as u no I love this story so much but I wondering how u came up with this story it's so differently amazing to other twi fanfics I have read... Anyway keep smiling !!! :) 

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

I am so in love with this story. This Edward is the hottest vamp I've read about and I've read a ton of these stories. 

What a nice little cliffy, hahaha.

I have only one real concern regarding this story and that is that Edward will have to go to jail and leave Bella, that she won't be recognized as his true mate. She has already been through so much. So please don't separate them.

Plus I can't hardly wait till we get to the part where James dies, I hope, I hope, I hope.

hugz



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! Your comment made my day =)

This is def a HEA and Bella and Edward will stay true mates. And James will get what's comin' to him.

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I had to rewrite what I had, first draft was lost. =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Damsel w Dreams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Just once...I'd like to be with someone like him. I love your story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! =)

I'll have more soon. I'm almost finished rewriting it. First draft was all lost =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Transform5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

I need more :-P



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll have more asap. Thanks xox Jells

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

oups... je regardais les review et je me suis aperçue que la miewnner n'y était pas?%&/*$&?*&$%?&U

 

Pour une fois que j'en avais écrit une longue review qui venait du coeur... lol 

Résumé...

Bon... je vous aime et j'adore ce que vous écrivez, vous me faites rêver et vous êtes parmi les meilleures histoires que j'ai lu... anglais et français.



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! I cherish each review that you give me.

I'll have chapter 20 posted as soon as I'm finished writing it.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved the chapter. Not feeling the mating house idea such as Alice. It is an interesting kink. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

thanks so much =) Yeah the mating house is def kinky. Not for all. Def not for me lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I had to rewrite what I had b/c I lost it all =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bree is crazy; I thought something seemed off about her in previous chapters. The lemon was very HOT! The roar was probably Ben finding out about the pregnancy. Aro needs to be destroyed soon, so hybrids can become legal. Great chapter and looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with the rewrite. First draft was all lost =(

I'll be getting back to PT as well, now since my lap top is okay.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Carly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love this story so much every chapter blows me away... Stories have there ups and down but this story wow just keeps getting more amazing every time. So thank you creating this story and can't wist till next chapter. Ohhh and yer everytime I these a new update it makes my day... :) and I may have read this story about a millions times but will never get sick of it... It's a must read... :)

Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like this story. Your comment made my day!!! =)

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished rwriting it. First draft was lost =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I had to rewrite my first draft. It was all lost =(

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Nan_saad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm betting it's Ben after the news of Angela's pregnancy. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll have ch 20 posted asap. Thank you, xox Jells

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

thanks great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap.

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap.

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: missy889 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

looking forward to more :-) please post asap thanks



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll have chap 20 posted asap

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved the chapter

Love the pictures

Reviewer: manson87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

thanks great chapter



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll ahve ch 20 posted asap. xox jells

 

Reviewer: Meggan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks again, Jells, for letting me know about the update!! WOW!! Yeah... totally Hot, as always!! I so can't wait for the next chapter! I am dying to know if Angela is, in fact, pregnant... BTW, I think that may have something to do with the end of the chapter. But then again, it could be anything. Maybe Ben's dad showed up? Maybe the Volturri guard showed up? Or... maybe something to do with James and his family... So many possibilities.

I love how Bella stood up to Tanya, even though she's human. And Alice with her little jealous fit...

Patiently waiting the next installment..



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* It's nice to see you here.

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finshed rewriting it. Lost draft one. Let me tell you, that was hell. lol

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter!, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I loved the Lemon too! I would love to be dominated by Edward. (:



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much =)

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished

xox

Jells

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think that Angela told Ben and that is what the roar was about.



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I think you may be right. I'll have ch 20 posted asap. It's almost finished.

