Date: 05 Oct 2020 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved this story! I devoured it in a day!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
So glad you were able to get past the block and finish this story. That has to feel good to know you don't have to worry about it anymore. I've really enjoyed reading it. I'm a sucker for a Happy Ending. :0) Thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for sticking with me on this! I'm glad that you have enjoyed it.
t
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
*showing serious love for a kick ass amazing story*
Thank you, for writing this.
Author's Response:
Aw, you're too sweet! Thank you for reading and sticking with me on this!
t
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
Not that I didn't enjoy it, but thats it really? Well I did enjoy all of it, and wish there was more to it because it feels like there are some loose ends. Couldn't say what they are persay, but it does feel like they are there.
Anyways, good job. Hope you post more here soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
T
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
quickl ending but Im glad the scumballs are all dead. thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me on this one!
t
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
I've read all30 chaps....and i must say i love it. so sad to see this one go soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you've enjoyed it!
t
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
I really liked this chapter even though the major got mad at Bella for know reason but she handled it. ha ha Alice seems pretty sure that she's going to defeat the Cullen's cant wait to see when she figures out she was wrong. (at least I'm hoping she's wrong. ha ha)
Author's Response:
Aw, I'm glad you liked it.
No worries, Alice is gonna get the surprise of her long life! LOL
Thanks for reading.
t
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow Alice really is a psychopath. cant wait till B kills Alice and Richie the wierdo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
t
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Jasper may be the "Major", but he should never forget that Bella has the power to zap his "mojo"! :)
I am going to miss reading more updates when this story concludes. I really enjoy reading the adventures that you create for your Bella and Jasper.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks for following my little fic. I shall miss writing it for you guys!
Yup, and Bella sure did put the Major in his place! LOL
t
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 30
Holy shit, this is getting really, really goooooood!!!!
*vibrates with anticipation*
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, working on more now!
t
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
well well well alice is off her rocker... she is going to be a dangerous foe... she has some crazy vamps on her side. well at least they don't have to worry about aro coming to get bella so there is an up side! haha. thanks for the update can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Yup, Alice is definitely a few short of a six pack! Thanks for reading and following my little fic. Glad that you like it!
t
Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow you weren't kidding, there was a lot of stuff going on in this one. I think it was funny when Rachel was talking about her boyfriend not being happy about her imprint. ha ha I don't blame Jasper and Bella for wanting to get away for a little while. :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun. I've had a wicked case of writers block, but hopefully its gone now. I finished the next chapter and it should be up in the next couple of days!
t
Date: 28 May 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
i agree jasper this is too much drama for me!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing each and every chapter. I'm so glad you are liking my little fic!
Thanks again!
t
Date: 28 May 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
interesting a pack of woman wolves thought you would be setting jake up with one of them or are you waiting out for nessie to show up? jasper you can come eat me any time!
Date: 28 May 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
okay that is messed up!!! really messed up!!
Date: 28 May 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh yeah it's maria! bella you are sooo emo!
Date: 28 May 2011 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
interesting.. jake with them is the rest of the pack going to show?
Date: 28 May 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
damn why did you have to bring in the mutt?!?!? jasper take a chill pill!
Date: 28 May 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
what a way to go with jasper in you!!
Date: 28 May 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
intersting turn of events didn't see that coming at all!
Date: 28 May 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
if i was going to get that if i lost i would lose all the time!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!
Date: 28 May 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
lucky girl.... naked jasper..... distracted again
Date: 28 May 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
naked jas on top........i can't review now! lost in thought
Date: 28 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
stop being a brat bells!!!! you are so damn lucky!!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
they are going to get aro and the gang to attack them! duh!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh man.. ed is a real prick!! okay this time they better kill him and alice i have been asking for it for awhile.. please.. as nike says "just do it!!!"
Date: 28 May 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
sweet can i rent jasper when i get waxed? loved the mud fight!
Date: 27 May 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
you are the bomb bella!!!:)
Date: 26 May 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
how sweet... remember kill al and ed.... jane interesting.. but doing it for her own gain...
Date: 26 May 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
not cool okay someone kill al and ed for me!!!
Date: 26 May 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
what a creep and a liar! yuk!!
Date: 26 May 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh boy not good not good at all
Date: 26 May 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
okay so you can't touch her? well a lemon between them is going to be really interesting... how are they going to save her?
Date: 26 May 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh man jasper is on the warpath!!
Date: 26 May 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
jasper you are falling fast! poor bella i feel sorry for her. how are they going to save her
Date: 26 May 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
i can't wait to see how this is all going to turn out.. will someone please kill alice... i am wondering how they are going to get out of being part of the guard.. this is sooo good!!
Date: 26 May 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh boy jake is going to be up in all of that... trouble ahead!
