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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 36

well im glad that they are gone but i hope that bella can handle everthing that is handed to her ! 



Author's Response:

thanks for your review!! let's hope she can

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 36

OMG that was an AWESOME chapter!!!!!!  *jumps with glee*

Yay!! Aro gets to be in his grandbabies live!! :)



Author's Response:

lol thank you so much for your review. you are one of the few that keeps me going. you are one kick ass person let me tell you

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

OMG amazing, Im lovin daddy Aro  :)



Author's Response:

me too!!!!! i was so excited to write that  chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 35

im gald that she made it back to them!



Author's Response:

me too!!! i'm so excited for the next chapter... it's in progress so hopefully it will be ready in time for mothers day

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMG this is so freaking awesome, I love it!!!!

 

Oh my gosh, I want more!  *giggles and bounces with giddyness*

 



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!! YOU MY FRIEND ARE BEYOND ANY LEVEL OF AWESOMENESS I'VE EVER COME ACROSS!!!


THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!!


LOVES YAS

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 34

im excited to see what ahpepns next 



Author's Response:

ME TOO.. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 33

i hope that evreything is alright and in the end that she dosent get preggo by him! keep the updates comming ! 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh man Bella is a stong woman.   But Eddie was right about one thing, you cannot HELP but fall in love with her :)

I hope she is okay!  Eddie wont hurt her, at least I hope not!



Author's Response:

I hope he won't hurt her but as we all can plainly see, he is bat shit crazy. 



thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 32

GAH!!!!

If something happens to that baby, Emmett and Bella are going to be devastated!

I hope that Garrett tracks his cars GPS and finds her and opens a can of whoopass!



Author's Response:

I know i felt so bad doing this to Emmett and Bella, and hell, everyone else but it needed to be done.... and we all know that Garrett is a smart cookie so i'm sure he will be a very important player in all of this...

 

 

thank you for sticking with me btw..

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 32

well in  the end i hope that she and the baby will be alright and they figure out were and who took her 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 31

OMG that was so sweet!  Gotta love a druck Bells and Garrett! or as they say, Ella and Gammmbett.  :)

I hope Kate gets taken out in jail...

hey, Im just sayin'

*wink*



Author's Response:

I FOR ONE LOVE DRUNK ELLA AND GAMMBETT!! LMFAO.....  AND YES... THIS WON'T BE THE LAST WE HEAR FROM KATE'S CRAZY ASS!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

well they can never have an easy time togehter! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

they just can't catch a break. but at least they stick together

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

LOL, this confrontation is gonna be great!  How exciting!



Author's Response:

thanks for sticking with me and the story!  i hated doing it but it had to be done..

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

awww! its so cute



Author's Response:

lol thanks!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

well i hope that they get what they all want! 



Author's Response:

me too!

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

ALRIGHTY.. I FIXED IT.. WHEN I WAS TYPING IT UP, IT SOME HOW ERASED BETHANY'S NAME WHEN I WAS TYPING OUT THE NAMES. WHEN I LOOKED UP I SAW FOUR NAMES AND JUST WENT WITH IT. I CAN'T BELIVE I FORGOT POOR LITTLE BETHANY.. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BRING THAT TO MY ATTENTION.. YOU ARE SO MY HERO!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

Its probably already been brought up, but I just wanted to point out that Betthany got lost in the shuffle somewhere.  There should be 5 kids, not 4... right?

Jonah, Charlie, Cassidy, Betthany and Henry.

Love the chapter though!  EMMETT BEIN' A BABY DADDY!!

woot!!

lol



Author's Response:

god i hate this laptop... i was typing and it went back and erased what i had typed i didn't notice.. shit.. i will fix it.. thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 29

thats hella funny! god shes pumping out an army! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

i know right.. she's a baby factory.. but you had to admit, all of those kids would have more love than they would know what to do with

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

*wipes tears away*

Im gonna miss Charlie.

Awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

i know.. me too...   and thanks!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

well i hope that they will be totoally happy together! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

i know....  and the next chapter is half done, let's just hope that my computer lets me post when i want to because it seems that this site tends to have major issues with it when i want to post....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

OMG tear jerker for sure!

I loved this chapter!  And the baby names are adorable :)

I cant wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

oh i know right. i was a mess writing it.  it took me forever to nail down the names. i kept going until they felt right....the next chapter will be a good one!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

well that was an intresting turn of events a girl! thats totally exciting cant wait till the next chatper to see what charlie has left her! keep it up! 



Author's Response:

aww thank you so much!!!! i hated to kill charlie but it was necessary for the story line.... 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 26

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damnit James!!  Not Bella, the boys AND Charlie!!!!!!!!

 

Ok, sick cliffie, I hope the next chapter comes soon, the suspense will kill me slowly!!



Author's Response:

the next chapter is in progress and should be up today or early tomorrow. i'm aiming for tonight!!!  

 

 

thank you so much for your review.. you so rock

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 26

well at least he killed him self and i hope for her sake that everyone that she loves leaves that room alive! and i hope that the boys will live! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh no!  Crap!