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow So happy Charlie showed up when he did there is something wrong with Bree I think she has killed humans before when she gets upset.  What is going on in  the Cullens.  I cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with the rewrite,

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Cliffy indeed.  Skankya is pathetic.   Ugh for Bree and family.   Pathetic.    Hmmm  Sounds like Alice nad Jazz have some things to work out.     Ben (at the end im assuming) is not happy



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

LOL @ Skanya.

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with it ...two drafts later. lol

xox

Jells

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Let's dispense with the New Moon, then have enough drama without rasstovaniya.What then about the Volturi, not what is heard. Please do not separates them.



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Bella and Edward will always stay true mates. Always and forever. =)

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with the second draft.

xox

Jells

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow! Sex in the woods, no DOMINATE sex in the woods, even better! Soo freaking hot! But the part with James? Yeah that creeped me out. Poor Bella. He must have something to do with her mom. I love this fic. I can't wait to read more. Thanks again bye for now. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you. =)

Yeah James is creepy.

I'll post ch 20 asap. I'm still rewriting some parts.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

YAY, another update! Thank you for not making us wait too long. :)

Dun, Dun, Duuuunnnnnnn!!!!  You & your cliffies.  I'm pretty sure you are trying to kill me!! ;) Growl=reaction to baby, Ben's dad found them???  Interesting turn Bree's character took.  Was James the vampire that killed Bella's parents?  Was the rest of Bree's family somehow involved in that?  I know you aren't going to answer my questions, but AAAAAHHHHHH, I just have so many. :P

Here's another question, when is the trial, next chapter, or a few more down the road? I can't believe there is even talk about the possibility of Bella with another mate.  She is Edward's, plain & simple.

You already know how excited I am by your updates, so you can imagine the look on my husband, & children's faces when they heard my fan-girl scream when I saw the update alert today!!!! :D  Thanks again for working so hard to give us this story.  I'm looking forward to more excitement!  :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Aww sorry about those evil cliffies. ;) I'm all about angst lmao Although it'll settle down a bit ....later on. lol

I'll answer a question. =) The trial is in ch 21 or 22. I wanted to put it in ch 20 but it's a short chapter. I'm actually rewriting it b/c I lost what I had written b/c I didn't back it up. I know, stupid me. lol I was so upset. I'll tell you this as well, Bella won't ever have a new mate. She'll always be with him. HEA all the way. lol

Aww *blushes* Thanks so much. Your comment made me squee.

Thanks again,

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

can't wait for more!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thanks, xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  I feel like James is the one that killed her family and is now after her for whatever his sick reasons are.. Once I edited more Of my story I'm dedicating one part to you for being an awesome writer.

 

Jukie



Author's Response:

Jukie!!! =)

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Aww thanks so much Jukie. I'm totally honored. *blushes* I'll have to check your story out this weekend =)

Thanks again,

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hi Jells!! *waves*  imagine my surprise when I woke up this morning to a LAV update!!!  what a way to start my weekend!!  James is evil and needs to go... now....let barbedpeenward kill him please.  Great chappie!

Uh oh did Ben find out... dun dun duuuunnn!



Author's Response:

Hey Lamby *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'm rewriting ch 20 thanks to that stupid arse virus *sigh* and my stupidty to have a backup of my chap. *double sigh* When I'm finished with lav, I'll finish lah. Lots to do .lol

Thanks Lamby,

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think Ben just found out that Angela is pregnant~~



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll post ch 20 asap.

xox

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

fantastic as usual

keep it up

i think the roar is ben discovering about the pregnancy or an unwanted visitor

update living amongst hell soon please

till next time xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thanks so much! =)

I'm in the process of rewriting ch 20 and after i'm finished I'll finish LAH too.

Sorry for the wait.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

wow!!!!! That god that Charlie was in time... Can't believe that Bree didn't do anything and she was agry with Bella... Bella was so afraid!!! James is so sick... What is their connection??? Maybe he is the one that killed Bella's parents???? You have said that the music box was something important but I can't think of anything other...!!!!!!

