Date: 04 Mar 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
Great story
i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one
thank you
Date: 04 Mar 2018 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 53
Great story
i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one
thank you
Date: 09 Oct 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 53
I loved it thank you
Date: 07 Oct 2016 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 41
this fiction is so unrealistic
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
I dont know if Im going to read the sequel after this one
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
they acting like a brag
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
that was a surprice
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
this fiction to be realistic they need to tell anybody!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 53
This is fanfriggentastic!! I love this!!! :)
Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
why Bera does not go to the police and tell about Aro
Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think that charlie and Rene have something to do weith Aro
Date: 04 Oct 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
They are cool parents
Date: 04 Oct 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
The L world is out 😊
And I think is good his parents are coming 😊
Date: 03 Oct 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
I had a feeling there was more to the "bored" Charlie then we thought! BUT HOLYSHIT!!! I didn't expect this!!! FANFRIGGENTASTIC story!!! :)WOW! I am impressed!! ;)
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG!! Stupid kids!! TELL YOUR GROWN UPS!! That's what you do!! :P
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well they werent so bad after all
Date: 03 Oct 2016 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think here comes the tougth part a86;
Date: 03 Oct 2016 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Mmm is Esme going to say Bella to stay away from him or is dhe going to give her blessing
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Mmmm of course here in my country there is a say love anf money cant keep quite
Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
They are so sweet a86;
Date: 02 Oct 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhhhhh!!!!!! Wow
Date: 02 Oct 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the characters and how they are mix
Date: 02 Oct 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
They are creating a bound
Date: 02 Oct 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is really great!! I hope that Lauren gets what she deserves! ;)
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
I have an early fligth tomorrow and here i am I cant stop reading
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
She is really brokeñ
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
That bitch. And i wonder what happened to Bellá
Date: 30 Sep 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah!!! And btw I all ready love Edward he is sooo nice
Date: 30 Sep 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I saw the rec.. so here I am
Date: 28 Sep 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am just reading this story and it's really good so far but would be so much easier to read without all the "I whispers, she/he saids. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 53
I've read a lot of your stories and this is in my top 3!
Loved it!
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 44
They are gonna pay! Hahaha
Date: 24 Jul 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Powerful words, Edward!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Cullen clan!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wowza....didnt see thay coming!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Biggest mistake is not telling them!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved their parents! I also really like how you've got the families grouped ans edward and bella's friends grouped. Kudos!
Date: 23 Jul 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love big brothers!
Date: 28 May 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
i LOVED this story!!! ;) im now off to read the sequel ;D
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 53
GREAT STORY, I LOVE A STRONG BELLA AND I AM GLAD TO SEE ESME IN A BIGGER ROLE THAN ALICE.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 49
was Bella a virgin? that wasn't clearly explained. and how old are they exactly in this story?
Date: 17 Aug 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is going to whip Lauren's ass, right? RIGHT!!!!?????
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 53
great loved it
Date: 28 Mar 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 44
hhahahaha i see where this is going....poor Esme and Car....lol
Date: 28 Mar 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 43
Get married? lol XD
Date: 26 Mar 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
What a fucking BITCH!! God I hate Mallory!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh boy this is getting good!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 53
Are you still doing the sequel?
Author's Response:
Yep, got a few chapters already written and posted http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=4285
Date: 30 May 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 53
thanks for the great story i loved all of it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews. I'm sorry I didn't respond to each one of them, but there just were so many. I hope you check out the sequel.
Date: 30 May 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 51
damn everyone is sooo harsh!
Date: 30 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
wow carlisle is being way over protective!! he shouldn't make her cry like that. go ed you are the man!
Date: 30 May 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 49
oh the V-card is lost!
Date: 30 May 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 48
man don't tell me someone lost that would suck!
Date: 30 May 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 47
cool! :) college together! for free!!
Date: 30 May 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 46
they are soo funny!
Date: 30 May 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
they are soo bad.. i wonder what they are up too?
Date: 29 May 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 41
okay something went well now get some help bells!!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
you have the coolest rents ed!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
just when you think things will look up! what the heck!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 37
that is good news finally!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 35
okay that blows....that really stinks for them!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
wow this is sooo deep.... i sound like an idiot but i don't really know what to say!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
poor people just not going well!!!
Date: 29 May 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
damn they suck ass!! i can't believe they expect them to just get over it!
Date: 29 May 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 31
ed is sooo hot!!! i am glad ed's parents are sooo cool!!
Date: 29 May 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
wow this is just messed up didn't see all of this coming!!
Date: 29 May 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 29
oh that really sucks that they did that to bella!! wowo
Date: 29 May 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh boy what a twist!
Date: 29 May 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh boy of course they aren't going to tell there wouldn't be a story....
Date: 29 May 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
glad to see that they aren't going to make him go to italy!
Date: 29 May 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh great the rents are here! doesn't sound like it is going to be pleasent
Date: 29 May 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
not good not good at all!!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
that is funny that they thought they had beat each other!! haha!!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
champions of the world!!!! bella and ed!!!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
bad assed boxers!!! if the L word comes out now we are in trouble for a long time to come!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh family gotta love them!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
what a pain the family is! way to go ed!!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
bella is one tough lady!!
Date: 29 May 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
ok i predicted him before but didn't think he would show up now!! oh boy
Date: 29 May 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
hope james is a good guy i always get nervous when he i around!
Date: 29 May 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
sweet they are getting closer!!!
Date: 29 May 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
interesting dyanamics... lots of cars where is the money coming from?