Date: 26 May 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
not good and jasper isn't going to be able to let her go....
Date: 26 May 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
okay bella is a shield..i wonder how this is going to work?
Date: 26 May 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting .. i was going to wait until it was finished but couldn't wait!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, this was an entertaining chapter and so much estrogen was flying around the Cullen's home, not to mention dog stink! I love the mental picture that your description of the fight club girls created. The next chapter should be even more entertaining. This is such a great break from the angst swirling over the presence and threat of Richard. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, there was indeed a lot going on in this one. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!
t
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 29
Awww poor jealous Jane.
Jazz is such a crazy horndog.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
t
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, not a mutual imprinting... awesome sauce, never seen that one before!
I loved this chapter! If normal couples were able to go on 3 day sex trysts, divorces would become unneccessary! lol
Author's Response:
I think J & B should not only institute naked days, but sex binge days too! You're right, there would be less divorces! lol
Thanks for reading.
t
Date: 21 May 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
my favorite line from this chapter was "I think I fucked you stupid." can't wait to see what Jasper has up his sleeve.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
t
Date: 13 May 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
yes great chappy
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
t
Date: 12 May 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
"Pass the popcorn, y'all!" ha ha That's pretty cool that there is another pack of wolves in another tribe. I was waiting for Jake to imprint but then I remembered that he's got Jane in this story. :0)
Author's Response:
Yep, Jake's got Jane and I'll let you in on a little secret : Jane does NOT like the girl wolves!
Thanks for reading hun.
t
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow! Amazonian girl werewolves! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, you know, 'cause girls rock!
Thanks for reading!
t
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
YES!! Oh yes! Yes! Yes!!!!!!
*giggles*
Love this chapter, I cant believe he tore Maria's head off, that was GREAT!
Too bad she can be put back together, especially after what she said about Bella... bitch...
Love this chapter! Looking forward to the next definitely :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun.
Yeah, Jazz was thinking about taking her head with him, but then he thought about all the yapping Maria would do, and who wants to listen to THAT all the way home! LOL
t
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Kewl chapter. SHould have taken maria's head with them and burned it. A pack of girl wolves huh.....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading.
Yeah, Jazz really wanted to kill the witch, but then he realized that he didn't need her minions chasing after them on top of everything else they got to deal with.
Yeah, and girl wolves because well, girls rock!
t
Date: 12 May 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
Amusing ending to a somewhat serious chapter... looking forward to your next update
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, glad you liked it!
t
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
kill maria and take nessie
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, and I'm taking the advise into consideration! LOL
t
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
Jasper needs to return to Bella and the Cullens ASAP.
Author's Response:
He's working on it!
Thanks for reading.
t
Date: 03 May 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter! I saw that your a/n said you had fun writing this chapter... well I had fun reading it. :0) I can't wait to see what the deal with the werewolves is. I hope Jasper sticks to his decision and doesn't give in to Maria. How will they ever defeat that vamp that can kill them just by looking at them? Maybe Bella can do it? Jasper's going to be so upset when he learns about Bella being attacked. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked reading it! Thanks so much.
No worries, there's no way Jasper will give into Maria.
Thanks again!
t
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh. My. Lanta!
I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!!
Nessie... does that mean... oh poor Jane if it is...
But this isnt canon... and it certainly isnt against polys.. right? *giggles*
I love this story! :)
Author's Response:
Nope, not cannon. But, we never know what's gonna happen next. LOL
Thanks for reading hun!
t
Date: 02 May 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm always so happy to get these updates. :0) Wonder what's up with Maria?
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me hun.
Now go read the next update! lol
t
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Vampire Bella is a little scary! Jasper better keep a hand covering his "jewels" while Bella is angry. Jasper may become "Jasperella" if he is not careful!:)
Author's Response:
Yep, she may just take it right off next time! lol
t
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh jazzy never put off till tomorrow what you should admit too today. lol
Author's Response:
Yup, he's such a man! lol
Thanks for reading hun.
t
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Holy shit!! He didnt tell her he was going to see Maria?!
OOooh, Jazz is gonna be in the dog house...
right along with Jake and Renata and Jane and their thing...
wow... I cant wait! This is exciting!
Author's Response:
You know men, sometimes they're just dumb! lol
Thanks for reading hun.
t
Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
wonder what it will be like having Jake living there with them? :0)
Author's Response:
Wolf hair all over the furniture and him howling at the moon at all times of the night! lol
Thanks for reading hun!
t
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Put the yurt way in the backyard, how hard would it be to have a skunk around all of the time??? argh!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reading hun! T
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait for Jacob to see his yurt! I am sure that Emmett is going to tease him about those living accommodations! Thank goodness, Bella only broke a few of Jacob's bones in her hug. I love this misfit family...Cullens, Volterra fugitives, Peter & Charlotte and now a shapeshifter. :)
Author's Response:
They are all one big happy family. lol
Thanks for reading hun!
t
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
Please get unblocked! I love this fic!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, working on removing the block!
