[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12- Epilogue
:) loved this
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. Glad you loved it!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 12- Epilogue
When it comes to blockheads, Charlie Brown has nothing on Edward Cullen! He just won't grant the love of his life the courtesy of believing what she tells him, and I find that incredibly insulting! I'm reading Lunar Eclipse next, as I have read Dark Moon already.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing all the chapters. It's nice to hear what others think of the stories.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 11- Recovery
And he calls Rosalie stubborn and pig-headed! Arrogance such as Edward's is really not a very attractive trait!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 10- The Race
Quite a different situation from his point of view. I nearly laughed when I read how he would have to be in a body bag before he'd ever leave her!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 9- The hunt
I suppose being so focussed on Bella, Edward missed the signals. Fear is damn good paralytic!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 8- Losing My Heart
This part of their story always wrings my heart a bit, they are both in such pain at seperating!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 7- Introductions
Lord, all the guy needs is a hair shirt and something to flagellate himself! Talk about taking on all the guilt in the worl!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 6- Carlisle
As each new day brings reassurance that he can control his thirst and his strength, I fail to see why Edward doesn't give himself more credit! Guess he can't quit overthinking, especially the negative parts!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 5- Family
I agree that this chapter would have left a few holes in the narrative, if not included.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 4-Mind over Matter
Poor beleagured Edward! He really needs to take a deep breath and give himself a break!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3-Confession
Just exactly right!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2- Balancing
Even a supernatural creature such as he is, has to weary of constantly beating up himself! Not to mention I want to smack him every time he thinks Bella's life will go down the path of his choosing, with no input from her at all!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1- Balance
Inside his head is as fascinating as inside hers!
Author's Response:
I always thought he was way more interesting and Mrs. Meyers got it wrong writing from her point of view. LOL. Thus being the reason for these fanfics I suppose. Hope you enjoy the series. Good to hear from you. Thanks for reading.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 9- The hunt
Your interpretation is enjoyable to read. I prefer the chapters that are your original work the most. Have you posted other stories?
Date: 21 May 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12- Epilogue
i love it:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you love it. Hope you move on to the next one Dark Moon and enjoy it as much.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12- Epilogue
so I have read all of the chapters..... and like you am heartbroken that SM will not continue Midnight Son as she would have seen it..... I do feel that you have done justice to what she started and did a fabulous job at capturing Edward's side of things. I do have a message for your Edward where he sees arrogance I see only the cockiness that all 17 year old males have..... both irritate you but you can laugh at the cockiness!!!!!!! moving on to Dark Moon!!!!!!! here come Emoward!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
THanks for reading and reviewing it's nice to hear how people like the stories. I'm glad it was acceptable. Hopefully Dark Moon will be just as good.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 4-Mind over Matter
"I may not be human but I am a man" one of my favorite lines.
Author's Response:
I'm with you on that. The way he talks is what I loved about his character most. Thanks for reading and reviewing it's appreciated.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3-Confession
You'ver really kept with Stephenie. This is always one of my favorite chapters.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12- Epilogue
I just found your story. I am glad that you have decided to finish Midnight Sun for Stephanie Meyer. She might even be able to use your story as inspiration to finish her story of Midnight Sun. I am glad that you will be continuing your story throughout all four books of The Twilight Saga in Edwards point of view. I have always wondered what he would be thinking.
Thank you again!
MKC
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review, it's always nice to hear what people think and I hope you stick around for the rest of the saga.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4-Mind over Matter
I absolutely love those last chapters!!!!The meadow / first real date scene was always the one I most longed to read in EPOV!!!! OMG- you did soooo good!!! I really can´t belive it!!! I love the way you captured the contradictions within Edward between his reasonn to stay away from her and his desire to be as close as he can manage! And his inner ramblings and the way he scolds himself....awesome^^
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found this story and love it so. I loved writing it. Thanks again for reading and hope the rest is everything you hoped for.
Renee
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1- Balance
OMG- I´m such a moron...I must have overread that you continued Midnight Sun when I started reading Dark Moon!!! Ugh...*eyeroll* So glad I read your comment to my review!!!! ´So, I will continue MSC first and then return to DM !!!
It took me a moment to figure out/remember where MS left off^^ Again, I think you did a really good job!
Sue
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 10- The Race
I love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your response. Were almost at the end but never fear I have already written one for New Moon and Eclipse and I am half way through Breaking Dawn. If you like this one you'll propably like those too. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1- Balance
good so far!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you'll continue with the rest of the book.
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3-Confession
I am charming and thrilled for Edward. Under the most mundane circumstances first love is exhilerating.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1- Balance
Excellent! I always thought Edward would want to make sure Billy didn't say anything to Charlie. It would also be a way for him to stay close to Bella. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. It was nice of you to review this story here, too. Just to let you know the first chapter of my next book Dark Moon is in the que waiting to be posted over at Twilighted. I reconized your pen name from that site where you also left kind reviews also. I hope you will follow these stories until the end they are something I have worked on for a long time.
Thanks again for reading.