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

i know i'm so excited for the next few chapters.. thank you so much for reading this and reviewing.. you rock

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

well i hope for her sake that they arrest james in walmart for kidnapping ! cant wait til lthe next chaper 



Author's Response:

thanks... yeah there are twists and turns every where.... next chapter is in progress

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

i hope they get to her sooner than later because i have a bad feeling about james! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

me too.. i had intended to make that last chapter longer but i didn't want to overwhelm anyone. some times chapters can be too long.. ya know.. thanks again for your reply. they keep me going

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

this isnt good ! she trys to do something nice and it kicks her in the ass! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

oh the next chapter is on it's way and it will be longer.... it has to be. there's too much to put in for it not to be...... and thank you so much for all your reviews!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

well at least peter knows or feel like james is behind those songs! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

yeah. no one but him and Bella think it's him behind every thing. the others know some one is up to no good but Peter can see things for what they are

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

well i hope that they catch james and edward before something happens to bella and carlisle! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

i know right. let's hope those monsters don't hurt any of them

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

excited that shes found her forever just thinking that carlisle is going to get more and more jealous when she wants her own life out side of the apartment cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

i'm sure they both will have their moments

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

glad that they are back to normal for now ! but i have a feeling its not going to be for very long



Author's Response:

you just never know....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

im happy shes going home but i have a feeling that hes going to sick his head back in his ass again! cant wait til lthe next chapter 



Author's Response:

me too.. let's hope that he doesn't lodge his head up there again. if it happens again i have a feeling that Peter will take Bella and the boys far away

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

well its hard on one had you want to see your best friend an baby daddy but then on the other hand you dont want to be treated like he has been. he can be happy but not her. and shes not a child shes a grown adult! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

exactly!!!!!!  like a man, he didn't stop to think before he spoke and now he's dug himself into a huge hole

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

thanks both were great! its amazing that carlisle screwed up huge and now emmett now has to repair his realtionship with him and with bella! cant wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!  he over reacted and now he's left with a huge mess and pissed off the wrong person, Peter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

well carlisle seams to have a temper problem! cant believe that he yelled at her like that ! cant wait till the next chapter! also i think that you should do a split pov of carlisle and emmett about this whole thing ! keep them comming



Author's Response:

oh that is in the works as i type lol.... first Carlisle's pov will come and then Emmett's.

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

i new it that it was going to be peter that was bellas other half i cant wait to see what happens when emmett and carlisle come home and what carlisles reaction is going to be to peter and bella being together so please update soon



Author's Response:

i'm working it on now and it will be up later today. i'm on a roll, what can i say lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

im happy that she finally got her man! cant wait to see what happens next and who shows back up ! 



Author's Response:

me too.. she deserved her happily ever after

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

super yay!



Author's Response:

lol. i had to give her Peter. hell, i want my very own Peter

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

you are amazing this story brings such hapiness!



Author's Response:

awww thank you so much!!!!!  that means so much to me... you are now my favorite reviewer!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

well it looks like shes already starting to feel the seperation from carlisle !  cant wait to see what happens next and hopefuly she will meet the best man for her! 



Author's Response:

yeah it was to be expected. and with her being pregnant it was going to be over something small

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

well its going to be intresting to see how this relationship develops! and espically how bella takes it ! keep it up ! 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. you rock

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

well i think as the time goes on shes going to get more and more jealous becuase she dosent have a man ! cant wait to see how she deals with his new love life and being preggo with his kids! keep them comming 



Author's Response:

i know.. me too. although i already know what will happen. but i could change it up.. keep myself on my toes lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 9

aww they are so cute ! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

yeah being hormonal is horrible and im glad emmett was able to bond with her to make her fell better! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

yeah it is. hell when i was pregnant i would go from  tears to hyserical laughter in the blink of an eye lol... working on the next chapter now.. will be up today

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

aww priceless!



Author's Response:

i thought so. i used to have a friend like that.. he rocked!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

well with all the preggo hormones and adding a new boy into the dynamic ! i would cry too! cant believe that he would forget about her! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

oh yeah. i had some major hormonal moments when i was pregnant so it's only fair that Bella have them too. lol. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

im so happy for them! they are going to be so happy with 2 babies! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

oh i know.. makes me want twins lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

im happy charlie took the news good! and im excited to see what happens with bella and carlisle! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

yeah Charlie is all excited about being a grandpa. i mean who wouldn't want a grandpa Charlie

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

I take it that the baby is Carlisle's and they aren't expecting it at all!!!!!

Author's Response:

yeppers....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

well thats what happens when you have drunken sex! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

i know right. but drunken sex is great sex!

Reviewer: bakerusaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

aww this story is fuckawesome! keep it coming!



Author's Response:

aww thank you... you're fuckawesome!!! and i'm working on the next chapter now.. the next few actually

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

good so far will keep on reading i think its funny that they re created hbo porn! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!!! lmfao me too. i mean come on now, hbo porn is just so damn cheesy and sad. but yet you still watch it lol

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