Date: 02 Nov 2023 12:32 AM Title: Covet
Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him. But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.
Date: 02 Nov 2023 12:31 AM Title: Covet
Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him. But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.
Date: 02 Nov 2023 12:31 AM Title: Covet
Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him. But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.
Date: 02 Nov 2023 12:31 AM Title: Covet
Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him. But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 2:42 AM Title: Covet
Think I read this somewhere else [another site] but it's still good the 2nd time.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:36 AM Title: Covet
Interesting, to say the least. I admit to being a dyed in the wool Edward and Bella fan, but am willing to keep an open mind. You did a really good job of switching things around!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Covet
Ha! Loved the ending. The whole story really.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:10 AM Title: Covet
Awesome and sad at the same time.. excellently done.. I still want ali to pay for a while, for what she did to thous boys.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:11 AM Title: Covet
I love that everyone is getting their HEA but there was so much saddness with them needing to keep their distance all those years.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Yes, if only the boy's didn't have to wait to so long to be together..... Very happy that you enjoyed.
Suzanne
Date: 03 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Covet
this was interesting. Thank you for sharing it. I normally do nto read the vamp ff but good one shot!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review especially since vamp fics are not your cup of tea.
Suzanne
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Covet
Interesting one-shot. Very enjoyable, thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it.
Suzanne