And the worst was about the trial... PLEASE tell me that you won't make Bella take another mate??? Right???? PLEASE!!!!!!! They belong with each other!!!! Will the court decide against Edward??? i don't think that they will regognise Bella as his true mate but will they sent him to jail??? Isn't Edward the one that will take the throne from Aro??? So this will be the cause??? The reason why Edward will want to fight??? He wants to change Bella and of course to have children with her so he has to fight to win those rights!!!! 

And what is worng with Bella??? What about her sickness??? Edward can't feel her anymore and her blood isn't so potent anymore... What is going on??? 

I totally love andI'm so jeleaous of their sex life!!!! Bella is think about the mating house...???? 

How will Ben and the rest of the Cullen take that Angela is pregnant???? Was that scream from maybe Ben??? Angela told him??? 

Can't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Bella will never take a new mate. She and Edward will be together forever...always. =)  Your others questions will be answered soon.

Thanks so much! I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm in the process of rewriting it.

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder who roared, Ben? Thanks for the update :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll post ch 20 asap.

Thanks,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

OH MY GOSH!  I really loved this so much!  I cannot believe Bree was bad all along :(  I cannot wait to see how James and Bella are connected.  I also hope that Edward is found innocent and Bella gets all of the truemate rights :D  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap.

Thanks so much! I appreciate it!

xox

Jells

Reviewer: tacks45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

great chapter thanks



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll have ch 20 posted asap. Thanks, Jells xox

Reviewer: BGinny7606 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

Jellybean!!!

great chapter but you're not going to get Bella a new mate right? haha i know you wont you are mindfucking with us. cant wait for more xox



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Reviewer: sogian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!!!! Bella can't take a break really...!!!!!! First Tanya and now James???? I loved that she stanted up to Tanya but Emmett is right... Tanya won't stop trying to get Edward!!!! And James... will he and Tanya work together to get to Bella and Edward???? Tanya want Edward and she might think that if James take Bella then he will be all hers??? Will Edward came in time??? Or will Bre help Belle??? And Charlei and Renne are across the street....

Angela!!!! She is pregnant??? Are they stupid??? I trully believe that a baby is a bless but now there is a chance for both of them to be killed...!!!!!! How could they have sex unprotected???? When they know the consequences...How will Ben react??? And will Aro find out??? It's not like they can hide... Angela has to go to give her blood every 15 days...!!!!!

And will Bella change in a vampire soon??? Because she and Edward are talking a lot about that....

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm not completely sure I like Bella's behavior in this. She seems to constantly disreguard what should be commom sense when it comes to dealing with her choices about her safety. I sometimes don't know how Edward can put up with her childish antics. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Bella is quite outgoing and she doesn't always think things through. But she'll change although she'll have a difficult task ahead of her soon. Thanks for reading. xox Jells

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

i hope edward remain out of prison  and ben is not too upset



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol I'll have ch 20 posted asap. Thank you, xox Jells

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

Really looking forward to next update!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much. I'll have chap 20 posted asap.

xox

Jells

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THanks for updating!! LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! I'll have chapter 20 posted asap.

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok just something else, I have to agree with the other post.  I can't handle sending Edward to jail and Bella having to get another mate.  They have to pass the law where Edward can change her true mate.  HEA all the way!



Author's Response:

Hey =)

Edward and Bella will always stay mates. She'll never have a new mate, ever. This will be a HEA =)

Thank you =)

xxox

Jells

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG you have got to hurry up with the next update!!!  This has been the best Vampire Edward with fangs ever!!!!!  I just love this story.  just curious, about how many more chapters are there??



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

And thank you so much! Your comment made my day. I'll have the next chapter posted asap. I'm rewriting some parts.