Glad you like it.
t
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
awww Jakey's part of the family now.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
*cracks up laughing at Jaspers parting line*
Oh poor Jake....
on the other hand, there are a couple of non mated females in the house lusting for his body...
He might be doing some screaming of his own!
*busts out laughing again*
Loved this chapter! This story is sti;ll so very awesome, I am eagerly anticipating the next!! :)
Author's Response:
Yup, Jake's either gonna be howling at the moon or screaming! lol
Thanks for reading hun.
T
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
Interesting turn....hmmm...wonder how it'll play out
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
It's good! :) Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much hun, glad you like it!
t
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow, I am loving your story! It is so different from anything I've read; and I love your unique plot. Plus this Jasper is so hot! I may be up all night finishing what you've posted so far. Thanks so much for a great read.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Jasper...old habit die hard I guess! Bella is showing patience with him by giving him chances. I am glad she learned to hunt on her own. Maybe that will teach him a lesson in how to help her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG thats an evil cliffie!!! *giggles*
Jasper was being a bit rough on her, but they will work it out :)
OMG Jake!!! I cant wait to see how that turns out!
Author's Response:
Thank for reading hun!
Jasper will find his balance with training his mate!
t
Date: 01 Apr 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
I thought it was hella funny. Kudos on the chapter girlie. I cannot wait to see what happens with Jacob.
Author's Response:
Thank hun, glad you liked it!
Stay tuned for more about wolf boy!
t
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
wow, jake??? Is he ok with her even tho she is a vamp?
Author's Response:
We shall see. Stay tuned for more!
t
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is unique...how could her first day be complete without wolf reunions, too?
Author's Response:
You know Jake had to show up at some point! lol
Thanks for reading!
t
Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad you skipped the whole "burning" part. I usually end up just skimming it when I see it in fics. It was fun seeing poor Jasper try to learn how to handle the new Bella. I feel bad for Bella too though because I can totally understand her wanting to be perfect. Looking forward to seeing what's up with Jake. :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
Stay tuned for more about wolf boy!
t
Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh Mean ole jazz. Woo Hoo JAKEY
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
Stay tuned for more about wolf boy!
t
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was not very nice stopping there! Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun, stay tuned for more!
T
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad that Bella will be changed in time to kick Aro, Alice and Edward's butts...a perfect trifecta!
Author's Response:
Yup, Bella's got vamp ass kicking on her agenda!
Thanks for reading hun!
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
hmm are Jane and Renata for real.....hope so.
Author's Response:
We shall see.
Thanks for reading hun!
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have to say I love how they are as a family. I was wondering when and how he would finally change her. That was quite a suprise I wasn't expecting it. :0) I think it's good it happened like that. This way she didn't have to be nervous about when or how. Can't wait to read more. Great job!
Author's Response:
Yeah, if I was going to be changed into a vamp, this is so how I would want it to be done!
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Damn...your right when you said he was just gonna do it and not plan it! Holy shit! Great chapter! Can't wait for the showdown!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun!
Glad you liked it.
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG awesome chapter.......can't wait until the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun!
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love the chapter, and as always am anxious for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, the next one will be up in a few days!
T
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
OH MY GOD!!!
Yay!!! I am dying to see the next chapter!! I love this story :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me hun!
T
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was a little unexpected, but probably the best way for Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
T
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm a new reader & I'm totally enjoying your story. Looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like it!
T
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
so good!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun!
T
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, wow, that was some good lovin right there now!~
LOVED IT!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
t
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
yeah I would have forgiven him too. :0)
Author's Response:
Forgivness is divine after all! lol
Thanks for reading!
T
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hot damn...literally!!! LOL! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun!
t
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ok....didn't see that one coming...at all, but hey, now they have to be able to stand a chance. Right? .... Right?
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've got a few tricks up my sleeve! lol
Thanks for reading.
T
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
I wonder if Bella is the one who kills Aro. Hopefully, Bella will get to kick Edward's butt!
Author's Response:
We shall see!
Thanks for reading.
t
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
hmmm wonder who's gonna kill aro. Ha Ha for Alice's non-visions.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
T
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
man i love this story - can't wait for your next udpate :)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh crap def didn't see that happening
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
let daddy make it all better.....hehehe - love it
Author's Response:
You're funny!
Thanks for reading hun
T
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
go bella alice had it coming
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
what a slease edward is saying all that stuff about jasper what a dick.........i hope jasper kicks his arse - love it
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
possesive jasper gotta love it
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
omg i can't stop reading this story...........love all the characters
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading, glad that you like it.
T