There are about 16 chapters left if I stick with this outline.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

Okay I have gone along with all your craziness it's been great, but you are up to something and I have a really bad feeling. You are going to send Ed to jail and give Bella to someone else! Please don't do that..It will kill the closeness I see in them...janes killed her parents, Bree is CRAZY, riley's reaction is interesting, Jas is a kinky guy, and as always Tanya is a bitch! The yelling at the end is ben or jas I thing. Thanks for the very hot lemon and the update. Okay one last thing I could handle the separation but not the new mate thing...anyway thanks

Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Anyhoo, don't worry about the new mate thing. It won't happen ...ever. I just threw that in to make you guys squirm a bit. lol sorry.

Thanks so much for putting up with my craziness. It means a lot to me. I'll have the next chapter posted soon. I'm rewriting it thanks to my laptop. =(

Thanks again,

xxox

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is going to have to learn to not go anywhere without Edward. Definitely a danger magnet.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'll have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw. RL is crazy atm, but I'm trying. lol

Thanks again. I appreciate all the comments! And I'll see ya soon at PT. I miss your story!

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow! J'adore!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Highly drama filled chapter! Wonder what is wrong with Edward.

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

Talk about mass chaos...lol and Charlie in riot gear....lol. Who knew a period could cause so much turmoil?  Thanks for the HOT chapter! Yes, I am the author of P.T. I have been going back through it, trying to clean up my grammar mistakes.

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Ben - he is up against a lot.  Hope Angela is on birth control.  Mike is crazier than I thought.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I knew your penname looked familiar! OMG you're the author of Planet Twilight, aren't you?

I read about half of your amazing story so far. RL got very crazy with crazy hours and school. but i'll get back to it asap.

Thanks so much for reading. And yeah *nods* Ben is up against a lot.

Thanks aagin,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Another hot chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

I'm totally squeeing. I'm happy that you still like the story.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved the hot chapter!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hot marking!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Such a lovely nurse...not!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Glad that Tanya was found out!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Somebody needs to put Tanya in her place!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Scary school!

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

I wonder why vampires need hospitals, other than having babies. I guess your vampires are really different.

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice Start!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my story a try! I hope that you'll continue to enjoy it.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: manson87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

what a twist I don't trust Bree any longer



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Neither do I *grins*

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

Why thr Hell can't B just do as she's told. Honest to god, she's pissing me off. Not only is she endangering her life but she's dragging E & the rest of the Cullen's into her fuckery. She's worried about E going to jail, well she keeps putting him into positions that will most likely land him there.



Author's Response:

 Hey *waves*

Trouble follows Bella wherever she goes unfortunately. But what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Or at least I hope lol

I'll post chapter 19 today or 2mrw at the latest.

Thank you,

xoxo

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: missy889 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

oh please let bella be ok



Author's Response:

She will be =)

Thank you,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

This was a great chapter! How exciting that Angela may be pregnant!! I can't wait to see where that line of the story goes. And poor Bella...she does seem to get into trouble all the time...it just follows her around. But you are going to let Edward get back in time to save her from James, right? Keep up the great writing. I love this story and LAH!!!



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

Thank you so much!

Yeah trouble definitely follows Bella around. But what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. At least i'm hoping lol

I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. My poor beta is having some RL issues atm so i'm self editing the chapter. I should be finished soon.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

Aha, and here I was questioning if James was going to make an appearance again at all. Clever ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

I'll have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw at the latest.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

awesome - damn Edward looks hot with fangs



Author's Response:

Hi *waves *

Thank you so much!

I agree, he does *winks*

I should have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

 

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

The story is getting more complex. Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

xox

Jells

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

Where is Edward???  Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

He's on his way... to kick some ass. lol

Thanks for reading/commenting. I'll have ch 19 up today or 2mrw at the latest. My poor beta is having some tough RL issues atm so i'm editing my 15k chappy myself lol. It shouldn't take too much longer.

Thanks again

xox

Jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great Chapter.  Ugh for Skankya and her slutty sister Irina.   Glad ben and ang are there.   aww for bree's present.   Ugh for James and Riley.



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

lmao @ skankya!

I should have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw at the latest.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

XxOo

Jells

 

 

Reviewer: Transform5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Xox

Jells

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